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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. Namso

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    Fixed above post.
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/heatran @ Team Options

    Change to entry-hazard (it's a compound adjective).
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    This code has all Pokemon beginning with the letter "F", Exploud fix was removed as it was resolved by Fuzznip.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/flygon"]Flygon's [/URL]"Choice Band" set:
    
    "Heatran's problematic Pokemon are beaten with Flygon and visa versa. "
    
    I'm pretty sure this is a typo, and should be "vice versa"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/flygon"]Flygon's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "the abundant Pokemon that are strong on the Defensive side of the spectrum"
    
    The word "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/flygon"]Flygon's[/URL] "Team options"
    
    "Magnezone gets a minor mention since Choice Scarf handles most Steel-types that otherwise resist Outrage thanks to."
    
    I'm not 100% certain what this is supposed to be, I'm guessing the words "thanks to" are supposed to be "resist Outrage, thanks to the ability to trap them with Magnet Pull"
    
    also adding a comma after the word "Outrage".
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/froslass"]Froslass'[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Ice Beam or Shadow Ball and bypass Froslass’s speed with Bullet Punch"
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/furret"]Furret's[/URL] "Actual Choice Bander" set:
    
    "Sucker Punch is a solid move for hitting opponents who think they can beat you through speed."
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/furret"]Furret's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "Very few attacks won't leave Furret for dead, but a little bit of defense might just come in handy. "
    
    The "d" in "Defense" should be capitalized.
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    Fixed September's Exploud fix, along with his fixes from C to D. I'll do the E's later, gotta go now.
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    As suggested by mingot, for the edits to be more organised and easier to keep track of, I'll use more new posts for each letter. This post will contain "G" Pokemon.

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "Porygon2 is a viable Pokemon for such as job, thanks to his ability"
    
    This should be changed to "such a job" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "( or X-Scissor or even Shadow Sneak)"
    
    There is an unnecessary space at the start of the bracket which needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Anti-Lead" set:
    
    "or even ToxicStall Moltres will work perfectly."
    
    There should be a space between the words "Toxic" and "Stall" since this isn't an actual set name, also, the word "Stall" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "This Gallade has a significantly lower attack than the Choice Band set, and is a lot easier to wall."
    
    The word "Attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "BulkyGyarados is another viable Pokemon to beat Cresselia and Hippowdon"
    
    The words "BulkyGyarados" need to be changed to "Bulky Gyarados" with a space, or "BulkyGyara" naming a set.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Gallade can wreck havoc with his 120 Base Power STAB move and 426 Speed."
    
    "Wreck havoc" should be changed to "Wreak havoc" as that is the correct spelling.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "Other Options" section:
    
    "Fighting-type attacks if you dislike the defense drops from Close Combat"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gallade"]Gallade's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "are the other significant speed numbers to hit"
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/garchomp"]Garchomp's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "users of priority moves can be a problem after Garchomp’s [B]substitute[/B] is broken."
    
    The word "Substitute" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/garchomp"]Garchomp's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "as it can revenge kill Rayquaza who lack a [B]speed[/B] boost and trap"
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/garchomp"]Garchomp's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "A [B]Specially Defensive[/B] Scizor can switch into any of Mewtwo’s attacks, bar Fire Blast"
    
    The words "Specially Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/garchomp"]Garchomp's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "While Bold Lugia doesn’t have [B]much[/B] problems with Choice Scarf Garchomp"
    
    The word "[B]much[/B]" should be changed to "many" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gardevoir"]Gardevoir's[/URL] "Support" set:
    
    "You mainly want to switch this in to a relatively passive Pokémon, or [B]unSTABed[/B] special attacks"
    
    There should be a hyphen between the words "un" and "STABed".
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gastrodon"]Gastrodon's[/URL] "Counter" set:
    
    "Mirror Coat is usable also for reflecting back some Special Attackers."
    
    This should be changed to "special attacks" and also be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gengar"]Gengar's[/URL] "OU Team Options"
    
    "moves that hit Gengar for super-effective damage"
    
    The hyphen in "super effective" should be removed.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/girafarig"]Girafarig's[/URL] "Psuedo-Pass" set:
    
    "hopefully the 6 turns of essentially double defense that the teammate receives"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "The Great Wall" set:
    
    "seeing as Sleep Talk may pick Will- O-Wisp and ruin their fun."
    
    There is an unnecessary space before the "O" in the word "Will-O-Wisp" which needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "The Great Wall" set:
    
    "Giratina possesses weaknesses to Dragon -, Ice-, Ghost-"
    
    There is an unnecessary space before the hyphen, after the word "Dragon" which needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "The Great Wall" set:
    
    "Specially Defensive Scizor is a superb example of a good teammate."
    
    The word "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't labelling a stat. "Specially" is the start of a sentence, so is correct.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "The Great Wall" set:
    
    "Scizor also makes a decent Giratina-O check, resisting both of Giratina-O's STABs and weakening"
    
    The word "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "The Great Wall" set:
      
    "Rayquaza from sweeping once they have their attack cut by Will-o-Wisp."
    
    The "A" in "Attack" should be capitalized, as well as the "O" in "Will-O-Wisp"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Groudon, Lugia, and Skarmory are the main users of such moves,."
    
    There is a comma before the full stop, which needs removing.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Blissey can take any Special Attack aimed at Giratina, barring a Choice Specs Water Spout"
    
    The "S" and "A" in "special attack" need to be decapitalized since it isn'r refering to a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "though all three must beware of Will-O Wisp and none them can OHKO Giratina"
    
    There is a hyphen missing after the "O" in "Will-O-Wisp"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina"]Giratina's[/URL] ""Counters" section:
    
    "For the standard Great Wall set, Dark -type Arceus"
    
    There is an unnecessary space after the word "Dark" which should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Calm Mind Stall Breaker" set:
    
    "and a myriad of options in terms of Special Attacks at its disposal"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" shouldn't be capitalized, as it isn't labelling a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Calm Mind Stall Breaker" set:
    
    "despite its many resistances and excellent HP and Defensive stats, Giratina-O has no form"
    
    The word "Defensive" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't labelling one particular stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Calm Mind Stall Breaker" set:
    
    "Support Dialga is 2HKOed by a+1 Dragon Pulse, while it still can not OHKO Giratina-O"
    
    There should be a space between the words "a" and "+1"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Calm Mind Stall Breaker" set:
    
    "Even if Kyogre is carrying 252 HP EVs, it will often be out sped by Giratina-O and be easily"
    
    There is a space betweed "out" and "sped" which needs to be deleted as "sped" isn't actually a proper english word alone.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Calm Mind Stall Breaker" set:
    
    "A Rest + Sleep Talk Kyogre with Calm Mind will not be able to out speed Giratina-O"
    
    The space between the words "out" and "speed" needs to be removed since "outspeed" is one word.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Boosting Sleeping Beauty" set:
    
    "Although Giratina can Rest off the damage or status cause by these entry hazards"
    
    The word "cause" should be changed to "caused"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Boosting Sleeping Beauty" set:
    
     "the only Pokemon that will out speed Giratina-O"
    
    The space between the words "out" and "speed" needs to be removed, as outspeed is one word.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "Giratina-O maximum coverage in the Uber metagame , and make it virtually"
    
    There is a space before the comma which needs to be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "reliable physical STAB that has enough power to 2HKO Blissey"
    
    This should be changed to "physical STAB move" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "However, if one does not need the coverage against Psychic types"
    
    There should be a hyphen between the words "Psychic" and "Types"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "Maximum attack allows it to deal as much damage as possible to Dialga and Blissey"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "both which can take Giratina-O’s Special Attacks pretty well"
    
    This doesn't refer to a stat, so "Special Attacks" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Paralysis support is also extremely helpful for Giratina-O, as this can fix its speed problem."
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
     "to take the powerful Special Attacks that are often aimed at Giratina-O"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" shouldn't be capitalized as it isn't labelling a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "To top this off, Jirachi can use Body Slam (which paralyzes 60% of the time due to Serene Grace) h. Jirachi also has"
    
    For some childish reason I find this one funny, there is a letter "h" after the bracket for no apparent reason which needs deleting.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    Blissey will also easily handle any Special Dragon-typed assaults coming its way.
    
