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A Battle of Imps and Titans: An Uber Warstory

Theorymon

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My Team:
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Gen. Empoleon's team:
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Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause.

Leftovers recovery, stealth rock damage, and Weather will not be included in the logs after they first appear.

Theorymon sent out Darkrai.
Gen. Empoleon sent out Scizor
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100% vs.
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100%

Ah, A Scizor. This thing is bound to have Lum Berry, as it would destroy most Darkrai leads with it. I’m at a disadvantage right from the start, as no matter who I switch to, U-turn gives Gen a turn to scout me. I’ll just make an obvious switch to Forretress, as he won’t take too much from U-turn.


The match started out like before (Theorymon and I played a match before this) and my new lead isn't going to be as effective any more. I run Lum Berry Scizor lead as it handles pretty much everything that isn't Groudon or Dialga leads. I go with U-turn to either OHKO his Darkrai, or to allow myself for a better switch in if he decides that switching out is a better idea.


Theorymon switched in Forretress.
Scizor used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 11% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon switched in Wobbuffet.
Forretress's leftovers restored its health a little!
Forretress restored 6% of its health.

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95% vs.
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100%

As expected, Gen uses U-turn. Unfortunately, he switches to Wobbuffet. Wobbuffet could very well make Forretress into set-up bait. But since my only attack move is explosion (which won’t KO), I decide its best to Toxic Spike anyways. This way, Clefairy can nab a kill later.

Theorymon switches in his Forretress to take the incoming U-turn and I was allowed a free turn for Wobbuffet to come in. I know Theorymon is running a team based around Clefairy and Toxic Spikes, not wanting to give him the advantage I decide Safeguard is a good move to protect me from the deadly poison.

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Forretress used Toxic Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Wobbuffet used Safeguard.
Your team became cloaked in a mystic veil!
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99% vs.
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100%

Shoot, Toxic Spikes won’t do anything for a couple of turns. I just lay down Stealth Rock, as I can’t do anything else to Wobbuffet. I don’t want to explode yet, as I know he has Dialga and Scizor, who give this team quite a few problems.



That went exactly as expected, I guess this will allow my Lustrous Orb Palkia to come in for free and possibly get a KO on Forretress with Fire Blast

---
Gen. Empoleon switched in Palkia.
Palkia is exerting its pressure!
Forretress used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!

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100% vs.
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100%

Gen switches in Palkia, probably to roast Forretress like last time. Thnakfully, because its not raining, my Bold Wobbuffet isn’t 2 hit koed by any of its attacks, as it’s a mixed Lustrous Orb one. So I decide to make another obvious move and switch to Wobbuffet.

Nothing on my team cares about Stealth Rocks that much, so it wasn't that eventful of a turn for me. I remember last game that Theorymon carries a Wobbuffet (hahahaha) and that he lost his Forretress before hand. So instead of using Fire Blast I opt for a different move.

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Theorymon switched in Wobbuffet.
Palkia used Aqua Tail.
Wobbuffet lost 35% of its health.
[FONT=&quot]Wobbuffet's leftovers restored its health a little!
Wobbuffet restored 6% of its health.[/FONT]
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71% vs.
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100%

Good, he decides to Aqua Tail me. Now, because its mixed, I don’t want to Mirror coat or Counter Palkia, because if I mispredict, Wobbuffet is screwed! If I encore Palkia, I could get ether free set-up time for Forretress or Giratina-O, so I think its best to do that.

I use Aqua Tail to deal a nice percent to Wobbuffet and now I have a decision to make, I could try to take him down with Outrage, being a 2HKO at his current percent, or I could use Aqua Tail again and maybe get enough damage on him. I decided Outrage and prayed for only a two turn as otherwise Forretress will have a field day.

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Palkia used Outrage.
Palkia went on a rampage!
Wobbuffet lost 46% of its health.
Wobbuffet used Encore.
Palkia got an encore!
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31% vs.
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100%

Ouch, Wobbuffet won’t be doing much more this match. I better hope Outrage lasts 3 turns, or Wobbuffet will switch in on Forretress as it ends.

Ok, here is turn one of my Outrage and I get Encored (as expected) I hope Outrage will end next turn, otherwise Forretress gets two free turns of setting up entry hazards.

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Theorymon switched in Forretress.
Palkia used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 19% of its health.
Your team is no longer protected by Safeguard!
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87% vs.
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100%

Lady Luck has smiled upon me this time, as not only is Palkia still locked into Outrage, Safeguard has also ran out. I can now safely set up a second layer of Toxic Spikes.

