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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. EspyJoel

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    Fixed the above two.
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    I've never really contributed anything here but I guess this can't hurt?


    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/altaria


    Mixed Altaria
    The 'let alone when you add STAB' sounds weird to me, maybe it should be 'especially when you add STAB' or something.


    Counters
    This also sounds weird, I had to read it a few times to understand it (but maybe it's just me).
    Maybe change it to 'predict the opponent, then their Altaria will struggle to do damage'.


    Other Options
    Add a comma before 'but'.





    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/banette


    Bandette
    Changed "support' to 'support'.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blissey

    On the Blissey "Ubers wisher" analysis, the line:

    "Although not recommend due to moveslot competition, Heal Bell can be used over Protect if your team needs both a status releaver and a user of Wish."

    recommend should be changed to recommended

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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blissey

    On the "Ubers Opinion" section there are the words:

    "
    don’t let that discourage you from using Blissey, as it is still the best general special wall in the Ubera metagame."

    Ubera should be changed to Uber
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    Got another one, Breloom this time, there is no full stop at the end of the sentence:

    "such as Swampert, and thus this Breloom, while played very differently to how you would expect, marks itself out as"

    on the first paragraph on the "Non-Choice attacker" set

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/breloom

    ========================================

    Another mistake on the same set is:

    "a bulky Water-type such as Suicune is the best choice to deal with them, as it isable to take an attack and hit back with Ice Beam or STAB Surf."

    There should be a space between the words "is" and "able"
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    All of the following need the "A" capitalised in Rotom-A
    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/breloom
    ............................................................................

    On the spore puncher set :

    "and means that Breloom is not completely helpless against Rotom-a"

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    On the swords dance set:

    "damage than most of its other attacks would, and also hits Rotom-a harder"

    and

    "+2 Breloom, Life Orb, 252 Atk Seed Bomb vs 252 HP / 168 Def Bold Rotom-a: 89.80% - 100%"

    and

    "If you want, you can give Breloom 220 EVs to outrun 88 Speed Rotom-a"

    and

    "Heatran is also a big help against Forretress, Skarmory, and Rotom-a."

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    On the choice band set :

    "which can be a surprise for those expecting a Spore, such as Sleep Talk Rotom-a."

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    Team options

    "Rotom-a and Starmie are both reasonable options to take on troublesome"

    and

    "and Rotom-a can use Thunder Wave or Will-O-Wisp against"

    and

    "Rotom-a can also be used to block Rapid Spin"

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    evs section:

    "220 EVs beats Bold 88 Speed Rotom-a"

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    Also
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    On opinions

    " It's ability not only lets it heal twice as much as"

    " It's movepool is sparse, but everything it needs to success"

    needs an apostrophe as its belonging to something.

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    In Team Options.

    "Rotom-h can also be used if you are seriously worried"

    In this one the "H" needs to be capitalised.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/gravity_guide


    Gravity Guide, Offensive example team, Jirachi description. it says:

    The underlined Thunder should be "Gravity", I suppose.That's all I found.
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    New post, just cause it's easier to read.

    On Bronzong's "Standard Wall" set there are the words

    "Magnezone, and Heatran who otherwise laugh at it, athough none are OHKOed."

    where this needs to be replaced with although
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    Fixed the above 3 posts.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abomasnow

    In the Abomasnow analysis, this sentence is worded wrong:

    "This allows it to outspeed Gengar, tie with Choice Scarf Magnezone (assuming both of you are using Hidden Power Fire), Salamence, and many other threats."

    It should say:

    "This allows it to outspeed Gengar, Salamence, many other threats, and tie with Choice Scarf Magnezone (assuming both of you are using Hidden Power Fire.)"

    Just to avoid confusion, otherwise it sounds like the scarf will allow it to speed tie scarf Salamence, which isn't true.
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    Fixed above two posts; however, I made a slight change to Bosskrow's correction.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/porygon-z

    In the +2 analyse theres this:

    I think this would be better:

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    For the moment, I've just capitalised Speed with the one above as it seems fine with a -.
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    On the Emerald breeding guide, this spread is listed has getting Hidden Power Electric:

    10851F (3.00.85) A / 10 / B / B / 31 / 31

    How is Hidden Power Electric possible with an even Attack stat and an odd Speed stat ?

