err....not part of the GP team but this analyses needs a few proofreads.
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[Overview]
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<p>Very little has changed for Eevee since Gen 4. Thanks to adapability, its Stab STAB moves are doubled in power, which mades making Eevee a powerful user of Choice Band in Little Cup. Unfortuneately Unfortunately in this Generation, Evolution Stone exists, which makes Eevee a less impressive pokemon Pokemon. It does still, however, run a rather powerful Choice Band set and has access to powerful priority, in Quick Attack, thanks due to Adapability. Despite it's poor movepool, Eevee can still sweep successfully with the correct support. Cheer Up allows Eevee to raise both attack stats at once, making it a potent mixed attacker. (you just randomly added this, you should move it or delete it)<space></p>
[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Quick Attack
move 2: Return
move 3: Bite
move 4: Baton Pass / Iron Tail
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 236 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Set Description:[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This is Eevee's most powerful set approach without having to seting up. Quick attack is good for hitting quicker faster (repetition of the word "quick" makes this sentence sound awkward) pokemon Pokemon. This can be useful against set-up sweepers such as users of Shell Break (shell break) and scarfed pokemon Pokemon holding a Choice Scarf. Return's has a massive power of 204. This will deal serious damage to anything that does not resist it. While bite Bite has a low power, it is Eevee's only weapon against Ghost<space>-types, who resist it's powerful Stab STAB attacks. Baton Pass is great for scouting. (another lonely sentence, move it or add more substance) The EV spread is very simple; 236 Attack and Speed maxamise maximize Eevee's sweeping capabilities. An +attack nature (Adamant) Attack-boosting nature such as Adamant is encouraged.</p>
Additional Comments:[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>If you do not wish to run Baton Pass, Iron Tail is an option. It can hit rock types that also Rock-types who (you've been using "who" to refer to Pokemon, so you must stay consistent throughout the writeup) resist Eevee's Stab STAB attacks.</p>
Teammates and Counters: (team options and counters are different sections that come after all sets. It should talk about both sets, not a separate set twice. The order should be Team Options, Optional Changes, Counters, and Dream World)
<p>The biggest counter to Eevee are Ghost type pokemon such as Gastly, Misdreavus, Duskull, and Pururiru. They can easily switch in, immune to Eevee's normal attacks. From here they can set up on a locked Eevee and cause serious damage to your team. Pokemon with pursuit pair will with Eevee because they can trap and kill Ghost types and allow Eevee to sweep with ease. Komatana, Houndour and Munchlax are prime examples. Eevee's Normal attacks can't do much to bulky Steel types, particularly Bronzor and Tessido.A Magnemite with Hidden Power Fire also makes a great partner for Eevee. Steel types can be trapped and eliminated making life easier for Eevee.Fire types also pair well with Eevee because the can threaten and kill Steel types. A scarfed Houndour hits Two birds with one stone, hitting steel types with powerful Fire Blast / Overheat and fast ghosts with Pursuit / Crunch / Dark Pulse.<p>
[SET]
name: Mixed Attacker
move 1: Cheer Up / Return
move 2: Quick Attack
move 3: Shadow Ball / Bite
move 4: Hidden Power Fire / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb
ability: Adaptability
nature: Naive / Hasty
evs: 192 Atk / 80 SAtk / 236 Spe
