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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. Manriki

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    Search for Rayquaza's paragraph. This sentence is obviously missing the verb "has" :
  2. Shananiganeer

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    Strange EV spread

    The Specs Palkia set has 4 Atk EVs even though the set has no physical attacks. I assume it's supposed to be HP or Def. Hope this is in the right spot.
  3. Komodo

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    "M" post #3

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Scarf Lead"
    
    " Few Pokémon like having their attack cut in half for the rest of the match"
    
    The word "attack" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Scarf Lead"
    
    "All bets are off if they use a choice item however"
    
    The word "Choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Stall"
    
    "Its 148 defense EVs and a Bold nature mean that an Adamant Swords Danced Life Orb Lucario Close Combat will 2HKO"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Stall"
    
    "Moltres's speed also lets it outspeed Adamant Breloom and most Celebi and Jirachi."
    
    The word "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    "Hidden Power Ice becomes the better option if you choose the speed boosting item"
    
    The word "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Sunny Day"
    
    "Moltres finally has SolarBeam to batter the Water and Rock-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "It also wants as much defense as possible so it can take on physical threats like Lucario"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/moltres"]Moltres'[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Sand Veil plus Sandstorm support means Moltres will also have a hard time"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mothim"]Mothim's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Psychic hits Poison types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Poison"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mothim"]Mothim's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Hidden Power Fire or Ground helps to cover Steel types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/mothim"]Mothim's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Hidden Power Rock helps against Flying Types"
    
    1. A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Flying"
    2. The word "Types" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mothim"]Mothim's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Fire types can handle him well"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mr_mime"]Mr.Mime's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "any physical attack on his unprotected defense is going to cripple him"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/muk"]Muk's[/URL] "Tank"
    
    "Rock or Steel-type Pokémon outright"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Rock"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/muk"]Muk's[/URL] "Rest-Talker"
    
    "Brick Break is for the Rock and Steel-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Rock"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/muk"]Muk's[/URL] "Rest-Talker"
    
    "Poison typing and high special defense allow it to switch in on nearly every "
    
    The words "special defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/muk"]Muk's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Muk has most trouble fighting Steel, Rock, and Ground-types in general"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Steel" and "Rock"
    
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    This concludes the letter "M". The next letter will follow tomorrow.
  4. Reflect Suicune

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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/latias

    Under the "Choice Specs" set, third Paragraph

    It is quite obvious that the author meant to say "Blissey" not "Latias" in the highlighted section.
  5. Komodo

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    This post contains "N" Pokemons.

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/nidoking"]Nidoking's[/URL] "Mixed Attacker (UU)"
    
    "The main advantage of using this set over a physical set is that you can deal with Water and Grass-type Pokemon"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/nidoking"]Nidoking's[/URL] "Lead"
    
    "Relicanth come to mind with their nice damage output, high defense, and resistance to Fake Out"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/nidoking"]Nidoking's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "such as Ground and Water-type attacks, while also benefitting from weakened walls."
    
    A hyphen should be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/nidoking"]Nidoking's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Stat boosting Pokemon such as Espeon really appreciate this, and so Espeon also works quite will with Nidoking."
    
    The word "will" should be changed to "well"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/nidoking"]Nidoking's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "(including Fighting, Electric, and Rock-type attacks)"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fighting" and "Electric"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/nidoqueen"]Nidoqueen's[/URL] "Rest Talker"
    
    "Nidoqueen is great for absorbing status and with this set burns and Sleep attacks will also be shrugged off"
    
    The word "Sleep" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Baton Pass [V3] Focus Sash"
    
    "before entry hazards or Sandstorm turn up to spoil your day"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Baton Pass [V3] Focus Sash"
    
    "Weavile and Infernape leads can punish you with Fake Out, and in the former case super-effective STAB Ice Shard"
    
    The hyphen needs to be removed in "super effective"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Baton Pass [V3] Focus Sash"
    
    "In Ubers, one of the best recipients is often Groudon, who with a little Speed and attack can tear apart most teams"
    