    The word "special" must be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    Giratina-O’s weaknesses are Ice-, Dragon -, Ghost-, and Dark-type moves"
    
    There is a space after the word "Dragon" and before the hyphen which needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "from Ice-type attacks and Special Dragon-type attacks"
    
    The word "special" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Other Options" section:
    
    "Will-o-Wisp can be used to weaken physical attackers such as Groudon and Metagross"
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "outrunning Adamant Tyranitar and some Kyogre, Groudon, Giratina, Deoxys-D , and Dialga."
    
    There is a space before the comma after the word "Deoxys-D" which needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "The extra 22 points can be placed in HP or Defenses for more survivability."
    
    The word "defenses" shouldn't be capitalized as it isn't refering to one stat in particular.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "At this slow speed, it should under-speed Dialga, so that in case Dialga decides to switch in during Shadow Force’s charge up turn"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized (appears twice in this quote)
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Because of this ability and part Ghost -typing"
    
    The space before the hyphen (after the word "Ghost") is unnecessary and should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "can save it from. Dragon -, Ice-, Ghost-, and Dark-type moves "
    
    The space before the hyphen (after the word "Dragon") is unnecessary and should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Without Thunder, a Special Defensive Kyogre can Calm Mind alongside it and Roar it away"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "The best counter to it is a Special Defensive Scizor, who can laugh at Thunder"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/giratina-o"]Giratina-O's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
     "moves such as Palkia’s Spacial Rend, Rayquaza’s Dragon Claw , or Dialga’s Dragon Pulse."
    
    The space after the word "Dragon Claw" needs to be deleted.
    
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    Since there are many pokemon with the letter "G" I will split it into two seperate posts. This one containing the following pokemon:

    Gallade, Garchomp, Gardevoir, Gastrodon, Gengar, Girafarig, Giratina, Giratina-O.

    And the next post will contain:

    Glaceon, Glalie, Gliscor, Golduck, Golem, Gorebyss, Granbull, Groudon and Grumpig.
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    Since the other post is so crammed with edits[I must keep you guys busy ;)], I will move onto this containing Glaceon, Glalie, Gliscor, Golduck, Golem, Gorebyss, Granbull, Groudon and Grumpig

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/glalie"]Glalie's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "Glalie gets reasonably good type coverage with Ice, Ground and Dark-type attacks."
    
    There needs to be a hyphen after the words "Ice" and "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/glalie"]Glalie's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Hidden Power Ground provides coverage against Steel, Fire, and Rock-types."
    
    There needs to be a hyphen after the words "Steel" and "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/glalie"]Glalie's[/URL] "Toxic Stall" set:
    
    "Earthquake to wear down Poison and Steel-types"
    
    There needs to be a hyphen after the word "Poison"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gliscor"]Gliscor's[/URL] "Physical Attacker" set:
    
    "Salamence will enjoy switch into Gliscor to threaten it with a STAB Draco Meteor, so Stealth Rock can really hamper its ability to switch in repeatedly."
    
    The word "switch" should be changed to "switching" for the sentence to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gliscor"]Gliscor's[/URL] "Other Options" section:
    
    "Gliscor can survive super-effective assaults from Gyarados"
    
    The hyphen needs to be removed from "super effective"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gliscor"]Gliscor's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Swampert can switch into most of Gliscor's attacks by virtue of its high defense"
    
    The "d" in "defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golduck"]Golduck's[/URL] "Calm Mind" set:
    
    "This is one of the few times when unSTABed Psychic is actually a good option."
    
    There should be a hyphen between the words "un" and "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/golduck"]Golduck's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Golduck struggles against other Water types most of the time."
    
    There needs to be a hyphen between the words "Water" and "types"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golem"]Golem's[/URL] "Choice Band" moveset:
    
    ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/earthquake"]Earthquake[/URL] 
    ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/stone_edge"]Stone Edge[/URL] 
    ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/double-edge"]Double-edge[/URL] 
    ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/explosion"]Explosion[/URL] 
    
    The "e" after the hyphen in "Double-Edge" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golem"]Golem's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "Double-edge works nicely with Rock Head and does decent damage to most Flying-types"
    
    The "e" after the hyphen in "Double-Edge" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golem"]Golem's[/URL] "Rock Polish" set:
    
    "Double-edge and Fire Punch are options in the last slot"
    
    The "e" after the hyphen in "Double-Edge" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golem"]Golem's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Ground, Water, and Grass-types with decent Defense are also fine switch-ins."
    
    There needs to be a hyphen after each of the type names "Ground" and "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/golem"]Golem's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Rotom and Drifblim can come in on Earthquake, Double-edge, and Explosion."
    
    The "e" after the hyphen in "Double-Edge" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Rain Dance" set:
    
    Ice Beam complements Surf by hitting Grass and Dragon-types super effectively
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Baton Pass" set:
    
    "As Baton Pass Gorebyss's paramount consideration isn't attacking"
    
    The "s" after the apostrophe should be removed as "Gorebyss" finished with the letter "s" and should be left as Gorebyss'
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "while not particularly large, is sufficient to annihilate most anything it should encounter;"
    
    The word "most" should be changed to "almost" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "most of Gorebyss's common counters are resistant or immune to Water"
    
    The "s" after the apostrophe should be removed as "Gorebyss" finishes with the letter "s" and should be left as Gorebyss'
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "The Baton Pass set is easier to counter; most Grass and Electric-types with decent Special Defense"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass" as it is naming more than one type.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/granbull"]Granbull's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "if you opponent is relying on earthbound Rock, Steel, and Ghost-types to absorb Return"
    
    First, the word "you" should be changed to "your"
    Second, a hyphen needs to be added after the words "Rock" and "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/granbull"]Granbull's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Like most Normal type Choice Banders, a combination of a Rock or Steel-type"
    
    There should be a hyphen between the words "Normal" and "type"
    There should be a hyphen after the word "Rock"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Rock Polish" set:
    
    "This will allow Groudon to out speed even a Choice Scarf Mewtwo"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Rock Polish" set:
    
    "Other strong Special Attackers such as Palkia and Darkrai (thanks to Dark Void) will normally beat Skarmory"
    
    The words "special attackers" shouldn't be capitalized as it isn't labelling a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Supporting Groudon" set:
    
    "simultaneously threatening a burn with Will-o-Wisp if it runs Sleep Talk."
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "A Jolly nature helps this Groudon out speed Adamant Rayquaza and Modest Kyogre"
    
    "outspeed" is one word so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "ParaDancer" set:
    
    "while the opponent switches or on Pokémon that don't pose an immediate threat to you."
    
    This sentence has a few errors and should be changed to "while the opponent switches on, or Pokemon that doesn't pose an immediate threat to you."
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "ParaDancer" set:
    
    "Swords Dance Rayquaza can out speed Lugia and OHKO it with"
    
    "outspeed" is used as one word so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "ParaDancer" set:
    
    "If you switch Wobbuffet in, Wobbuffet can use Encore before Lugia moves due to the paralysis Speed drop, and thus easily set up a Pokémon such as Darkrai to sweep"
    
    A full stop needs to be added at the end of this Paragraph (and sentence)
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "and then Substitute as Giratina fails miserably trying to Will-o-Wisp the Substitute"
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "Despite the speed boost granted by Salac Berry, Groudon is still hampered by its middling speed."
    
    The word "Speed" appears twice in this sentence, and needs to be capitalized both times.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "SubSalac" set:
    
    "Its bulk allows it to Counter or Mirror Coat choice scarf Pokémon such as Garchomp and Palkia"
    
    The words "Choice Scarf" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "What stops Choice Band Groudon from dominating the physically frail Uber metagame is its less than staggering speed. "
    
    The word "Speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Blissey, in addition to providing Wish, will also take the extremely powerful Special Attacks that are aimed at Groudon"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" shouldn;t be capitalized since it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "even an Adamant Rock Polish Groudon is out sped and OHKOed by Seed Flare."
    
    "outspeed" is used as one word so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    All other Groudon are out sped and OHKOed by Seed Flare regardless of whether or not Shaymin-S is holding Choice Scarf.
    
    "outspeed" is used as one word so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Because of all these issues with taking Special Attacks, Blissey can be a good choice as a partner for Groudon."
    