Set Description:[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Cheer Up makes Eevee a powerful mixed sweeper. It who can come in on a support pokemon Pokemon such as Tesshido Ferroseed or a weakened pokemon Pokemon, scare them out, and set up with Cheer Up. After 1 a Cheer Up, Quick Attack becomes more powerful than a if it were boosted by Choice Banded one thanks due to added Life Orb Damage power (Life Orb damage usually refers to the recoil it dispenses). Shadow Ball / and Bite both cover Ghost<space>-type pokemon Pokemon.; Hhowever, faster Ghost<space>-types such as Gastly and Misdreavus will outspeed outpace (everyone knows why you mean by outspeed, but it isn't a word) you, so you will need to predict their switch-in. Hidden Power Fire is great for hitting Steel types like Tesshido such as Ferroseed who will want to switch in and wall your powerful Normal attacks. Hidden Power Ice can be used for Gligar switch-ins.</p>
Additional Comments:[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Because you can hit faster pokemon with Quick Attack, attack nature is used An Attack-boosting nature is used to hit as hard as possibly with Quick Attack; however, a Jolly nature can be used to outpace everything Eevee would normally tie with. Return can be used in the place of Cheer Up if you want Eevee to be a mono-attacker (uh, no one wants their Pokemon to be mono-attackers, they just have to because they lack another moveslot. You should rephrase this).<space>Shadow Ball has better coverage than bite Bite, and a higher Base<space>Power,; however, Bite is an option because Eevee has higher aAttack than sSpecial aAttack, and Pururiu is much more specially defensive than physically (you want to rephrase this). Bite will hit Pururiu harder. Hidden Power Ice can be used to hit Gligar on the switch-in,; however, Hidden Power Fire is strongly recommended to hit Steel<space>-types, who otherwise wall you.</p>
<p>Eevee makes a terrific late-game sweeper once Ghosts- and Steel<space>-types have been taken out of the game. It can used to quickly revenge kill a scarfed pokemon midgame such as Wailmer or Mankey. (what are you trying to say here and why is it in Team Options?) However, the best time to use Eevee is late-game, when your opponent is weakened and his or her Ghost-s<space>/and Steels-types have been KO'd.</p>
[Optional Changes]
<p>Yawn is a viable move. It can be used with Protect /<space> orDetect to shut down one a member of the opponent's team which can be very useful. Baton Pass can be used to pass on a Cheer Up boost, which could come in useful handy. Eevee could can pass on its stat Boost(s) boosts (Cheer Up gives two boosts, one in each attacking stat, so it should always be pluralized) when it is low on health and give another poke Pokemon (this is just being lazy) an opportunity to sweep. Although gimmicky, a Curse set could work on Eevee pose some use. With an Evolution Stone and Max HP / Sp.Def maximum HP and Special Defense, Eevee can take on the role of a tank. Quick Attack ignores the Speed drops which is very useful, and Ghost<space>-types with Hidden Power Fighting can't do much when Eevee has an Evolution Stone and maxed out Special Defense. Wish is an option to recover Eevee's health....(everyone knows that Wish recovers health, we want to know why we want to recover our health or what recovering our health does for us) can be used for recovery, of sorts. Hidden Power Ground can be used on the mixed attacker set to hit Steel pokes Pokemon (writing "pokes" is extremely lazy, seriously, just type "Pokemon"), notably Aron.</p>
[Counters]
<p>Ghosts Ghost-types counter Eevee because they resist its powerful Stab STAB attacks. Bulky Steel-types resist Eevee's (what). A team with Eevee should make use of Pursuit users such as Munchlax and Kotomana, and Magnemite to trap steels. Eliminating these counters will give Eevee an easier time cleaning up.</p>
[Dream World]
<p>Eevee gets the Anticipation ability from Dream World, which is absolutely useless. Adaptability is most definitely the preferred ability.</p>[/box]
Ok, there were a ton of lazy mistakes. Not capitalizing "Pokemon" and writing "pokes" are some examples. If you really expect this analyses to be uploading using pokes to replace Pokemon, you should think twice >_< it's kind of mean making abbreviations for words you know how to type so we have to fix it instead of you...watch out next checker.
