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OU Rate my team for platinum.

Discussion in 'Past Gen Teams' started by kingrafikii, Jul 24, 2012.

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  1. kingrafikii

    kingrafikii

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    THis team is strictly paper, havent tested yet. Also this is my first team to compose. I'm just trying to get some advice on any changes that i should probably make, yada, yada, yada.

    Pokemon: Scizor
    Item: Life Orb / Leftovers
    Trait: Technician
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
    Nature: Adamant
    Moves:
    -Sword Dance
    -Bullet Punch
    -Brick Break
    -Bug Bite

    Pokemon: Kingdra
    Item: Life Orb
    Trait: Swift Swim
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
    Nature: Modest
    Moves:
    -Rain Dance
    -Surf
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Signal Beam

    Pokemon: Skarmory
    Item: Leftovers / Shed Shell
    Trait: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
    Nature: Impish
    Moves:
    -Spikes
    -Whirlwind
    -Roost
    -Steel Wing

    Pokemon: Blissey
    Item: Leftovers
    Trait: Natural Cure
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
    Nature: Bold
    Moves:
    -Wish
    -Softboiled
    -Siesmic Toss
    -Toxic

    Pokemon: Tentacruel
    Item: Leftovers
    Trait: Liquid Ooze
    EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD
    Nature: Calm
    Moves:
    -Toxic Spikes
    -Rapid Spin
    -Surf
    -Sludge Bomb

    Pokemon: Gliscor
    Item: Leftovers
    Trait: Sand Veil
    EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe
    Nature: Jolly
    Moves:
    -Stealth Rock
    -Earthquake
    -Roost
    -Taunt
  2. Smiles

    Smiles

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    i'd love to rate it but i didn't even bother reading it.
    it has no descriptions or anything, plus you didn't even test it.

    edit: i'll say something. is scizor your lead? you should get a dedicated lead. idk if you've played gen 5, but there's no team preview here so you might as well lead with gliscor since he's already there.
  3. FinalLegendZero

    FinalLegendZero

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    Read the rules. You need to test the team and give detailed descriptions of what each pokemon does for you. Fix it, or this will be locked.
  4. LUST

    LUST
    is a Team Rater Alumnusis a Forum Moderator Alumnusis a Tiering Contributor Alumnusis a Past WCoP Winneris a SPL Winner

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    Locking this thread under Rule 3 of the Forum Guidelines. Please lurk more and check out the RMT Archive to see the kind of detail is required. Feel free to PM me with changes and I will gladly unlock your thread.
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