1 Scizor vs. The World (during a Rain/Strom) (OU warstory)

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Hello, and welcome to my first warstory. A story of defeat, decisiveness,and a beautiful ending.Fought in Pokemon Lab. And be warned, this ending may to beautiful and Haxful for your eyes. If you are allergic to Hax and weird weather, turn away now.

Clauses.
Evasion Clause
Sleep Clause
Uber Clause
Species Clause
Strict Damage Clause
OHKO Cluase
Soul Dew Clause

My ctions shall be in Navy color
My oppnent's shall be inDarkgreen


whoknowswhy's team:


My team:


whoknowswhy sent out Electrode (lvl 100 Electrode)!
Count Bleck sent out Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ♂)!
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm! A sandstorm brewed!
VS


Here I was thinking, Oh cool an electrode, I rarely see those in OU! I just had too kill it as fast as possible and be done with it beofre something happens.

Begin turn #1
Electrode used Thunder Wave!
Tyranitar is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Tyranitar used Crunch!

Electrode lost 81% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Electrode is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electrode lost 6% of its health
!

100% Paralyzed
13%

...And something happens. It paralysed my beloved Tyranitar! Not much of a problem, considering my strategy,but this might complicate things later. Now with as low health as it did, I knew a switch was coming, so I used Pursuit.

Begin turn #2
whoknowswhy withdrew Electrode!
Tyranitar used Pursuit!
Electrode lost 12% of its health!
Electrode fainted!
whoknowswhy sent out Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ♂)!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

KO!
100% Paralyzed
6-5


And here my predicting skills pay off! it went exactly as planned. But now that I am looking over this, how in the world is it raining and sand storming at once?!
VS

Begin turn #3
Scizor used Superpower!
It's super effective!

Tyranitar lost 340/341 (99%) of its health!
Scizor's attack was lowered!
Scizor's defence was lowered!

Tyranitar hung on using its Focus Sash!
Tyranitar used Counter!
Scizor lost 100% of its health!
Scizor fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.
whoknowswhy sent out Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ♂)!
Gyarados's Intimidate cut Tyranitar's attack!
KO
1% Paralyzed
6-4


Yes, my strategy pulled off once agian! not many can resit trying to kil tyranitar with a physical move, so this is the ultimate...wait for it... COUNTER!! But Now, Old Count-Tar is fodder food.
VS

Begin turn #4
Gyarados used Waterfall!
It's super effective!

Tyranitar lost 1/341 (0%) of its health!
Tyranitar fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
Gyarados is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health!
Gyarados's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados regained 6% of its health!

Count Bleck sent out Regirock (lvl 100 Regirock)!

KO

93%

5-4

And Tyranitar is Down and out. Oh well, I thought to do something about this Gyrados, so I sent in my main physical wall, Regirock. With my Thunder punch and Max Defense Evs, It should take quite a hit.

VS

Begin turn #5
Gyarados used Waterfall!
It's super effective
!
Regirock lost 176/327 (53%) of its health!
Regirock used ThunderPunch!

It's super effective! Gyarados lost 79% of its health!
Rain continues to fall.
Gyarados is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health!
Gyarados's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados regained 6% of its health!


47%
15%

And Regirock takes a hit dealing decent damage. I blame this freaky Rain/Storm weather. Seriously, how did this happen?! But anyways, I wanted to try to get rid of Gyrados but...

Begin turn #6
whoknowswhy withdrew Gyarados!
whoknowswhy sent out Electivire (lvl 100 Electivire ♂)!

Regirock used ThunderPunch!
Electivire's Motor Drive increased its speed!
Rain continues to fall.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!


47%
100% MD Activated

...I fall victim to the unholy Gyra/Vire combo. And of course It goes into overdrive. Now it has the potential to sweep =_= . I knew Regirock could take another of whatever Electivire threw at him, so I go for Stone Edge.
VS

Begin turn #7
Electivire used Earthquake!
It's super effective!

Regirock lost 141/327 (43%) of its health!
Regirock used Stone Edge!
Regirock's attack missed Electivire!

Rain continues to fall.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!



6%
87%/88%

Amazing how Regirock takes hit like a pro,huh? but because of the miss, He's going to collapse. I wanted him to die so I can freshly bring in my wall for Electivire without danger So Regirock prepares to crumble.

Begin turn #8
Electivire used Earthquake!
It's super effective!

Regirock lost 10/327 (3%) of its health!
Regirock fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!

Count Bleck sent out Swampert (lvl 100 Swampert ♂)!

