hiya, your GP checks are really good. However, there are some things that are a bit hard to notice. For example, instead of going "it's", go "it's its"
In other words, if there are a few errors in the middle of words, just remove that entire word and retype the correct thing. I'm only saying this because dragonboy52 missed "it's" (removing the apostrophe) on his Venonat analysis. Keep up the good work!
Well, let's put it this way, nearly every one of your amateur checks has been stamped, even by Fate himself (the grammar head). I'm sure you'll get on the team no problem! :)
Fate is the one responsible for new GP team members, so I'd say you have every possibility of being offish!! :D