First Team Rating

[sreyb]

Like the Title says, this is my first team I've put together. I'd like some feedback and maybe suggestions?

1) Volcarona- Offensive Quiver Dance (Timid)
Items & EVs: Life Orb 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
-Quiver Dance
-Fiery Dance
-Bug Buzz
-Hidden Power Rock

2) Hydreigon- Offensive (Modest)
Items & EVs- Expert Belt 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
-Dark Pulse
-Draco Meteor
-Fire Blast
-U-Turn

3) Salamence- Dragon Dance (Adamant)
Items & EVs: Life Orb 252 Atk / 4 SpA / 252 Spe
-Dragon Dance
-Outrage
-Fire Blast (Going to teach it Roost when Black and White2 get released)
-Earthquake

4) Metagross- Choice Band (Adamant)
Items & EVs: Choice Band 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
-Meteor Mash
-Hammer Arm
-Bullet Punch
-Pursuit

5) Jellicent- Special Wall (Calm)
Items & EVs: Leftovers 252 HP / 36 Def / 220 SpD
-Toxic
-Scald
-Recover
-Shadow Ball

6) Terrakion- Choice Scarf (Jolly)
Items & EVs: Choice Scarf 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Close Combat
-Sacred Sword
-X-Scissor
-Stone Edge

In my 6th slot, I use a Choice Scarf Garchomp in game, but I know he's banned in OU. I was thinking of using a Choice Scarf Terrakion instead? As you can see though, I like monsters that hit hard and fast. I have Jellicent as my only wall, but I have no problem getting rid of it for something else. The Pokemon I'm considering having on my team are:
Terrakion
Scizor
Lucario

So what do you guys think?

 

[shofly12]

Hey! Welcome to Smogon. You'll want to add in a lot more detail about why exactly you chose your Pokemon, what your team tries to accomplish, etc. I would go over the RMT rules and maybe lurk a bit more on the forums before you officially post an RMT again.

 

[Electrolyte]

What shofly said. Make sure the descriptions are nice and beefy! Also, it would be nice to have a list of threats so us raters would know what to cover. Here's a link to the rules: The Rules for RMT
I will edit in my rate once you get this fixed up.