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Misseh, an OU Warstory (of sorts)

Discussion in 'Stark Mountain' started by Soraku, Jul 23, 2010.

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  1. Soraku

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    Ok I say of sorts because we both have mixed teams in the Standard ladder on Shoddy. Anyway, this was an awesome battle. This is my first Warstory, so any tips would be appreciated as far as the telling and commentary. I am spk (my test account), and my opponent will be known as Jane. Comments are in Dark Red

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    spk's moves will look like this.
    Jane's moves will look like this.
    other text will look like this.

    Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
    spk sent out Pompom (lvl 100 Ambipom ?).
    Jane sent out Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
    Weavile is exerting its pressure!
    Weavile used Fake Out.
    Pompom lost 21% of its health.
    Pompom flinched!

    An idiotic messup on my part, for some reason my brain stupidly thought that Ambipom was a speed tie with Weavile, when it is in fact 5 speed lower. :(
    ---
    Pompom used Low Kick.
    It's super effective!
    Weavile lost 100% of its health.
    Weavile hung on using its Focus Sash!
    Pompom lost 10% of its health.
    Weavile used Counter.
    Pompom lost 69% of its health.
    spk's Pompom fainted.

    I did what I could here, I did NOT want this Weavile living enough health to destroy anything else.
    ---
    spk switched in Rawr (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
    Rawr's Intimidate cut Weavile's attack!
    Janel switched in Weezing (lvl 100 Weezing ?).
    Rawr used Dragon Dance.
    Rawr's attack was raised.
    Rawr's speed was raised.

    I obviously predict a switch here and set up a DD
    ---
    Rawr used Taunt.
    Weezing fell for the taunt!
    Weezing used Will-o-wisp.
    Weezing can't use Will-o-wisp after the taunt!

    Taunt the standard WoW, who would have thought?
    ---
    Rawr used Waterfall.
    Weezing lost 40% of its health.
    Weezing used Thunderbolt.
    It's super effective!
    Rawr lost 66% of its health.
    Rawr's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Rawr restored 6% of its health.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Rawr used Waterfall.
    Weezing lost 35% of its health.
    Weezing used Thunderbolt.
    It's super effective!
    Rawr lost 40% of its health.
    spk's Rawr fainted.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.

    I admit, I was hoping for flinch hax, I knew this Weezing could hamper my team, and I was greedily hoping to take it out early. Sadly, no flinch, and dead Gyara. You will see later how this Weezing troubles me.
    ---
    spk switched in Bazinga (lvl 100 Honchkrow ?).
    Jane switched in Empoleon (lvl 100 Empoleon ?).
    Bazinga used Dark Pulse.
    It's not very effective...
    Empoleon lost 15% of its health.
    Empoleon's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Empoleon restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Bazinga used Nasty Plot.
    Bazinga's special attack was sharply raised.
    Empoleon used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Bazinga lost 83% of its health.
    Empoleon's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Empoleon restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Bazinga used Superpower.
    It's super effective!
    Empoleon lost 75% of its health.
    Bazinga's attack was lowered.
    Bazinga's defence was lowered.
    Empoleon used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Bazinga lost 17% of its health.
    spk's Bazinga fainted.
    Empoleon's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Empoleon restored 6% of its health.

    This was obviously the defensive variant of Empoleon, I have been used to seeing the SubPetaya version, so I got cocky. At this point I know there is no way I can win...
    ---
    spk switched in Cow (lvl 100 Celebi).
    Cow used Leech Seed.
    Empoleon was seeded!
    Empoleon used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Cow lost 28% of its health.
    Cow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cow restored 6% of its health.
    Empoleon's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Empoleon restored 6% of its health.
    Empoleon's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Empoleon lost 12% of its health.
    Cow regained health!
    Cow restored 11% of its health.
    ---
    Cow used Earth Power.
    It's super effective!
    Empoleon lost 23% of its health.
    Jane's Empoleon fainted.
    Cow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cow restored 6% of its health.

    Well, I took out the defensive bird here, not too snappy.
    ---
    Jane switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
    Weavile is exerting its pressure!
    spk switched in Moo (lvl 100 Miltank ?).
    Weavile used Fake Out.
    Moo lost 9% of its health.
    Moo's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Moo restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Jane switched in Weezing (lvl 100 Weezing ?).
    Moo used Body Slam.
    Weezing lost 15% of its health.
    Weezing is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
    Moo's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Moo restored 3% of its health.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.

