NU Jolteon [Done]

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Volt Switch
move 3: Shadow Ball
move 4: Toxic / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Jolteon's blistering Speed allows it to revenge kill weakened targets and reliably pivot with Volt Switch. This Speed comes with the caveat that Jolteon's coverage is unreliable at times, and it has heavy competition with other Electric-types; Rotom-F and Lanturn threaten Ground-types more effectively, and Rotom-S and Togedemaru have better defensive typings. Shadow Ball is Jolteon's best coverage option, allowing it to dent some Electric-immune or -resistant targets such as Togedemaru, Golurk, and Gourgeist-S. Toxic debilitates walls like Piloswine and Quagsire that may try and switch into Jolteon to prevent it from pivoting. Alternatively, Hyper Voice is another coverage option that can guarantee a 2HKO on Rotom-F and Rocky Helmet Sandaconda.

Jolteon fits best on offensive VoltTurn teams that appreciate its Speed as a reliable revenge killer and offensive pivot. Pair it with additional pivots such as Silvally-Water, Wishiwashi, and Flapple, as these can help deal with Piloswine and Sandaconda so Jolteon can use Volt Switch freely. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak and Perrserker also make good teammates, as they break special walls such as Clefairy and Lanturn that shrug off Jolteon's attacks. Jolteon effectively pressures physical walls such as Cofagrigus, Sandaconda, and Garbodor, so pair it with cleaners such as Rapidash, Silvally Dark, and Choice Scarf Sawk that need these walls weakened before they can sweep; conversely, these teammates can help pressure Galarian Stunfisk and Ferroseed so that Jolteon can clean late-game instead. Entry hazards, specifically Spikes from Garbodor and Ferroseed, help put more targets like Sandaconda and Abomasnow into 2HKO range from Jolteon's Shadow Ball.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Rabia, 336073], [quziel, 297859]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Rabia, 336073]]

 

[Rabia]

qc

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Volt Switch
move 3: Shadow Ball
move 4: Toxic / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Jolteon’s blistering Speed allows if it to revenge kill weakened targets and pivot thanks to Volt Switch with ease. This Speed comes at the caveat that Jolteon’s coverage is unreliable at times, and has heavy competition with other Electric-types that can threaten Ground-types better like Rotom-F and Lanturn, or have better defensive typings like Rotom-S and Togedemaru.(this sentence is kinda awkwardly worded, look into maybe rearranging/cutting down on word count. lmk if you need help) Shadow Ball is Jolteon’s best coverage, allowing it to dent some Electric immune or resistant targets such as Togedemaru, Gourgiest-S, and Golurk. Toxic debilitates walls like Piloswine and Quagsire that may try and switch into Jolteon to prevent it from pivoting. Hyper Voice is another coverage option that can guarantee a 2HKO on Rocky Helmet Sandaconda and Rotom-F.

Jolteon fits best on offensive VoltTurn teams that appreciate its Speed as a reliable revenge killer and offensive pivot. Pair it with additional pivots such as Silvally-Water and Wishiwashi, as these Water-types can help deal with Piloswine and Sandaconda so Jolteon can Volt Switch freely.(you say Jolteon goes best on offensive VoltTurn teams, but Wishiwashi on offense sounds wrong) As special walls such as Galarian Stunfisk and Clefairy shrug off Jolteon’s attacks, support it with wallbreaker teammates like Toxicroak and Perrserker. Jolteon pressures physical walls such as Cofagrigus and Garbodor, so pair it with cleaners such as Rapidash and Choice Scarf Sawk that need these walls weakened from Jolteon’s coverage before they can sweep; conversely, these teammates can help pressure Galarian Stunfisk and Ferroseed so that Jolteon can clean late game instead.
(you use very repetitive sentence structure here. there is lots of "<verb> [Jolteon] with <teammate type>")

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

content good, just look into fixing some grammar/prose-related stuff. qc 1/2 when done

 

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[quziel]

