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5th Gen OU Analysis Index - 89 BW2 Revamps On Site!

Discussion in 'BW OU Analyses' started by alexwolf, Nov 30, 2010.

  1. Dark Fallen Angel

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    Unfortunately I lost access to internet on the previous month, I am probably getting internet back again but I cannot guarantee this. This is the reason why I was not able to do any changes on the previous analysis that I was writing, such as Keldeo (the EB set), Gliscor, Heatran, Tentacruel and Starmie.

    I would like to know if I could get back the analysis that were taken over if their current writers are not paying attention to them (except, of course, the analysis that were already written and uploaded on site).

    Besides that, I would like to know what you guys think of the current Landorus analysis. I would like to know if I could made some little changes or even an entirely new analysis (or at least a revamp to the Sheer Force set with changes on the Checks and Counters section), this is because the analysis is lacking some things, such as mentions to counters to the Sheer Force Landorus set: such as Chansey, Latias, Celebi, Gyarados, and specially defensive Bronzong.
  2. Vertex

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    Going to clear up the unreserved list by reserving Crawdaunt.

    EDIT: Oh ye, and I am also reserving Sheer Force Conkeldurr.
  3. Gary2346

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  4. blazeVA

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    Tangrowth is fully written and ready for the last QC check.
  5. tehy

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    So this is probably a little late, but I've got a Sableye BW2 revamp up and in WIP
  6. Gary2346

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    If someone would so kindly rewrite the Smeargle Overview and the first set of it in the OU Analysis to make it seem like its only sets aren't the Baton Passing one, I would appreciate it! Thanks.
  8. Lord of Bays

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    I can do that, but is the Lead set being stricken from the site? That just seems like a weird move if we're completely ignoring it in the Overview and suddenly whoop there it is.
  9. Gary2346

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    Wait, are you sure you don't mean to rewrite the overview so it looks like Smeargle can do other things then just the Baton Pass? The Lead Smeargle set was just uploaded yesterday...are they already thinking about evicting it?
  10. dice

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    Sorry, I typo'd. I meant to reflect the fact that it now has a lead set and its only niche isn't BP (which is how it is right now).
  11. Lord of Bays

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    Okay, I can do that.
  12. alexthegreat14

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    Has custap berry Wobbufet been covered yet???
  13. Gary2346

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    I don't think so. There isn't an analysis for it onsite.
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    I know it was written only a few months ago by one of our most trusted QC members, but I'm wondering if Baton Pass Celebi needs updating. I don't think the moveset is right (should have recover unless being used on full bp. Definitely no excuse for HP Fire), and the analysis fails to mention the main selling points of the set - for instance, it suggests that pursuit is a problem, rather than telling you that Baton Pass completely solves that problem. It doesn't tell you that Baton pass celebi is basically just a specially defensive celebi, using baton pass to escape pursuit and to do something meaningful when it's so totally walled by so many things.

    I'm happy to do it myself, although I definitely won't write it for a couple of weeks due to exams.
  15. Jukain

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    hi I can handle custap wobbuffet; I'll talk with QC to get a plan of what exactly needs to be done and do it.
  16. dice

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    Bump. Anyone willing to rewrite the Intro and first set to Smeargle to get rid of the idea that its only niche is Baton Pass?
  17. Vertex

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    Ye, I'll do it like a boss.
  18. Chillarmy

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    reserving Aggron (assuming that no one else has shown interest in it since AG dropped it)
  19. Spirit

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    Check the current revamp in progress, it's the first set.
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    Well, that shows just how great my awareness is. Thanks Icecream.
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  22. alexwolf

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    It is added to the list of finished analysis by OP and will shortly be added to the list of uploaded peer edits and single sets as well. I got the thread just yesterday and i am still trying to see how everything works. Once i finish updating everything i will let you guys know...
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    Finally updated everything! If anyone sees something wrong, post here to let me know.
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    I'm partially rewriting Wobbuffet via SCMS (it's my original writing), so don't worry about Custap Wobbuffet.
  25. Vertex

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    I won't do the BW2 Rewrite for Smeargle, sorry.

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