    At the Regular Spreads section. Here. I'm sure it's a mistake, this would only give Hidden Power Grass and Ice.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rayquaza

    team options second paragraph

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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/alakazam @ Team Options

    The comma after Scizor is unnecessary and should be removed.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/team_support

    ways of supporting teams, rapid spin: what is it

    seems somebody got effect and affect backwards. i searched the rest of the article for "effect" and "affect" and they're used correctly everywhere else.

    while i'm at it, the toxic spikes absorption: what is it section begins thusly:
    ewww. could it please be changed to
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kabutops

    Return will 2HKO Poliwrath and Quagsire after a Swords Dance, and X-Scissor. In OU, Brick Break is useful for Empoleon, and X-Scissor for Celebi.

    bolded part should be removed
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    Mistype on Alakazam:

    Umm, if your opponent throws out the attack Pursuit when Alakazam switches, it will still hit Alakazam, not Magnezone... >>
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/wall_breaking

    The section on Hippowdon:

    Should be "great".

    EDIT: Oh, and http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/wall_breaking

    Should be "loses".

    Also in the same article:

    Inconsistency there - I suspect "Spiritomb" should be "Milotic".
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/porygon-z

    In set ' Substitute + Salac' move Substitute is misspelled in moveset section. It says Subsitute instead of Substitute. It also links wrongly to http://www.smogon.com/dp/moves/subsitute instead of correct link (http://www.smogon.com/dp/moves/substitute ):

    Also few sets are missing EVs:

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mewtwo
    set 'Light Screen Mewtwo' has only 504 EVs

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/parasect
    sets 'Choice Band' and 'Swords Dance' has only 504 EVs

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/volbeat
    set 'Tail Glow passer' has only 500 EVs

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rhyhorn
    sets 'Choice Band' and 'Sub Rhyhorn' has only total EVs of 504

    (I checked every set with my program and those were the only Pokes having unintentionaly EVsum lower than 508.)
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    I already read through all pokemon with letters A+B, so going from where I left off.

    The post would be too long if this wasn't in code and hide tags. Contains all Pokemon beginning with the letter 'C'
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    On the [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cacturne"]Cacturne[/URL] (Destiny Bond set) Analysis there is the line:
    
    "It uses Endure to activate a Salac Berry and then it uses Destiny Bond to try and takes the opponent out with it."
    
     "Try and takes" is incorrect, this should be "try and take"
    
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    On the [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cacturne"]Cacturne[/URL] "Other Options" section there are the words:
    
    "Teeter Dance can annoy opponents, and might buy Cacturne some time to set up a Sub or Swords Dance."
    
    I think the word "Sub" should be changed to Substitute, since every other mention of the move on the page has Substitute, not sub.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/camerupt"]Camerupt's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "which enables him to use both STABs without the need to split offensive EVs"
    
    STABs should be changed to STAB moves, since every other mention says STAB moves.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/camerupt"]Camerupt's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Mantine is best since it resists both STABs and has massive Special Defense"
    
    STABs should be changed to STAB moves, since every other mention says STAB moves.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/celebi"]Celebi's[/URL] "Defensive" set there is a typo here:
    
    "and it hurts Metagross more then Hidden Power Fire;"
    
    I'm positive this should say "more than", not "more then."
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/celebi"]Celebi's[/URL] "Calm Mind Passer" set: 
    
    "so you should be safe barring a Critical Hit from Night Slash.."
    
    There is a double full stop, this should be deleted.
    
    ================================================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/celebi"]Celebi's[/URL] "More Leech Seed and Calm Mind" set there is a line:
    
    "Imagine the face of your opponent when it turns you have both!"
    
