Sand vs Hail *Warstory*

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  1. tito

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    This is my first Warstory.I think that this was a pretty good battle.

    My Team:
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    NaivePhilosopher's Team:
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    Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
    ButtMunch sent out Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
    NaivePhilosopher sent out Abomasnow (lvl 100 Abomasnow ?).
    Abomasnow's Snow Warning whipped up a hailstorm!
    Hail began to fall!
    Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
    The hail stopped.
    A sandstorm brewed!
    ButtMunch: hail team
    Abomasnow used Substitute.
    Abomasnow lost 25% of its health.
    Abomasnow made a substitute!
    Hippowdon used Earthquake.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Abomasnow!
    Abomasnow's substitute faded!
    The sandstorm rages.
    Abomasnow is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Abomasnow lost 6% of its health.
    Abomasnow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Abomasnow restored 6% of its health.


    ok im facing a hail team.......

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Mamoswine (lvl 100 Mamoswine ?).
    Hippowdon used Earthquake.
    Mamoswine lost 42% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Mamoswine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Mamoswine restored 6% of its health.


    my hippo can kill that fat elephant

    Hippowdon used Earthquake.
    Mamoswine lost 39% of its health.
    Mamoswine used Roar.
    ButtMunch switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
    The sandstorm rages.
    Mamoswine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Mamoswine restored 6% of its health.


    the fat elephant got scared.doesn't matter bronzong can kill him to

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Abomasnow (lvl 100 Abomasnow ?).
    Abomasnow's Snow Warning whipped up a hailstorm!
    The sandstorm stopped.
    Hail began to fall!
    Bronzong used Stealth Rock.
    Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Bronzong is pelted by hail!
    Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
    Abomasnow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Abomasnow restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.


    well since he has a hail team stealth rock will hurt his team a lot

    Abomasnow used Leech Seed.
    Bronzong was seeded!
    Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
    It's super effective!
    Abomasnow lost 59% of its health.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Bronzong is pelted by hail!
    Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
    Abomasnow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Abomasnow restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Bronzong lost 12% of its health.
    Abomasnow regained health!
    Abomasnow restored 13% of its health.

    he sent out the Christmas tree again.my bronzong will brake it in half.

    Abomasnow used Substitute.
    Abomasnow lost 25% of its health.
    Abomasnow made a substitute!
    Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
    It's super effective!
    The substitute took damage for Abomasnow!
    Abomasnow's substitute faded!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Bronzong is pelted by hail!
    Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
    Abomasnow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Abomasnow restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Bronzong lost 12% of its health.
    Abomasnow regained health!
    Abomasnow restored 13% of its health.

    the christmas tree doesnt want to brake

    Abomasnow used Substitute.
    Abomasnow lost 25% of its health.
    Abomasnow made a substitute!
    Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
    It's super effective!
    The substitute took damage for Abomasnow!
    Abomasnow's substitute faded!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Bronzong is pelted by hail!
    Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
    Abomasnow's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Abomasnow restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Bronzong lost 12% of its health.
    Abomasnow regained health!
    Abomasnow restored 13% of its health.

    brake stupid tree

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Tentacruel (lvl 100 Tentacruel ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Tentacruel.
    Tentacruel lost 12% of its health.
    Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
    It's not very effective...
    Tentacruel lost 14% of its health.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Tentacruel is pelted by hail!
    Tentacruel lost 6% of its health.
    Bronzong is pelted by hail!
    Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
    Tentacruel's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Tentacruel restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Bronzong lost 12% of its health.
    Tentacruel regained health!
    Tentacruel restored 12% of its health.

    he didnt want his chrisrmas tree to brake so he switched into squidward ill kill him to with bronzong

    ButtMunch switched in Magnezone (lvl 100 Magnezone).
    Tentacruel used Toxic Spikes.
    Spikes were scattered everywhere!
    Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Tentacruel is pelted by hail!
    Tentacruel lost 6% of its health.
    Magnezone is pelted by hail!
    Magnezone lost 6% of its health.
    Tentacruel's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Tentacruel restored 6% of its health.
    Magnezone's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Magnezone restored 6% of its health.

