This was a submission for the Rising Stars of Manga 7 contest, that unfortutnately, did not make the cut. Since the editors of the contest do not give feedback to the losers(unless they REALLY liked your work and wanted to hire you), I figure, hey, why not post it here and get honest feedback on how to improve.
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