hey quick note, made a small change to my check bc i missed something on my first read: I changed "2 Mega Lopunny's Frustration" to "Frustration from Mega Lopunny twice" so my version of the sentence would be: The suggested Defense investment allows Moltres to take Frustration from Mega Lopunny twice from full health, and the suggested Speed investment allows Moltres to outspeed Modest Heatran. tysm - great check!
I think you can take your Mega Charizard X analysis out of WIP now. I've discussed it with Optify and the QC team says you aren't supposed to do nitpicky grammar changes in Quality Control checks like he/she did, as those are up to the Grammar Checks to deal with. You should include obvious grammar changes, such as if a sentence doesn't make sense though.