(Quality Control) Hitmonlee (QC 0/3)

[John the Aussie]

hey guys this is my first analisys ill try and do my best please tell me if i get anything wrong or what not.---Hitmonlee[Overview] For many a generation Hitmonlee has wallowed in the depths of NU, but no more! As with the introduction of a new ability from the dream world in Unburden Hitmolee becomes a competent physical sweeper. With access to one of the most powerful offensive typing’s in the game being fighting and a whopping 450 base power move (after accounting for stab and liechi berry) that comes with hitmonlees good and now doubled speed there becomes few Pokémon of whom Hitmonlee cannot sweep with ease, to put that into perspective for you Hitmonlee is now capable of OHKO a Forretress with a helping nature. Which is amazing and considering that there are few walls that are not steel or rock types out there Hitmonlees typing becomes ever more usefull.
[SET]name: Reversalmove 1: Reversalmove 2: Enduremove 3: High-Jump-Kickmove 4: Bulk Up/Fake out/Covetitem: Liechi Berrynature: AdamantEVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def[SET COMMENTS]With access to an amazing ability in the form of unburden mixed with the chance access of both reversal and endure Hitmonlee becomes completely capable of sweeping entire teams with the right entry hazard support. After the first move in which situational Hitmonlee will either use bulk up or endure before unleashing hell in the form of 1 or two attack stat boosts on a STAB 200 base power move and you generally have to worry about opponents with priority as with 1hp this will leave hitmonlee at a large disadvantage
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]The EV spread is done in a way so as to give maximum Attack while hopefully allowing it to survive a single attack and pull off with an extra Bulk up or Hi-Jump-Kick to help even out the odds a bit or if you don’t like your chances of getting. This moveset is determined only through the speed of Reversal and Endure as well as the scraps that are left over on Hitmonlees movepool.
[Other Options]Sadly there aren’t many as Hitmonlee has a pitiful movepool that comprises of near only fighting type moves that allow for very little coverage however risky as it may be it is still possible to run a Reckless set that abuses Hi-Jump-Kick to the maximum but this is both dangerous due to the prevalence of protect, the moves low accuracy and the fact that it is severely outclassed bye other Pokémon Notibly Meinshao
[Checks and Counters]Hitmonlees Biggest shortcoming is in the form of status affects and bulky setup Pokémon most notably curse users such Curse ferrorthorn under the right circumstances. Sadly Hitmonlee suffers from a small -even if good- movepool which has few moves that allow for coverage outside of fighting moves, this will in many situations bring about his defeat .such Pokémon as Cresselia who will generally switch in and out resisting his moves, before using Hitmonlees Momentum against him and setting up dual screens however generally ,this is uncommon as cresselia comes from NU and that is unlikely to change anytime soon.

 

[Shame That]

cresselia is not NU

 

[jrp]

amcheck


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I did my best to correct the grammar but this is my first amcheck so i hope i did a good job

 

[aurora]

your paragraph structure's much better now, but there's still room for improvement

 

[Woodchuck]

