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My team has carnivine? A warstory of sorts.

Discussion in 'Stark Mountain' started by seds, Apr 5, 2008.

  1. seds

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    Just for fun, I made an NU team. I decided to try my luck against OU. I have won a couple of times. This was against one of the better opponents I faced. I actually win ~40% of the time with this team. I tried to post this on serebii, but it got denied. Hence the ;045; things.


    Seds' Team:
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    -Blackey-'s Team:
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    Rules: Evasion Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Sleep Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause, Timed Battle

    -Blacky- sent out Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).;242;
    seds sent out Nightmarish Creature (lvl 100 Masquerain ?).;284;
    Masquerein's intimidate cut Blissey's attack!
    seds: oh my...

    Ok, so I predict a thunder waye, ice beam, or something else. Whiscash can handle anything blissey dishes out, and do major damage back. That sure is an interesting lead...I can't agility and sweep...

    seds switched in Physical wall (lvl 100 Whiscash ?).;340;
    Blissey used Thunder Wave.
    It doesn't affect Whiscash...
    ---
    seds: clever switch!
    Whsicash used Amnesia.
    Whiscash's special defence was sharply raised.
    Blissey used Stealth Rock.
    Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!

    I amnesia just incase the name "physical wall" draws out a special attacker. I have had both Empoleon and infernape switch in to whiscash before, thinking grass knot will do over 80% or something. He sets up stealth rock, which causes problems for my team. Big problems.

    ---
    -Blacky- switched in Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?).;286;
    Whiscash used Waterfall.
    It's not very effective...
    Breloom lost 23% of its health.
    Breloom was badly poisoned!
    ---
    seds: clever move.
    seds: uh oh
    seds: switch to bug type!!
    Breloom used Spore.
    Whiscash fell asleep!
    Whiscash's Chesto Berry cured its Sleep!
    Whiscash used Waterfall.
    It's not very effective...
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---

    Whiscash is a Chesto rester.I didn't want a bug to take the sleep.

    Breloom used Spore.
    Whiscash fell asleep!
    Whiscash is fast asleep!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---

    So, whiscash takes it for the team.

    seds switched in Nightmarish Creature (lvl 100 Masquerain ?).;284;
    Masquerein's intimidate cut Breloom's attack!
    Pointed stones dug into Masquerein.
    Masquerein lost 50% of its health.
    Breloom used Substitute.
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom made a substitute!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---

    I do the logical choice, and send in my intimidating bug. Actually, I should have sent in mothim, because it outspeeds Breloom.

    Breloom is tightening its focus!
    Masquerein used Air Slash.
    It's super effective!
    The substitute took damage for Breloom!
    Breloom's substitute faded!
    Breloom used Focus Punch.
    It's not very effective...
    A critical hit!
    Nightmarish Creature lost 43% of its health.
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---
    seds: uh. crit

    Just a crit among friends...

    -Blacky- switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).;376;
    Masquerein used Air Slash.
    It's not very effective...
    Metagross lost 19% of its health.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Masquerein used Agility.
    Masquerein's speed was sharply raised.
    Metagross used Rock Slide.
    It's super effective!
    Nightmarish Creature lost 8% of its health.
    seds's Masquerein Creature fainted.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    Don't know what I was thinking here...
    Score: 6-5 for him.

    seds switched in Nightmarish Creature (lvl 100 Carnivine ?).;455;
    Pointed stones dug into Carnivine.
    Carnivine lost 12% of its health.
    seds: what??
    seds: carnivine??
    -Blacky- switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).;392;
    Carnivine used Sleep Powder.
    Infernape fell asleep!
    Carnivine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Carnivine restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    -Blacky- switched in Garchomp (lvl 100 Garchomp ?).;445;
    seds switched in Nightmarish Creature (lvl 100 Lumineon ?).;457;
    Pointed stones dug into Nightmarish Creature.
    Nightmarish Creature lost 12% of its health.
    ---
    seds: ok. this next technique will baffle you
    seds: depending on hax, lumineon attracts the opponent
    seds: OH NO! It's female!


    Lumineon. The most annoying thing ever. My moveset. Is so clever...

    -Blacky- switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
    Lumineon used Sweet Kiss.
    Metagross became confused!
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    Time to set up. I have brightpowder just in case it can move.

    Lumineon used Rain Dance.
    Rain began to fall!
    Metagross is confused!
    Metagross used Earthquake.
    Nightmarish Creature lost 47% of its health.
    The rain continues to fall.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 1% of its health.
    ---
    Lumineon used Waterfall.
    Metagross lost 25% of its health.
    Metagross snapped out of confusion!
    Metagross used Earthquake.
    Metagross's attack missed!
    The rain continues to fall.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    Ouch. That's why it's NU. Even with all those HP Evs,Earthquake hurts. And waterfall does 25% in the rain? Why waterfall, you may ask. Flinch Chance!!