    The words "Special Attacks" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
     "Scizor can easily switch into Latias's Grass Knots as well, and threaten to either OHKO"
    
    The "s" after the apostrophe on Latias should be removes as "Latias" ends with an "s"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "which is capable of out speeding and OHKOing Groudon with Seed Flare"
    
    "outspeeding" is used as one word so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "and Giratina, whose Will-o-Wisp forces Groudon to second-guess itself."
    
    The "O" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/groudon"]Groudon's[/URL] " Counters" section:
    
    "dump the Rock weakness for a turn assuming it is EVed to out speed Groudon."
    
    "Outspeed" is one word and the space should be deleted.
    
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    On[URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/grumpig"] Grumpig's[/URL] "Rest/Sleep Talk" set:
    
    "This Grumpig can be freely switched into almost any Special threat in UU and "
    
    The word "special" needs to be decapitalized as it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/grumpig"]Grumpig's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "unlikely to carry any attack that is super-effective on either of them."
    
    The hyphen needs to be removed from "super effective"
    
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    Contains Gyarados and letter "H" pokemon.

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL]' "Offensive" set:
    
    A Jolly nature can be used instead of Adamant if you feel you need more speed, but comes at the cost of less power.
    
    The "s" in "Speed" needs to be capitalized as it is a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL]' "RestTalk" set:
    
    "Waterfall is for primary STAB, which works off Gyarados's fantastic attack stat."
    
    The "a" in "Attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL]' "BulkyGyara" set:
    
    "Meanwhile, Bounce after one DD will do 71.29% - 84.65% to Celebi"
    
    "DD" should be changed to "Dragon Dance"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL]' "SubBounce" set:
    
    "outspeed all Pokémon who reside under the base 130 speed group."
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL]' "Dragon Dance Numbers Positive Nature" section"
    
    On the row with 8 Speed EVs there is the title "+1 Outspeeds". Under this title it says "100's"
    
    The apostrophe should be removed, as all other numbers are without one.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "On top of Electric and Rock-moves being a hindrance to Gyarados the addition"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Electric"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gyarados"]Gyarados[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Bold Cresselia with Charge Beam can block most of Gyarados's attack for a while"
    
    This should be changed to "Bold Cresselia with Charge Beam can block most of Gyarados's attack[U]s[/U] for a while"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Special Tank" set:
    
    "catered toward countering the incredibly powerful special Fire, Ice, and Dark-type attackers present in UU"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fire" and "Ice"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Special Tank" set:
    
    "Force Palm is the preferred option for the 30% chance of Paralysis"
    
    The "p" in paralysis should be decapitalized. Status aren't supposed to be capital.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Special Tank" set:
    
    "as well as hitting opposing Fire and Ice-types"
    
    There should be a hyphen after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "SubPunch" set:
    
    "Without attack investment, none of the aforementioned walls can break Hariyama's Substitutes in one hit"
    
    The word "attack" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "SubPunch" set:
    
    "powerful STAB Focus Punches off 319 attack."
    
    The word "attack" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "As the Defensive sets all pack Whirlwind, Stealth Rock"
    
    The word "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't labeling a set or stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Close Combat is a popular option on the Defensive sets."
    
    The word "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't labeling a set or stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "getting enough attack to 2HKO Registeel or Clefable"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "Adamant Hariyama actually has less physical defense and Attack than an 80 HP / 176 Atk / 252 Def Impish Hariyama"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized as its labelling a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hariyama"]Hairyama's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Pokemon such as Glaceon, Typhlosion, and Houndoom on the Special side"
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "Stealth Rock (Lead)" set:
    
    "but only the former twocan actually prevent Heatran from laying down Stealth Rock"
    
    there needs to be a space between the words "two" and "can"
    
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "Burn Support" set:
    
    "options to take on this role. Specially Defensive Skarmory, in particular, can set up Spikes"
    
    The word "defensive" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Latias can wreak havoc on the Special side of the spectrum, setting up Calm Mind and obliterating any"
    
    The word "special" shouldn't be capitalized since it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "You don't want to lose a speed tie with another Scarftran if it comes down to it."
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "defenses allow it to take an Explosion as well as most Special Attacks, it is faster than the defensive Heatran sets"
    
    The words "special attacks" shouldn't be capitalized as it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heatran"]Heatran's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Snorlax can come into Heatran with relative impunity thanks to Thick Fat and canthreaten it back with Earthquake"
    
    There should be a space between the words "can" and "threaten"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Thus, Pokemon that can dispose of Flying, Ghost or Poison-types on your side"
    
    There should be a hyphen after the name of each type, "Flying-", "Ghost-"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "A Jolly nature is chosen as speed is, as they say, of the essence when it comes to sweeping"
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "it is recommended that you spread Paralysis around the opponent’s team before attempting a sweep"
    
    The word "paralysis" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "Stone Edge are the ones to watch out for, since an unSTABed neutral Stone Edge from Heracross"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added between the words "un" and "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "cannot defeat Heracross with Will-o-wisp, and will never OHKO with 80 SpA Fire Blast"
    
    1. "Will-O-Wisp" needs a capital "O"
    2. 80 SpA needs to be changed to "80 Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "towards improving Heracross’s relative speed, in order to maximize your chances of bringing a sweep home."
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swarm" set:
    
    "For offensive purposes, one Bug-type STAB move to benefit from Swam and one coverage"
    
    "Swam" should be changed to "Swarm"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swarm" set:
    
    "making sure that you are not walled completely by Ghost, Flying and Poison-types."
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ghost" and "Flying"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Swarm" set:
    
    "allow him to take on both the Steel and Flying-types that"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Reversal" set:
    
    "has monstrous power when backed up by a Swords Dance%emdash;for reference"
    
    The words(?) "%emdash" need to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Reversal" set:
    
    "It also lets you decide for yourself whether it is safe to Swords Dance or whether to play it safe and sub down."
    
    The "s" in "Sub" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Flame Orb" set :
    
    "can subsequently KO with Shadow Ball after a turn’s damage from Sandstorm + Burn"
    
    The word "burn" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Sleep Talk" set:
    
    "though Heracross may benefit more from a Burn than Sleep in terms of Guts. Self-inflicted Sleep status"
    
    The words "burn", "sleep" and "sleep" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Sleep Talk" set:
    
    "boasting super-effective Guts-boosted Megahorn, as well as resistances to Dark Pulse"
    
    the hyphen needs to be removed in "super effective"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Bulk Up" set:
    
    "The standard 80 SpA Weezing will never 2HKO Heracross with Fire Blast"
    
    80 SpA needs to be changed to "80 Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Bulk Up" set:
    
    "Any of the EV spreads or speed targets for the Choice Band set can also be used here."
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Bulk Up" set:
    
    "counters fairly well; Paralysis support, again, helps greatly."
    
    The word "paralysis" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Bulk Up" set:
    
    "nearly all Psychic, Flying, and Poison-types as well"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Psychic" and "Flying"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL]' "Substitute + 3 Attacks" set:
    
    "Megahorn provide dual 120 base power STABs for Heracross to work with"
    
    1. "Base Power" needs to be capitalized
    2. "STABs" needs to be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Substitute + 3 Attacks" set:
    
    "Low Kick may be used over Close Combat if you do not appreciate the defense drops."
    
    The word "Defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross'[/URL] "Team Options" section:
    
    "Other than this, Speed support in the form of Baton Passed Agility boosts or paralysis has been mentioned quite often in this thread and it cannot"
    
    The word "thread" should be changed to "article" as it isn't on the forums.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL]' "Team Options" section:
    
    "Heracross’s greatest foes are, in general, those that resist its dual STABs: Flying, Ghost, and Poison-types."
    
    1. "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    2. After the words "Flying" and "Ghost" a hyphen should be added.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL]' "Team Options" section:
    
    "Gengar’s Focus Blast, or Rotom-A’s Will-o-wisp. However, it has the"
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL]' "Team Options" section:
    
    "Heracross in Ubers may seem an odd or wasteful choice, given its relatively low base stats"
    
    The words "Base Stats" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Heracross’s speed is simply not up to scratch in such a fast-paced metagame, and it is not sturdy enough to stand up to super-effective blows from faster foes."
    
