Fatecrashers
acta est fabula
how odd
fixed it i think
fixed it i think
if a nature isn't specified that means you can use either! ^_^Arcanine's D/P analysis page: http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine
On the physical Life Orb set, a nature isn't specified. Considering what's written in Other Options, it should probably be Intimidate.
Double-Edge is an alternative over Return to hit Pokemon who resist Fire-type attacks harder, however, the recoil damage given from it makes it an unattractive choice since Life Orb, Stealth Rock, and recoil damage from both Double-Edge and Flare Blitz will wear down Ponyta quickly.shouldn't the first comma (before "however") be a semi-colon?
Thanks, fixed!On Ponyta's analysis (http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ponyta), I think I found a typo.
shouldn't the first comma (before "however") be a semi-colon?Double-Edge is an alternative over Return to hit Pokemon who resist Fire-type attacks harder, however, the recoil damage given from it makes it an unattractive choice since Life Orb, Stealth Rock, and recoil damage from both Double-Edge and Flare Blitz will wear down Ponyta quickly.
How is a nature intimidate?Arcanine's D/P analysis page: http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine
On the physical Life Orb set, a nature isn't specified. Considering what's written in Other Options, it should probably be Intimidate.
I believe the bolded part should say "set up a layer of", not "layers".Against slower leads, set up a layers Toxic Spikes until Beedrill gets knocked down to low HP,
I changed it to:Against slower leads, set up a layers Toxic Spikes until Beedrill gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
In short, fixed.Against slower leads, it can set up Toxic Spikes until Beedrill gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
Fixed, thanks!http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/corsola
In the first paragraph of her one set, "Corsola also resists Rock-, Fire-, Flying-, and Normal-type attacks..." Corsola does not resist rock type attacks (but she does resist ice and poison!). Not that anyones using her :(
lol, S_A =PAgainst slower leads, it can set up Toxic Spikes until Beedrill gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
Against slower leads, set up a layers Toxic Spikes until Beedrill gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
Against slower leads, Beedrill can set up Toxic Spikes until it gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
Shinyazelf we appreciate your help but you might wanna double check your stuff there :PAgainst slower leads, Beedrill can set up Toxic Spikes until it gets knocked down to low HP, and then depending on the situation, either set up another layer and get KOed, or Endeavor to bring the opposing Pokemon down to 1 HP.
UU overview. IIRC, 2 subjects joined by "and" make a plural verb.. missing commas?The common presence of Stealth Rock and even Spikes in UU makes Donphan ever more popular.
OU overview. There's a missing comma between stats and which, i think.. The overview also kind of just stops, but that's a bit subjective..The lack of a reliable recovery move and a low Special Defense stat is disheartening, but Donphan has great HP, Attack, and Defense stats which it can put to good use.
OU Choice band set refers to "the set above", which R_D says to not do.. high powered is also supposed to have a hyphenUnlike the set above, this takes advantage of Donphan's base 120 Attack stat and high powered STAB move.
actually, the subject is "the common presence" which is singularhttp://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/donphan
UU overview. IIRC, 2 subjects joined by "and" make a plural verb.. missing commas?
i'll let the author do what he wants, but i did fix the bad phrasehttp://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/donphan
OU overview. There's a missing comma between stats and which, i think.. The overview also kind of just stops, but that's a bit subjective..
i don't know anything about the rules for the set above, but i fixed the other onehttp://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/donphan
OU Choice band set refers to "the set above", which R_D says to not do.. high powered is also supposed to have a hyphen
ugh optional changes is the worst name ever, it pained me to make this changehttp://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine
Other Options section should be renamed Optional Changes since the rest of the analysis has been updated.
gotcha, good oneI have noticed a typo in the Crobat analysis. I found this in the optional changes.
"Crobat has a wide variety of EV spreads it can run, due to the different roles it can fulfill. You can reduce the Speed number to 144 EVs, as this puts Crobat at 356 Speed, just enough to outpace +1 Speed Tyranitar."
Those speed EV's put Crobat at 365 speed, not 356. If you only had 356 Spe, you wouldn't outrun base 115s nor Scarftar.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/crobat
The error is pretty obvious, the sentence is incomplete. I'm going to guess it was supposed to be:0 Speed EVs and a Brave nature give Trapinch a grand total of 22 Speed, making him one of the slowest Pokemon in the (only Munchlax is slower).
0 Speed EVs and a Brave nature give Trapinch a grand total of 22 Speed, making him one of the slowest Pokemon in the tier (only Munchlax is slower).