However, Raticate should really be used Zangoose and Swellow due to its higher Speed over the former and Stealth Rock weakness over the latter; otherwise, your better using the former two instead. that is really awkward sounding, you're missing some words in there. And even when it's corrected, it just doesn't sound right. There are still A LOT of missing words and grammatical issues with this, i'm afraid to send this off to GP still, because the work just kind of seems sloppy in some parts. The information is there, it's just the writing itself isn't particularly clear at times. This probably needs a lot of time to get up to par with the other analyses on site, so if you're up for that, I'm fine with letting you keep this and work on it. Having a GP member work with you would be great! If not, someone else will have to push this through.