    1. "Speed" needs to be capitalized
    2. the hyphen in "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL] "Counters" setcion:
    
    "but their lower defensive stats and lack of a solid super-effective attack make them"
    
    The hyphen in "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/heracross"]Heracross[/URL] "Counters" setcion:
    
    "however they cannot use Will-o-wisp on Heracross due to Guts and without super-effective attacks"
    
    1. The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    2. The hyphen in "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    New post for a repeated mistake I found many times on the Heracross analysis. I'll list the section and where it appears. When something belongs to Heracross it is supposed to be written as Heracross', where in the analysis, multiple times it is written as Heracross's. The extra "s" at the end is unneccessary as it already finished with "s"

    Choice Scarf
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    "(and is Heracross's best attacking option against the Rotom formes)"

    "given Heracross's STAB moves that hit the vast majority of the Ubers metagame for good damage"


    Flame Orb

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    "While Swords Dance Heracross's priority is to sweep a team"


    Bulk Up
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    "investment, Heracross's respectable base HP alongside its decent defensive"

    "compensate for Heracross's somewhat less impressive overall physical defensive stat"

    "simultaneously raising Heracross's already impressive Attack"


    Substitute + 3 Attacks
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    "Heracross's other sets require prediction in order to be most effective."


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    "who will not usually hesitate to switch in on Heracross's STAB moves."

    "where Heracross's two powerful STAB moves, Megahorn and Close Combat, can be very useful tools against the Psychic"

    "Heracross's biggest foes in the way of Ubers are Giratina, whom Heracross cannot scratch"

    "Dialga can benefit from Heracross's ability to remove such threats as Blissey"
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    September's first four posts have been fixed, not including the one above.
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    New post for a repeated mistake I found many times on the Arceus analysis. I'll list the section and where it appears. When something belongs to Arceus it is supposed to be written as Arceus', where in the analysis, multiple times it is written as Arceus's. The extra "s" at the end is unneccessary as it already finished with "s"

    Extreme Killer
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    "With Arceus's bulkiness, it should have no problem finding a niche"

    "provide even more power to all of Arceus's attacks at the expense"


    Physical Ghost Sweeper
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    "more reliable option to keep Arceus's HP up, but Substitute may"


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    "another special attack from Arceus's massive artillery could be preferable"


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    "Toxic rounds out Fighting Arceus's moveset, allowing it to annoy many"


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    "imperative by this Arceus's lack of Leftovers"

    "Every single 4 EV increment in this Arceus's spread serves a specific purpose"


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    "2HKOed by a Jolly Ghost Arceus's Brick Break after a single Swords Dance"


    Outrage
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    "Furthermore, Arceus's natural bulk allows it to effectively"

    "Earthquake is Dragon Arceus's best option against Dialga"


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    "Arceus's talents aren't limited to setting up and sweeping or defending"


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    "although Arceus's 120 base Speed is undeniably rather excessive for the latter"


    EVs

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    "Arceus's EVs are entirely dependent on the set, so just use the ones that accompany each one"
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    This contains the same mistake from multiple areas.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ariados"]Ariados[/URL]' "Choice Band" set:
    
    "his set takes advantage of Ariados's only decent stat"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/deoxys-s"]Deoxys-S[/URL]' "Other Options" section:
    
    "Deoxys-S's relatively low Attack coupled with"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/deoxys-s"]Deoxys-S[/URL]' "Other Options" section:
    
    "OHKOed by one of Deoxys-S's moves can be defined as"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/forretress"]Forretress'[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "since even with Forretress's mediocre Special Defense"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/forretress"]Forretress'[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "In terms of blocking Forretress's Rapid Spinning abilities"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/froslass"]Froslass'[/URL] "Snow Cloak Abuser" set:
    
    "Those Taunters still have to worry about a Thunder Wave due to Froslass's Speed"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/froslass"]Froslass'[/URL] "Snow Cloak Abuser" set:
    
    but this may inhibit Froslass's ability to paralyze enemies as they will have been
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Sweeper" set:
    
    "Even with Rain Dance, it remains a viable option to boost Gorebyss's attacking"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Sweeper" set:
    
    "one may often find Gorebyss's attacking power inadequate"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Gorebyss's Special Attack is certainly impressive"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Gorebyss's fellow special attacking Swift Swim Pokemon"
    
     The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Gorebyss's most clear-cut advantage over Omastar is its"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/gorebyss"]Gorebyss'[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Blastoise take little from Surf as they remove Gorebyss's stat boosts"
    
    The "s" needs to be removed after the apostrophe.
    
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    New post for a repeated mistake I found many times on the Gyarados analysis. I'll list the section and where it appears. When something belongs to Gyarados it is supposed to be written as Gyarados', where in the analysis, multiple times it is written as Gyarados's. The extra "s" at the end is unneccessary as it already finished with "s"

    Offensive
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    One of Gyarados's most powerful and intimidating sets as of date


    RestTalk
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    which works off Gyarados's fantastic Attack stat


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    Bulky Gyarados aims to maximize the advantages of Gyarados's unique typing

    The EVs given balance out Gyarados's defensive and offensive capabilities

    It is also Gyarados's strongest attack against Bulky Waters

    Its typing is also synergistic with Gyarados's, as Gyarados resists


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    Bite is only listed because it's Gyarados's best attack against Slowbro

    Thunder Wave is a move that causes major problems to some of Gyarados's switch-ins

    on the offensive Dragon Dancer to better deal with some of Gyarados's Grass-type counters

    due to Gyarados's low Special Attack


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    Bold Cresselia with Charge Beam can block most of Gyarados's attacks for a while
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    Continuing with the "H" pokemons.

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hippowdon"]Hippowdon's[/URL] "Stockpilopotamus" set:
    
    "You will likely find that it is incredibly easy to get multiple defense boosts via Stockpile, and with its then huge Defenses"
    
    The first word "Defense" needs to be capitalized. While the word "defenses" decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hippowdon"]Hippowdon's[/URL] "Stockpilopotamus" set:
    
    "Choice Band Tyranitar comes into play to stop the Ghost-types from block your Rapid Spin with its STAB Dark-type moves and Pursuit"
    
    The word "block" should be changed to "blocking"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hippowdon"]Hippowdon's[/URL] "Other Options" section:
    
    "This can provide vital support for a slow- to medium-speed team, but with a mediocre 85 Base Power"
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hippowdon"]Hippowdon's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "two STAB 120 power attacks from high attack Pokémon holding a Choice Band"
    
    The word "Attack" (not attacks) needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hitmonlee"]Hitmonlee's[/URL] "Life Orb" set:
    
    " Despite lacking the sheer power (and / or speed) produced by "
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hitmonlee"]Hitmonlee's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Houndoom absorbs both Fire and Psychic-type attacks with ease"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hitmonlee"]Hitmonlee's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "However, the defense drop from Close Combat"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hitmontop"]Hitmontop's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "If you aren't a fan of the defense drops from Close Combat"
    
    The word "Defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hitmontop"]Hitmontop's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Honchkrow can switch in and trap Claydol, being immune to both of its STABs and"
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hitmontop"]Hitmontop's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "resisting both Psychic and Flying-type attacks which will be commonly"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Psychic"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hitmontop"]Hitmontop's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "A Focus Punch set is better left to Hariyama, because it can make massive Substitutes, has a higher base Attack, and has more  "
    
    This sentence isn't finished but I'm assuming it should finish with "HP."
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ho-oh"]Ho-Oh's[/URL] "Life Orb" set:
    
    "the high chance of burning associated with Sacred Fire cuts many physical sweepers’ attacks"
    
    The word "attacks" should be changed to "Attack"
    
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    On the main D/P [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/"]pokemon page[/URL].
    
    The word "Ho-oh" should be changed to "Ho-Oh"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ho-oh"]Ho-Oh's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Most Pokémon in that speed group max out"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ho-oh"]Ho-Oh's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "can effectively use Physical and Special attacks which allow"
    
    The words "Physical" and "Special" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ho-oh"]Ho-Oh's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "can at least force a speed tie, but these are the most seen"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ho-oh"]Ho-Oh's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Mewtwo cannot due much damage to Ho-Oh when it relies on only Ice Beam and Aura Sphere."
    
