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True Unova Champion - Alder vs Cynthia

Discussion in 'Orange Islands' started by Tomahawk9, Jun 16, 2011.

  1. AuraSphere

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    Apparently I REALLY need to visit imgboot.com. Overall, it was pretty good for a themed warstory.
  2. Psychic Will

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    I like that it's in-depth, but the backstory and poor grammar ruined it. Still, the thought that went into it is impressive. 7/10
  3. Rotom-S w/balloon

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    I enjoy theme battles, so I thought this was a pretty cool warstory. The comments were a little long at times, but it showed the thought processes of the battlers pretty well. I was kind of hoping that Cynthia would win, if for no reason other than the fact that her theme music is so amazing.

    Also, the idea of Alder using the word "ballsy" made me laugh, so I'll give it a 9/10
  4. jessifer

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    I really like themed warstories. Your commentary was excellent too. 10/10
  5. Yamata no Orochi

    Yamata no Orochi capes are cool
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    You should've just shortened some of the sentences but overall, 7/10.

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