    The word "attack" should be capiatalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " so is helped enormously by Ninjask’s Speed boosts, and has impressive defensive stats, especially in a Sandstorm"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " include Dragonite, Metagross, and Salamence, all of whom benefit enormously from the extra speed given"
    
    The word "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ninjask"]Ninjask's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "while likewise it also can theoretically use Dig for Steel and Rock-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/noctowl"]Noctowl's[/URL] "Sleeper"
    
    "foiling Pokémon who try to block your Hypnosis via substitute"
    
    The word "substitute" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/noctowl"]Noctowl's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "(Rock, Steel and Electric-types)"
    
    A hyphen should be added after the words "Rock" and "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/noctowl"]Noctowl's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "anything that can survive its Status-based onslaught"
    
    The word "Status" should be decapitalized.
    
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  6. Namso

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    Fixed above three posts.

    EDIT: Still working on 'N', there are still more coming.

    EDIT2: N is now fixed.
  7. Fizz

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    In this thread, I believe I've found a mistake.
    In this example, unless I'm mistaken, "Latias's" should actually be "Latias'". If a singular possessive ends in s, an apostrophe and no s is added.
  8. Komodo

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    The very small "O" post:

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/octillery"]Octillery's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    " STABbed, Choice Specs-boosted Surf is incredibly powerful when used with a 105 base Special Attack in UU"
    
    "STABbed" should be changed to "STABed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/octillery"]Octillery's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "but in terms of maintenance, the Special Baton Pass Recipient"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized as there isn't a set that goes by that name.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/octillery"]Octillery's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "as well as the fact that Octillery's Special movepool is much more diverse"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/octillery"]Octillery's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "On the other hand, its low speed tends to hold it back from offensive stardom"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    This is all of the letter "O"

    Omastar was flawless :O
  9. Namso

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    Fixed September's above post.
  10. Komodo

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    Post for "P"

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/palkia"]Palkia's[/URL] "Specially Based Mix"
    
    "Thanks to Drought, Specially Defensive Groudon can take all of Palkia's attacks, and threaten it back with Dragon Claw"
    
    The words "Specially Defensive" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/palkia"]Palkia's[/URL] "Physically Based Mix"
    
    "Timid Lugia with Screens, extremely defensive Groudon, and revenge killers"
    
    The word "Screens" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/palkia"]Palkia's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    " Its typing, Bulk Up, and useful STABs make it a good mono-attacker"
    
    "STABs" should be changed to "STAB moves"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/palkia"]Palkia's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Aura Sphere is an acceptable Special Attack if Palkia lacks sunlight"
    
    "Special Attack" should be decapitalized as it isn't labelling a stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/parasect"]Parasect's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    "may need a few points to help out speed the occasional -Speed natured or paralyzed foes"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, so the space should be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/parasect"]Parasect's[/URL] "EVs" 
    
    "as this allows Parasect to out speed minimum Speed Quagsire"
    
    "outspeed" is one word, so the space should be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/parasect"]Parasect's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "a Choice Scarf don't do much for it -- 261 Speed isn't worth the EVs and drop in power of Jolly"
    
    I'm not 100% but I think the double hyphen is a mistake and should be deleted.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/pelipper"]Pelipper's[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "The UU/NU Gyarados? Hardly. Pelipper is more comparable to Mantine, but with decent physical defense"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Free Hits"
    
    "takes the most advantage of its modest attacking power, great speed"
    
    The word "speed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Choice Band"
    
    "Now, if you predict correctly and your opponent sends out their Steel or Rock-type wall"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Double Edge does more damage than Return"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Double"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Aerial Ace hits harder than Return with Fighting and Grass-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Payback is a possibility over Night Slash, but not quite as viable, since Persian's best stat is its speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "For Special options, Dark Pulse and Shadow Ball hit Ghost-types"
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Steel and Rock-types like Steelix and Probopass are the best counters for the physical sets"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/persian"]Persian's[/URL] "Technician Hidden Powers"
    