    The word "due" should be changed to "do"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/honchkrow"]Honchkrow's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "and if low speed is the affliction, then Choice Scarf is the cure"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/honchkrow"]Honchkrow's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "positive nature are enough to outrun neutral nature base 80 speed Pokemon"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/honchkrow"]Honchkrow's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "and resistances to both of Honchkrow's STABs"
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves:
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Nasty Plot Sweeper" set:
    
    "Most Pokémon that resist the Fire and Dark-type combo are weak"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Nasty Plot Sweeper" set:
    
    "Hidden Power Flying is not resisted by any of the Pokémon that resist the Dark and Fire-type combo"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Dark"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Nasty Plot Sweeper" set:
    
    "it isn't best to rely on winning too many speed ties."
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Nasty Plot Sweeper" set:
    
    "works well with Grass and Bug-types who can lure in"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Nasty Plot Sweeper" set:
    
    "Houndoom absorbs Fire and Psychic-type attacks thrown at Toxicroak"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Mixed" set:
    
    "Houndoom also has a respectable base 90 attack"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "Choice Scarf Pokémon with a base speed of 85, such as Pinsir."
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Houndoom’s speed will be its downfall in many cases"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/houndoom"]Houndoom's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Specially Defensive variants have a shot at survival assuming Houndoom doesn't have Nasty Plot under its belt"
    
    The word "Defensive" shouldn't be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/huntail"]Huntail's[/URL] "Opinion" section:
    
    "Huntail is quite effective in the lower tiers, thanks to its decent attack."
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hypno"]Hypno's[/URL] "Boosting UU Tank" set:
    
    "Boost up your rather mediocre special attack with Nasty Plot"
    
    The words "special attack" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hypno"]Hypno's[/URL] "Switcheroo!" set:
    
    "This Hypno is like an Alakazam with more defensive abilities and a hell of a lot less special attack and speed."
    
    The words "special attack" and "speed" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hypno"]Hypno's[/URL] "Switcheroo!" set:
    
    "which you will get ample opportunities to do thanks to Hypno's special defense"
    
    The words "special defense" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hypno"]Hypno's[/URL] "Switcheroo!" set:
    
    "Be careful in that you don't have nearly as much speed as Alakazam does"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/hypno"]Hypno's[/URL] "Physical Sweeper" set:
    
    "While Hypno has pathetic speed, it does have nice special defense"
    
    The words "speed" and "special defense" need to be capitalized.
    
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    I'm unsure about this one. On Hypno's (UU) Tank set it says "Hypno may be UU, but he's one of the best."

    The thing is, Hypno is in the NU tier so the set name is wrong too (?)

    Also, the set "Boosting UU Tank"...Hypno is NU (now)
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    To expand - you always add an 's unless the noun is plural. In all the cases you mentioned, they're being used as singular.
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    Fixed Hippowdon, but left Hitmonchan as is.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/illumise"]Illumise's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    ". If you're using Sub and a berry, make sure your HP stat is divisible by four, so the berry will activate after three Subs, rather than four."
    
    The words "Sub" should be changed to "Substitute"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/infernape"]Infernape's[/URL] "Physical Based Mixape" set:
    
    "Overheat is very nearly as strong as the Special based set’s Fire Blast"
    
    The word "Special" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/infernape"]Infernape's[/URL] "Endeavor Lead" set:
    
    "it allows Vacuum Wave to KO most Bronzong after a single Fire-type attack"
    
    A full stop needs to be added at the end of this sentence / paragraph.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/infernape"]Infernape's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Choice Scarf gives Infernape the speed to make that an option,"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    Now post for letter "J"

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jirachi"]Jirachi's[/URL] "Superachi!" set:
    
    "Leftovers gives Jirachi staying power and makes taking it down after a couple Calm Minds a much more difficult"
    
    This should be changed to "after a few Calm Minds"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jirachi"]Jirachi's[/URL] "Dual Screen" set:
    
    "Pokémon that threaten Jirachi attack from the Special side of the spectrum."
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jirachi"]Jirachi's[/URL] "Rain Support" set:
    
    "fake a non-Rain set if you're interested in mindgames"
    
    A space needs to be added between the words "mind" and "games"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jirachi"]Jirachi's[/URL] "Wish Support" set:
    
    "with enough physical defense to not be 2HKOed by Adamant Salamence's Life Orb Outrage after a Dragon Dance"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "while Lucario can set up a Swords Dance on a choice locked Shadow Ball or Hidden Power"
    
    The word "choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Pokemon that can set up on certain choice locked moves"
    
    The word "choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "Team Support" section:
    
    "to beat +1 max speed neutral Gyarados if it makes you feel more comfortable"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "check Pokemon that set up on a choice locked Jolteon"
    
    The word "choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "EVs" section:
    
    "and the fact that +1 speed Adamant Gyarados sits at 391 speed are all reasons"
    
    The word speed appears twice and needs to be capitalized for both.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jolteon"]Jolteon's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "in addition to every other electric attack, actually grants the rather frail Pokémon"
    
    The word "electric" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jumpluff"]Jumpluff's[/URL] "SubSeed" set:
    
    "but you will no longer be able to speed tie with other base 110s"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jumpluff"]Jumpluff's[/URL] "SunnyPluff" set:
    
    "nothing will out speed Jumpluff and you can easily U-turn away"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, so the space is unnecessary.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/jumpluff"]Jumpluff's[/URL] "SunnyPluff" set:
    
    "Encore is because once Sleep clause is activated"
    
    The "C" in "clause" should be capitalized as its a battle rule.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/jynx"]Jynx's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "The extra speed will allow you to revenge kill potential threats to your team"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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  18. Komodo

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "Then 186 Speed EVs will enable it to outrun Adamant Honchkrow"
    
    186 should be changed to 184, as this is the number listed with the set.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Swords Dance" set:
    
    "the Fighting-types who resist Kabutops's STABs"
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Lead" set:
    
    "Drapion resists both of Roserade's STABs and can Taunt"
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves" or "attacks"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Flail" set:
    
    "Kabutops's main attack will not be Waterfall or Aqua Tail, bur rather Flail, which reaches"
    
    The word "bur" should be changed to "but"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Flail" set:
    
    "which reaches 200 base power when Kabutops is at its lowest health"
    
    The words "base power" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Ubers Swords Dance" set:
    
    "coupled with Life Orb, it makes Kabutops’s attack soar"
    
    The word "attack" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Ubers Swords Dance" set:
    
    "It also hits Lugia, Ho-oh, and Rayquaza for massive damage"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "Ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Ubers Swords Dance" set:
    
    "Maximizing Attack and Speed give Kabutops all the power and speed that it can get"
    
    The second mention of the word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Ubers Swords Dance" set:
    
    "The choice between Adamant and Jolly is a classic choice between speed and power. "
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Ubers Choice Band" set:
    
    " Rayquaza switch-ins (don’t stay in against Rayquaza because of Air Lock), and Ho-oh."
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "Ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "EVs" section (uber):
    
    "The choice between Adamant and Jolly is up to whether you prefer speed or power."
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "EVs" section (uber):
    
    "you still outspeed Jolly Choice Scarf Garchomp, as well as maximizing your attack"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "UU Team Options" section:
    
    "even able to survive some unSTABed Grass Knots"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added between the words "un" and" "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "UU Team Options" section:
    
    "Grass-types Ludicolo and Roserade can also deal with these Waters"
    
    This should be "Grass-types [U]like[/U] Ludicolo and Roserade"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "UU Team Options" section:
    
    "They will generally lure in the likes of Fire, Ice, and Flying-types such as Arcanine"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fire" and "Ice"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "Uber Team Options" section:
    
    "Dialga, Groudon (who isn’t recommended as highly because of its Drought), and Ho-oh."
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "Ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "UU Opinion" section:
    
    "Kabutops is looking to switch in on Ice or Fire-type attacks."
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ice"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kabutops"]Kabutops'[/URL] "UU Counters" section:
    
    "HP/max def Quagsire and Poliwrath."
    
    "def" should be changed to "Defense"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kecleon"]Kecleon's[/URL] "Choice Band" set:
    
    "The combination of Fighting and Dark-type moves offers excellent coverage"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kecleon"]Kecleon's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "that move itself and would be free to put a stop to Kecleon with Will-o-Wisp"
    
    The "O" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kecleon"]Kecleon's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "Normal and Fighting and having access to Will-o-Wisp."
    
    The "O" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kecleon"]Kecleon's[/URL] "Counters" section:
    
    "and can also use Will-o-Wisp to lower Kecleon’s attack."
    
