Revised!
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Change log
Enhanced shading.
Extended neck slightly, and made spots on neck larger.
Smoothed out bump on first curvature. Good eye, Doom Chaos.
Reworked bands and needles.
Redesigned coil beneath head to be larger and more detailed.
Redesigned tail to raise apple higher and made apple larger.
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CritiquesLovebite: Interesting style but I'm not sure it's cnsistant with the styple of B/W. Maybe some darker outlines to give it more definition. And what's with the red outline around the apple?
Scorpio: Yeah I'd lower the apple. It looks like its tail and head are in competition for the focal point of the sprite.
Elcheeso: I like the 10th shiny, the red one. Autumn colors are nice with apples.
Noobies: Awesome backsprites! I like the shiny colors too.
Wyverri: You keep making it better. I like how the eyes are more narrowed.