Hhitmonlee[Overview] Ffor many a generation Hhitmonlee has wallowed in the depths of NU, nubut no more! As aswith the introduction of a new ability from the dream world in Uunburden Hhitmolee becomes a competent physical sweeper. Wwith access to one of the most powerful offensive typing’s in the game being fighting and a whopping 450 base power move (after accounting for stab and liechi berry) that comes with hitmonlees good and now doubled speed there becomes few Ppokémon of whom Hhitmonlee cannot sweep with ease, to put that into perspective for you Hhitmonlee is now capable of OHKO a FOhkOaforretress with a helping nature. Wwhich is amazing and considering that there are few walls that are not steel or rock types out there Hhitmonlees typing becomes ever more usefull.
[SETset]name: Rreversalmove 1: Rreversalmove 2: Eenduremove 3: Hhigh-Jjump-Kkickmove 4: Bbulk Up/Fup/fake out/Ccovetitem: Lliechi Bberrynature: AadamantEVevs: 252 HP / hp/252 Atk / 4 Datk/4def[SET COMMENTS]WsetcOmments]with access to an amazing ability in the form of unburden mixed with the chance access of both reversal and endure Hhitmonlee becomes completely capable of sweeping entire teams with the right entry hazard support. Aafter the first move in which situational Hhitmonlee will either use bulk up or endure before unleashing hell in the form of 1 or two attack stat boosts on a STAB astAb200 base power move and you generally have to worry about opponents with priority as with 1hp this will leave hitmonlee at a large disadvantage
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]The EV dditiOnAlcOmments]theevspread is done in a way so as to give maximum Aattack while hopefully allowing it to survive a single attack and pull off with an extra Bbulk up or Hi-Jhi-jump-Kkick to help even out the odds a bit or if you don’t like your chances of getting. Tthis moveset is determined only through the speed of Rreversal and Eendure as well as the scraps that are left over on Hhitmonlees movepool.
[Other Options]Ssadly there aren’t many as Hhitmonlee has a pitiful movepool that comprises of near only fighting type moves that allow for very little coverage however risky as it may be it is still possible to run a Rareckless set that abuses Hi-Jhi-jump-Kkick to the maximum but this is both dangerous due to the prevalence of protect, the moves low accuracy and the fact that it is severely outclassed bye other Ppokémon Nnotibly Mmeinshao
[Cchecks and Ccounters]Hhitmonlees Bbiggest shortcoming is in the form of status affects and bulky setup Ppokémon most notably curse users such Ccurse ferrorthorn under the right circumstances. Ssadly Hhitmonlee suffers from a small -even if good- movepool which has few moves that allow for coverage outside of fighting moves, this will in many situations bring about his defeat .such Ppokémon as Ccresselia who will generally switch in and out resisting his moves, before using Hhitmonlees Mmomentum against him and setting up dual screens however generally ,this is uncommon as cresselia comes from NU nuand that is unlikely to change anytime soon.


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hitmonlee[Overview]formanyagenerationhitmonleehaswallowedinthedepthsofnubutnomoreaswiththeintroductionofanewabilityfromthedreamworldinunburdenhitmoleebecomesacompetentphysicalsweeperwithaccesstooneofthemostpowerfuloffensivetyping’sinthegamebeingfightingandawhopping450basepowermove(afteraccountingforstabandliechiberry)thatcomeswithhitmonleesgoodandnowdoubledspeedtherebecomesfewpokémonofwhomhitmonleecannotsweepwitheasetoputthatintoperspectiveforyouhitmonleeisnowcapableofOhkOaforretresswithahelpingnaturewhichisamazingandconsideringthattherearefewwallsthatarenotsteelorrocktypesouttherehitmonleestypingbecomesevermoreusefull
[set]name:reversalmove1:reversalmove2:enduremove3:high-jump-kickmove4:bulkup/fakeout/covetitem:liechiberrynature:adamantevs:252hp/252atk/4def[setcOmments]withaccesstoanamazingabilityintheformofunburdenmixedwiththechanceaccessofbothreversalandendurehitmonleebecomescompletelycapableofsweepingentireteamswiththerightentryhazardsupportafterthefirstmoveinwhichsituationalhitmonleewilleitherusebulkuporendurebeforeunleashinghellintheformof1ortwoattackstatboostsonastAb200basepowermoveandyougenerallyhavetoworryaboutopponentswithpriorityaswith1hpthiswillleavehitmonleeatalargedisadvantage
[AdditiOnAlcOmments]theevspreadisdoneinawaysoastogivemaximumattackwhilehopefullyallowingittosurviveasingleattackandpulloffwithanextrabulkuporhi-jump-kicktohelpevenouttheoddsabitorifyoudon’tlikeyourchancesofgettingthismovesetisdeterminedonlythroughthespeedofreversalandendureaswellasthescrapsthatareleftoveronhitmonleesmovepool
[OtherOptions]sadlytherearen’tmanyashitmonleehasapitifulmovepoolthatcomprisesofnearonlyfightingtypemovesthatallowforverylittlecoveragehoweverriskyasitmaybeitisstillpossibletorunarecklesssetthatabuseshi-jump-kicktothemaximumbutthisisbothdangerousduetotheprevalenceofprotectthemoveslowaccuracyandthefactthatitisseverelyoutclassedbyeotherpokémonnotiblymeinshao
[checksandcounters]hitmonleesbiggestshortcomingisintheformofstatusaffectsandbulkysetuppokémonmostnotablycurseuserssuchcurseferrorthornundertherightcircumstancessadlyhitmonleesuffersfromasmall-evenifgood-movepoolwhichhasfewmovesthatallowforcoverageoutsideoffightingmovesthiswillinmanysituationsbringabouthisdefeatsuchpokémonascresseliawhowillgenerallyswitchinandoutresistinghismovesbeforeusinghitmonleesmomentumagainsthimandsettingupdualscreenshowevergenerallythisisuncommonascresseliacomesfromnuandthatisunlikelytochangeanytimesoon