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Volt Switch
move 3: Shadow Ball
move 4: Toxic / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Jolteon’s blistering Speed allows it to revenge kill weakened targets and pivot thanks to Volt Switch with ease. This Speed comes at the caveat that Jolteon’s coverage is unreliable at times, and has heavy competition with other Electric-types; Rotom-F and Lanturn threaten Ground-types better, and Rotom-S and Togedemaru have better defensive typings. Shadow Ball is Jolteon’s best coverage, allowing it to dent some Electric immune or resistant targets such as Togedemaru, Gourgiest-S, and Golurk. Toxic debilitates walls like Piloswine and Quagsire that may try and switch into Jolteon to prevent it from pivoting. Hyper Voice is another coverage option that can guarantee a 2HKO on Rocky Helmet Sandaconda and Rotom-F.

Jolteon fits best on offensive VoltTurn teams that appreciate its Speed as a reliable revenge killer and offensive pivot. Pair it with additional pivots such as Silvally-Water and Flapple, Mention Wishi, as like, it comes in on Grounds as these can help deal with Piloswine and Sandaconda so Jolteon can Volt Switch freely. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak and Perrserker also make good teammates as they break special walls such as Clefairy and Galarian Stunfisk that shrug off Jolteon’s attacks. What sweepers appreciate Pilo/Sanda being at like 60%? Jolteon instead pressures physical walls such as Cofagrigus and Garbodor, so pair it with cleaners such as Rapidash and Choice Scarf Sawk that need these walls weakened from its coverage before they can sweep; conversely, these teammates can help pressure Galarian Stunfisk and Ferroseed so that Jolteon can clean late game instead. I want a mention of spikes users, as like, that's realistically how Jolt is getting damage on stuff.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Rabia, 336073], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

works 2/2

 

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ready for gp!

 

[Rabia]

add remove comments

gp

[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Volt Switch
move 3: Shadow Ball
move 4: Toxic / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Jolteon’s Jolteon's blistering Speed allows it to revenge kill weakened targets and reliably pivot thanks to with Volt Switch with ease (fixing up awkward wording). This Speed comes at with the caveat that Jolteon’s Jolteon's coverage is unreliable at times, and it has heavy competition with other Electric-types; Rotom-F and Lanturn threaten Ground-types better more effectively, and Rotom-S and Togedemaru have better defensive typings. Shadow Ball is Jolteon’s Jolteon's best coverage option, allowing it to dent some Electric-immune(AH) or -resistant(AH) targets such as Togedemaru, Gourgiest-S, and Golurk,(AC) and Gourgeist-S. Toxic debilitates walls like Piloswine and Quagsire that may try and switch into Jolteon to prevent it from pivoting. Alternatively,(AC) Hyper Voice is another coverage option that can guarantee a 2HKO on Rocky Helmet Sandaconda and Rotom-F and Rocky Helmet Sandaconda.

Jolteon fits best on offensive VoltTurn teams that appreciate its Speed as a reliable revenge killer and offensive pivot. Pair it with additional pivots such as Silvally-Water, Wishiwashi, and Flapple, as these can help deal with Piloswine and Sandaconda so Jolteon can use Volt Switch freely. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak and Perrserker also make good teammates,(AC) as they break special walls such as Clefairy and Lanturn that shrug off Jolteon’s Jolteon's attacks. Jolteon instead effectively pressures physical walls such as Cofagrigus, Sandaconda, and Garbodor, so pair it with cleaners such as Rapidash, Silvally Dark, and Choice Scarf Sawk that need these walls weakened from its coverage before they can sweep; conversely, these teammates can help pressure Galarian Stunfisk and Ferroseed so that Jolteon can clean late-game(AH) instead. Entry hazards, specifically Spikes from Garbodor and Ferroseed, help put more targets like Sandaconda and Abomasnow into 2HKO range from Jolteon's Shadow Ball.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Rabia, 336073], [quziel, 297859]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

gp 1/1 when done

 

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ready for upload!