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Darkrai2 vs. Skater: Scylant's Time [Warstory]

Discussion in 'Create-A-Pokémon Project' started by Darkrai2, Mar 22, 2008.

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  1. Darkrai2

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    Darkrai2 vs. Skater: Scylant’s Time [Warstory]

    Darkrai2’s Pokémon: Infernape, Jirachi, Metagross, Lucario, Scylant, Snorlax

    Skater’s Pokémon: Ninetails, Grumpig, Cacturne, Altaria, Sandslash, Froslass


    Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
    Darkrai2 sent out Syclant (lvl 100 Syclant ?).
    Skater sent out Volpe 9 code (lvl 100 Ninetales ?).
    Darkrai2 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    Volpe 9 code used Hypnosis.
    Volpe 9 code's attack missed!
    A great start to the battle. I figure that if I keep Scylant in, then its Ice-Bug typing would fail it and would leave a big dent in my team. Hypnosis's lame accuracy really saved my that turn. At least is Infernape had fallen asleep it wouldn't of really mattered, and you'll see why a little bit later. I was only really thinking about fainting his Ninetails, and I got a little careless because of that.
    ---
    Infernape used Close Combat.
    Volpe 9 code lost 77% of its health.
    Infernape's defence was lowered.
    Infernape's special defence was lowered.
    Volpe 9 code used Hypnosis.
    Volpe 9 code's attack missed!
    This turn wasn't a real surprise, and so the opponent switches, not fearing anthing at all. Hypnosis was really lame today!
    ---
    Skater switched in GramPorc (lvl 100 Grumpig ?).
    Infernape used Close Combat.
    It's not very effective...
    GramPorc lost 27% of its health.
    Infernape's defence was lowered.
    Infernape's special defence was lowered.
    GramPorc's leftovers restored its health a little!
    GramPorc restored 6% of its health.
    I think that that was the greatest idea ever. I mean come on, even the mighty Close Combat can not destroy Grumpig. Not a real suprise, I knew that if he was smart he would switch.
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
    GramPorc used Calm Mind.
    GramPorc's special attack was raised.
    GramPorc's special defence was raised.
    GramPorc's leftovers restored its health a little!
    GramPorc restored 6% of its health.
    A Calm-Minder is really hard to predict, but I bring out Jirachi, who only take a meager 25% from Psychic attacks, and also is a good wall, so I decide to bring it out.
    ---
    Jirachi used U-turn.
    It's super effective!
    GramPorc lost 36% of its health.
    Darkrai2 switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
    GramPorc used Calm Mind.
    GramPorc's special attack was raised.
    GramPorc's special defence was raised.
    GramPorc's leftovers restored its health a little!
    GramPorc restored 6% of its health.
    I desperately needed to switch to Metagross because it could use Bullet Punch for some damage, and what better way to do it than hit it with a Super-Effective U-Turn?
    ---
    Metagross used Bullet Punch.
    GramPorc lost 33% of its health.
    GramPorc used Hidden Power.
    Metagross lost 31% of its health.
    GramPorc's leftovers restored its health a little!
    GramPorc restored 6% of its health.
    Okay, it finally decides to attack, but only for a meager 31%. Metagross does more damge with 33%, and I see that I just might have the advantage,and so I keep Metagross in to wall Grumpig.
    ---
    Metagross used Bullet Punch.
    GramPorc lost 27% of its health.
    Skater's GramPorc fainted.
    6-5
    I knew that I would beat his Sandslash for the first faint of the match, and believe it can keep happening, untill he sends out the perfect counter.
    ---
    Skater switched in Puntaspillo (lvl 100 Sandslash ?).
    Choice Band prohibits the use of this move.
    Metagross used Bullet Punch.
    Puntaspillo lost 23% of its health.
    Puntaspillo used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Metagross lost 61% of its health.
    Puntaspillo's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Puntaspillo restored 6% of its health.
    Weird name. Anyway, I take it and keep Metagross in, because I think he can take Sandslash down, or at least beat him down. So, let's go on.
    ---
    Metagross used Bullet Punch.
    Puntaspillo lost 24% of its health.
    Puntaspillo used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Metagross lost 8% of its health.
    Darkrai2's Metagross fainted.
    Puntaspillo's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Puntaspillo restored 6% of its health.
    5-5
    Metagross faints in the effort to take down Sandslash, but I know that Sandslash can be taken down by my worthy pokemon!
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Lucario (lvl 100 Lucario ?).
    Lucario used Aura Sphere.
    Puntaspillo lost 65% of its health.
    Skater's Puntaspillo fainted.
    5-4
    See, I told you. Anyway, he brings in Ninetails, which is definatly going to take down Lucario. I still keep him out though, because maybe I can get a Close Combat in before Lucario faints...
    ---
    Skater switched in Volpe 9 code (lvl 100 Ninetales ?).
    Volpe 9 code used Flamethrower.
    It's super effective!
    Lucario lost 100% of its health.
    Darkrai2's Lucario fainted.
    4-4
    No, I can't. The score is tied and I can't help feeling that Ninetails could sweep my team, and I worry and bring out the best pokemon for the job.
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    Infernape used Close Combat.
    Volpe 9 code lost 23% of its health.
    Skater's Volpe 9 code fainted.
    Infernape's defence was lowered.
