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quadtriple-stabed overheat+Heatran=??? *UBER WARSTORY* TheMantyke Vs Sandman

Discussion in 'Stark Mountain' started by TheMantyke, Nov 19, 2007.

  1. TheMantyke

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    High everybody! this is a warstory between Sandman and I in the uber metagame. We tried to make the story a little original by adding both of our comintaries, Mine in blue and his in red. Enjoy the match, and forgive any typos.

    Rules
    -ubers of are obviously not banned
    -DTOHKO clause is on


    Sandmans team
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    My team

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    Sandman sent out Deoxys A!
    TheMantyke sent out Heatran.

    Ok, deoxys is sashed so lets Super Power

    ...damnit, I thought for sure this was a damn countercoat and sash deoxys, I think I'll switch to forry, maybe ha can stop him...

    TheMantyke withdrew Heatran
    TheMantyke sent out Forretress(CanNball:))!
    Deoxys A used Super Power!
    (10%)
    Forretress’s Leftovers restored a little HP

    I’m not gonna let you ruin my sash

    ...can you hear that? that's the sound of forre possibly 2KOing Deoxys with rapid spin (lol)

    Deoxys A used Thunder!
    (96%)
    Forretress fainted
    TheMantyke sent out Groundon (Rock Titan)!

    Wow, I though Forretress would survive because my deoxys’s SA is garbage, now that Groudon is out my Choice Scarf sense is tingling better leave sense I don’t want to risk groudon surviving.

    I CAN'T HERE IT ANYMORE!!! ...Damn... I thought forry might of been able to tske a hit, even from a focus sash deoxys...

    Sandman withdrew Deoxys A!
    Sandman switched in Giratina(Mr.Tall)!
    Groudon used Swords Dance!
    Groudon’s attack sharply rose!

    Oh well

    Oh yeah

    Giratina used Wilo-o Wisp

    Ok I feel like an idiot because before the action sequence begins, I remember he has a heatran and the weather is Sunny.

    Mwhaha... I love it when gira comes out to wisp my groudon! :)

    TheMantyke withdrew Groudon!
    TheMantyke sent out Heatran!
    Giratina used Wilo-O-Wisp!
    Heatran’s Flash Fire Activated!

    AHHHHH, run away, run away

    Holy hell yes! Sandman mispredicted :D

    Sandman withdrew Giratina
    Sandman switched in Blissey
    Heatran used Overheat!
    A Critical Hit!
    Flash Fire + Sunny Weather + Critical Hit + Stab + 140 Base Power =
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    Wow, Heatran really hated Bliss, time for revenge!

    :O
    This has actually happened before in another battle I had with another smogoner... I <3 my heatran

    Sandman sent out Mewtwo!
    Mewtwo used Calm Mind
    Mewtwo’s sp attack and sp def rose!
    Heatran used OverHeat!
    (80%)
    Mewtwo Leftovers restored a little HP

    Wow, I even CMed and it almost killed me, man I really wish I had brought kygore

    DAMN! hetran is really overkilling the overheats... Mewtwo obviously outruns me though and my heatran hates aura sphere. Time to switch to my nappy headed hoe

    TheMantyke withdrew Heatran!
    The Mantyke sent out Ho-oh!
    Mewtwo used Aura Sphere!
    (10%)


    Figures he would do that.

    I guess he might of seen that and maybe use a super effective attack, but the only one i'd imagein he'd have would be thunder, and it's sunny.

    Sandman withdrew Mewtwo!
    Sandman sent out Giratina(Mr.Tall)!
    Ho-oh used Sacred Fire
    (20%)
    Life Orb damage
    Giratina was Burned
    Giratina leftovers restored a little HP
    Giratina is hurt by burn

    TheMantyke withdrew Ho-oh!
    TheMantyke sent out Heatran!
    Giratina used Rest!
    Giratina went to sleep!

    I’m not falling for this.

    I'm hoping he falls for this.

    Sandman withdrew Giratina
    Sandman sent out Forretress
    Heatran used Dark Pulse
    (10%)
    Forretress leftovers restored a little HP

    Time to spike

    Great, I used darkpulse and the shivered up single testicle comes out. Oh well, Groudon time.

    TheMantyke withdrew Heatran!
    TheManytke sent out Groudon(Rock Titan)!
    Forretress used Toxic Spikes
    Toxic spikes surround TheMantyke’s team!

    Well it used Swords Dance, maybe he doesn’t have room for…

    I used swords dance, maybe he won't realise that mine packs...