    ill kill that big nose freak with my magnezone

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Mamoswine (lvl 100 Mamoswine ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Mamoswine.
    Mamoswine lost 12% of its health.
    Magnezone used Substitute.
    Magnezone lost 25% of its health.
    Magnezone made a substitute!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Magnezone is pelted by hail!
    Magnezone lost 6% of its health.
    Mamoswine's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Mamoswine restored 6% of its health.
    Magnezone's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Magnezone restored 6% of its health.

    the fat elephent is back

    Magnezone used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Mamoswine lost 25% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Mamoswine fainted.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Magnezone is pelted by hail!
    Magnezone lost 6% of its health.
    Magnezone's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Magnezone restored 6% of its health.

    bye bye...
    (6-5)im winning

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
    Weavile is exerting its pressure!
    Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
    Weavile lost 25% of its health.
    Weavile used Brick Break.
    It's super effective!
    The substitute took damage for Magnezone!
    Magnezone's substitute faded!
    Magnezone used Thunderbolt.
    Weavile lost 75% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Weavile fainted.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Magnezone is pelted by hail!
    Magnezone lost 6% of its health.
    Magnezone's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Magnezone restored 6% of its health.

    magnezone sweep
    (6-4)im still winning

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Froslass (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Froslass.
    Froslass lost 25% of its health.
    Froslass used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Magnezone lost 60% of its health.
    Magnezone used Substitute.
    But it failed!
    The hail continues to fall.
    Magnezone is pelted by hail!
    Magnezone lost 6% of its health.
    Magnezone's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Magnezone restored 6% of its health.

    i dont want my magnezone to die so i will sent out the second best Sp. wall

    ButtMunch switched in Cradily (lvl 100 Cradily ?).
    Cradily was poisoned!
    Cradily was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
    Froslass used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Cradily lost 36% of its health.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Cradily is pelted by hail!
    Cradily lost 6% of its health.
    Cradily's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cradily restored 6% of its health.
    Cradily is hurt by poison!
    Cradily lost 12% of its health.

    i forgot there isnt a sandstorm to double my sp.defense

    Froslass used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Cradily lost 38% of its health.
    Cradily used Recover.
    Cradily restored 50% of its health.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Cradily is pelted by hail!
    Cradily lost 6% of its health.
    Cradily's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cradily restored 6% of its health.
    Cradily is hurt by poison!
    Cradily lost 12% of its health.

    what should i do

    Froslass used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Cradily lost 36% of its health.
    Cradily used Recover.
    Cradily restored 50% of its health.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Cradily is pelted by hail!
    Cradily lost 6% of its health.
    Cradily's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cradily restored 6% of its health.
    Cradily is hurt by poison!
    Cradily lost 12% of its health.

    i still havent thought what i should do besides stall

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Abomasnow (lvl 100 Abomasnow ?).
    Abomasnow's Snow Warning whipped up a hailstorm!
    Pointed stones dug into Abomasnow.
    Abomasnow lost 25% of its health.
    Cradily used Rock Slide.
    It's super effective!
    Abomasnow lost 5% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Abomasnow fainted.
    The hail continues to fall.
    Cradily is pelted by hail!
    Cradily lost 6% of its health.
    Cradily's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Cradily restored 6% of its health.
    Cradily is hurt by poison!
    Cradily lost 12% of its health.

    i finally broke that christmas tree in half
    (6-3)im still winning
    NaivePhilosopher switched in Froslass (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Froslass.
    Froslass lost 25% of its health.
    ButtMunch switched in Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
    Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
    The hail stopped.
    A sandstorm brewed!
    Hippowdon was poisoned!
    Hippowdon was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
    Froslass used Blizzard.
    It's super effective!
    Hippowdon lost 100% of its health.
    ButtMunch's Hippowdon fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Froslass is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Froslass lost 6% of its health.

    i switched into hippowdon to start the sandstorm again
    (5-3)im still winning

    ButtMunch switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    NaivePhilosopher switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
    Heatran lost 12% of its health.
    Heatran used Flamethrower.
    Heatran's Flash Fire raised its fire power!
    The sandstorm rages.