i fixed many of the holes in your prose; otherwise, good job.
[gp]1/2[/gp]

 

[dice]

[qc]1/3[/qc]

nice work man

 

[jrp]

i've reamchecked and i think it can be stamped :)

Hitmonlee[Overview] For nuff a generation Hitmonlee has wallowed up in tha depthz of NU yo, but no mo' biaaatch! As wit tha introduction of a freshly smoked up mobilitizzle from tha trip ghetto up in Unburden Hitmolee becomes a cold-ass lil competent physical sweeper n' shit. With access ta one of da most thugged-out bangin bitch ass typing’s up in tha game bein fightin n' a whoppin 450 base juice move (after accountin fo' stab n' liechi berry) dat comes wit hitmonlees phat n' now doubled speed there becomes few Pokemon of whom Hitmonlee cannot sweep wit ease, ta put dat tha fuck into perspectizzle fo' you Hitmonlee is now capable of OHKO a Forretress wit a helpin nature. Which is dunkadelic n' thankin bout dat there be few walls dat is not steel or rock types up there Hitmonlees typin becomes eva mo' usefull.
[SET]name: Reversalmove 1: Reversalmove 2: Enduremove 3: High-Jump-Kickmove 4: Bulk Up/Fake out/Covetitem: Liechi Berrynature: AdamantEVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def[SET COMMENTS]With access ta a dunkadelic mobilitizzle up in tha form of unburden mixed wit tha chizzle access of both reversal n' endure Hitmonlee becomes straight-up capable of sweepin entire crews wit tha right entry hazard support fo' realz. After tha straight-up original gangsta move up in which thangal Hitmonlee will either use bulk up or endure before unleashin hell up in tha form of 1 or two battle stat boosts on a STAB 200 base juice move n' you generally gotta worry bout opponents wit prioritizzle as wit 1hp dis will leave hitmonlee at a big-ass disadvantage
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]Da EV spread is done up in a way so as ta give maximum Attack while hopefully allowin it ta survive a single battle n' pull off wit a extra Bulk up or Hi-Jump-Kick ta help even up tha oddz a lil' bit or if you don’t like yo' chancez of getting. This moveset is determined only all up in tha speed of Reversal n' Endure as well as tha scraps dat is left over on Hitmonlees movepool.
[Other Options]Sadly there aren’t nuff as Hitmonlee has a pitiful movepool dat comprisez of near only fightin type moves dat allow fo' straight-up lil coverage however risky as it may be it is still possible ta run a Reckless set dat abuses Hi-Jump-Kick ta tha maximum but dis is both fucked up cuz of tha prevalence of protect, tha moves low accuracy n' tha fact dat it is severely outclassed bye other Pokemon Notibly Meinshao
[Checks n' Counters]Hitmonlees Biggest shortcomin is up in tha form of status affects n' bulky setup Pokemon most notably curse playas such Curse ferrorthorn under tha right circumstances. Right back up in yo muthafuckin ass. Sadly Hitmonlee suffers from a lil' small-ass -even if good- movepool which has few moves dat allow fo' coverage outside of fightin moves, dis will up in nuff thangs brang bout his fuckin lil' defeat .such Pokemon as Cresselia whoz ass will generally switch up in n' up resistin his crazy-ass moves, before rockin Hitmonlees Momentum against his ass n' settin up dual screens however generally ,this is uncommon as cresselia be reppin NU n' dat is unlikely ta chizzle anytime soon.

 

[AccidentalGreed]

Stop trying to be funny. Because you guys aren't, no offense intended.