No, I merged the EV and item / move paragraphs. Those are generally merged together. It's fine that you don't agree with some of my changes, but you also shouldn't be arrogant about it. If you'd like to know the rationale behind any of my changes, feel free to PM me. I don't just make random changes. I'm honestly offended by the fact that you think I do. EDIT: and "in order to" is still used wrong. It fits horribly in that sentence. Even if it's not technically incorrect (which it is), it still sounds absolutely terrible.