    Infernape's special defence was lowered.
    4-3
    Okay, now the score is in my favor, and I stop worrying because the he bring out a pokemon which I know I can defeat. Here's a hint: Cactus.
    ---
    Skater switched in Cactus (lvl 100 Cacturne ?).
    Cactus used Sucker Punch.
    It's not very effective...
    Infernape lost 68% of its health.
    Infernape used Flare Blitz.
    It's super effective!
    Cactus lost 100% of its health.
    Skater's Cactus fainted.
    Infernape was hit by recoil!
    Infernape lost 32% of its health.
    4-2
    I OHKO Cacturne with Flare Blitz. Very easy faint for me and I have a big score advantage, so I start doing everything right for once.
    ---
    Skater switched in Ghiacciolo (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
    Ghiacciolo used Thunderbolt.
    Infernape lost 0% of its health.
    Darkrai2's Infernape fainted.
    3-2
    So my Infernape faints, and I see how much he ment to my team. Then I only have a small advantage over him, and the match gets a lot closer.
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
    Ghiacciolo used Thunder Wave.
    Jirachi is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
    Jirachi used U-turn.
    It's not very effective...
    Ghiacciolo lost 14% of its health.
    Darkrai2 switched in Snorlax (lvl 100 Snorlax ?).
    I am keep Jirachi in for one turn and bring in Curselax, which is the Wall of my team, and might just get me the victory.
    ---
    Ghiacciolo used Thunder Wave.
    Snorlax is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
    Snorlax used Earthquake.
    Ghiacciolo lost 43% of its health.
    Snorlax gets paralyzed, but still manages to use Earthquake for 43% damage, and so this is a pretty nice turn for Snorlax.
    ---
    Ghiacciolo used Thunderbolt.
    Snorlax lost 12% of its health.
    Snorlax used Earthquake.
    Ghiacciolo lost 39% of its health.
    I use Earthquake again, fearing nothing, and get good results, but still for less damage than last turn.
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Syclant (lvl 100 Syclant ?).
    Ghiacciolo used Thunderbolt.
    Syclant lost 41% of its health.
    Scylant is switched in, and is punished with a powerful Thunderbolt, but it still fights on, waiting for the faint next turn.
    ---
    Syclant used Bug Buzz.
    It's not very effective...
    Ghiacciolo lost 4% of its health.
    Skater's Ghiacciolo fainted.
    3-1
    The faint happens, and I can honestly say that Syclant was worth it. A very good part of my team, and he proved it right then.
    ---
    Skater switched in Altalena (lvl 100 Altaria ?).
    Syclant used Bug Buzz.
    It's not very effective...
    Altalena lost 17% of its health.
    Altalena used Dragon Claw.
    Syclant lost 33% of its health.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Scylant is in Critical health, but fights on, like the good team member he is! But still...
    ---
    Syclant used Bug Buzz.
    It's not very effective...
    Altalena lost 16% of its health.
    Altalena used Dragon Claw.
    Syclant lost 25% of its health.
    Darkrai2's Syclant fainted.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    2-1
    Scylant, you did your part! Let's see if I can take down the Dragon-Flying beast. Jirachi gets ready to do its part!
    ---
    Darkrai2 switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
    Altalena used Dragon Claw.
    It's not very effective...
    Jirachi lost 7% of its health.
    Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
    Altalena lost 27% of its health.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    Ha, 7%! Well, I do 27% and get very close to a victory, so read on! Jirachi is doing great!
    ---
    Altalena used Dragon Claw.
    It's not very effective...
    Jirachi lost 8% of its health.
    Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
    Altalena lost 23% of its health.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    Okay, another good turn. But will I do anything next turn? Or will I fail to win?
    ---
    Altalena used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
    Jirachi is paralysed! It can't move!
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    Very bad turn. I lose HP and I don't do anything. Very unforunate for me, but good for my opponent!
    ---
    Altalena used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
    Jirachi is paralysed! It can't move!
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    The same thing happens? Well, this might be a little harder than I previously thought, but not so hard.
    ---
    Altalena used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Jirachi lost 23% of its health.
    Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
    Altalena lost 27% of its health.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    I finally do damge, but not as much as I had hoped for, but it was a start!Great!
    ---
    Altalena used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Jirachi lost 24% of its health.
    Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
    Altalena lost 24% of its health.
    Altalena's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Altalena restored 6% of its health.
    Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
    2-0
    GG, and a very challenging one, too. I thought that my opponent would win, but I still pull of the win!
    ---
    Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
    Altalena lost 15% of its health.
    Skater's Altalena fainted.
    Darkrai2 wins!
    Skater: gg
    Darkrai2: great balttle
    Darkrai2: warstory
    Skater: xD

