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Discussion in 'Warstory Archive' started by alphatron, Jul 13, 2011.
Haha awesome job. Loved the story! Go Chlorophyll Sweepers!
The Conkeldurr-Gallade paragraph made me laugh.
Really. Gallade and Scrafty completely outclass Conk at Bulk Up.
Really? I don't think they outclass Conkelderp, they're simply different. Conkelderp has Mach Punch, which is the reason he's used so much.
Absolutely amazing read. Damn funny, well written and an interesting Sun team. Luvdisc~
Awesome warstory, Gallade is one of my favorite mons, and I really want to make a team around him now (is on my "to test" list)
Keep it going Alpha <3
Awesome, awesome warstory. I can't believe no-one noticed/commented on your excellent My Chemical Romance interweaving.
10/10 and a disc
One of the best warstories I've read in a long time. Kudos, sir.
And a luvdisc, too.
Haha, cool (war)story bro, have a luvdisc =D
you absolute saint, great warstory 10/10
10/10 + luvdisc
first warstory in a while that i read through completely. good stuff.
Amazing Warstory. Loved the Conkeldurr and Gallade 'Old Spice' moment.
Have a Luvdisc for this awesome Warstory!
This is probably one of my favorite warstories I have read this week. Good job on it. I give it a 10/10.
This was hilarious. I don't know why, but for some reason sun teams are more fun to read about. Luvdisc'd, and I'm gonna go buy some Old Spice.
Wha?!? No Justice Gallade?! T-T
I stopped reading at the Old Spice Gallade thing because I loved it.
The Old Spice reference was fucking gold. This was really well written, I like your writing style as reading your story felt like one of my friends was telling it in conversation. You made a few small mistakes, but you caught them yourself, which is the important part. Great format, pretty decent battle, fun to read. Overall, very well done. =)
9/10, please write more. Cheers!
What they said. I liked the Gallade rant, too. Luvdisc'd.
9.7 out of 10 and a Luvdisc. THIS is what War Stories should look like. I'm assuming the EV's on the Gallade were just 4/max/max...
You've got some of the best commentary that I've ever heard anywhere. I especially liked the part in which you made a comparison of your Gallade & the standard Conkeldurr. Also, I thought that your referrences to MW2 & Black Ops were very witty.
The battle itself is great, but sometimes, the commentary is what makes a warstory stand out, & yours did.
A lot of fun to read. Very good commentary.
Fairly good battle, not amazing but still rather good.
About the same as Vratix. Pretty good commentary, decent battle. 8/10-ish
One of the most entertaining warstories I've read in a while. 9/10 and a Luvdisc.
Wow, I liked this, especially the useless trivia. (And it's interesting seeing what a metagame I don't play is like. I suppose that happens a lot with warstories nowadays, given that I don't play 5th gen OU...)
amazing warstory, n gallade rant (=.