    I think the word "out" should be added between the words "turns" and "you"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/charizard"]Charizard's[/URL] "Mixzard" set:
    
    "With Air Slash have few key benefits, being only useful against Pokemon such as Blaziken"
    
    "Have few key benefits" should be changed to "having few key benefits" since it doesn't sound right otherwise.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/charizard"]Charizard's[/URL] "Counters section:
    
    "Regirock is a great general Charizard counter, having a STAB Rock-type attack, great defenses, and resisting Charizard's STABs."
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves."
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/chatot"]Chatot's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Hyper Voice is a powerful and reliable STAB. Once again"
    
    Shouldn't the word "move" be added after "STAB" to make more sense ?
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/chatot"]Chatot's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "as well as hitting Super-effective on Steelix"
    
    "Super effective" shouldn't be capitalized or have a hyphen.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/chatot"]Chatot's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Heat Wave, and Hidden Power provide most everything that Chatot needs."
    
    "Most" should be changed to "almost" to avoid awkward English.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/chatot"]Chatot's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Special mention goes to Corsola for resisting the entirety of the standard Chatot's movepool and having good special defense with which to take the hits. A special defense-oriented Corsola is a 100% counter to any set not packing HP Fighting."
    
    The words "Special Defense" need to have capitalized "S" and "D"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/chimecho"]Chimecho's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "In order to be able to take hits from                                                    both of the spectrum, EVs are placed into both Defense and Special Defense."
    
    " Both of the spectrum" should be changed to "[I]both sides[/I] of the spectrum" to make more sense.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/claydol"]Claydol's[/URL] "Trick Room" set:
    
    "However if you aren’t a fan of the recoil Leftovers is an alternative option"
    
    There should be a comma after the word "recoil" and a full stop after the word "option"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/corsola"]Corsola's[/URL] "Team Options" there is:
    
    "Corsola can use Stealth Rock, hurting anything weak to it and Pokemon who have aFocus Sash."
    
    There should be a space between the words "a" and "Focus Sash"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cradily"]Cradily's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "In the last set, Atk is maxed out, enough speed is provided to beat out minimum speed Swampert"
    
    "Atk" should be changed to "Attack"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cradily"]Cradily's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "In the last set, Atk is maxed out, enough speed is provided to beat out minimum speed Swampert"
    
    The "S" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "Non-Seismic Toss Blissey can be used to check Gengar due to her massive special defense bulkiness."
    
    The words "Special Defense" need to have capitalized "S" and "D"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "A check or a Pokemon with Roar or Whirlwind can easily deal with set uppers"
    
    "Set uppers" should be changed to "stat uppers" 
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "Scarf Rotom-h can handle many of the set uppers that try to set up in front of Cresselia"
    
    "Set uppers" should be changed to "stat uppers" 
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Sleep Talk" set:
    
    "Because of this, any general set upper will be dangerous to Cresselia."
    
    "Set uppers" should be changed to "stat uppers" 
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Sleep Talk" set:
    
    "check, or a phazer to the various set uppers will be needed."
    
    "Set uppers" should be changed to "stat uppers" 
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Uber Wall" set:
    
    "Darkrai without fearing Dark Void, but should Sleep clause be activated"
    
    The "S" in "sleep" should be decapitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/cresselia"]Cresselia's[/URL] "Team Options(uber)" there is:
    
    "whom can hit Wobbuffet super-effective with Dark Pulse while possessing an immunity to Mirror Coat"
    
    The hyphen needs to be removed in "super effective"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/darkrai"]Darkrai's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "Scizor also has the capability of stopping Darkrai’s sweep with Bullet Punch after its Salac Berry has bee activated and its Substitute broken."
    
    "Bee" should be changed to "been" as there is a missing "n"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/darkrai"]Darkrai's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    Shaymin-S for Darkrai, thanks to its resistance to both its STABs and Clear Body.
    
    STABs should be changed to STAB moves, since every analysis says STAB moves.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/delibird"]Delibird's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "With its poor type coverage, low Speed and poor Defenses"
    
    The " D" in "defenses" shouldn't be capitalized since it itsn't naming one stat in particular.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/deoxys-a"]Deoxys-A's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "Mewtwo can Taunt Lugia, and set up on it, and also KO Mewtwo with Ice Beam, making it a solid choice."
    
