Albinoloon's Sprites and Fakemon Region

[Alchemator]

These are great Albinoloon, though I have some concerns about the large purple stomach mouth type thing (I'm not sure what to call it, but I love the design!).

- The outline could be smoother
- The eye probably needs a highlight
- The liquid running off it should be angled instead of being straight down, due to the general perspective of the sprites.
- The lightest shade could use a revamp.

I have to say though, I love the others, especially the final evolution of the boxing-mouse! You've got some nice texture in the patterning :)

[Albinoloon]

:D

Thank you!!!!!!

I'll be sure to update that right away! :)

EDIT: Is this better?

[TEA_DEMON]

Yeah these sprites are looking fuckloads better, good stuff. I love the final stage of the bird, and I can actually tell what the purple blob is. :3 My only problem is the dithering on the kangarat; I just feel that it's out of place.

[Albinoloon]

Thanks! The dithering demonstrates that there's fur there, but I might have overused it. :P

E: I got a new avy!
Wetrika

As for the Dex:

[chocolate-kipp]

I don't remember these blue and black things but they're adorable :D What's their typing? I assume Bug/Dark since they look like evil crickets, haha.

[Albinoloon]

Yep, bug/drk. I wanted to put them here, but I forgot. :(
lol

E:
Dex. Rates?

[ToastTyrant13]

Originally Posted by Fat Albinoloon

Yep, bug/drk. I wanted to put them here, but I forgot. :(
lol

E:
Dex. Rates?

OH MY GOD! Sorry, I've been busy ever since we started FB practice again. Uggh. Anyways, I LOVE the new revamps! Everthing looks SSSOOOO epic, especially the new Final-Durve and the Final evo of Shrewno. On nip-tick though, The flowers seem wierd on the Fruit Bat.
Like, it just seems wierd for their to be flowers sprouting out of an orange.

Oh! BTW, the Wetrika line is AWESOME! Again, I wish I had spriting skills at least half as good as yours. ;D

Edit:Hmmm, the quote has revealed that Flarret and "Suquito" (my nick-name) weren't fully transparentized...

Edit 2: ^ And the area in between the head and tail of the 2nd form of Wanyah(The middle water evo, right?)

[chocolate-kipp]

fruit bat final evo looks like it has a flower bra lol

Kidding of course. Your sprites are so much better now. Evil crickets are still my favorite.

[Albinoloon]

Thanks! I'm back to school today... (snow)
I don't know what happened to flarrex and squito, but I'll check it. :P

E: I put the flowers on there because, when homeslice or somebody said that the evos just got bigger,I didn't want that to happen. So I gave it orange flowers. (Only females can evolve) lol

E2: Never mind, we're trapped in our house, school's off. Yay! More sprites! :)

[Albinoloon]

Buuuuummmppp

I made the revised Forregeist

[ToastTyrant13]

Originally Posted by Fat Albinoloon

Buuuuummmppp

I made the revised Forregeist

Ooo! Nice. The eyes and the leaves/petals seem out of place-ish. Perhaps if there were more leaves/petals and they were purplish-pink? IDK, they seem a little strange with his coler pallete. It looks REALLY good though.

[Albinoloon]

Thanks, I'll work it out! :)

E: This better?

The leaves are supposed to be dead, so it's either this one, that one, red leaves, or yeallow leavs.

[ToastTyrant13]

Originally Posted by Fat Albinoloon

Thanks, I'll work it out! :)

E: This better?

The leaves are supposed to be dead, so it's either this one, that one, red leaves, or yeallow leavs.

Hmmm...I like the sound of that. Maybe like this? Like red leaves in autumn?

[Albinoloon]

I'll try it, in the mean time- DEX UPDATE


Need advice on the coccoon; not happy with it. :P

[Energy Storm]

The eyes look a bit jagged an lopsided, as do the "strands". Shading's real nice, although you may be better off aiming the light at the single upper-left corner, as opposed to the entire front. Oh, btw, when's Plecisiousus coming out? Alright, I'll stop nagging you.

In case you wanted one, here's a single humongous nitpicky list for every Pokemon (numbered, from left to right). Read at your own risk.