    i thought my heatran could destroy his team with with flamethrower but then he switched into his heatran

    ButtMunch switched in Magnezone (lvl 100 Magnezone).
    Heatran used Earth Power.
    It's super effective!
    Magnezone lost 15% of its health.
    ButtMunch's Magnezone fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.

    well my heatran has choice scarf so i had to switch to something but what so i decided to sacrifice magnezone
    (4-3)shit hes catching up

    ButtMunch switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
    NaivePhilosopher switched in Tentacruel (lvl 100 Tentacruel ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Tentacruel.
    Tentacruel lost 12% of its health.
    Bronzong used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Tentacruel lost 65% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Tentacruel is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Tentacruel lost 6% of its health.
    Tentacruel's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Tentacruel restored 6% of its health.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

    squidward is back

    Tentacruel used Toxic Spikes.
    Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
    Bronzong used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Tentacruel lost 7% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Tentacruel fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.


    like i said in the beginning bronzong will kill that big nose freak

    (4-2)im still winning

    NaivePhilosopher switched in Froslass (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Froslass.
    Froslass lost 25% of its health.
    Froslass used Shadow Ball.
    Bronzong lost 37% of its health.
    Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
    It's super effective!
    Froslass lost 20% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Froslass fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

    bye bye
    (4-1)im pretty sure im going to win
    NaivePhilosopher switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
    Heatran lost 12% of its health.
    Heatran used Hidden Power.
    It's not very effective...
    Bronzong lost 10% of its health.
    Bronzong used Earthquake.
    It's super effective!
    Heatran lost 75% of its health.
    NaivePhilosopher's Heatran fainted.
    ButtMunch wins!

    (6-0)i won
    well i hope you enjoyed this

    Props:
    -me,for posting this great match
    -hippowdon for stating the sandstorm
    -magnezone for killing mamoswine and weavile and sacrificing itself
    -bronzong for setting up SR and killing heatran,froslass, and tentacruel aka
    squidward
    -cradily for killing that annoying cristmas tree

    Slobs:
    -tyranitar for not doing anything
    -heatran also
  2. Anti

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    This was a pretty good battle. Leftovers and Hail / Sandstorm could be edited out, though.

    P.S. You hav a really cool avatar.
  3. junior

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    That was... dull. A little more commentary would make it better.
  4. Slice n Dice

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    Yea nice battle, but next time edit out stealth rock damage(percent) and leftovers(percent) recovery.

    I couldn't help but point out you're team's awful Gyrados weakness though...
  5. Sunday

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    I can't say I liked how much you badmouth the opposition. Even if you are winning you should be a bit more... respectful. It just seemed childish.
    Also did you have this approved seeing as you won?
  6. KoA

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    Oh hey, why did Heatran use HP at the end there? :|
  7. Dragontamer

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    Ditto.

    Didn't really like the battle either. Your opponent was a poor player, laying down a 2nd layer of spikes after the Hippo has been poisoned, and after learning the rest of your team is practically immune. Froslass didn't Blizzard Cradily which would have easily 2-hited your Cradily, and instead opted for hidden power, which was literally less than half as powerful as blizzard. Abomasnow was clearly faster than Hippo at the lead and yet didn't use Blizzard. (Sandstorm started after the hail. This guarentees that the Hippo was slower). Mamoswine could have pwned the hippo with Avalanche, Ice Shard, a more powerful Earthquake of its own or even Blizzard... but instead roared.

    You also made a few questionable moves. You kept the Hippo in on a pokemon that easily would have OHKOed your hippo with Blizzard, Specs Ice Beam, CB Wood Hammer and more, after learning that the Hippo was slower. Further, you open with Earthquake which is resisted by Abomasnow, instead of going for the kill with say... early stealth rocks or Stone Edge. You didn't want Magnezone to "die" so you send out a pokemon weak to Blizzard (Cradily) to a Froslass on a Hail team, even though it would have been clearly to your advantage to revenge switch-in.