    Props:
    Scylant for doing a lot of damage.
    Metagross and Jirachi for being the best Steel-Psychic types a trainer could have!
    Skater for the great Shoddy match!

    Slops:
    Snorlax for not doing much of anything.
    Infernape for fainting way, way too early!
    Lucario for the same reason that Infernape was a slop.
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    was the overall consensus on this when you posted it in Stark Mountain.
    Not much has changed.
  3. Bologo

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    Ouch...this was really awful. No offense, but this is your 4th time making a warstory, and they've all been terrible.

    There was absolutely no prediction in that, and you both played terribly. These are NOT the kinds of matches that you're supposed to be warstorying, and y'know what? No one's going to feel sorry for you when your warstory threads get locked, because you seem to be someone who can't take any sort of advice at all.

    Seriously, your warstories are just going to get locked automatically if you keep picking these half-assed matches, and doing a half-assed job of warstorying them.

    It's also generally a bad idea to post the same warstory twice, especially when it was locked both times because it sucked.
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    How many warstories is it gonna take you to finally get it right...seriously man stop posting them...
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    eric the espeon maybe I just misunderstood
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    Darkrai try to read as many other wastorys as you can, they will help you to find out how to do your own.
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    This warstory was already raked over the coals in Stark. I'm stopping it before it gets abused here as well.

    You are seriously making me regret the "open door policy" we have here regarding warstories. I was hoping to encourage people to post warstories involving CAP pokemon. But, if this is what we are going to get, then I'd rather have none at all.

    Can some of the senior battlers here post some warstories involving Syclant to show other members how it is done? (Sunday's is the only decent warstory we've seen).
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