    Groudon used Fire Punch!
    Forretress fainted

    Oh well, lets start ripping!

    Yay! I knew going through the battle frounteir would pay off eventually! ...But of coarse comes everyones favorite chunk of hydro-mutated DNA.

    Sandman sent out Deoxys A
    TheMantyke withdrew Groudon!
    The mantyke sent out Luiga (BigAssSwan)
    Deoxys A used icebeam
    (50%)
    Lugia’s leftovers restored a little HP

    Part of me wants to switch to arecus, the other part is afraid of reflect then heatran switch in.

    Arghh.. I've got to get a metagross on my team, deoxys rapes me

    Deoxys A used Ice Beam!
    (47%)
    Lugia used Ice Beam
    (98)%
    Lugia’s Leftovers restored a little HP

    Bye lugia, even your no match for the unstoppable Deoxys A

    Had to activate the focussash one way or another! Oh well, he's death fodder now.

    Deoxys A used Ice Beam
    (15%)
    Lugia fainted
    Themantyke sent out Ho-oh!

    Ho-oh will defiantly survive Ice Beam and I don’t want to take a chance with Thunder missing

    ..maybe he thinks his deoxys should die for no apperent reason now... (FAT CHANCE)

    Sandman withdrew Deoxys A
    Sandman sent out Giratina
    Ho-oh used Shadow Ball!
    (25%)
    Life Orb damge
    Giratina’s HP restored a little HP

    That was unexpected but didn’t do a lot, maybe he will switch to heatran

    Ho-oh's movepoool is terriblle, this is a mixed hoe. I couldn't think of anything else to put in the fourth slot

    Sandman withdrew Giratina
    Sandman switched in Mewtwo
    Ho-oh used Shadow Ball
    Mewtwo Fainted
    Life Orb Damage
    Sandman switched in Arceus(Ghost)


    Well I don’t have time to swords dance and heatran has a Scarf so it can revenge kill me even after I Dance while taking a life orb shadow ball from ho-oh.

    CRAP! I love the fact that mewtwo is down, but I hate these kinds of arceus..es. ...maybe he can survive one attack?

    Arceus used Shadow Claw
    (54%)
    Ho-oh fainted
    TheMantyke switched in Heatran

    Aww man, I have nothing that can survive a Dark Pulse from him

    you satisfied me like a good hoe, come back now as I send out my choice scarfed turd in a toilet to kill him (maybe?)

    Heatran used OverHeat
    (97%)

    Wow I survived and I can’t believe he didn’t use DP, if I can just Ko Heatran with Brick Break

    I love these overheats! Sand might of pridicted dark pulse, but overheat is under doubl stab now, so I went for it

    Arceus used Brick Break
    (60%)

    Come on Arceus, oh well asta laviesta Bebe

    You will survive! You will survie!

    Heatran used OverHeat!
    Arceus fainted
    Sandman switched in Deoxys A

    Well this is it, I have a 2% HP Deoxys A and a sleeping Caterpillar thing left, his last three pokemon are Heatran, Groudon and a mystery guy, I hope I can clean the rest of his team.

    I hate deoxys.
    Note to self: get a metagross

    Deoxys used Super Power!
    (40%)
    Heatran Fainted!
    The Mantyke switched in Groudon(Rock Titan)!

    One down

    oh shit..

    Sandman withdrew Deoxys
    Sandman sent out Giratina(MR. Tall!
    Groudon Used Earthquake
    (40%)
    Life Orb damage

    Uh oh, doesn’t look good For Mr. Tall

    Yay! I don't know why he switched though..

    Groudon used Earthquake
    (40%)
    Life Orb Damage
    Giratina is asleep
    Giratina used Sleeptalk!
    Giratina used Dragon Claw!
    (30%)
    Giratina’s Leftovers restored a little HP

    RIP

    KILL THE DAMN CATERPILLAR

    Groudon used Earthquake
    (40%)
    Life Orb Damage
    Giratina Feinted
    Sandman sent out Deoxys

    Ok now I now it can’t survive

    Oh boy, I might be royally screwed here..

    Deoxys used Ice Beam!
    Groudon Feinted
    TheMantyke sent out Blissey
    Deoxys(2%)
    Blissey(100%

    FUCK, Blissey has a chance to survive a Super Power from my 18 iv AT doexys, as it launches its attack I can here the final Countdown music in the background, a sudden death between the two most criticized pokemon.

    Okay blissey, time for an insperational speech.

