New Set (tested oh and im new :( )

[Somerandomguy4]

<p>A While Back I Got Very High On The OU Ladder With A Set Called Scaft Haxorus. Normaly It Is To Slow And Not Bulky To Set Up A Dragon Dance So I Fixed It With A Choice Scarf. This Things Orginal Role Was To To Revenge Kill Dragons And Breloom Because I Lost To Them A Couple Of Times. It Did Great. It Also Beats Alot Of Non Scarf Dragons That Havent Dragon Danced. Il Show Some Calcs.</p>

252+ Atk Haxorus Superpower vs. 252 HP / 88+ Def Ferrothorn: 212-250 (60.22 - 71.02%) -- guaranteed 2HKO, Good

252+ Atk Haxorus Superpower vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Forretress: 90-106 (25.42 - 29.94%) -- possible 4HKO, Well Forretres Is Bulkyier Than Ferrothorn

252+ Atk Haxorus Superpower vs. 224 HP / 252+ Def Skarmory: 90-106 (27.52 - 32.41%) -- possible 4HKO, Okay thats bad

252+ Atk Haxorus Superpower vs. 224 HP / 32 Def Skarmory: 115-136 (35.16 - 41.59%) -- 83.01% chance to 3HKO, Better But Still Bad

Now For The Dragons

252+ Atk Haxorus Outrage vs. 4 HP / 0 Def Haxorus: 516-608 (175.51 - 206.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO, 1hko

252+ Atk Haxorus Outrage vs. 4 HP / 0- Def Hydreigon: 576-678 (176.68 - 207.97%) -- guaranteed OHKO, 1hko

252+ Atk Haxorus Outrage vs. 252 HP / 0 Def Dragonite: 492-582 (127.46 - 150.77%) -- guaranteed OHKO, 1hko

252+ Atk Haxorus Outrage vs. 4 HP / 0 Def Breloom: 285-336 (108.77 - 128.24%) -- guaranteed OHKO, The Reason I Found It

Set Name: Scarf
- Outrage/Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Brick Break / Superpower
- Aqua Tail
Item: Choice Scarf
Ability: Mold Breaker
Nature: Adamant
Evs: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 4 Hp

Well Lets Say It Cant Kill To Much Stuff But It Kills What I Used It For. Dragon Claw Is Less Power But Dosent Trap You. EQ Is For Heatran And Other Ground Weaks. Superpower Is Stronger But Lowers Your Stats That Might Be Bad, Only Use Brick break If You Dont Want A Stat Lower.
Normal Superpower 120 Base Power
-1 Superpower 60 Base Power
Normal Brick Breat 75 Base Power.
Aqua Tail I Forgot What It Covers But Its On The Set.
I Hope You Liked it

 

[tehy]

You might want to use good English, not capitalize randomly, and maybe follow the QC standards

edit: OH yeah and


Choice Scarf was once a staple on Haxorus, but has been made largely unnecessary with the introduction of Kyurem-B

Right from the Haxorus analysis, although JRP ninja'd me.

 

[jrp]

choice scarf haxorus was rendered obsolete by kyurem-b

and all of your calcs for outrage were against pokemon that are weak to it or breloom which is extremely frail.

this is also in the wrong format, and Superpower should be slashed over brick break.

Welcome to smogon!

 

[Somerandomguy4]

You might want to use good English, not capitalize randomly, and maybe follow the QC standards

Hey I Caps After Each Word Please And Im Kinda New After Moving Back To My Home Town Of Manchester

 

[PK Gaming]

Not only is this analysis of poor quality, both grammatically and just generally, but QC already decided against giving Haxorus a Choice Scarf set.

For future reference, try to follow the proper analysis format next time.