    Warstories are great when both players play at a near perfect level, requiring prediction and so forth. But there are mistakes littered all across this warstory.
  8. tea_and_blues

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    I don't mind warstories where the players are not perfect, but your battle style was mean-spirited and you seemed to know very little about the opponent's (OU and well-known) pokemon. ...oh, and over confidence doesn't suit you either - how precisely was your Gyro Ball going to "brake" a Tentacool? That part of the commentary was incoherent.

    It's a shame, really, as I thought from the title this might be an interesting, quirky OU battle for once.
  9. Y2Kash

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    the battle itself was very dull and the commentary didn't add anything to it. Having two weather themed teams didn't make it any more interesting.
  10. astrohawke

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    How did it go from 4-1 to 6-0 lol...

    and it's "break" not "brake"

    I'll brake you in half...

    *grumbles to self*
  11. TerrickTerran

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    I liked the weather vs weather but the battle was quite dull. It was too much log, not enough comments. It also gets boring reading all the leftovers, stealth rock, and other damage.
  12. Odinwolf

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    Sorry man, but this was a lame battle and a boring warstory. Winning 4-0 over a bad player doesn't make a good story and then you didn't really add much as far as commentary to educate the players reading. You basically just said "I'm going to beat him with my pokemon" over and over again, with a few notes like sacrificing your Hippo to get sandstorm going.

    As a Hail team user, I'm saddened by the way your opponent used his team. Why is he trying to set up a sub-seed with Abomasnow when hail isn't active? If he could clearly see he's facing another weather user, he should be protecting his Abomasnow as much as possible to set up hail whenever you get SS going again. Also, Mamoswine is a late game pokemon, not a first switch. Switching into an earthquake and then sticking around for a second one just to Roar is a waste of a great hail-team tool.

    Try to post some closer battles against better opponents if you are going to post a warstory again. And if you do, make sure to give everyone your reasoning in the commentary instead of just giving pokemon cute little nicknames like "Christmas tree" and then saying your will "brake" them.
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    brake stupid tree


    such quality commentary this warstory was pretty bad you beat a player who really needs for practice, As for you i suggest you respect your opponents no matter what otherwise you'll find not many people with put up with your pig headed attitude.

    One more thing......

    BRAKE STUPID TREE!!!
  14. StarmanXL

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    I lol'd.

    But on a less assholish note, it really wasn't that good. Like others said, it wasn't really a close match (4-0), neither you nor your opponent played exceptionally well, and the commentary was bland, just boring one liners ("bye bye" "squidward is back" "brake stupid tree") or just obvious statements ("well, I'm facing a hail team"). We really didn't see how you were thinking, how you were supposed to be predicting. Not to mention you could have run it through a spell check....
  15. Bourbon

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    The commentary coulda been better... I mean "i'm gonna brake that christmas tree" how many times did you say that?
  16. Scrubs

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    That made me lol also.
  17. Shiney

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    I didn't like the warstory much, it was too much log, not enough commentary. That and the fact that you left your hippo in on an abomasnow that probably knew wood hammer or blizzard or both, and that your opponent didn't use wood hammer or blizzard.
  18. Aeroblacktyl

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    Because it was his last Poke and would have have been flamethrowering a Heatran had it used it on Bronzong, so it had to pick an attack that didn't have an immunity to it.

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    I wasn't too keen when you started to Bold your commentry early on. italics were better for such.

    The match was ok, 6-0 was a rather thrashing, and to say you can tell you've practically won when you've took out the first few Pokemon.
  20. Tytus

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    I read a little bit, but stopped after the third or fourth "Ill brake his tree". It was just too childish and poorly written to even continue reading.
  21. StrangerDanger

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    oh my god.

    Now without the asshole aside, it seemed like you were in control the entire match. Not exactly the kind of thing you want warstoried.

    I'd suggest finding a closer match, with good predictions, and more outstanding commentary than the gem that's in my sig.
  22. Towlie

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    Lol. Not that entertaining of a warstory. I thought it would be a nice close match between a Sandstorm and Hail team, but it turned out pretty one-sided. But really, it was all log with barely any comments. And when you did make comments, it was mostly just: "BRAKE TREE BRAKE!!!!"
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    Bad warstory.
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    props:
    -me for moving this great thread
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    I think zerowing just braked tito's spirit.

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