    This should say " KO Lugia with Ice Beam", not the other way around.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/deoxys-s"]Deoxys-S's[/URL] "Lead" set:
    
    "If you decide to go that route, 252 SpA EVs plus a Timid nature will ensure you 2HKO all Deoxys-S running a similar EV spread."
    
    This should say " 252 Special Attack" in the analysis, not cut short.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dewgong"]Dewgong's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "For the second one, you could give Dewgong a bit of Defense EVs in order to be able to Encore physical Electric moves"
    
    The words " a bit of Defense EVs" is a bit awkward, this should be changed to "a few Defense EVs"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dialga"]Dialga's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Finally, if one want Blissey to be surely eliminated"
    
    " want" should be changed to "wants"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dialga"]Dialga's[/URL] "Team Options" there is:
    
    "Most Pokémon that can stop Dialga require powerful super effective attacks, Speed, or good Defenses."
    
    The word  "defenses" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't labelling a stat.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/donphan"]Donphan's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "the damage output from Earthquake and still have enough defense to beat most physical attackers with ease"
    
    The " d" in "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/donphan"]Donphan's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    On the Choice Band set, 20 Speed EVs can be used to outpace 16 Spe Azumarill and 2HKO with Earthquake.
    
    The word " Spe" shouldn't be shortened, and changed to "Speed"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/donphan"]Donphan's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Ludicolo resists Earthquake and can threaten Donphan with either of its STAB."
    
    The word     "moves" should be added after "STAB" for the sentence to make more sense.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonites[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "when used in conjunction with Light Screen and Roost, can stall out walls which use Special Attacks"
    
    Since this isn't refering to a stat, more an attacking type, "special attacks" should be decapitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonites[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "When using Dragonite as a Special sponge, you should have a Pokémon able"
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonites[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "Metagross can also make use of Light Screen, furthering Dragonite's goal to wall Special Attackers."
    
    Since this isn't refering to a stat, more an attacking type, " special attackers" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "Cleric Dancer" set:
    
    "   UnSTABed neutral moves will barely scratch it"
    
    I believe there should be a hyphen between the words " un" and "STABed"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Salamence has a higher Attack, Special Attack, and Speed stat while you lower one of your Defenses."
    
    The word " defenses" should be decapitalized as it isn't referring to a single stat.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "but you're usually better off just maxing speed."
    
    The  "s" in Speed should be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "which requires 44 Spe EVs."
    
    "44 Spe" should be changed to "44 Speed"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Weavile and Mamoswine are especially dangerous with STAB Ice Shard hitting on Dragonite's lesser defense"
    
    The " d" in "Defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dragonite"]Dragonite's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "disregarding speed boosts from Dragon Dance, Agility, or Choice Scarf."
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/drapion"]Drapion's[/URL] "Utility Special Defender" set:
    
    "resistances to Dark, Ghost, and Grass-type attacks, as well as"
    
    There needs to be a hyphen after each of the Dark and Ghost types, "resistances to  Dark-, Ghost-, and Grass-type attacks"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dugtrio"]Dugtrio's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "although the latter two must have taken residual damage or a defense drop from Close Combat for an OHKO"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dugtrio"]Dugtrio's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "most notably Zapdos, Rotom-A, and Gengar, who are now vulnerable to a super-effective"
    
    The hyphen in the word "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dugtrio"]Dugtrio'[/URL]s "OU Team Options" section:
    
    "Since most Pokémon with Levitate possess a Psychic or Ghost type, Tyranitar and Weavile make excellent partners"
    
    There should be a hyphen after the words "Psychic" and "Ghost", " Psychic- or Ghost-type"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dustox"]Dustox's[/URL] "Standard" set:
    
    "STAB moves (off 199 SpA), poison
    
    " SpA" should be "Special Attack"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dustox"]Dustox's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "has a couple common weaknesses"
    
    This should be changed to "has a couple [U]of[/U] common weaknesses" to make more sense.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "Tank" set:
    
    "otherwise, you can hit it with super effective ThunderPunch STAB Shadow Sneak and leech its HP whilst replenishing your own with Pain Split."
    
