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    Done Cloyster (QC 2/2) (GP 1/1)

    Just realized you have [SET COMMENS] instead of [SET COMMENTS]. Make sure to fix that please. Also, a few things were messed up when you implemented my check. Make sure you're implementing things as they are written! You removed the word "has" at the end of this sentence when you added the...
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    Done Toxtricity (Poison)

    Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (RC) = Remove Comma GP 1/1
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    Done Xatu

    Perfect, nothing needs to be fixed here. You have my approval :blobthumbsup: GP 1/1
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    Done Umbreon

    Add Remove Comments Good stuff bigtalk, but you forgot [SET COMMENTS] again. Please try to remember this GP 1/1
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    Grammar-Prose Team Queue: Brave New World

    LC Galarian Darumaka 1/1 Ubers Cloyster 1/1 Monotype Piloswine (Ice) 1/1 Ubers Umbreon 1/1 Ubers Xatu 1/1 Monotype Toxtricity (Poison) 1/1
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    Done Piloswine [Ice] [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

    Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma GP 1/1
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    Done Cloyster (QC 2/2) (GP 1/1)

    Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (RC) = Remove Comma (SC) = Semicolon Make sure you finish the credits and format them correctly, follow the formatting that I did with your name. GP 1/1
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    Copyediting Darumaka-Galar [GP 0/1]

    Add Remove Comments (RC) = Remove Comma GP 1/1
  9. deetah

    Grats!

    Grats!
  10. deetah

    Small Site Page Changes - (Typos, Poor Wording, Inaccuracies, Etc.)

    Pushed a few fixes including adding the colons and fixing the run-on, which is solved with a semicolon as kt3 brought up.
  11. deetah

    Congrats!

    Congrats!
  12. deetah

    gz!

    gz!
  13. deetah

    Small Site Page Changes - (Typos, Poor Wording, Inaccuracies, Etc.)

    Typically when grammar checking analyses, we try our best to refrain from subjective changes and stick to fixing grammatical errors, hence why we tend to not reword entire sentences unless absolutely necessary in order to preserve the author's voice. I do agree that the sentence in this example...
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    Grammar-Prose Team Queue: Brave New World

    Facebook Spotlight Monotype Hatterene (Psychic) 1/1
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    Done Hatterene (Psychic)

    Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (SC) = Semicolon You were slightly over 1,000 characters, and with some necessary additions I had to make, I also had to try and remove some extra wordiness. Excluding comments and removals, this should bring you down to around 1,005. Hopefully that suffices...
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