OU Warstory - Appliances and dragons

[Blue_Tornado]

Lol, I had an excellent battle vs Stall a few days ago and I didn't warstory it because it was "not that close of a battle", This battle, however, was much more one-sided than mine score-wise. It isn't such a bad thing though.

For a first post & warstory, this was decent. 4/5 for a battle, but your comments need a bit more work in my opinion. Try reading some archived warstories to improve your commentary, as your insights are good nontheless.

Good job, and welcome aboard!

 

[haunter]

Welcome to Smogon. As others have said, excellent first post. Oh, and on a side note, I'd like to point out that your team is very weak to SD Lucario. This thread well deserves 4*.

 

[Blood Tears]

i always stopped it revenge killing it with my vacuum wave infernape but you're right i suppose

 

[mtr]

Well, then it's not exactly weak to SDLuke, it just doesn't have a hard counter for it like Gengar.

 

[-Terywj-]

Welcome to Smogon! I enjoyed your read. ^_^

-Terywj

 

[Folgorio]

This was pretty cool, i liked it. I also lol'd at the homer picture when you exploded on rotom.

 

[iKitsune]

An excellent attempt at a warstory and i look forward to more of the same.

In future, if i were you, I would refrain from using words such as "omg" and "lol".

Also seconding Life Orb Flygon needs a lot more usage.

Finally if you do want to make your team less weak to Lucario a simple Classic Mixmence over Flygon should work perfectly. See the Salamence analysis for specifics.

 

[darkseeker4]

Me for being a girl and playing pokemon!

nice to see that.
nice warstory.badass hippo picture.I like :)

 

[Blood Tears]

Thanks for the suggestion, but i like too much flygon and I'm pretty sure that using sala I'll say "STAB Earthquake and Stealth Rock resistance, I miss you" :P I'm going to try it anyway. Oh, and I'm writing another warstory, if this could matter to you (isn't there a limit, right?!)

 

[RegalStar]

Thanks for the suggestion, but i like too much flygon and I'm pretty sure that using sala I'll say "STAB Earthquake and Stealth Rock resistance, I miss you" :P I'm going to try it anyway. Oh, and I'm writing another warstory, if this could matter to you (isn't there a limit, right?!)

I'm pretty sure that there aren't any limits (and the correct grammar is "there isn't a limit..." BTW).

 

[Blue_Tornado]

Well, if you'll post more, it'll be a turn for the better as the site isn't seeing many warstories lately.

 

[The SPrinkLer]

Nice read.

 

[THE ENEMY]

lol. dont explode with ghosts around....

 

[XomOfChaos]

Heatran used Flamethrower.
Hippowdon lost 12% of its health.
fubu's Hippowdon fainted.
Opponent switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
Pointed stones dug into Starmie.
Starmie lost 12% of its health.

I think you let your opponent's name slip.