KO

75%

4-4TIE

@whoknowswhy: hmm, i'm kinda wondering why i'm taking double damage from the sandstorm

That is a good queston. Because the game doesn't like you, perhaps? Joking aside, I had too stop the acurssed Electivire's reign of terror once and for all. So in entered Swampert, an addition I added only a few minutes ago.
VS

Begin turn #9
whoknowswhy withdrew Electivire!
whoknowswhy sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ♂)!

Swampert used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...

Breloom lost 39% of its health!
Rain continues to fall.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
Breloom was badly poisoned!


100%
49%Poisoned

Ugh, one of my "Most hated okemon in Ou" list. Why I didn't forsee this I don't know. Well,If you know anything about Brelooms, I believe you know what happens next.
VS

Begin turn #10
Breloom used Spore!
Swampert fell asleep!
Swampert is fast asleep
.
Rain continues to fall.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 12% of its health!


100% Asleep
49% Poisoned

Nothing much happened here, except the freaky double storm is really hating my opponent right now. Which does pretty much nothing because of Poison heal =_=. I'm kinda surprised that he didn't use Seed Bomb. Weird.

Begin turn #11
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Swampert is fast asleep.
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Swampert lost 309/404 (76%) of its health!
Rain continues to fall.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 12% of its health!


24% Asleep
49% Poisoned

Why this guy didn't go for or maybe have Seed bomb is a mysery, but I guess he figured I had a Rindo berry. Or he just didn't think about it. Against my better judgment, I decided to keep Swampert in to either A) wake up and smell the punch and Ice punch it or B) Die so I can bring in my next Poke full fresh.

Begin turn #12
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Swampert is fast asleep.
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Swampert lost 95/404 (23%) of its health!
Swampert fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages.
Breloom is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Breloom lost 6% of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 12% of its health!

Count Bleck sent out Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ♂)!

KO
49% Poisoned

3-4

Now it was time to end this. My trusty, just made baton passing Scizor could easily take this guy out with one Technician Bullet punch. Good thing, since it's the only attack I have.
VS

Begin turn #13
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
Breloom lost 47% of its health!
Breloom fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.
whoknowswhy sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ♂)!

KO
100%

3-3 TIE

And enter, the most hated pokemon and #1 in my "Hate in Ou" list. The mighty Heatran. This thing will eat all my OU teams for lunch, even my Blissey on my other team! I had to get scizor out fast, and get something that could survive. However, I was running out of options...
VS

Begin turn #14
Count Bleck withdrew Scizor!
Count Bleck sent out Clefable (lvl 100 Clefable ♀)!

Heatran used Fire Blast!
Clefable lost 205/393 (52%) of its health!
Rain continues to fall.
Clefable is buffeted by the sandstorm!
The sandstorm rages.
Clefable is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Clefable was badly poisoned!

The only pokemon that could survive a hit from Heatran just had half of it's health torn apart. This match was pretty much over.

VS

Begin turn #15
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Clefable lost 188/393 (47%) of its health!
Clefable fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.
Count Bleck sent out Aggron (lvl 100 Aggron ♂)!


KO
100%

2-3

This was it. Aggron can't take anything from a Heatran, let alone a STAB fire attack. And it can't outrun squat. So...
VS

Begin turn #16
Heatran used Fire Blast!
A critical hit!

Aggron lost 282/282 (100%) of its health!
Aggron fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.
Count Bleck sent out Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ♂)!

KO
100%

1-3

I was down to my last pokemon. A Scizor. Against a Heatran. REALLY. I probably should have quit there, but I never quit unless its absolutely futile to continue. You know, miracles COULD happen, but its not likely. So I prepared myself for the end.
VS THE WOR- *shot*

Begin turn #17
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Heatran's attack missed Scizor!

Scizor used Swords Dance!
Scizor's attack was sharply raised!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

100%
100%

I blinked when I saw this. Twice. One, I had coincidentally misclicked and two, IT MISSED. I had a small sliver of hope, so I just decided attacking.

Begin turn #18
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective... Heatran lost 14% of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Heatran's attack missed Scizor!
Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

100%
86%


Okay, so this was a an opportunity I couldn't miss. Keep on, Bullet Puncher!

Begin turn #19
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective...

Heatran lost 16% of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Heatran's attack missed Scizor!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

100%
60%


Okay, I can believe one time, maybe 2 misses. but 3 Fire Blasts in a row? There was no way I had that much luck!

Begin turn #20
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective...

Heatran lost 14% of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Heatran's attack missed Scizor!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

100%
34%


4 misses. 4 misses in a row. This had to be some quick joke. someone was trying to mess with me. But regardless, another punch to the molten face we go!

Begin turn #21
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective...

