DP Sharpedo .

[Aldaron]

Looks like the UU Life Orb mixed sweeper that I enjoy using (in fact, used it against SkyPirateCoud in our round 3 UU tourney match up) is not in, so here we go!

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/sharpedo

[SET]
Name: Mixed Sweeper
Move 1: Surf
Move 2: Earthquake
Move 3: Crunch
Move 4: Ice Beam
Item: Life Orb
EVs: 60 Atk / 196 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Lonely

[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Sharpedo has one purpose: to deal damage to the opposition and pray it doesn't OHKO back, since Sharpedo has terrible defenses. This set is very straight forward: Surf OHKOs Aggron, Steelix, Golem and Camerupt; Earthquake deals massive damage to Probopass, Bastiodon, Relicanth, Muk and Ampharos, sometimes OHKOing all of them; Crunch hits Hypno, Rotom and Grumpig for OHKOs; Ice Beam hits Altaria and Leafeon for near OHKOs while dealing large damage to the likes of Vileplume and Meganium.</p>

<p>Max Speed is required to allow Sharpedo to always outspeed Altaria, and outspeed other neutral base 95 Pokemon, like Leafeon, Drapion and Jynx. 320 Attack is reached to OHKO the standard Bastiodon and Probopass with Earthquake, assuming Stealth Rock in down. 275 Special Attack is reached to OHKO 252 HP / 0 SpD Leafeon with Ice Beam, again, assuming Stealth Rock is down.</p>

 

[junior]

<p>320 Attack is reached to OHKO the standard Bastiodon and Probopass with Earthquake, assuming Stealth Rock in down. 275 Special Attack is reached to OHKO 252 HP / 0 SpD Leafeon with Ice Beam, again, assuming Stealth Rock is down.</p>

Just suggesting to make this its own paragraph after the first as it doesn't relate to the current first part of the second paragraph, but does relate to the first paragraph.

I would also then rephrase it to:

<P>Stealth Rock support is probably best with this set it helps guarantee an OHKO on Pokemons like Bastiodon, Probopass and Leafeon with such attack EVs.</p>

just to make it sound better.

 

[Aldaron]

this post is for jrrrrrrr's and Aldaron's purposes...

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