    1.The "O" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    2.The "a" in "Attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Substitute Dragon Dance" set:
    
    "Pokémon but its 2x resistance to both of Kingdra’s STABs make it a good counter."
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Draco Meteor and Hydro Pump are good early game moves for tearing wholes in the opposing team."
    
    "wholes" should be changed to "holes"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "comes at the price of harshly lowering the special attack after each use."
    
    The words "special attack" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "so a grounded poison-type or a rapid spinner will increase the amount of times Kingdra will enter"
    
    The word "poison" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Ubers Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    " it will have issues with several Pokémon that have the potential to out speed it"
    
    "Outspeed" is one word, so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Ubers Mixed Attacker" set:
    
    "Normal-type resists, Ice Punch, and the ability to even out speed Dragon Dance Rayquaza"
    
    "Outspeed" is one word, so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "OU Team Options"
    
    "Azelf can still do well as it provides a nice quick Stealth Rock, and possibly also Dual Screens to help it"
    
    "Dual Screens" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "OU Team Options"
    
    "Rain Dance set up Pokémon. Dual Screens can be useful for the Dragon Dance sets in making "
    
    "Dual Screens" should be decapitalized. Although the "D" shouldn't as its the start of a sentence :P
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kingdra"]Kingdra's[/URL] "Uber EVs" section:
    
    "With 224 Speed EVs and a +Speed nature, Kingdra is able to out speed Timid Choice Scarf Darkrai"
    
    "Outspeed" is one word, so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "as she can switch into Latias's and Palkia's powerful Special Attacks and wall them"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" need to be decapitalized as it isn't a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Choice Specs Kyogre's powerful Water and Ice-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    "Special Defensive Dialga can survive and outstall Kyogre's Water Spouts"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Specs" set:
    
    " as most Special Defensive Dialga will have Bulk Up; thus they will have trouble"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Giratina, and Specially Defensive Dialga."
    
    The words "Special Defensive" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "Groudon can usually handle Special Defensive Dialga, as many are Bulk Up variants"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Choice Scarf" set:
    
    "If you are worried about defensive Dialga with Special Attacks"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Calm Mind Sweeper" set:
    
    "Kyogre to out speed most Adamant Rock Polish Groudon before they boost their speed"
    
    1. "Outspeed" is one word, so the space should be deleted.
    2. The word "speed" (at the end) should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Calm Mind Sweeper" set:
    
    "Wobbuffet can trap Blissey and use Tickle to lower its defense"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Calm Mind Sweeper" set:
    
    "Latias's or Latios's Special Attacks bar Grass Knot and either OHKO them with Crunch"
    
    The words "Special Attacks" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Substitute + Calm Mind" set:
    
    "and the first if Blissey doesn't carry maximum special attack"
    
    The words "special attack" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Substitute + Calm Mind" set:
    
    "In a similar manner, a Specially Defensive Bulk Up Dialga can switch"
    
    The words "Specially Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Boosting Tank" set:
    
    "Thanks to Garchomp's Ground typing, it can also absorb Thunders from Choiced"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added between the words "Ground" and "typing"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Versatile Ogre" set:
    
    "being Latias (if you lack Toxic), Special Defensive Dialga, Calm Mind Giratina"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Due to Kyogre's low speed, all the Kyogre sets with the exception of "
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Kyogre's main issues are Specially Defensive Dialga"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Specially Defensive Bulk Up Dialga is taken care of by Groudon, while Special Attacking Dialga is walled by Blissey."
    
    The words "Defensive" and "Special Attacking" should be decapitalized (Specially is at the start of a sentence)
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Thanks to the rain and Swift Swim doubling its speed, Kingdra can be a powerful mixed "
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kyogre"]Kyogre's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    "124 HP/ 252 Special Attack / 132 Speed is also an option, as it allows Kyogre to out speed"
    
    1. A space needs to be added after "124 HP"
    2. "Outspeed" is one word, so the space needs deleting.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lanturn"]Lanturn's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Grass+Poison types are especially good choices for this role"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Poison"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lanturn"]Lanturn's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    "focus on special over physical defense primarily because its typing allows it to easily take some"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lanturn"]Lanturn's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "into most Fire-, Water-, Electric, and Ice special attackers"
    
    I'm not completely sure what this is, but isn't the word "type" supposed to appear if you use hyphens ? These hyphens should be removed otherwise.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lapras"]Lapras'[/URL] "Mixed Dragon Dance" set:
    
    "so Lonely may be preferred to take things like Energy Ball or unSTABed Thunderbolts"
    
    A hyphen should be added between the words "un" and "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lapras"]Lapras'[/URL] "Opinion" 
    
    "as its Ice typing adds very common weaknesses in "
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ice"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latias"]Latias'[/URL] "Ubers EVs" 
    
    " Jolly Rayquaza and tie with other max speed neutral"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latias"]Latias'[/URL] "OU Opinion"
    
    "Latias’ biggest pitfall is its weakness to Dark and Bug-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Dark"
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latias"]Latias'[/URL] "OU Counters"
    
    " they hit its weaker Defense stat and bypass its excellent speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    In [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/latias"]Latias'[/URL] "Ubers Counters"
    
    "As for the revenge killing, Deoxys-A and its high attack "
    
    the word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Offensive Calm Mind"
    
    "Thunder allows Latios to OHKO Lugia and most Scizor, Ho-oh, and Forretress"
    
    The "O" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Offensive Calm Mind"
    
    "Specially Defensive Tyranitar can switch in and OHKO Latios with Crunch"
    
    The word "Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Offensive Calm Mind"
    
    " (Just be careful because Scizor cant stand up to a +2 Focus Blast)"
    
    An apostrophe needs to be added anter the letter "n" in "cant"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "All Out Attacker"
    
    "Thunder covers Lugia, Ho-oh, and Manaphy, and also 2HKOes most of the Steel-types in Ubers"
    
    The "O" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "help from Forretress. Dual Screen support is also massively helpful for the sweeping sets"
    
    The word "Screen" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Scizor is a great partner , as it can strike at many common users of these attack types"
    
    The space after the word "partner" should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Ice-type attacks and set up Dual Screens to aid Latios in sweeping"
    
    The words "Dual Screens" must be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/latios"]Latios'[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Roar could work on a Calm Mind or Psych Up set, but Latias is better for that , thanks to her higher"
    
    The space after the word "that" needs to be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/leafeon"]Leafeon's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "Keeping in mind the limitations placed on Leafeon's base stats by virtue"
    
    The words "base stats" must be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/leafeon"]Leafeon's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Most Fire and Flying-types can stop Leafeon with relative ease"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "Encore + Baton Pass"
    
    "With Ledian's decent speed"
    
    The word "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "Support"
    
    "most notably the many Grass types in the tier"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "Support"
    
    "With Ledian's good speed, you can typically put up a Light Screen "
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "Support" 
    
    " in on much bar the aforementioned Grass types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "typically target Ledian's much lower physical defense stat."
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Baton Passing and Support sets will generally want near-max speed and HP"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ledian"]Ledian's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "On the more offensive sets, just max out the offensive stat you are using and speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "Swords Dancer"
    
    "This fearsome weapon will OHKO almost every Pokemon in the game that isn’t a Ghost type"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ghost"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "Knock Off"
    
    "and Fire Punch will still hit Steel types but will allow you to hit levitating"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "With Special Defensive investment it can come in relatively unharmed on Special Pokemon"
    
    The words "Special Defensive" and "Special" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "moves and the majority of them can hit back with Will-o-Wisp"
    
    The "O" in "Will-o-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Dusknoir can do with very well due to its high Defensive stats"
    
    The word "Defensive" must be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lickilicky"]Lickilicky's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    Swords Dance STAB Explosion that threatens to ruin your Defensive core.
    
    The word "Defensive" must be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Belly Drummer"
    
    "were available in the past as Linoone's only super-effective attacks against the Steels"
    
    The hyphen in "super effective" should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Belly Drummer"
    
    "considering a 2x super-effective Rock Smash has only 80 base power, and a resisted STAB Return has 76.5 base power. Seed Bomb hits Steelix with 80 base power as well"
    
    1. The hyphen in "super effective" should be removed.
    2. The words "base power" appear three times here, and all need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Belly Drummer"
    
    "to hit for decent damage are the three Rock/Steel types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Berries, all of which help Linoone set up more easily, at the cost of speed during its sweep."
    