    "If using one, be sure to set your IVs to the ones listed below"
    
    This is incorrect, the iv's for hidden power are listed in the sets above, "below" should be changed to "above"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/phione"]Phione's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
     
     "This also means that you’re not completely walled by any Grass or Water-types anymore as"
     
     A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/phione"]Phione's[/URL] "EVs"
     
     "along with anything with a lower Base Speed that isn't using a boosting"
     
     The word "Base" should be decapitalized as it isn't referring to base power or the word base stats.
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pidgeot"]Pidgeot's[/URL] "Counters"
     
     "For the Choice Band set, Steel and Rock-types can sponge hits easily"
     
     A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pikachu"]Pikachu's[/URL] "Encore"
     
     "Thunderbolt and hits Grass- and Ground-types super-effectively"
     
     The hyphen in "super-effectively" should be removed.
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pikachu"]Pikachu's[/URL] "Encore"
     
     "then Grass types like Venusaur wall the set"
     
     A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Grass"
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pikachu"]Pikachu's[/URL] "EVs"
     
     "but the fact is that Pikachu needs every bit of speed it can get"
     
     The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
     
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pikachu"]Pikachu's[/URL] "Team Options"
     
     "Pikachu also appreciates Paralysis support"
     
     The word "Paralysis" should be decapitalized.
     
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pinsir"]Pinsir's[/URL] "Choice" 
    
    "The UnderUsed tier has granted Pinsir an arena in which it doesn't have to worry about being outclassed by Heracross"
    
    "UnderUsed" should be "Underused"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pinsir"]Pinsir's[/URL] "Salac Flail"
    
    "Sandstorm, Hail, and priority attacks are all the things that will bring Pinsir's sweep to an end"
    
    The word "Hail" should be decapitalized (Sandstorm is the start of a sentence)
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/pinsir"]Pinsir's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " Moltres can be taken down by using Stealth Rock on your team and a Water or Rock-type bulky attacker"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/pinsir"]Pinsir's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Those Psychic-types also draw in Dark and Bug-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Dark"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/plusle"]Plusle's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Camerupt, Steelix, Hypno, Grumpig and Probopass can take pretty much everything our little electric friends can throw at them"
    
    The word "electric" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/politoed"]Politoed's[/URL] "Slippy" 
    
    "Perish Song turns pass by while being a powerful Flying type attack"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Flying"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/poliwrath"]Poliwrath's[/URL] "Defensive Tadpole"
    
    "but the prevalence of Sand and Hail in OU, makes it mostly useless for that task"
    
    The words "Sand" and "Hail" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/poliwrath"]Poliwrath's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Dusknoir and Spiritomb work really well as defensive Ghosts and can burn Poliwrath with Will-o-Wisp"
    
    The "o" in "Will-o-Wisp" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    Fuzznip, this one is done, I'm going to split over 2 posts.
  11. dee66

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    In section 'Dragon Dance Numbers Positive Nature' (near the bottom of page)
    Last two entries in table both say in the '+1 Outspeeds' column 'Positive Base 140s'.
    The last entry (430 Spe after DD) Outspeeds Neutral base 160.
  12. Namso

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    Fixed September's "K" post.

    EDIT: Fixed Manriki's Rayqauza post.
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    Second post for "P"

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon-z"]Porygon-Z's[/URL] "SubPlot"
    
    "you should be able to at least take down [U]a couple Pokemon[/U] before being knocked out yourself."
    
