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4th Gen Battle at the Great Wall (LoveDestiny vs. Earthworm Suspect Warstory)

Discussion in 'Warstory Archive' started by LoveDensity, May 29, 2010.

  1. kokoloko

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    Finally, after countless shitty warstories, a good one. The commentary made me laugh, and the battle was amazing.
  2. Steven Snype

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    Damn good warstory. Nice comments and thought process.

    Found this typo, though

    I think you mean "Gyarados is his main counter/check to Heatran", but it's a minor thing.
  3. LoveDensity

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    Lol, dang thxs. That was a -.- typo by me, fixed it. Definitely not leaving that typo in there.
  4. TheFourthChaser

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    US BEST beats Oceania, good stuff man. You had some great prediction and good comments to go with it and this will probably be archived, if it isn't something is wrong.

    And sorry for haxing you the other day man.
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    Hmm... EW has no trick absorbers.... Wonder how he deals with that. And Breloom could mess him up pretty badly if Gyarados ever goes down. Liked the specially defensive Heatran, though. A good choice with all the Celebis and Shaymins flying around on suspect.
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    Great match!
  8. acinod

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    Nice story. I love all the predictions and stuff like that. I hate Focus Blast as well because I always miss with it on my Gengar but the enemy always hits with it (Got swept by an enemy Gengar once which used Focus Blast 3 times and didn't miss).

    Earthworm's Stall team is quite unique but I wonder how he would deal with Stallbreaking Gliscor. I guess Gyarados can come in but Gliscor can just Toxic it as it Waterfalls (bound to miss soon due to Sand Veil )and stall with Roost until it Rest then Taunt it.
  9. XxJohny2haixX

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    The prediction skills are some of the best I have ever seen.
  10. Scimjara

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    Wow that was one nice war story ;D
  11. tubbablubba

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    While I didn't get any of the inside jokes (not even one)

    This is the only warstory I've read so far where right from the beginning I thought "Holy shit these guys are pro at pokemon battling." It was absolutely amazing to read the thought processes. Really impressive warstory.
    10 trillion/10.
  12. BIG loven

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    Very well put together, good read
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    Bloody brilliant match.
    Excellent commentary and good job on outlining your thought process. YOu also had just the right amount of humor too.

    A flawlessly written warstory


    10/10
  14. Justinawe

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    Great read, you guys had a very nice match. If it wasn't for that crit, I think EW might have pulled out the win though. xD

    9/10
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    I loved this war story more than I loved the strawberry I just ate

    and it was my favorite strawberry ever
  16. bearsfan092

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    Jesus, this was such a great warstory. I really loved the thought processes, especially things like deducing that Heatran had lots of Sp. Def. I don't often think in terms like these, but it's really interesting the way you can (correctly) draw conclusions like that.
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    i had the most important twist of fate in this warstory. excellent read boy.
  18. Reverb

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    very good battle. excellent warstory.
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    Great warstory. It kept my interest all the way to the end.

    10/10


    Not really... Smart players don't take stupid chances. Simple as that.

    It's the stupid ones you gotta watch out for, because you never know when they're going to do something completely unpredictable...
  20. Omega Phoenix

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    great read, had me hooked to the end
    amazing predictions and commentary
    glad to see a decent warstory back on stark again
  21. apologies

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    good battle, good warstory
    only annoying thing is i knew who was going to win from the start because the bad guys always lose.... (koalas > bros)
  22. Afrodisiac

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    Really good commentary and Warstory overall, really nice job

    10/10 from me.
  23. lesalia

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    best warstory in a while 10/10
  24. Pika25

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    This warstory definitely deserves the archives, Band Snorlax ftw 10/10
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    Excellent read, good work at breaking EW's hellish stall by clever thinking!

    10/10

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