Embarrassing at best :/ Its much worse than i thought and i suppose I probably shouldve done a draft and proof read of my own before throwing it to others. Reviewing / rewriting now. hopefully the issues just spelling/grammar/coding issues and not actual content/readability. <-- real word. Also this is totally a analysis for Murkow :'( Edit: wow this is terrible. I didnt actually spell Insomnia correctly once the entire thing. Its not much of an excuse but I was rushing through this just to get it done. :/ Seriously sorry. Just finished my first runthrough. gunna look at it again in a hour before reposting so that its not utter trash. edit2: Threw up the first draft anyways, hope its better. will edit it one more time around 1. Edit3: Got home later than i thought but I ran through it twice now and I think I got most if not all of it.