    "[U]a couple of pokemon[/U]" would make more sense here.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon-z"]Porygon-Z's[/URL] "Mixed Sweeper"
    
    "and using your Special Attacks to destroy physical walls"
    
    "Special Attacks" should be decapitalized as it isn't labelling the stat.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon-z"]Porygon-Z's[/URL] "Mixed Sweeper"
    
    "but when your strongest special attack is an unSTABed Ice Beam, sweeping will be difficult"
    
    A hyphen needs to be put between the words "un" and "STABed" 
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon-z"]Porygon-Z's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "They also provide Porygon-Z with the dual screens and paralysis support, aiding it in its attempt to sweet"
    
    (lol) The word "sweet" should be changed to "sweep"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/porygon-z"]Porygon-Z's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Magnezone, especially the scarfed variations, helps deal with Scizor and Lucario"
    
    The word "scarfed" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Defensive Duck"
    
    "Once in play, Porygon2 will almost assuredly lure in Fighting types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Defensive Duck"
    
    "On an offensive team, having a solid switch-in to the vast majority of Fighting types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Trick Room"
    
    "Porygon2 is an excellent user of the move Trick Room due to its natural bulk and low speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Trick Specs"
    
    "Porygon2's innate ability to lure in Blissey along with heavy Physical attackers makes the prospect "
    
    The word "Physical" needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Trick Specs"
    
    "and with a respectable 105 base Special Attack it can pose a mild offensive threat before crippling one of the opponent's Pokemon with an unwanted choice item"
    
    The word "choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Trick Specs"
    
    "Also, Specially based Pokemon that can take advantage of a Blissey unable to both threaten with Seismic Toss and Softboiled"
    
    The word "Specially" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Specially Defensive Heatran gets special mention for not only luring in Dragon Dance versions"
    
    The word "Defensive" should be decapitalized. Specially is the start of a sentence.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Defense Curl can be used [U]over Recycle on the Special Defensive Duck set[/U], patching up your compromised defense."
    
    1. The specially defensive duck set doesn't exist any more, so the underlined should be removed.
    2. The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "kills Magnezone (who is trapped thanks to Porygon2's Trace. Remember, though, that selecting Hidden Power Ground with require an IV drop in Special Attack, meaning that you'll need to invest 44 SpA EVs in order to guarantee 75% with Discharge and 90% with Thunderbolt on Gyarados. "
    
    The bracket doesn't close, I assume it is supposed to finish after the words "who is trapped thanks to Porygon2's Trace"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "EVs" section
    
    "You'll generally just want to max out HP and distribute the majority of the EVs to defense"
    
    The word "defense" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Fighting types in general are excellent choices, especially those with Guts"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/porygon2"]Porygon2's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Take advantage of Porygon2's relatively low damage output and speed"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/primeape"]Primeape's[/URL] "Revenge Killer"
    
    "since it resists Primeape’s weaknesses to Psychic- and Flying- attacks and can set up Stealth Rock quite easily"
    
    The hyphens after "Psychic" and "Flying" should be removed as the word "type" does not follow.
    
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    On Primeape's "I Need No Sleep"
    
    "Stone Edge will give you more coverage against the likes of Ho-oh while still hitting Rayquaza for super effective damage."
    
    Ho-Oh needs a capital "o" after the hyphen, that is the correct spelling.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/probopass"]Probopass'[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Don't bother to aim for a higher speed. Probopass is slow enough that it won't be outspeeding anything worth noting without impractical amounts of speed EVs."
    
    The word "speed" appears twice, and needs to be capitalized both times.
    
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    Letter "P" is finished.
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    New post for "Q"

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    On Quagsire's "Bulky Water"
    
    "Standard UU Bulky Water and Bulky Ground in one. Quagsire takes hits well with its good defense and HP"
    
    The word "defense" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    Appears that there is only one mistake, "Q" is finished, will start "R" now! This is weirdly fun
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rhyperior
    On Rhyperior's Analysis it says in Other Option's
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    The only thing to say about Rhyperior's signature attack, Rock Wrecker, is that [B][U]is[/U][/B] shouldn't be used.
    The second "is" should be "it"
  16. Komodo

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    This stuff..."R"

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/raichu"]Raichu's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Clefable, Grumpig, and Hypno work well against the Choice Specs set&emdash;though Clefable must watch out for Focus Blast&emdash;but"
    
    Well "&emdash" isn't supposed to be there, this is supposed to be a dash, not the (coding?).
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raikou"]Raikou's[/URL] "Offensive Calm Mind"
    
    "Instead, the use of Explosion from the likes of Gengar and Heatran, Trick from almost any Special attacker, or Pursuit from Scizor is advised."
    
