Knight of Cydonia
I COULD BE BANNED!
Ok, thanks for the check. There are some things I don't agree with or don't understand.
Also, you changed the structure of the set comments so it no longer means what I want it to. The two threats to hail teams that Abomasnow specifically surprises other than the weather inducers are Heatran and Jirachi, not Heatran and Jirachi grouped together as the first and Dragon-types as the second.
The messed up spaces in the non cp version made it hard to read when I was checking the changes. So what should I do at this point? Just makes the changes I agree with or leave it alone just now?
The set is called Choice Band, not some variant of physical attacker, and there is no mention of any other possible items, so I don't know why this needs to be said.Choice Band is the preferred item
Also, you changed the structure of the set comments so it no longer means what I want it to. The two threats to hail teams that Abomasnow specifically surprises other than the weather inducers are Heatran and Jirachi, not Heatran and Jirachi grouped together as the first and Dragon-types as the second.
Maybe I'm being stupid, but what is gained by this change?Steel-types are at the top of thelist of Abomasnow’s counters Steel-types are at the top on Abomasnow’s counters list
Is there any difference between these? Why is "safely switch in" preferable to "switch in safely"?switch in safelysafely switch in
This bit about Tentacruel is important and you cut it out, replacing only the Toxic Spikes part without an explanation of why you particularly want the foes Pokemon to be taking extra residual damage when using Abomasnow.taking Fire and Fighting-typeattacks well and is a good check for Scizor. It can also lay Toxic Spikes thatwill contribute to taking many offensive Pokemon into KO range for Abomasnow’sIce Shard.
The messed up spaces in the non cp version made it hard to read when I was checking the changes. So what should I do at this point? Just makes the changes I agree with or leave it alone just now?