Project II: Truncated Paragraphs + Analyses Format Update

#54
Uhh, I was going to do my Mamo concise-ness thread, when I saw that now we're "expected" to incorporate new information. Considering this was my only shot at contributing and now I have no clue what to do (I read it like 4 times and none of it got through to me) I have NO idea how to do this
I'm in a really similar situation; I was about to offer to help shorten and clean up some of the analyses (English is one of my better subjects), but when I read we needed to actually add information I realized that I was utterly helpless. I've been lurking around the site for a while now and recently decided I want to get more involved, so is there any way I could help with this project?