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1. The head seems a bit disproportionately large.
2. Head still a bit too round-ish. Perhaps taper it like a chin?
3. Same round-headedness problem. The legs look a bit awkward as well.
4. Eyes make the head look horribly squashed. Limit to one perspective, for example, a profile view or a face-on view, not both mixed together.
5. Body shape a bit awkward.
6. The eyes look a bit lopsided and small. Also, head looks slightly awkward, maybe due to lack of a neck.
7. This guy's actually pretty neat. Maybe make the right (one near the bottom) pectoral fin a bit smoother.
8. Head looks slightly awkwardly bent.
9. Looking great. Perhaps make the highlights (light shading) a bit more pronounced around the blowhole.
9.5 (lol forgot him). Legs a bit weirdly placed.
10. Can't really see anything wrong with him, other than some jagged outlines. I find it a bit unnerving that most of your Pokes have no pupils, maybe give him some?
11. Another amazing sprite. Give him some pupils and make outline less jagged.
12. Body looks a bit weirdly bent in some places.
13. Can't really see his eyes, maybe make them more obvious?
14. Body a bit disproportionately attached, probably since the weird shading on thorax. Move the highlight over to the upper-left edge.
15. Make the abdomen's curves a bit less jagged.
16. Wow. Probably one of my favorite sprites you've made. Maybe make the abdomen's shading a bit less "smooth-looking", as this is a mosquito (which are actually quite hairy) as opposed to slick and slimy. Maybe add segments to the abdomen?
17. Bottom needs to be a bit rounder than a horizontal strip.
18. The fluid oozing from its maw seems a bit unrealistic, maybe instead of lots of long, thin dribbles, make a few larger "blobs" oozing out, and give them shading to make them stand out.
19. Good sprite, maybe make the shading a bit less jagged?
20. Same as above.
21. Give it pupils, maybe?
22. Snout looks a bit awkward.
23. Tail a bit crooked, nose could be rounder.
24. Really nice sprite. The legs and feet look a bit odd, though. Toes and/or claws may help.
25. Lack of pupils seriously unnerving on this gue.
26. Shading a bit odd. Eyes could be improved, whether by color and highlights, or whatnot.
27. Eyes still awkward. Leaves a bit jagged.
28. Whoa, this guy is cool. Not really sure what'sseriously wrong, maybe tilt the antennae a bit so they aren't flatly horizontal like they're being pressed against a super-low, invisible ceiling.
29. And this one's incredible. Left (our right) front leg looks a bit weird, but pretty much nothing else to serious fault.
30. Shading a bit odd on this guy.
31. Same shading issues, the flowes look nearly, if not, identical. Since the bat's facing to the left, the right (our left) flower should be a bit tilted, not facing the same direction as the left (our right) one.
32. Body curves look a bit jagged.
33. Eyes and threads look a bit jagged, the light should be in the upper left and not straight on to the whole front of his body.

But either way, your sprites are getting amazing. You've really improved a ton, and your Fakedex is looking as good as it could ever be.

[Energy Storm]

For example, I scratched Vulguar here. Note the shading differences.

[ToastTyrant13]

Originally Posted by Fat Energy Storm

For example, I scratched Vulguar here. Note the shading differences.

He looks ironicly cute here! Like a bean bag chair.

The cacoon looks like it would be better off without the "hairs".
If not, they might look good if you have the hairs hanging down.

[Albinoloon]

Originally Posted by Fat Energy Storm

The eyes look a bit jagged an lopsided, as do the "strands". Shading's real nice, although you may be better off aiming the light at the single upper-left corner, as opposed to the entire front. Oh, btw, when's Plecisiousus coming out? Alright, I'll stop nagging you.

In case you wanted one, here's a single humongous nitpicky list for every Pokemon (numbered, from left to right). Read at your own risk.

...