    So I get the para hacks, and a large stall battle ensues. 21 turns of Pain Split and Milk Drink, with a few attacks thrown in. I shall delete the middle so this isn't a HUGE post.
    ---
    Moo used Body Slam.
    Weezing lost 16% of its health.
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Moo used Stealth Rock.
    Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.

    This Stealth Rock is fairly important.

    ---

    Moo used Milk Drink.
    Moo restored 37% of its health.
    Weezing used Thunderbolt.
    Moo lost 23% of its health.
    Moo's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Moo restored 6% of its health.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.

    Finally it is over, I got tired of it, so I switch out....
    ---
    spk switched in Misseh (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
    Weezing used Thunderbolt.
    Misseh lost 18% of its health.
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 6% of its health.

    I know Weez has no SpA, and my Misseh can at least take one or two attacks and allow me to set up some calm minds.
    ---
    Misseh used Substitute.
    Misseh lost 25% of its health.
    Misseh made a substitute!
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    Weezing's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Weezing restored 2% of its health.
    ---
    Misseh used Calm Mind.
    Misseh's special attack was raised.
    Misseh's special defence was raised.
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Misseh used Calm Mind.
    Misseh's special attack was raised.
    Misseh's special defence was raised.
    Weezing used Fire Blast.
    The substitute took damage for Misseh!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Misseh used Calm Mind.
    Misseh's special attack was raised.
    Misseh's special defence was raised.
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Misseh used Calm Mind.
    Misseh's special attack was raised.
    Misseh's special defence was raised.
    Weezing is paralysed! It can't move!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Misseh used Calm Mind.
    Misseh's special attack was raised.
    Misseh's special defence was raised.
    Weezing used Thunderbolt.
    The substitute took damage for Misseh!
    Misseh's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Misseh restored 5% of its health.

    So +5/+5 Mismagius, with a sub. Gogo!
    ---
    Misseh used Shadow Ball.
    Weezing lost 100% of its health.
    Jane's Weezing fainted.

    Eek. These next pokes here could have destroyed me were it not for the stealth rocks.
    ---
    Jane switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
    Weavile is exerting its pressure!
    Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
    Weavile lost 0% of its health.
    Jane's Weavile fainted.
    Jane switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
    Pointed stones dug into Metagross.
    Metagross lost 6% of its health.
    Misseh used Shadow Ball.
    Metagross lost 94% of its health.
    Jane's Metagross fainted.

    At this point, I'm a bit excited, I still don't know what all she has left, but I'm feeling confident. I still have my sub, so I know I should be able to take out almost anything.
    ---
    Jane switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Infernape.
    Infernape lost 12% of its health.
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    The substitute took damage for Misseh!
    Misseh's substitute faded!
    Misseh used Hidden Power.
    Infernape lost 88% of its health.
    Jane's Infernape fainted.

    This one may have been a problem, but I take it out with HP Fight. And when the next poke came out, I sighed with relief.
    ---
    Jane switched in Gallade (lvl 100 Gallade ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Gallade.
    Gallade lost 6% of its health.
    Misseh used Shadow Ball.
    It's super effective!
    Gallade lost 94% of its health.
    Jane's Gallade fainted.
    spk wins!
    Jane: nice swepp
    Jane: gg
    spk: gg

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  2. Towelie

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    ...all it was was a mismagius sweeping. there wasn't really any prediction at all so this is like a 1/10.
  3. MrIndigo

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    Why didn't you get the +6 with Misdreavus? Then Stealth Rock wouldn't have mattered. Furthermore, Shadow Ball is a way better choice than HP Fighting except against Normals and Steels that don't have the Psychic type. There was no reason to most of your moves.
  4. Fatecrashers

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    Comments were lacking, mainly because there wasn't anything interesting happening in the battle anyway. I hope if you write another warstory it will be better than this mediocre effort.

    1/10
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    Not what a warstory is supposed to be. You basically just swept your opponent with Mismagius after a few turns. Better luck next time.
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