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In the future, if you make any changes to analyses that differ from what checks detail, can you tag the person who checked it so we can look over the few different sentences? helps a lot
i merged ur changes for ttar analysis from 20 days ago (lol), and i fixed some wording and made things clearer in some parts (specifically, the part about exca revenging shit), if anything looks wrong feel free to fix