    Lumineon used Sweet Kiss.
    Metagross became confused!
    Metagross is confused!
    It hurt itself in its confusion!
    Metagross lost 12% of its health.
    The rain continues to fall.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Lumineon used Waterfall.
    Metagross lost 27% of its health.
    Metagross is confused!
    It hurt itself in its confusion!
    Metagross lost 13% of its health.
    The rain continues to fall.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Lumineon used Waterfall.
    Metagross lost 26% of its health.
    Metagross flinched!
    The rain stopped.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    Lumineon used Waterfall.
    Metagross lost 17% of its health.
    Metagross is confused!
    Metagross used Earthquake.
    Nightmarish Creature lost 41% of its health.
    seds's Lumineon Creature fainted.
    Metagross's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Metagross restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    Aw. The nightmare is over.
    Score: 6-4 for him.

    seds switched in Creature from the depths of ... a cave! (lvl 100 Mothim ?).;414;
    Pointed stones dug into Mothim.
    Mothim lost 50% of its health.
    seds: uh oh
    Mothim used Bug Buzz.
    Metagross lost 11% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Metagross fainted.
    ---

    Outsped and KOd.
    Score: 5-4 for him.

    -Blacky- switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).;121;
    Mothim used Endure.
    Mothim braced itself!
    Starmie used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Mothim lost 50% of its health.
    Mothim endured the hit!
    Mothim's Salac Berry raised its speed!
    ---
    seds: watch this...
    seds: watch.....

    Creature from the depths of ... a cave! used Bug Buzz.
    It's super effective!
    Starmie lost 100% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Starmie fainted.

    Oh, thank goodness it's not timid.
    Score: 4-4

    ---
    -Blacky- switched in Garchomp (lvl 100 Garchomp ?).;445;
    Mothim used Bug Buzz.
    Garchomp lost 63% of its health.
    Garchomp used Aerial Ace.
    It's super effective!
    Mothim lost 0% of its health.
    seds's Mothim fainted.


    Using the swarm boost, Mothim bug buzzes the key threat. Unfortunatley, although shaken, garchomp remains.
    Score:4-3 for him.

    ---
    seds: shoulda had HP ice
    seds switched in Carnivine (lvl 100 Carnivine ?).;455;
    Pointed stones dug into Carnivine.
    Carnivine lost 12% of its health.
    -Blacky-: freak^^
    seds: uh oh
    seds: it's chomp!
    seds: I'm weak to ground!!!


    Garchomp used Aerial Ace.
    It's super effective!
    Carnivine lost 49% of its health.
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    Garchomp lost 37% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Garchomp fainted.
    Carnivine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Carnivine restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    LOL wut? Garchomp was killed by NU? What is this jutsu!
    Wow, aerial ace. That only does as much as dragon claw would.

    Score: 3-3


    -Blacky- switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?). ;392;
    seds switched in Creature from the depths of the sea (lvl 100 Huntail ?).;367;
    Pointed stones dug into Huntail.
    Huntail lost 12% of its health.
    Infernape is fast asleep!
    ---
    seds: uh oh


    -Blacky- switched in Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?).;286;
    Huntail used Aqua Tail.
    It's not very effective...
    Breloom lost 35% of its health.
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---
    seds: nothing can take this hit!
    Breloom used Seed Bomb.
    It's super effective!
    Huntail lost 88% of its health.
    seds's Huntail fainted.
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---

    Aw. That's too bad...
    Score is 3-2 for him

    seds switched in Nightmarish Creature (lvl 100 Carnivine ?).;455;
    Pointed stones dug into Carnivine.
    Carnivine lost 12% of its health.
    seds: gg....
    -Blacky- switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).;392;
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    Infernape lost 46% of its health.
    Infernape's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Infernape restored 6% of its health.
    Carnivne's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Carnivine restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    Wow, that did alot more than expected.

    Infernape is fast asleep!
    Carnivine used Swords Dance.
    Carnivine's attack was sharply raised.
    Infernape's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Infernape restored 6% of its health.
    Nightmarish Creature's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Nightmarish Creature restored 6% of its health.
    ---

    seds: I'm greedy.
    seds: like a garchomp! LOLOL

    Infernape is fast asleep!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    A critical hit!
    Infernape lost 67% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Infernape fainted.
    Carnivine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Carnivine restored 6% of its health.
    ---
    -Blacky- switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).;242;
    Carnivnine used Synthesis.
    Carnivine restored 50% of its health.
    Blissey used Counter.
    But it failed!
    Carnivine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Carnivine restored 5% of its health.
    ---

    Oh what's this? He thinks he can survive power whip. Good thing I didn't fall for that with whiscash. I figured I'd better swords dance again so I can ensure a OHKO.

    Blissey used Thunder Wave.
    Carnivine is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
    Carnivine used Swords Dance.
    Carnivine's attack was sharply raised.
    ---

    Uh oh, paralyzed!