    The word "speed" must be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "If you want to run less speed in favor of more bulk"
    
    The word "speed" must be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "a towering tornado of fury wielding 1048 Attack, 405 Speed, and an 80 base power"
    
    The words "base power" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/linoone"]Linoone's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "If you carry a Pokémon with Intimidate, you can sap Linoone's attack until it is unable to KO your Pokémon"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Baton Pass Lead"
    
    "This is especially good for a Baton Passer.It also hits Encore"
    
    There is no space after the full stop in this sentence, it needs to be added.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Switcheroo"
    
    "with its Klutz ability erasing the effects of Choiced items or the negative Speed of Lagging Tail"
    
    I think "Choiced" should be changed to "Choice" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Switcheroo"
    
    "keeping healthy Lopunny against Physical attackers"
    
    The word "Physical" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Switcheroo"
    
    "As for the item, any of the Choiced items can be used but the safest option is usually Choice Scarf"
    
    I think "Choiced" should be changed to "Choice" to make more sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Switcheroo"
    
    " Choiced Scarf isn’t as intimidating as staring down a Choice Banded"
    
    Choiced Scarf isn't an item, it should be "Choice Scarf"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "SubPuncher"
    
    "The set revolves around passing subs to Lopunny’s teammates"
    
    "subs" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "SubPuncher"
    
    "Liechi Berry is an option as you can sub down to its activation"
    
    "sub" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "boosting nature to out speed most"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, so the space must be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lopunny"]Lopunny's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Sharpedo can also be dangerous as it is often mixed and doesn’t mind taking a Choiced Item"
    
    "Choiced Item" should be "Choice item" with the "i" also decapitalized.
    
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  20. Diesel

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    Team Options, 3rd paragraph, first sentence

    "While they share weaknesses to Electric with Slowbro, both Yanmega and Moltres pair up well with it in lieu of their 4x resistances to Grass, giving them nearly free switch ins on Grass-type attacks aimed at Slowbro."

    I'm pretty sure this isn't the correct use of lieu. "Light" can replace this word.
  21. Komodo

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "and switch the nature from Timid to Bold, should he or she find the boosted speed not helpful"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "The boosted Defense also allows it to wall Ho-oh much more effectively. "
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "This high base Speed stat allows it to out speed certain threats"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "Forretress can threaten Lugia, not because of its damage output, but rather because of the damage it can due to your team"
    
    The word "due" should be changed to "do"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "Wobbuffet’s Encore will out speed it and force Lugia to use its most recently used move"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be deleted.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Great Wall"
    
    "Also, it can out speed any non-Choice Scarf Garchomp, allowing it to faint the beast"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be deleted.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Trick"
    
    "Pokémon with specially-oriented offensive stats and a Choice item of their own, and Giratina-O"
    
    There is a full stop missing at the end of this sentence.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Trick"
    
    "Since Lugia’s normal counters include Physical Pokémon"
    
    The word "Physical" should be decapitalized.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Trick"
    
    "However, the aforementioned Choiced Special Pokémon, such as Palkia"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Due to its healthy Special Attack, Speed, and Defenses, Lugia can play either an Offensive or Defensive"
    
    The words "Defenses", "Offensive" and "Defensive" should all be decapitalized.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "with sandstorm, large Special Defense, and two super effective STABs"
    
    "STABs" should be "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "the most threatening, as they can either out speed it or hit it for super effective"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, so the space should be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Other options"
    
    " It can also use Tickle to lower Lugia's defenses, making it bait for Pursuit-users like Tyranitar and Scizor"
    
    "defenses" should be changed to "Defense". Tickle doesn't lower both defenses, only Attack and Defense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "higher than that of many Ubers, including Rayquaza, Ho-oh, Palkia, Groudon, and Kyogre without Choice Scarf"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lugia"]Lugia's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    " Darkrai can even put Lugia to sleep and smash it with Calm Mind boosted STAB super effective Dark Pulses"
    
    "Calm Mind" should be replaced with "Nasty Plot"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] "Calm Mind"
    
    "threat to frail Psychic Special Sweepers, fears the possibility of receiving a super effective Earth Power"
    
    "Special Sweepers" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] "Calm Mind"
    
    "since it crushes the usual Ground and Grass-types that are commonly present"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] "SubSalac + Calm Mind"
    
    "Substitutes and allow for a max speed of 358 after the Salac boost"
    
    "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    "Psychic is its strongest Special Attack option"
    
    "Special Attack" needs to be decapitalized as it isn't referring to a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] page the title says "Other Option", which should be "Other Options"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/lunatone"]Lunatone's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Grass Knot is a good option for hitting bulky Water and Ground-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/luvdisc"]Luvdisc's[/URL] "Enoyer"
    
    "and Attraction together equals a 25% chance your opponent has to wait one more"
    
    "Attraction" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/luvdisc"]Luvdisc's[/URL] "F(l)ail"
    
    "Your third move is here to add more speed should you run into one"
    
    "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/luxray"]Luxray's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    "Ice Fang covers Ground and Grass-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after "Ground"
    
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    L = DONE
  22. Komodo

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    Letter "M", yay for being almost half way through the whole pokemon list ^^

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/machamp"]Machamp's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    "With a Choice Band, Machamp reaches an attack stat of 591."
    
    "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/machamp"]Machamp's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    "With 120 Base Power a STABbed Choice Band Close Combat will 2HKO"
    
    The word "STABbed" should be changed to "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/machamp"]Machamp's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    "so you will not have to worry about it hitting you with its super effective STABbed Flying attacks"
    
    The word "STABbed" should be changed to "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/machamp"]Machamp's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    " Payback will do heavy damage to the bulky Ghost and Psychic types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ghost" and "Psychic"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    "they can retaliate with Water and Ground-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Solar Beam, when used in conjunction with Sunny Day, gives Magcargo a more powerful option against Water and Rock-types"
    
    1. "Solar Beam" should be written as "SolarBeam" without a space.
    2. A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Will-o-Wisp is a good support option that allows Magcargo to almost"
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    " Magcargo's weaknesses to common Ground, Rock, Water, and Fighting-type attacks coupled with its extremely"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ground", "Rock" and "Water".
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "With the abundance of Bug, Flying, and Normal-types in NU"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Bug" and "Flying"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Essentially, any Pokemon that carries a Water or Ground-type attack"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magcargo"]Magcargo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "fall under this description must be wary of possible burn from Lava Plume and Will-o-Wisp"
    
    The "o" in "Will-O-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "UU Steel Trapper"
    
    "allowing it to out speed max Speed Adamant Torterra"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "UU Steel Trapper"
    
    "such as Flying or Normal-types, have the opportunity to sweep"
    
    The word "Flying" should have a hyphen after it.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "UU Stell Trapper"
    
    "they can also take a few Ground or Fighting-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "With Choice Scarf, Magneton out speeds standard Dragon Dance Altaria"
    
    "outspeeds" is one word, the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "allowing it to out speed +1 Altaria as well as Swellow. Of course, Special Attack is maximized."
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be removed.
    
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "absorb attacks from the Grass, Ground, and Electric-type Pokemon that will switch in against it"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Grass" and "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " the opponent is normally safe relying on Special Walls such as Chansey, Hypno, or Claydol"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Hariyama can absorbs status by utilizing Rest + Sleep Talk, takes little damage from Ice Beam or Flamethrower"
    
    The word "absorbs" should be changed to "absorb" to make sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "weaknesses and has the ability to take out all of the Special Walls that give Magneton problems"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "With a neutral nature and 148 Speed EVs, Magneton out speeds max Speed Adamant Torterra"
    
    "outspeeds" is one word,so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Choice Scarf, give Magneton enough Speed to out speed Swellow and Altaria after a Dragon Dance"
    
    "outspeeds" is one word,so the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magneton"]Magneton's[/URL] "Opinion" 
    
    "utilize hard-hitting Normal, Dragon, or Flying-type Pokemon by removing those"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Normal" and "Dragon"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Steel Killer"
    
    "Magnet Rise on slower and bulkier Pokemon, its EVs favor bulk over speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Steel Killer"
    
    " Magnezone should beware of switching into non-choiced Metagross"
    
    The word "choiced" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "Giving Magnezone a Choice Scarf alleviates many of its speed worries"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "resistance to Ground and Fighting-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "SubSalac Sweeper"
    