    The word "or" should be added between the words "ThunderPunch" and "STAB" so this sentence will make more sense.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "Trick Room" set:
    
    "As with the Tank set, move 28 Def EVs into Atk if you intend on using Earthquake."
    
    The full word should be used, "Def" should be changed to "Defense"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "Gravity" set:
    
     "as a turn of confusion damage means another turn for Burn damage"
    
    The word "burn" should be decapitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "Gravity" set:
    
    "even if Burn does half the confusion damage."
    
    The word "burn" should be decapitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "With Stealth Rock support, 28 Atk EVs guarantee an OHKO on 4 HP Heatran with Earthquake"
    
    " 28 Atk" should be changed to "28 Attack"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dusknoir"]Dusknoir's[/URL] "EVs" ection@
    
     "84 SpD will guarantee survival from a Timid Gengar's Life Orb Shadow Ball."
    
    "84 SpD" should be changed to "84 Special Defense"
    


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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/electivire"]Electivire's[/URL] "Physical Attacker" set:
    
    "[B]Grass types[/B] also work well with Electivire - Sceptile, for instance, can take Earthquakes"
    
    The word "Grass types" needs to have a hyphen, to become "Grass-types"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/electivire"]Electivire's[/URL] "Meditate" set:
    
    "(dealing 96% minimum damage to 248 HP/228 Def variants with Stealth Rock"
    
    The bracket doesn't close, it needs to become "(dealing 96% minimum damage to 248 HP/228 Def variants with Stealth Rock)"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/electrode"]Electrode's[/URL] "Other Options" section:
    
    "Electrode's actual [B]speed[/B] will be reversed, powering up Gyro Ball."
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/empoleon"]Empoleon's[/URL] "Agility SubPetaya" set:
    
    "However, if for some[B] reasonToxic[/B] Spikes are inadvisable to use on your team"
    
    There should be a space between the words [B]"reason"[/B] and [B]"Toxic Spikes"[/B]
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/empoleon"]Empoleon's[/URL] "Lead" set:
    
    "If you choose to use Ice Beam, Lum Berry is a very good item to use, as it allows you to [B]1HKO[/B] Breloom leads "
    
    [B]"1HKO"[/B] should be changed to [B]"OHKO"[/B]
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/empoleon"]Empoleon's[/URL] "Swords Dance + Priority" set:
    
    "the opponent switches to something like Blissey, thinking Empoleon is running a [B]Special[/B] set."
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/empoleon"]Empoleon's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Other than dedicated [B]Special[/B] sponges, this set has very few safe switch-ins."
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/empoleon"]Empoleon's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    but better coverage, so your typical [B]Special[/B] sponges in Blissey and Snorlax do just fine.
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/entei"]Entei's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Flygon ties in [B]speed[/B] with Entei and can hit it hard with Earthquake."
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/espeon"]Espeon's[/URL] "Baton Pass" set:
    
    "so any sort of Pokemon with high [B]attack[/B] that can take an Iron Head or Seismic Toss"
    
    The word "[B]Attack[/B]" needs to be capitalized as it is referring to a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/espeon"]Espeon's[/URL] "Dual Screen" set:
    
    "Psychic works off of Espeon's base 130 attack"
    
    This should be changed to "130 Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/espeon"]Espeon's[/URL] "Dual Screen" set:
    
    "A Swords Dance Drapion can get a couple Attack boosts with the increased"
    
    The word "of" should be added between the words "couple" and "Attack" to make more sense, becoming "couple of Attack boosts"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/espeon"]Espeon's[/URL] "Dual Screen" set:
    
    "Charizard is speedy special attackers who appreciate Calm Minds"
    
    To make more sense this should be changed to "Charizard is [U]a[/U] speedy special attacker who appreciate Calm Mind boosts"
    
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  24. Xia

    Xia aka Lone Gansel
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    I went through and fixed all corrections that do not deal with EVs, speed tiers, or eric the espeon's Firefox problem.
  25. IK.

    IK.

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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/cresselia

    Just a small spelling error.
    Counters OU, first paragraph.

    Snorlax can Curse up in front of Cresselia, not carrying about Thunder Wave due to its already low Speed and Ice Beam due to Thick Fat.


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