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1. The head seems a bit disproportionately large.
2. Head still a bit too round-ish. Perhaps taper it like a chin?
3. Same round-headedness problem. The legs look a bit awkward as well.
4. Eyes make the head look horribly squashed. Limit to one perspective, for example, a profile view or a face-on view, not both mixed together.
5. Body shape a bit awkward.
6. The eyes look a bit lopsided and small. Also, head looks slightly awkward, maybe due to lack of a neck.
7. This guy's actually pretty neat. Maybe make the right (one near the bottom) pectoral fin a bit smoother.
8. Head looks slightly awkwardly bent.
9. Looking great. Perhaps make the highlights (light shading) a bit more pronounced around the blowhole.
9.5 (lol forgot him). Legs a bit weirdly placed.
10. Can't really see anything wrong with him, other than some jagged outlines. I find it a bit unnerving that most of your Pokes have no pupils, maybe give him some?
11. Another amazing sprite. Give him some pupils and make outline less jagged.
12. Body looks a bit weirdly bent in some places.
13. Can't really see his eyes, maybe make them more obvious?
14. Body a bit disproportionately attached, probably since the weird shading on thorax. Move the highlight over to the upper-left edge.
15. Make the abdomen's curves a bit less jagged.
16. Wow. Probably one of my favorite sprites you've made. Maybe make the abdomen's shading a bit less "smooth-looking", as this is a mosquito (which are actually quite hairy) as opposed to slick and slimy. Maybe add segments to the abdomen?
17. Bottom needs to be a bit rounder than a horizontal strip.
18. The fluid oozing from its maw seems a bit unrealistic, maybe instead of lots of long, thin dribbles, make a few larger "blobs" oozing out, and give them shading to make them stand out.
19. Good sprite, maybe make the shading a bit less jagged?
20. Same as above.
21. Give it pupils, maybe?
22. Snout looks a bit awkward.
23. Tail a bit crooked, nose could be rounder.
24. Really nice sprite. The legs and feet look a bit odd, though. Toes and/or claws may help.
25. Lack of pupils seriously unnerving on this gue.
26. Shading a bit odd. Eyes could be improved, whether by color and highlights, or whatnot.
27. Eyes still awkward. Leaves a bit jagged.
28. Whoa, this guy is cool. Not really sure what'sseriously wrong, maybe tilt the antennae a bit so they aren't flatly horizontal like they're being pressed against a super-low, invisible ceiling.
29. And this one's incredible. Left (our right) front leg looks a bit weird, but pretty much nothing else to serious fault.
30. Shading a bit odd on this guy.
31. Same shading issues, the flowes look nearly, if not, identical. Since the bat's facing to the left, the right (our left) flower should be a bit tilted, not facing the same direction as the left (our right) one.
32. Body curves look a bit jagged.
33. Eyes and threads look a bit jagged, the light should be in the upper left and not straight on to the whole front of his body.

But either way, your sprites are getting amazing. You've really improved a ton, and your Fakedex is looking as good as it could ever be.

That's all? lol Updating it will take a while Yeah, the caterpillars are supposed to be based off of wheat, so I don't know what to do there, I'm suprised I got the shading right on the cocoon! lol :)

Should I use your sprite for Vulguar?

Again, I might not be able to accomplish all of this project at once, I might do some if not most today, but there's now way I can finish it so soon. :P

Thanks! :)

E: I was so wrong; it only took me 20 minutes! lol

[Energy Storm]

Originally Posted by Fat Albinoloon

Should I use your sprite for Vulguar?

Why not? It's an example, but you can use it if you wish. :)

[ToastTyrant13]

Is the evoloution of the cacoon a huge butterfly with rainbow wings like stained glass with beautiful stats and awesome looks? I'd be so 'daawww over it.

@Energy Storm-Random question, but what is the Archaeos in your avatar holding? It looks like an EV Vitamin bottle but then brings the question as to why it's move free?

[Albinoloon]

I was kinda thinking of a bread butterfly but that might work also...

[Energy Storm]

Oh, it's a jar of Move Free, you know, that medication that elderly people take to help ease joints and stuff. Which explains Archaeos's outrageous attack and speed stats. All explained in my art thread.

[ToastTyrant13]

Originally Posted by Fat Energy Storm

Oh, it's a jar of Move Free, you know, that medication that elderly people take to help ease joints and stuff. Which explains Archaeos's outrageous attack and speed stats. All explained in my art thread.

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Nice.

[Albinoloon]

I was wondering about that movefree-thing as well....

I've decided to put the butterfly evos in later, because they're giving me a hard tie, and I don't like that. lol Here's the new torcid and part of torsox:

Am I heading in the right direction?

[Energy Storm]

Torsox looks really nice, but the abdomen (especially the spines protruding from it) kinda abandons the perspective definied by the "jaws". Torcid is a bit fat/flattish, I personally liked the old one.