Apparently it is not my lucky day, I have one more turn of Outraging left. Safeguard also just ended, meaning that I will get poisoned on the next switch in.

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Palkia used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 20% of its health.
Forretress used Toxic Spikes.
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Palkia's rampage ended.
Palkia became confused!
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73% vs.
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100%

Okay, now Gen will likely do one of two things: He will stay in, predicting a switch, or he will switch to Wobbuffet to put up another safeguard. I decide to switch in Darkrai, as Wobbufffet is a huge threat to this to this team thanks to Safeguard. I will save Clefairy for later, as I can’t afford to let Wobbuffet set up another Safeguard.

Alright, I don't want to risk any of my team getting poisoned, so I switch to Wobbuffet so he can set up another Safeguard and help me later on in the game.

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Theorymon switched in Darkrai.
Gen. Empoleon switched in Wobbuffet.
Wobbuffet was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Wobbuffet is hurt by poison!
Wobbuffet lost 6% of its health.

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100% vs.
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82%

Good, I predicted right! Now, because I have used Wobbuffet in every one of my matches, I know one very important thing about it. Never cripple Wobbuffet, just kill it. If I try and trick Wobbuffet, it could encore me and set up a sweeper. Gen could also switch out to a choice user to ruin trick. I decide to just Dark Pulse it so Wobbuffet won’t cause too much trouble later.

Apparently Theorymon completely outpredicts me and I'm now facing Wobbuffets true rival, Darkrai. I can't do anything to hurt Darkrai as he is a Dark-type. The best I can do is use "Encore" if he tries to cripple my Wobbuffet by tricking him a Scarf, then he is forced to return it back to himself. In the off Chance it isn't a Scarf-Darkrai then it will put me in an advantage.

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Darkrai used Dark Pulse.
It's super effective!
Wobbuffet lost 54% of its health.
Wobbuffet used Encore.
Darkrai got an encore!
Wobbuffet is hurt by poison!
Wobbuffet lost 12% of its health.
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100% vs.
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22%

Thank god I didn’t trick! I’m sure he is going switch now, but there is nothing I can do, as Shadow Tag’s grip is making Darkrai stay in place.

Scizor is now the pokemon who is looking for some early blood.

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Gen. Empoleon switched in Scizor.
Darkrai used Dark Pulse.
It's not very effective...
Scizor lost 20% of its health.
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100% vs.
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68%

Okay, I can’t afford to let Darkrai die yet, so I’ll be predictable as hell and switch to Forretress.


He resists Dark-type attacks and can use U-turn either A) killing Darkrai or B) letting me scout. Both are fantastic options, though I bet Theorymon is going to switch to Forretress.

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Theorymon switched in Forretress.
Scizor used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 11% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon switched in Wobbuffet.
Wobbuffet is hurt by poison!
Wobbuffet lost 6% of its health.

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68% vs.
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15%

Wobbuffet is being a pest right now. Thankfully, my Forretress is faster than Wobbuffet, so I decide its best to sacrifice Forretress by exploding, as Wobbuffet won’t survive it now. This way, Wobbuffet can't set up a sweeper.

I need to set up Safeguard before I do, to ease my sweep. If I can do this THEN Encore his Forretress I should be in a good position.

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Forretress used Explosion.
Wobbuffet lost 15% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Wobbuffet fainted.
Theorymon's Forretress fainted.
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KOed vs.
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KOed
5-5

The first blood of the match is two pokemon, not one. I will be predictable again and switch in Clefairy, as it is most certainly going to ether kill or cripple a Pokemon.

Too bad Wobbuffet is slow as fuck. The first two pokemon go down and now I have to decide who to switch in. I know Theorymon will switch in his Clefairy, so I need to sacrifice a pokemon in order to take it down with Scizor.

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Theorymon switched in Clefairy (level 2).
Gen. Empoleon switched in Palkia.
Palkia is exerting its pressure!
Palkia was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
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100% vs.
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87%

Good, Clefairy is ready to take down the titan of Space with an Endeavor. This is good, as the rest of my team really hates mixed Palkia, I don’t want to risk a speed tie with my Speced Palkia.

Palkia is the most expendable member on my team right now, she won't outspeed much, or get a sweep (against this team)

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Palkia used Spacial Rend.
Clefairy lost 100% of its health.
Clefairy hung on using its Focus Sash!
Clefairy used Endeavor.
Palkia lost 87% of its health.
Palkia is hurt by poison!
Palkia lost 0% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Palkia fainted.
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7% vs.
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KOed
5-4

Clefairy saved my ass here, now Palkia is dead! Clefairy isn’t going to cause much more mischief this match, so its time to let Clefairy scout the next switch in.


