Need Feedback on poor team :(

#1
Please help, ive tried planning this as a team but I need some feedback from ppl who kno what they are doing.

Iraq Lobster (Buzzwole) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 252 Atk / 40 Def / 216 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Thunder Punch
- Fell Stinger
- Hammer Arm
- Stone Edge
Frenemy (Toxapex) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Def / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Bold Nature
- Wide Guard
- Scald
- Toxic Spikes
- Baneful Bunker
Nailblaze (Talonflame) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Flare Blitz
- Tailwind
- Quick Guard
- Brave Bird
Tidehunter (Dhelmise) @ Leftovers
Ability: Steelworker
EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Def / 76 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Shadow Claw
- Power Whip
- Rapid Spin
- Gyro Ball
Macintosh (Mudsdale) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Stamina
EVs: 100 HP / 224 Atk / 184 SpD
Calm Nature
- Rock Slide
- High Horsepower
- Close Combat
- Heavy Slam
Visolute (Vikavolt) (M) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Levitate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Bug Buzz
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Volt Switch
 
#2
Please help, ive tried planning this as a team but I need some feedback from ppl who kno what they are doing.

Iraq Lobster (Buzzwole) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 252 Atk / 40 Def / 216 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Thunder Punch
- Fell Stinger
- Hammer Arm
- Stone Edge
Frenemy (Toxapex) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Def / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Bold Nature
- Wide Guard
- Scald
- Toxic Spikes
- Baneful Bunker
Nailblaze (Talonflame) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Flare Blitz
- Tailwind
- Quick Guard
- Brave Bird
Tidehunter (Dhelmise) @ Leftovers
Ability: Steelworker
EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Def / 76 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Shadow Claw
- Power Whip
- Rapid Spin
- Gyro Ball
Macintosh (Mudsdale) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Stamina
EVs: 100 HP / 224 Atk / 184 SpD
Calm Nature
- Rock Slide
- High Horsepower
- Close Combat
- Heavy Slam
Visolute (Vikavolt) (M) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Levitate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Bug Buzz
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Volt Switch
Hi, you need to fill out the mandatory team building homework assignment before you can post here.
 
#3
God dammit every time I try and just get some simple feedback tht I desperately need, someone tells me I cant for some ridicoulous reason!

Tell me why I have to waste my time giving myself more random homework on a forum discussion thread, where I just want some feedback!?!?
 
#4
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
 
#5
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
I am very sorry you feel that way, but rules are rules, I don't make them, if you change your mind, we will be glad to help you after you finish the assignment.

And, as far as I know the assignment is designed to prevent people who are not vested in learning, have absolutely no understanding of the format, or can help themselves from posting here.
 
#6
Hey, there's a Pokemon VGC Group on Facebook that may help but there are a lot of members so don't be surprised if your post isn't seen. I am also willing to give feedback with my knowledge (keep in mind that I am a new player as well) on Twitter or any other social media with a PM feature since I don't check Smogon that often.
 
#7
Please work on formatting and descriptions, I have no idea what these EVs are needed and for what


  • This team is almost all offense, absolutely nothing carries Protect except Toxepex
  • Mudsdale's nature is completely wrong, Calm reduces attack in favor of SpD, unless you meant to write Careful and confused the two
  • Dhlemise should not be running Rapid Spin, VGC is too fast paced for hazards to be present in the meta
  • Toxipex is not good in VGC, Tapu Fini completely walls it, it's also a bulky Pokemon so Focus Sash is not a good item for it
  • Your team is composed of very slow Pokemon but no Trick Room, way too slow to use Tailwind too

Overrall no synergy, needs to be scrapped
 
#8
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
NEVER GIVE UP!!!!!