Heatran lost 16% of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Heatran's attack missed Scizor!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.

100%
18%


Yeah. Thats right. 5 Fire blasts, all misses, I still live, and guess what?

Begin turn #22
@whoknowswhy: well then
@whoknowswhy: hax

@Count Bleck: way too quick with bullet punch
@Count Bleck: save log?

Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective...

Heatran lost 14% of its health!
Heatran used Struggle!

Scizor lost 25/281 (8%) of its health!
Heatran lost 25% of its health!
Heatran fainted!

Rain continues to fall.
The sandstorm rages.
Scizor's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Scizor regained 17/281 (6%) of its health!
whoknowswhy sent out Electivire (lvl 100 Electivire ♂)!

KO

Heatran was Scarf'd? Or it was Specs'd? WHO CARES? That menace was gone for good, and the rest were all mine. If you din't know, I'm Extremely hyped right now in the midst of this battle.
VS
( 64% incase you were wondering:)
Begin turn #23
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective...

Electivire lost 54% of its health!
Electivire used Cross Chop!

Scizor lost 108/281 (38%) of its health!
Rain continues to fall.
Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health!
The sandstorm rages. Electivire is buffeted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 4% of its health!
Electivire fainted!

Scizor's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Scizor regained 17/281 (6%) of its health!

whoknowswhy sent out Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ♂)!
Gyarados's Intimidate cut Scizor's attack!


KO
50%

Man oh man, that was close. I think If it got a Crit on me, cried,, I think. Or if it had Fire Punch, I'd be dead. All that was left was Gyarados, and he had less than 10% percent, so this match was mine. And I must thank that double storm again for killing Electivire.

Begin turn #24
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective.
..
Gyarados lost 8% of its health!
Gyarados fainted!

Count Bleck wins!

@Count Bleck: NO WAY
@Count Bleck: this is pure warstory fuel!
@Count Bleck: gg man, I got to save this!

@whoknowswhy: there was only a .05% chance to miss 4 fire blasts in a row...
@whoknowswhy: :(
@whoknowswhy: gg

One of the best battle of all times, if not ever. Expect me to pretty this up later. Post your thought and stuff about this epic battle. If I left any errors, Please let me know. And Please, any Critism is MUCH appreciated.

Fact: The wierd wheather happened because I killed Electrode with pursuit while the weather was on. This apparently causes a glitch to make aboslute Weather Chaos. I forget who gave me the info, But you know Who you are, and I thank you.
 

Athenodoros

Official Smogon Know-It-All
I am fairly sure that you have already posted this. It was frowned upon last time because hax does not make a good warstory, and you should not repost something which was deleted before. Check the warstory archive to see exactly what makes for a good warstory.
 
Warstories are meant to archive the metagame and show good play.
I didn't even read the whole thing, but I can tell it ended in extreme luck. That doesn't make a good warstory most of the time.
 

Andy Snype

why pokemon shouldn't fight on their own
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This warstory was lackluster... Both sides played horribly (him thunder-waving your ttar, you expecting him to stay in with E-vire) and comments were too simple. You winning because of 5 consecutive Fire Blast misses does not constitute warstory material. I recall reading this before with many more comments. If it was removed/deleted once, there is a good reason for it.

Rating: 1/10
 
Acid rain, eh? Somewhat annoying...

Surely your Swords Dance Scizor had something better to use on Heatran than Bullet Punch? No Brick Break or Superpower? Even Bug Bite would be better!
 

VKCA

(Virtual Circus Kareoky Act)
Hax is generally thought to ruin pokemon. Watching someone win a battle because a move 85acc misses five times in a row is not fun.
 

DetroitLolcat

Maize and Blue Badge Set 2014-2017
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OBJECTION!

This warstory wasn't that bad. Though it primarily showed the novelty of the excessive hax in a battle, the actual warstory wasn't that bad.

4/10
 
It was horrible. Horrible misplays on both parts and you would have suffered if that Breloom used Substitute. As aforementioned, hax constitutes a bad, not good, warstory.

Also, what were you thinking when you made this team? Do you not see that Infernape utterly rapes your team? Hell even Heracross can. You opponent only needs a strong fighting Pokemon and something that can take a Bullet Punch to demolish your team.
 

haunter

Banned deucer.
WarStory rules said:
Warstory interesting battles. Nobody wants to read about how you 6-0'd an opponent with Garchomp; we want to see interesting battles with plenty of strategy. Again, look at the Warstory Archive for good examples.
You picked a mediocre battle with lots of bad moves on both parts and with an impressive amount of luck determining the outcome of the match. Try again.
 
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