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[RMT] I've been using this team for a bit so...

Discussion in 'Create-A-Pokémon Project' started by _Sparkball606_, Apr 14, 2008.

  1. _Sparkball606_

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    Here's a team I took like 10 minutes on. I need some criticism and stuff. Thanks!

    Spiritomb @ Leftovers
    Ability:Pressure
    252 HP / 140 Atk / 116 SpD
    Careful Nature (+SpD, - Atk)
    ~ Sucker Punch
    ~ Taunt
    ~ Pain Split
    ~ Will-O-Wisp

    I'm fine on this one,it's a standard starter.

    Blssey@Leftovers
    Ability: Natural Cure
    Evs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef
    Bold Nature ( +Def, -Atk )
    ~ Ice Beam
    ~ Protect
    ~ Seismic Toss
    ~ Wish

    A wish passer...Nothing needed on this one.

    Scylant@Life Orb
    Ability: Mountaineer
    Evs: 56 Atk / 200 Satk / 252 Spd
    Naive Nature (+Spd, -SpDef)
    ~ Ice Beam
    ~ Bug Buzz
    ~ Brick Break
    ~ Air Slash/Taunt

    For this one, I'm thinking about changing Substitute to Air Slash,because it would've been more useful in LOTS of situation.

    Azelf@Focus Sash
    Ability: Levitate
    Evs: 36 HP / 252 SpA / 220 Spe
    Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    ~ Nasty Plot
    ~ Psychic
    ~ Flamethrower
    ~ Grass Knot

    This won me TONS of battles. Nothing really needed.

    Weezing@Black Sludge
    Ability: Levitate
    Evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
    Bold Nature ( +Def, -Atk )
    ~ Will-O-Wisp
    ~ Thunderbolt
    ~ Haze
    ~ Pain Split

    I don't know about this one... I'm stuck between T-bolt and WoW. T-bolt helps it being NOT useless against Heatran,but I don't have much status going on in this team.

    Revenankh@Leftovers
    Ability: Shed Skin
    Evs: 252 HP / 16 Def / 240 SpD
    Careful Nature (+SpD, - Atk)
    ~ Bulk Up
    ~ Shadow Sneak
    ~ Hammer Arm
    ~ Rest

    I LOVE this thing,even though I can't say the name. This annoys practically EVERYONE,and some people D/C against this,because I made a big sweep against them.

    Anyway,any criticism and nitpicking is welcomed. Thanks! NO SPAMMY HARSH CRITICISM.

    Edit: I'm thinking of switching out a few pokemon for a rapid spinner,and maybe another phys. sweeper.


    I'm really liking Hitmontop. Good SpDef,speed,and attack! It also packs Fake Out...

    Hitmontop@Leftovers
    Evs: 252 HP / 72 Def / 184 Spe
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SpAtk)
    ~ Rapid Spin
    ~ Close Combat
    ~ Toxic
    ~ Stone Edge
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    Please put a title on your RMT thread. [RMT] isn't going to cut it. Change the subject of your OP and I will edit the thread title for you.
  3. Pombo

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    Spiritomb- Ok

    Blissey- Aromatherapy/Heal Bell + Wish = illegal... use protect/softboiled instead of aroma/wish instead... and blissey NEED instant heal

    Scylant- Never played against scycant, but i think Sub + life orb = suicide

    Azelf- Put timid , since u arent using any phys move...

    Weezing- Think About it: Poison is onlt super effective against grass, steel is immune to it and its weak to ground and others.
    Use BOTH WoW and Tbolt, so u can kill Gyarados easily, dont be useless against heatran, and burn chomps. I like him as counter to revenank, with WoW+Haze+Pain Split

    Revenankh- Use Sahdow Neak > shadow punch, since u wil need to kill weakened thing before they can heal. U should put more SpD EVS over defesne , since bulk up cover it. Rest+ShedSkin>>>>>>>>>Moonlight+Airlock
  4. _Sparkball606_

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    @Pombo - About the Renevankh, I prefer pretty equal defenses,so I'll leave it be.

    @DougJustDoug -
    Sorry,I was in a rush..
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    You dont need wish protect and softboild, remove softboiled for one of blisseys other options (aromatherapy, Ice beam, thunderbolt, Thunder wave ect)

    Syclants evs are dumb, i know you just got them from the analysis but they dont make sence 200 evs for attack when you only have 1 phy. attack its not good, my advise is to change BB to Earth Power or Focus Blast, if you want to avoid being walled by bliss use a Tail Glow set.

    Maybe change Expert belt to LO on azalf.

    Move Defence evs to Sp. def on revenankh.
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    You need to keep thunderbolt on weezing or gyarados is running through this team.
  7. Pombo

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    The coverage of Azelf isnt that great, so u should put life, since it wont live much, or focus sash, to kill Weaviles and friends
  8. _Sparkball606_

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    Thanks guys. what about H-top?
  9. Pombo

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    I dont like him,, somewhy.

    Isnt the place, but look this l
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