Don't doubt the Rocks--- An OU warstory

[Tyranitar]

Good battle good match. I really liked it 8/10.

I like how you used puns since no one uses them lol

 

[The Pokemon Pimp]

Best warstory I've seen on here in a while! Good commentary which goes a long way. Thanks for the entertaining read!

 

[chaos 9]

KK I'll try to put sprites in now stay tuned.

EDIT: Sorry guys sprites hate me or my computer or something because they just don't want to work :( Sorry for the wall of text I will try to work this out for my next WS.

 

[Potential]

About the sprites, I think that if they're not working the way you're doing it, then (if this isn't the way you're already doing it) you could get all of the images that you'll use (once each) by pasting the URL into the "Insert Image" button in the formatting toolbar (mountains; yellow background) and then copy-pasting each of them wherever appropriate. But it might not be worth the effort. This was definitely a very good read for me; it's always nice to read a well-written warstory.

I won't parrot everything everyone has said so far, but I'll say that alongside the questionable plays (I think the number 3 comes to my head) there were also a few nice plays (maybe 2 particularly nice ones). But it was your comments that made it good. Sure, at times they were a little... "fluffy." But they pretty much all had at least your thought process for the moves, which was great.

All in all, good job! And thanks for the warstory.

 

[The SPrinkLer]

My favorite part was the double switch to machamp against tar. Although he fucked up that play. He also fucked up the beginning where he taunted and didn't even uturn first when he had the clear disadvantage. Also what Rey said. Decent battle good comments

 

[Setsuna]

Good warstory, 'normal' I'd rather say. Quite a few mistakes in both sides, but the battle in general was good.

 

[XxJohny2haixX]

Interesting warstory, made better with your comments.