OU Hoopa-U

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Thanks for the check! Good that you caught that issue with the Trick description in Moves for Specs, as I have no clue why I threw in "however" and "although", which makes it seem like giving away its item is a bad thing. I edited the sentence and made it more concise:

"Trick allows Hoopa-U to threaten a defensive threat such as Chansey and shut it down by giving away its Choice Specs while also allowing Hoopa-U to alleviate prediction against defensive builds."

Let me know if you're okay with this sentence, or if there are any grammar mistakes in there.
"Trick allows Hoopa-U to shut down a defensive threat such as Chansey as well as alleviate prediction against defensive builds" works fine
 

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