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[Overview]
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<p>Very little has changed for Eevee since Gen 4. Thanks to adapability, its Stab STAB moves are doubled in power, which mades making Eevee a powerful user of Choice Band in Little Cup. Unfortuneately Unfortunately in this Generation, Evolution Stone exists, which makes Eevee a less impressive pokemon Pokemon. It does still, however, run a rather powerful Choice Band set and has access to powerful priority, in Quick Attack, thanks due to Adapability. Despite it's poor movepool, Eevee can still sweep successfully with the correct support. Cheer Up allows Eevee to raise both attack stats at once, making it a potent mixed attacker. (you just randomly added this, you should move it or delete it)<space></p>
[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Quick Attack
move 2: Return
move 3: Bite
move 4: Baton Pass / Iron Tail
item: Choice Band
ability: Adaptability
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 236 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Set Description:[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This is Eevee's most powerful set approach without having to seting up. Quick attack is good for hitting quicker faster (repetition of the word "quick" makes this sentence sound awkward) pokemon Pokemon. This can be useful against set-up sweepers such as users of Shell Break (shell break) and scarfed pokemon Pokemon holding a Choice Scarf. Return's has a massive power of 204. This will deal serious damage to anything that does not resist it. While bite Bite has a low power, it is Eevee's only weapon against Ghost<space>-types, who resist it's powerful Stab STAB attacks. Baton Pass is great for scouting. (another lonely sentence, move it or add more substance) The EV spread is very simple; 236 Attack and Speed maxamise maximize Eevee's sweeping capabilities. An +attack nature (Adamant) Attack-boosting nature such as Adamant is encouraged.</p>
Additional Comments:[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>If you do not wish to run Baton Pass, Iron Tail is an option. It can hit rock types that also Rock-types who (you've been using "who" to refer to Pokemon, so you must stay consistent throughout the writeup) resist Eevee's Stab STAB attacks.</p>
Teammates and Counters: (team options and counters are different sections that come after all sets. It should talk about both sets, not a separate set twice. The order should be Team Options, Optional Changes, Counters, and Dream World)
<p>The biggest counter to Eevee are Ghost type pokemon such as Gastly, Misdreavus, Duskull, and Pururiru. They can easily switch in, immune to Eevee's normal attacks. From here they can set up on a locked Eevee and cause serious damage to your team. Pokemon with pursuit pair will with Eevee because they can trap and kill Ghost types and allow Eevee to sweep with ease. Komatana, Houndour and Munchlax are prime examples. Eevee's Normal attacks can't do much to bulky Steel types, particularly Bronzor and Tessido.A Magnemite with Hidden Power Fire also makes a great partner for Eevee. Steel types can be trapped and eliminated making life easier for Eevee.Fire types also pair well with Eevee because the can threaten and kill Steel types. A scarfed Houndour hits Two birds with one stone, hitting steel types with powerful Fire Blast / Overheat and fast ghosts with Pursuit / Crunch / Dark Pulse.<p>
[SET]
name: Mixed Attacker
move 1: Cheer Up / Return
move 2: Quick Attack
move 3: Shadow Ball / Bite
move 4: Hidden Power Fire / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb
ability: Adaptability
nature: Naive / Hasty
evs: 192 Atk / 80 SAtk / 236 Spe
Set Description:[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Cheer Up makes Eevee a powerful mixed sweeper. It who can come in on a support pokemon Pokemon such as Tesshido Ferroseed or a weakened pokemon Pokemon, scare them out, and set up with Cheer Up. After 1 a Cheer Up, Quick Attack becomes more powerful than a if it were boosted by Choice Banded one thanks due to added Life Orb Damage power (Life Orb damage usually refers to the recoil it dispenses). Shadow Ball / and Bite both cover Ghost<space>-type pokemon Pokemon.; Hhowever, faster Ghost<space>-types such as Gastly and Misdreavus will outspeed outpace (everyone knows why you mean by outspeed, but it isn't a word) you, so you will need to predict their switch-in. Hidden Power Fire is great for hitting Steel types like Tesshido such as Ferroseed who will want to switch in and wall your powerful Normal attacks. Hidden Power Ice can be used for Gligar switch-ins.</p>