    The word "Special" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raikou"]Raikou's[/URL] "Beast of Choice"
    
    "Although Raikou's attacking movepool is pathetic, to say the least, it is at least wide enough to run a decent choice set"
    
    The word "Choice" should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raikou"]Raikou's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Any Raikou set really disdains a Sandstorm, so you shouldn't throw Tyranitar on your team"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raikou"]Raikou's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Pokemon can take advantage of (often choiced) Ground-type attacks"
    
    The word "choiced" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/raikou"]Raikou's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    " It can run a Dual Screen set with Reflect and Light Screen"
    
    The words "Dual Screen" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Rock Polish"
    
    "coming off of 471 attack, it severely dents anything that doesn't resist it"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Choice"
    
    " Its huge power and low speed mean that Choice Scarf can help it be more effective"
    
    The word "Speed" must be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Choice"
    
    "The Choice Bander plays a little differently. With a Choice Band, Rampardos' attack reaches an absurd 706"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Swords Dance"
    
    "Swords Dance boosts Rampardos' attack to an unprecedented 942"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "SubSalac"
    
    "After that, sweep using Earthquake + Stone Edge, 858 attack, and 354 speed."
    
    The words "attack" and "speed" need to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Trick Room"
    
    "Pokémon that resist Head Smash for super-effective damage"
    
    The hyphen needs to be removed in "super-effective
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "Focus Punch can be used with prediction on the choice sets, "
    
    The word "choice" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "and in a metagame that focuses so much on speed, "
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rampardos"]Rampardos'[/URL] "Opinion"
    
    "largely outclassed by Marowak, which boasts higher attack"
    
    The word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rapidash"]Rapidash's[/URL] "Mixed"
    
    "damage Pelipper and Mantine as well as hitting most Water types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rapidash"]Rapidash's[/URL] "Choice Horse"
    
    "does decent damage to the Rock and Steel types abundant in UU"
    
    Hyphens need to be added after the words "Rock" and "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rapidash"]Rapidash's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Rapidash lacks the ability to seriously hurt most of its fellow Fire types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rapidash"]Rapidash's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Water types, especially the likes of Blastoise, Cloyster, Mantine and Pelipper also wall her physical sets"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Water"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raticate"]Raticate's[/URL] "Rancorous Raticate"
    
    "and the whole strategy is ruined by Sandstorm and Hail, but only the brave or foolhardy"
    
    The words "Sandstorm" and "Hail" need to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/raticate"]Raticate's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Absolutely maximum speed (252 EVs as opposed to the listed 244) is not desirable though because Raticate doesn't outspeed any extra Pokemon with that much speed"
    
    The word "speed" (appears twice) should be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/raticate"]Raticate's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Raticate gets more of a benefit by giving it a speed nature to boost its respectable speed than it does an attack nature, so Jolly is the way to go almost every time."
    
    The word "speed" (appears twice) should be capitalized. Also, the word "attack" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rayquaza"]Rayquaza's[/URL] "Mixquaza"
    
    "216 Speed EVs with a positive nature outspeeds all base 90 speed Ubers and Lugia who sit at 307 in order to do the same"
    
    The word "Speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rayquaza"]Rayquaza's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " Forretress can take many of the Ice and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Rayquaza"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ice"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rayquaza"]Rayquaza's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "and does not fear Sandstorm thanks to Air Lock"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rayquaza"]Rayquaza's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Pokémon with a base speed above 95 can carry a Choice Scarf to revenge kill Dragon Dance Rayquaza."
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    Well, I'll post before I forget...or maybe I just want to take over this thread ;)

    "R" is barely started, so please don't delete this.
  17. tennisace

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    Not according the strategy dex; it is correct as-is.
  18. Komodo

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    Nope, this thread says otherwise. The link on the Pokemon page is incorrect and I have reported this too.