Palkia goes down after taking Clefairy down with it. The only logical switch in is going to be Scizor so I can Pursuit Cleffa and never have to see it again.

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Gen. Empoleon switched in Scizor.

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7% vs.
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55%

Scizor is going to ether Pursuit or U-turn, so I’ll just scout it.

Scizor comes in and is ready for some blood on his already red claws.

Clefairy used Protect.
Clefairy protected itself!
Scizor used Pursuit.
Clefairy protected itself!

Time to sacrifice Clefairy.
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Scizor used Pursuit.
Clefairy lost 7% of its health.
Theorymon's Clefairy fainted.
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KOed vs.
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55%
4-4

Scizor has to die, so its time to switch in Palkia.

My only question is if his Clefairy was switching out, or staying in. Scizor is now set up bait, but luckily Theorymon doesn't carry any set-uppers on his team.

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Theorymon switched in Palkia.
Palkia is exerting its pressure!
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100% vs.
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55%

I am in a very tough position here. Gen has two big threats that could tear apart the team if I make the wrong move. If I surf Scizor, then Dialga gets a free switch in. If I Draco meteor, than anything else can get a free switch in. If I Fire Blast Scizor, then Kyogre gets a free switch in. I decide to Fire Blast, as I can’t afford to let Choice Scarf Dialga switch in yet.

I need to see what his Palkia is going to do, and since his Wobbuffet is at such low health my team can handle it for the most part.

Palkia used Fire Blast.
It's super effective!
Scizor lost 55% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Scizor fainted.
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100% vs.
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KOed
4-3

Scizor is dead! Unfortnately, I don’t think I’m going to win, as Scarf Dialga is still alive.

Scizor goes down, but I know exactly who would love to come into a Choice Scarf Fire Blast

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Gen. Empoleon switched in Kyogre.
Kyogre's Drizzle caused a storm!
Rain began to fall!
Kyogre was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
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100% vs.
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87%

Alrght, its time to let Wobbuffet die to a Choice Speced Thunder. : (


I'm using the ever famous Scarf-Kyogre, the reason I picked this over my beloved Specs-Kyogre: I was helping someone make a team based around Scarf Kyogre

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Theorymon switched in Wobbuffet (lvl 100 Wobbuffet ?).
Kyogre used Thunder.
Wobbuffet lost 32% of its health.
Kyogre is hurt by poison!
Kyogre lost 6% of its health.
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6% vs.
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81%

Woah, I might be able to win now! Its obvious that this is a Choice Scarf Kyogre, because it doesn’t have leftovers or life orb, and Thunder didn’t KO Wobbuffet. This means free set-up time for Giratina-O!

Thunder is a safe option to use on this team, he doesn't have a resist and Wobbuffet is weak enough to get beaten by it.

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Kyogre used Thunder.
Wobbuffet lost 6% of its health.
Theorymon's Wobbuffet fainted.
Kyogre is hurt by poison!
Kyogre lost 12% of its health.
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KOed vs.
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69%
3-3

Ok, Wobbuffet dies, but for a good cause. Her scouting allows me to safely switch in Giratina-O.

Wobbuffet goes down, I'm locked into Thunder, so I can expect him to bring in some sort of Electric-type resist.

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Theorymon switched in Giratina-o.
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100% vs.
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69%

Since this is Scarf Ogre, I’m going to set up a Substitute on the switch. Gen still has the advantage, as if he switches in Scarf Dialga, he will almost certainly sweep the rest of the team! My only hope is to Dragon Pulse his Dialga, sacrifice Giartina-O, and put it to sleep with Darkrai. My situation is very bleak right now.


Scarf Kyogre will lose to Origin if it is the Calm Mind version (which I know it is) I don't have much in the way of beating it, so I switch to the only pokemon that hasn't been used yet.

Gen. Empoleon switched in Groudon.
Groudon's Drought intensified the sun's rays!
The rain stopped.
The sun began to shine!
Groudon was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Giratina-o used Substitute.
Giratina-o lost 25% of its health.
Giratina-o made a substitute!
The sun continues to shine.
Groudon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Groudon restored 6% of its health.
Groudon is hurt by poison!
Groudon lost 6% of its health.
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75% vs.
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94%

Groudon?! this thing needs to die now! Its probably support Groudon, but its still powerful enough to kill everything but Palkia, and Darkrai can't OHKO even with ice beam.