Additional Comments:[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Because you can hit faster pokemon with Quick Attack, attack nature is used An Attack-boosting nature is used to hit as hard as possibly with Quick Attack; however, a Jolly nature can be used to outpace everything Eevee would normally tie with. Return can be used in the place of Cheer Up if you want Eevee to be a mono-attacker (uh, no one wants their Pokemon to be mono-attackers, they just have to because they lack another moveslot. You should rephrase this).<space>Shadow Ball has better coverage than bite Bite, and a higher Base<space>Power,; however, Bite is an option because Eevee has higher aAttack than sSpecial aAttack, and Pururiu is much more specially defensive than physically (you want to rephrase this). Bite will hit Pururiu harder. Hidden Power Ice can be used to hit Gligar on the switch-in,; however, Hidden Power Fire is strongly recommended to hit Steel<space>-types, who otherwise wall you.</p>
Teammates and Counters: (same as above)
<p>This Eevee is not walled by all ghosts. Only the ones that outspeed it will beat it, unless you can predict their switch-in.Pokemon with pursuit work will with Eevee because they can trap and kill Ghost types and allow Eevee to sweep easily. Komatana, Houndour and Munchlax fit the bill here.Eevee's Normal attacks can't do much to bulky Steel types, particularly Bronzor and Tessido.Since Eevee is fragile, faster pokemon with priority moves will stop it in it's tracks. Croagunk can come in and stop it with a combination of Fake Out and Vacuum Wave. Meditie does the same with Fake Out and Bullet Punch. Dokkora Ohko's it with Mach Punch. Buizel also hits Eevee hard with Aqua Jet.Pururiru makes an excellent defensive partner because it is immune to Fake Out, Vacuum Wave, Mach Punch, Aqua Jet, and it resists Bullet Punch. It also lures out Tesshido, with Eevee can set up on.</p>
[Team Options] <p>This Eevee is not walled by all ghosts. Only the ones that outspeed it will beat it, unless you can predict their switch-in.Pokemon with pursuit work will with Eevee because they can trap and kill Ghost types and allow Eevee to sweep easily. Komatana, Houndour and Munchlax fit the bill here.Eevee's Normal attacks can't do much to bulky Steel types, particularly Bronzor and Tessido.Since Eevee is fragile, faster pokemon with priority moves will stop it in it's tracks. Croagunk can come in and stop it with a combination of Fake Out and Vacuum Wave. Meditie does the same with Fake Out and Bullet Punch. Dokkora Ohko's it with Mach Punch. Buizel also hits Eevee hard with Aqua Jet.Pururiru makes an excellent defensive partner because it is immune to Fake Out, Vacuum Wave, Mach Punch, Aqua Jet, and it resists Bullet Punch. It also lures out Tesshido, with Eevee can set up on.</p>
<p>Eevee makes a terrific late-game sweeper once Ghosts- and Steel<space>-types have been taken out of the game. It can used to quickly revenge kill a scarfed pokemon midgame such as Wailmer or Mankey. (what are you trying to say here and why is it in Team Options?) However, the best time to use Eevee is late-game, when your opponent is weakened and his or her Ghost-s<space>/and Steels-types have been KO'd.</p>
[Optional Changes]
<p>Yawn is a viable move. It can be used with Protect /<space> orDetect to shut down one a member of the opponent's team which can be very useful. Baton Pass can be used to pass on a Cheer Up boost, which could come in useful handy. Eevee could can pass on its stat Boost(s) boosts (Cheer Up gives two boosts, one in each attacking stat, so it should always be pluralized) when it is low on health and give another poke Pokemon (this is just being lazy) an opportunity to sweep. Although gimmicky, a Curse set could work on Eevee pose some use. With an Evolution Stone and Max HP / Sp.Def maximum HP and Special Defense, Eevee can take on the role of a tank. Quick Attack ignores the Speed drops which is very useful, and Ghost<space>-types with Hidden Power Fighting can't do much when Eevee has an Evolution Stone and maxed out Special Defense. Wish is an option to recover Eevee's health....(everyone knows that Wish recovers health, we want to know why we want to recover our health or what recovering our health does for us) can be used for recovery, of sorts. Hidden Power Ground can be used on the mixed attacker set to hit Steel pokes Pokemon (writing "pokes" is extremely lazy, seriously, just type "Pokemon"), notably Aron.</p>
[Counters]
<p>Ghosts Ghost-types counter Eevee because they resist its powerful Stab STAB attacks. Bulky Steel-types resist Eevee's (what). A team with Eevee should make use of Pursuit users such as Munchlax and Kotomana, and Magnemite to trap steels. Eliminating these counters will give Eevee an easier time cleaning up.</p>
[Dream World]
<p>Eevee gets the Anticipation ability from Dream World, which is absolutely useless. Adaptability is most definitely the preferred ability.</p>[/box]
Ok, there were a ton of lazy mistakes. Not capitalizing "Pokemon" and writing "pokes" are some examples. If you really expect this analyses to be uploading using pokes to replace Pokemon, you should think twice >_< it's kind of mean making abbreviations for words you know how to type so we have to fix it instead of you...watch out next checker.