    Edit - And Darkie just confirms...
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    OU Speed Tiers stuff
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    This still has not been fixed yet. http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/ou_speed_tiers#tier0
    Also:


    I also think that the article just needs a quick update with new sets like Agility SubPetaya Empoleon and Choice Scarfed Rotoms.

    UU Speed Tiers tuff
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    http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/uu_speed_tiers
    The UU Speed Tiers needs to be updated, too. Stuff like Yanmega, Roserade and Honchkrow are gone while there are new stuff like Cresselia, (Scarfed) Porygon-Z, Alakazam, Umbreon, and (Rock Polish) Rhyperior and Aggron.


    Lots of small Grammar/Punctuation stuff
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    If this is true then these should be capitalized, too:

    • Machamp: Choice Scarf
    • Gallade: Anti-Lead
    • Rotom-C: Special Choice


    • Ho-Oh: Choice Scarf
      Defence isn't spelled wrong in some places but the game spells it "Defense".
    • Clampearl: Big Man on Clamp-us
      ^


    • Change "defense drop" to "Defense drop":

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    Ho-Oh, not Ho-oh.
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    Here are some places where it's wrong.


    So is the weather lowercase and move/ability is capitalized?

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    Bronzong - Due to the Special Defense boost in Sandstorm,



  22. Komodo

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    Sorry if this comes off as rude, but killerwhale, your posts aren't being specific. Now, I'm continuing with R.

    Edit - wow...killerwhale...you should read the standards thread.

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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Tank"
    
    "Paralysis support is always useful, and if Thunder Wave is chosen"
    
    The word "Paralysis should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Tank"
    
    "to sponge the Water and Ground-type attacks thrown at it"
    
    The word "Water" should have a hyphen after it.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Tank"
    
    "Mismagius can take advantage of Regirock's ability to lure Ground and Fighting-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Curse"
    
    "Regirock can set up 6 Curses quite easily in a Sandstorm"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Curse"
    
    "Its Special Defense also recieves a boost from Sandstorm."
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Curse"
    
    "This Regirock set needs a Pokemon that can set up a permanent Sandstorm. Without Sandstorm in play, Regirock struggles to wall hits to the extent that it needs to. Hippopotas is the only option in UU, but both Tyranitar and Hippowdon can set up a permanent Sandstorm in OU."
    
    The word "Sandstorm" appears three times here and needs to be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Curse"
    
    "however Magmortar and Blaziken lack Sandstorm immunity"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Curse"
    
    "Luckily, one of the Sandstorm providers can deal with Celebi"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Rest + Sleep Talk"
    
    "effectively use Pokemon that are weak to Fire and Flying-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen should be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Rock Polish"
    
    "weaker Ground and Water-type attacks aimed at Regirock from its counters"
    
    A hyphen should be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "While Sandstorm support is not required by any means, it certainly helps Regirock obtain its full potential"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "In UU, Hippopotas is the only option for Sandstorm support"
    
    The word "Sandstorm" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Ground and Fighting-type attacks are basically seen everywhere making Mismagius a great partner for Regirock with its immunities"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/regirock"]Regirock's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Regirock can basically take any Fire or Flying-type attack aimed at Venusaur as well"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "UU Tank"
    
    "Thunder Wave is extremely useful for hitting fast Fire and Fighting-types on the switch"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "UU Tank"
    
    "Registeel attracts strong Fire and Fighting-type Pokémon like Blaziken and Magmortar"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "UU Tank"
    
    "immune to Ground-type moves, and resists Fire and Fighting-type moves"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "OU Tank"
    
    "Since Registeel's Steel typing is optimal for switching into Choice Specs powered Draco Meteors"
    
    A hyphen should be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "OU Tank"
    
    "Registeel needs help with opposing Fire and Fighting-types, namely Infernape. Pokémon such as Starmie and Latias can effectively deal with Infernape, as well as any other Fighting or Fire-types that may cause Registeel trouble."
    