    "and its unique Electric / Steel typing grants it an immunity"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    "that hits Tyranitar and Mamoswine super-effectively"
    
    The hyphen in "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Life Orb Attacker"
    
    "Magnet Rise is useful if a Ground type switches in"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " it should be paired both with Pokemon that lure Steel types and Pokemon"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    " Toxic can help wear down many of Magnezone's counters, especially Ground types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "a unique Electric / Steel typing that grants it a resistance to thirteen types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magnezone"]Magnezone's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Dugtrio can trap and OHKO Magnezone unless it carries Shuca Berry and quite a bit of defense"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mamoswine"]Mamoswine's[/URL] "Endeavor"
    
    "Thanks to Endeavor, Mamoswine will often be tearing wholes into the foe's team"
    
    "wholes" should be changed to "holes"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mamoswine"]Mamoswine's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " With a couple Ice-type Pokemon on your team, you are sure to be weak to Scizor and walled by Bronzong"
    
    This should be "With a couple [U]of[/U] Ice-type"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/manaphy"]Manaphy's[/URL] "Tail Glow Sweeper"
    
    "while also letting Manaphy beat Max Speed Adamant Rayquaza"
    
    The word "Max" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/manaphy"]Manaphy's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    "For sweeping sets, you'll want Timid with at least 308 Speed (Timid, 176 EVs) to beat Kyogre, Groudon, and Ho-oh."
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/manectric"]Manectric's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker"
    
    "and allowing Manectric or another Special sweeper to clean up easily"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/manectric"]Manectric's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "it can also Recover off damage and accomplishes this task even better in a Sandstorm"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/marowak"]Marowak's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "Sadly, a Pokémon with such great (nearly overkill) attack must have drawbacks."
    
    The word "attack" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/marowak"]Marowak's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "Give him Paralysis support, or some help from a Baton Passer"
    
    The word "Paralysis" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    Everything including and below Mawile is in the post below.
  23. Xia

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    September's "Letter 'I'" post has been added to the SCMS. I'll go ahead and grab his other posts above this post as well (will edit this post when everything is completed).

    As I go through his posts, there are some instances that I either feel should not be changed or need to be addressed by someone higher than me. I'll quote them below along with my reasoning.

    I left this as is because I really don't see changing "couple" to "few" would make enough of a difference to warrant changing.
    I left this as is as well, since speed tie is a community term and I haven't ever seen speed capitalized before.

    Finished Posts:
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    WILL CONTAIN MORE OF "M"

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mawile"]Mawile's[/URL] "Baton Pass Mawile"
    
    "Mawile can Baton Pass [U]attack[/U] and [U]defense[/U] boosts, although its typing and [U]speed[/U] doesn’t really make it good at this. Still, it could be a decent passer in the lower tiers. Remember that Stockpile boosts the [U]defense[/U] and [U]special defense[/U] of Mawile by one level, much like Cosmic Power, in DP."
    
    All the underlined words need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mawile"]Mawile's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "For the first two sets, you can trade a few HP EVs and put them in speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/meganium"]Meganium's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Hidden Power Rock hits Fire, Ice, Bug and Flying-types, 4 of Meganium's weaknesses"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fire", "Ice" and "Bug"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Agiligross"
    
    "The provided EVs allow you to outspeed max speed Timid Choice Scarf Heatran"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Offensive Choice Scarf"
    
    "Earthquake hits those Steel and Fire-types who resist Meteor Mash"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Mixed Attacker"
    
    "Basically, bulky Ground, Rock, Water, and Steel-types will have trouble switching in"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ground", "Rock" and "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Mixed Attacker"
    
    "Earthquake provides good type coverage with Meteor Mash, hitting Electric-types and Empoleon for super-effective damage."
    
    The hyphen in "super effective" needs to be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Mixed Attacker"
    
    "Metagross hits a Speed stat of 208, allowing it outspeed most Magnezone"
    
    The word "to" should be added after the word "it" for this to make sense.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Sleep Talker"
    
    "which allows you to battle with Tyranitar, Salamence, Weavile, Mamoswine and [U]Aerodactly[/U] respectively"
    
    "Aerodactly" should be changed to "Aerodactyl"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Sleep Talker" 
    
    "252 Atk Adamant Lucario + 1 Swords Dance + Life Orb Close Combat vs 252 / 165 Def = 86.81% - 102.47% (15.38% of OHKO"
    
    The bracket at the end doesn't close, so needs to be closed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Sleep Talker"
    
    "Celebi can usually handle Swampert the best, resisting 2 of Swampert's STAB move. "
    
    "STAB move" should be changed to "STAB move[U]s[/U]"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "In the offensive department, Metagross generally has problems with bulky Water, Ground and Steel-type Pokémon."
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Water" and "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Metagross only sports weaknesses to Ground and Fire-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Rock Slide covers Charizard, Gyarados, Moltres, Zapdos, and Ho-oh all in one move"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "The minimum speed one should ever run on the Agility set is 209"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "If, for some reason, you opt to aim for lower speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/metagross"]Metagross'[/URL] "Counters" 
    
    " Ho-oh works in much the same way as Moltres and Charizard"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mew"]Mew's[/URL] "Transform"
    
    " to set up. Dual Screen support is also greatly appreciated, so that Mew will not die"
    
    The word "Screen" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mew"]Mew's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Stone Edge is Mew's most powerful physical attack against Lugia, and obviously it will destroy Ho-oh"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mew"]Mew's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    " (Kyogre, Groudon, Ho-oh, and Dialga)"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mew"]Mew's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "however, as after a Rock Polish, Mew will out speed almost every Pokemon,"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, the space should be removed.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "Choice Scarf and the given EVs, Mewtwo has just enough to speed to outrun Timid Choice Scarf Shaymin-S"
    
    The word "to" (after "enough") needs deleting, and the word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Physically Defensive"
    
    "physically defensive capabilities via Reflect and Will-o-Wisp"
    
    The "o" in "will-o-wisp" is supposed to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Physically Defensive"
    
    "Thunder covers up Ho-oh and Kyogre rather nicely"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Light Screen Mewtwo"
    
    ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/light_screen"]Light Screen[/URL] 
                        ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/toxic"]Toxic[/URL] /     [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/will-o-wisp"]Will-o-Wisp[/URL] 
                        ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/taunt"]Taunt[/URL] 
                        ~      [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/moves/recover"]Recover[/URL] 
    
    The "o" in "will-o-wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Light Screen Mewtwo
    
    "opponents much faster than Will-o-Wisp can, and as such it will be more useful"
    
    The "o" in "will-o-wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Light Screen Mewtwo
    
    "Will-o-Wisp, however, cushions Mewtwo’s more vulnerable physical side"
    
    The "o" in "will-o-wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
    ======================================================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Light Screen Mewtwo
    
    "Without Will-o-Wisp, one must be especially careful of Scizor and Metagross"
    
    The "o" in "will-o-wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Bulk Up"
    
    "and Ho-oh, while Stone Edge utterly destroys Ho-oh, and gives Mewtwo a chance of "
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in the words "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized in both cases.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Kyogre and Ho-oh don't have too many problems countering Calm Mind sets"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in the words "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
    ======================================================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Surf really hurts Mewtwo due to the rain and its massive special attack"
    
    The words "special attack" need to be capitalized.
    
    ======================================================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Ho-oh, on the other hand, bypasses Mewtwo's Calm Mind boosted Special Defense"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in the words "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mewtwo"]Mewtwo's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Ho-oh easily shrugs off Ice Beam and Aura Sphere"
    
    The "o" after the hyphen in the words "ho-oh" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mightyena"]Mightyena's[/URL] "Howl"
    
    " Crunch does more to Rock, Ghost and Psychic-types and finally you"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Rock" and "Ghost"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/miltank"]Miltank's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "her sturdiness, especially since her Special Defense (her less amazing defense)"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    I'm confused with this:

    "If you paralyze Mewtwo, Darkrai will have a far easier time sweeping, as it will not have to worry about Mewtwo outspeeding and KOing it with Aura Sphere; instead it can put it to sleep with Dark Void or KO it with a +2 Dark Pulse"

    Doesn't this imply that you can put Mewtwo to sleep while it is paralyzed ?

    It's on Mew's "Double Status"

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