    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    Blissey lost 100% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Blissey fainted.
    ---

    He tried to counter. But it OHKOd!

    -Blacky- switched in Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?).

    seds: LOLOL

    Breloom used Substitute.
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom made a substitute!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Breloom!
    Breloom's substitute faded!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---
    Breloom used Substitute.
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom made a substitute!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Breloom!
    Breloom's substitute faded!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---

    Uh oh, If I'm fully paralyzed, he will win.

    Breloom used Substitute.
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom made a substitute!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Breloom!
    Breloom's substitute faded!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---
    Breloom used Substitute.
    Breloom lost 25% of its health.
    Breloom made a substitute!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Breloom!
    Breloom's substitute faded!
    Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
    Breloom restored 13% of its health.
    ---
    seds: gg man
    Breloom used Substitute.
    But it failed!
    Carnivine used Power Whip.
    It's not very effective...
    Breloom lost 18% of its health.
    -Blacky-'s Breloom fainted.
    seds wins!
    -Blacky- has left the room.
    seds: NU pwns.



    Wow. Wasn't that something?;443;;444;;445;

    Props:
    -Mothim, for killing metagross, starmie, and weakening garchomp
    -My opponent! for being a good battler!
    -Carnivine! For... miraculously winning the game! Killing Garchomp, Infernape, Breloom, and blissey!

    Slops:
    Whiscash sleeping through the action.
    -Blackey- for not saying GG!

    Comments? Questions?

    I have another warstory with this team, but the opponent wasn't as good. Whiscash destroyed the whole team.
  2. Blu

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    I loved the NU/BL/UU pwnage!

    keep it up xD
  3. Karrot

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    If he hadn't paralyzed Carnivine, he could have had Breloom Spore it to win the game. =\
  4. seds

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    Thank you, blu.

    Oh, about that spore thing, he probably thought blissey could beat carnivine. It's the best wall in the game, after all, right folks?
  5. Rhykune

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    Nice Battle, but I didn't really like the nicknames and the

    seds: Uh Oh
    seds: Clever Switch!

    It would have done better without those... And keep up the NU!
  6. Blu

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    he underestimated a +4 power whip

    @karrot: as far as I know, seds' Whiscash is still asleep, so he can't put Carni to sleep anyways

    edit:

    slops:
    I loled
  7. Karrot

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    Oh, right, I forgot about that! (For some reason I had though Wishcash died sometime along the game.)

    Good warstory, then! I still prefer the old-style warstory format, however, such as "Warstory dating back to Jan 19, 2001 in the RBY forum, in which the warstory is more story than comments.
  8. Purple Jesus

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    You're just annoying and not funny with your comments, your opponent was horrible, and it was mostly log.

    That is just MY opinion on the warstory. I dont like the whole idea of your comment "NU Pwns" when you play an opponent like that.

    Edit: ouch at comment below but that is a pretty good question - use one account to be a troll/idiot/whatever on and one to act normally on? too bad that rmt lingered there so long
  9. gorm

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    can i ask why you have an alt account with 600 posts
  10. Thunda

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    well you've got over a million posts maybe he can have a few
  11. Rhykune

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    What? He's an alt??? Of who?

    EDIT: What should I do for my 500????
  12. SMZ

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    lol, I like fun battles like these.
  13. gorm

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    skiddle
  14. seds

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    um... that's my brother, he made his account log in automatically... so, I accidently posted as him once.
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  16. Tytus

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    Probably because you were a douche and said gg before the game was over, and constantly posted annoying comments the whole time. I wouldn't have said gg either.
  17. Janenmori

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    I lol'd. That is why Garchomp is not banned.
  18. Automatic

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    Oh wow. Your Mothim rocks and Carnivine just plain destroyed.
  19. Kira

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    I really hope you are joking. The opponent was bad. I have beaten a team of 6 Arceuses before using UU pokemon, because the opponent was bad compared to me... If you were serious then according to your logic Arceus should not be banned from OU.
  20. SirRaven

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    Good warstory, but you don't put the score near the end and your annoying commentary probably did get on his nerves.

    Try a better battle next time. ^_^
  21. seds

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    :(

    oops?
  22. Semicolon cancer

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    Good game seds, I like that you used NU (though I personally hate mothim) and it could've done with a little editing, but there was nothing that overall ruined the warstory.
  23. Shelcario

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    Nice NU battle, I especially like to see the use of them, it makes the warstories more interesting to see OU teams beaten with NU's.
  24. Boingo

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    Well I liked your UU/NU team beating those OUs but I hated how you kept rooting for yourself. That's just lame and horribly annoying.

    GOOD COMMENT, BOINGO!
  25. tdub13

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    Your opponent was not good, to say the least, and the the warstory could've used more insights as to what you were thinking. The comments were a bit annoying too. However, watching beating OU with NU is satisfying.

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