    Hyphens need to be added after the words "Fire" (appears twice)
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Uber Support"
    
    "Registeel's fantastic defenses, resistance to Dragon, Ice, Dark, and Ghost-type moves"
    
    A Hyphen needs to be added after the words "Dragon", "Ice" and "Dark".
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Uber Support"
    
    "Ubers, but is still weak against Ground, Fire, and Fighting-type moves"
    
    A Hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ground" and "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Rest + Sleep Talk"
    
    "Earthquake is the preferred attacking move with this set, as it hits the Steel and Poison-types who are immune to Toxic"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "he does come with common weaknesses to Fire, Fighting, and Ground-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fire" and "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " resisting everything together except Electric and Ground-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Electric"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Moltres is a great Pokémon to use Registeel with as well, being able to take Ground, Fire, and Fighting-type attacks aimed at Registeel"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Ground" and "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Rotom-A makes a decent partner, being immune to the Fighting and Ground-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Dugtrio is also a brilliant offensive partner, being able to trap and kill opposing Fire and Steel-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Registeel has many counters in the OU metagame, namely Fire and Fighting-types like Infernape, Lucario, and Heracross"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fire"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/registeel"]Registeel's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Stealth Rock Registeel fights so hard to put up, or hit Regsiteel with a powerful STAB Earthquake"
    
    "Regsiteel" should be changed to "Registeel"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/relicanth"]Relicanth's[/URL] "Choice"
    
    "bulky Ground types don't enjoy STAB Water attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/relicanth"]Relicanth's[/URL] "Choice"
    
    "Earthquake puts a nice dent in Steel types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Steel"
    
    ================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/relicanth"]Relicanth's[/URL] "Choice"
    
    "since Double Edge provides no additional coverage in UU"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Double"
    
    ================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/relicanth"]Relicanth's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "with an Adamant nature. Maxing out the speed EVs gives Relicanth"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Swords Dancer"
    
    " If Rhyperior opts to use Fire Punch, it can lower its speed to 164 EVs, just outspeeding Swampert"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    " as they either boost their speed (Rock Polish)"
    
    The word "speed" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "being weak to Fighting, Ground, and Steel-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the words "Fighting" and "Ground"
    
    ================================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Gyarados can take the Fighting, Ground-, Steel-, and Water-type attacks that threaten Rhyperior"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Rhyperior can take the Rock and Electric-type attacks that are the bane of Gyarados.
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Rock"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Gengar and Rotom-A can take Fighting and Ground-type attacks that are aimed at Rhyperior"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Fighting"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "Other Options"
    
    "The only thing to say about Rhyperior's signature attack, Rock Wrecker, is that is shouldn't be used."
    
    The words "is that is" should be changed to "is that it"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rhyperior"]Rhyperior's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Special Defense in order to minimize the effects of Hail"
    
    "Hail" should be decapitalized as it isn't labelling the move.
    
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    Both of September's "P" posts are fixed.

    Fixed Steveebomb's Rhyperior correction.

    Fixed September's "Q" correction.
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    Fixed both of September's "R" posts. (the above two posts)

    Fixed his "P" post to.
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom"]Rotom's[/URL] "Screen Support"
    
    "unlike Reflect's five (or eight depending you item) turn duration."
    
    "depending you item" should be "depending [U]on your[/U] item"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom"]Rotom's[/URL] "Counters"
    
    "Also, its Synchronize ability will make Rotom think twice before burning it with Will-O-Wisp, as it will be burned to."
    
    The word "to" should be changed to "too" as it means "as well as" or "also"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Standard"
    
    "Hidden Power Fighting is another good option here because it hits Tyranitar as hard as Leaf Storm but doesn't lower your SpA and can do some damage"
    
    "SpA" should be "Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Standard"
    
    "The given 88 EVs in Speed allow for Rotom-C to outspeed a Adamant max Speed"
    
    "a Adamant" should be "[U]an[/U] Adamant
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Special Choice"
    
    "the given EVs also allow you to outspeed a non-scarfed max Speed Timid Gengar"
    
    The word "scarfed" needs to be capitalized.
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Special Choice"
    
    "Therefore having a powerful Physical Sweeper to deal with Blissey"
    
    The words "Physical Sweeper" should be decapitalized.
    