    Blissey, Reseved you in july while cloning for someone. I stupidly gave you a horrible EV spread of 252/HP 152/Def 100/Spdef and didn't bother to fix it... this is your proud shining moment.. Survive the superpower, use Ice beam, and send deoxys back into the deepness of space, never to return...

    Deoxys used Super Power
    (100%)
    Themantyke’s Blissey fainted.
    Sandman wins!

    Yes that was so intense I was so sweaty until I saw that beautiful ko deoxys pulled off and gave a gg to the Mantyke

    Wow! I don't even care I lost! that was THE closest match I've had in any tier. Seriously, You PLAY pokemon for moments like this...

    Props
    -Doexys for being the most broken pokemon ever
    -Forretress for switching into Heatran
    -Giratina for being awesome
    -Arceus for weakening Heatran
    -Me for winning a Wobbufet as a prize for winning

    Slops
    -Blissey for Getting blown into shit
    -Mewtwo for not doing anything
    -Me for using WoW on Heatran
    -Me for not bringing Kyogre

    Props
    -Giving a fine example of how useful heatran is in ubers
    -Groudon for supriseing forry with fire punch
    -I didn't use jibas groudon! this is my own jolly one!

    Slops
    -Forry and lugia didn't do shit!
    -when he switched in forry I should of used dark pulse
  2. Mood4food77

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    i've had one closer battle

    my glaceon survived with 1 HP left and one...haha

    but still, and intense battle i must say

    congrats to Sandman for winning a very close battle

    and blissey's a whore...that's why it died
  3. Chou Toshio

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    BEAUTIFUL!!! Simply beautiful!! Loved it!! You guys were great, and it was just . . . great. That's all I can say.

    Especially loved this:

    LOL

    And loved moments like these:


    Oh, and I'm sure everyone else was crying like me when they saw this:
    [​IMG]

    Beautiful . . . simply beautiful . . . die blissey. T-T Kandoshimashita . . . (I'm touched . . .)

    Heatran = <3

    And so does this warstory!! Bravo!! And Bravo for writing the first WIFI warstory in . . . damn, who knows when!!
  4. Bam

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    This is a great battle, although some of the commentary is a bit dry. I guess it's hard to pull off though when you have to sync each part together with the others.

    I already <3 Heatran as well, even though I haven't even finished EVing my new one. I also posted in your thread about a trade a while ago (at Mantyke).
  5. Anti

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    Great battle! Wifi I assume?
  6. Lawman

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    That was the best ubers warstory I have ever read, lol, great match. No, wonderful match. That was such an amazing battle, wow O_o
  7. Age of Kings

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    *applauds loudly*

    :'D
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    Basically everything ChouToshio said.
  9. Slice n Dice

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    i rofled at [​IMG]

    easily my favorite warstory on this site, phenomenal job, Mantyke.
  10. Marix

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    i thought ubers were banned?
  11. chimpact

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    It was really hard to read, and I couldn't tell which one of you was which. But whatever. Both times you used Overheat in the sun, you got a lucky crit(this time and the one in the youtube video).
  12. Slice n Dice

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    hahahahaha. thats why he made a warstory with them :p
    "ubers" is a tier.
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    Time to switch to my nappy headed hoe


    lulz
  14. sarunibi

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    Great battle! Especially the fact that it's Wifi!

    I've got to train my pokes and get some battles in...
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    Great warstory.

    I loled. What ubers is all about
  16. TaiwaneseDude

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    Haha, great warstory. Loved having both comentaries there. Great job, and it was a very close match.

    Guess you gotta re-EV the Blissey, eh, Mantyke? ;) XD
  17. Stallion

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    Great warstory. Loved the pic after Sandman's Bliss died. Makes me wish I was actually good at ubers :)
  18. kamikaen

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    *applause*

    That was awesome. I actually feel like I know a bit about ubers, now. :P And seeing my Heatran in battle (available through the link in my sig </shameless plug>) makes me cry tears of happy joy. =3 Awesome battle. I especially liked the colour coded commentary, though names would've been nice.
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    brb gotta get new underwear
  20. Anti

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    What video?
  21. Chou Toshio

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    Any Warstory where not 1 but 2 blisseys get 1hko'd (Especially by a special attack xD) = gold

    :P
  22. kamikaen

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    Check my thread in the Heatran section. =D
  23. xcfrisco

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    great warstory, the dual commentary was fantastic.
  24. Sunday

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    That was awesome lol. Makes me want to learn Ubers...
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    Yes it was on wifi. Thx for all the comments, yeah i really felt confident about the completed warstory, reading it I couldn't stop laughing at some of the dialougue.

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