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Team Rocket Steals a Legendary Pokemon! [Themed Warstory]

Discussion in 'Dragonspiral Tower' started by Karpi, Feb 27, 2011.

  1. Sy123

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    9.5/10
    Props:
    -Being Team Rocket
    -Being true to them
    -Funny, original, and didnt lose its charm halfway through
    -Props for using Meowth, Victreebel, Arbok and Licitung

    Things to improve:
    -This guy was high on scented Golbat dung, get a better opponent, and I guarentee, I will give it a 12/10

    Good job
  2. SJCrew

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    rofl

    I feel like I'm 8 years old again.
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    Man the battle was bad but the commentary and theme is so top notch I can't really stop laughing at this.

    9/10
  4. yoshinator879

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    lol, do a real warstory next time.
    Format: 7/10
    Battle: 1/10
    Comments/Idea: 7/10 Great! Almost no comments though

    average: 5.5/10-ish FUN
  5. GMLW

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    Hahaha, the battle was terrible but the commentary totally made up for it. Nice warstory!

    8/10
  6. Juice!

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    Basically everything that everyone else said. Your opponent was awful, and the battle wasn't very good, but Team Rocket theme was awesome, and the dialogue was funny, I could actually hear all their voices. xD I enjoyed it, especially since I'm a huge fan of theme teams. I'll give you 8/10, it was definitely worth the read. =)
  7. -Terywj-

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    I liked the commentary / flavor a lot! Nice job. =)
  8. SuperChillarmy

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    You should do a gym leader vs. gym leader battle...... that would be really cool.
  9. Megamence123

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    ROTFLSHMSFOAIDMT! All jokes aside, very funny. Bad plays and no rules, but who cares? It's Team Rocket! Write another one soon!
    8.5/10 (only because of Wobbuffet AND Lickitung)
    Keep up the good work!
  10. waterwarrior

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    I loved this so much. However, I think it would be better if TR got its ass kicked yet again, just extra-horribly because the opponent wasn't a noob like Ash. Still great, 8/10
  11. wacky tabaky

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    Ash's gen 1 team or an eeveelution team without glaceon because stat wise it is bad.

    Great warstory first time team rocket did something good. Loved the commentary 8.5/10
  12. Darthenos

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    Let me say some things. First off, your opponent was pretty bad, but I loved, and I mean loved, your commentary. You sstuck to the characters to a T and I just loved it. This was very creative.
  13. Oblivion IX

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    The amusing commentary certainly made up for the fact that both your opponent and the match were awful. Got to love those UBERs and that Hyper Beam Lucario! Quite an interesting read.

    7/10
  14. corncake22

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    Lmao I expected you to lose and say something like we're blasting off again! Or whatever the exact words when they get blasted away, but good Warstory I give it a 7/10. Your opponent was awful.
  15. Woodchuck

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    lmao i expected you to actually do a fun bump! or whatever the exact things people say when they revive old threads
    overall i give it a 3/10 this bump was awful
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    I do like the warstory though :X
  16. ReshiramBlackZekromWhite

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    trololololol the ubers player was dumb as ... ... something really dumb.
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    This is just hilarious, how could you lose while having ubers and fighting that kind of team? 9/10
  18. jessifer

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    This has to be the funniest warstory ever. 9/10
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    Goddamit amazing
    9/10
    -1 point for hyper beam and hax
  20. The Goddamn Batman

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    Hilarious, i love themed warstories :) Also, i think it would be really interesting to see a gym leader themed team, maybe Brock?
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    lmfaoo this warstory is too funny. 9/10
  22. Lesser Smaug

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    I remember battling Team Rocket Trio before. This has some awesome commentary (Victreebel is killed by Pikachu in one hit), but the battle itself was meh. I mean, who the hell slaps Focus Blast and Hyper Beam on a Lucario?
  23. StruggleSweep

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    Though your opponet was horrible and you had some really lucky hax against Rayquaza, I fiund myself actually laughing out loud over this. I give your warstory a 6.5/10

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