    ====================================================
    
     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Special Choice"
    
    "Pursuit Snorlax is perhaps the greatest threat to this team as even with Choice Specs, Rotom-C will struggle to harm it and then be picked off by Pursuit as it switches."
    
    The word "team" should be changed to "set"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Defensive Substitute"
    
    "Timid nature and 188 Spe EVs allow Rotom-C to outspeed neutral natured base 90"
    
    "Spe" should be changed to "Speed"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Defensive Substitute"
    
    "The rest are put into HP and Def to retain great physical bulk"
    
    "Def" should be changed to "Defense"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Defensive Substitute"
    
    "Latias is hurt by Shadow Ball, but with Calm Mind it can weaken them while powering up its SpA"
    
    "SpA" should be changed to "Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Double Status"
    
    "Leaf Storm is a great option to OHKO Swampert but also hit Tyranitar hard; however, SpA drops may become a problem"
    
    "SpA" should be changed to "Special Attack"
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Having Dual Screens up can help the Boosting Sweeper set up as it will make it harder for opposing Pokemon to break its Substitute."
    
    "Dual Screens" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "For example, 76 Def and 180 Special Defense with a Bold nature will give you 295 in both stats"
    
    "Def" should be "Defense"
    
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     On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "The Double Screen spread should use 100 EVs in both defenses alongside a Bold nature"
    
    "Double Screen" should be decapitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-c"]Rotom-C's[/URL]  "Opinion"
    
    "Rotom-C's Leaf Storm will surely cause your opponent to think twice about switching in the common Rock and Ground-types"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Rock"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom-f"]Rotom-F's[/URL] "Choice"
    
    " A powerful physical attacker such as Machamp or Heracross should put Blissey in her place ."
    
    The space before the full stop should be deleted.
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-s"]Rotom-S'[/URL] "Special Choice"
    
    "Use caution with Starmie, however, as it adds to your Ghost and Dark-type weaknesses"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ghost"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-s"]Rotom-S'[/URL] "Special Choice"
    
    "Lucario and Tyranitar are good candidates for this role, and Rotom-S can take the Ground and Fighting-type attacks"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom-s"]Rotom-S'[/URL] "Team Options"
    
    "Tyranitar is handled by most fighting types such as Machamp and Hariyama"
    
    "fighting types" needs to be changed to "Fighting-types"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Choice Specs"
    
    "Pokemon that are Specially bulky for the most part like Clefable and Lanturn"
    
    The word "Specially" should be decapitalized.
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "The surprise factor that Scarf Rotom-W has can occasionally allow it to revenge kill Starmie, 80 Spe Ninjask, and +1 Jolly Gyarados, among other things"
    
    "Spe" needs to be changed to "Speed"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "at +6 SpA and SpD, it will be very hard to deal with. "
    
    "SpA" needs to be changed to "Special Attack"
    "SpD" needs to be changed to "Special Defense"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Choice Scarf"
    
    "Skarmory's Electric-type weakness can be cushioned by Rotom-W; in turn, Rotom-W's Dark and Ghost-type weaknesses"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Dark"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Washing In The Rain"
    
    "thanks to Water Absorb and its partial Ground typing"
    
    A hyphen needs to be added after the word "Ground"
    
    ====================================================
    
    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "Washing In The Rain"
    
    "Toxicroak is immune to poison and can heal turn by turn using its Dry Skin ability"
    
    The word "Poison" needs to be capitalized.
    
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    On [URL="http://www.smogon.com/forums/../dp/pokemon/rotom-w"]Rotom-W's[/URL] "EVs"
    
    "Bold nature is another possibility with the Double Screen set"
    
    "Double Screen" should be decapitalized.
    
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