To be honest a whole lot of nothing happened this turn. I do make an error here, though. Thinking that Origin has the same ability as regular, I use Earthquake in hopes of breaking the substitute.

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Giratina-o used Dragon Pulse.
Groudon lost 53% of its health.
Giratina-o makes ground moves miss with Levitate!
Groudon used Earthquake.
Groudon's attack missed!
Groudon is hurt by poison!
Groudon lost 12% of its health.
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75% vs.
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35%

It appears that Gen has made the common mistake of Earthquaking Giratina-O. one more Dragon Pulse will seal its fate.

That's what I get for not seeing that face in Ubers often (and not reading the log mostly). Stone Edge should break the sub some, so I just pray that it doesn't miss

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Giratina-o used Calm Mind.
Giratina-o's special attack was raised.
Giratina-o's special defence was raised.
Groudon used Stone Edge.
The substitute took damage for Giratina-o!
Giratina-o's substitute faded!
Groudon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Groudon restored 6% of its health.
Groudon is hurt by poison!
Groudon lost 19% of its health.
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75% vs.
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22%

CRAP! I misclicked! Now Dialga well most certainly kick my ass now x_x. Well… Groudon’s only way of harming Giratina-O is Stone Edge, so I hope it misses. If it does, I might be able to win!


Theorymon Calm Minds while I break his sub with Stone Edge. I'm feeling pretty ballsy and I am pretty sure I can get another Stone Edge hit on his Orgin.


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Giratina-o used Substitute.
Giratina-o lost 25% of its health.
Giratina-o made a substitute!
Groudon used Stone Edge.
The substitute took damage for Giratina-o!
Giratina-o's substitute faded!
Groudon is hurt by poison!
Groudon lost 25% of its health.
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50% vs.
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10%

Common, Groudon, miss your Stone Edge!

Theorymon is hoping to Toxic Stall me while hoping for a miss. I can't switch out giving him the advantage over the few pokemon I have left. Stone Edge just needs to make its mark, since Groudon will die next turn.

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Giratina-o used Substitute.
Giratina-o lost 25% of its health.
Giratina-o made a substitute!
Groudon used Stone Edge.
A critical hit!
The substitute took damage for Giratina-o!
Giratina-o's substitute faded!
Groudon is hurt by poison!
Groudon lost 10% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Groudon fainted.
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25% vs.
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KOed
3-2

There goes the match, Stone Miss didn’t miss me : (. I brace myself for a horrible Dialga sweep.


Stone Edge hits and Origin is sitting at 25% health, just enough for my Dialga to come in and Dragon Pulse it to death.


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Gen. Empoleon switched in Dialga.

I'm running Choice Scarf Dialga, so I should have no issue outspeeding it, though his Darkrai and Palkia can both hit me before I hit them.

Dialga is exerting its pressure!
Dialga used Dragon Pulse.
It's super effective!
Giratina-o lost 25% of its health.
Theorymon's Giratina-o fainted.
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KOed vs.
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94%
2-2

Alright, I’ll switch in Darkrai and pray that he doesn’t switch, as I lack Focus Blast.

I'm locked into Dragon Pulse, thinking about what Theorymon is going to do.

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Theorymon switched in Darkrai.

Common Darkrai, put this Choice Scarfed terror to sleep!

He switches in Darkrai, probably planning to put me to sleep. Lucky, I have a already status'd Kyogre ready to come in and start blasting off Thunders.


Gen. Empoleon switched in Kyogre.
Kyogre's Drizzle caused a storm!
The sun faded.
Rain began to fall!
Darkrai used Dark Void.
But it failed!
The rain continues to fall.
Kyogre is hurt by poison!
Kyogre lost 6% of its health.
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100% vs.
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51%

Damn it, Toxic Spikes have hindered me. I have to switch in Palkia, it’s the only other Pokemon I have left.

Kyogre is in safely and I click Thunder. I have a 30% chance to stun the opponent with it, so if I do have a good chance at winning.


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Theorymon switched in Palkia (lvl 100 Palkia).
Palkia is exerting its pressure!
Kyogre used Thunder.
Palkia lost 40% of its health.
Kyogre is hurt by poison!
Kyogre lost 12% of its health.
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60% vs.
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38%

Okay, I have almost no hope of winning here. If can kill his Kyogre, I will be satisfied. My only hope of winning is if Scarf Dialga opts to Aura Sphere me instead of Draco Meteor me, as Darkrai has a chance of surviving a timid Aura Sphere
.

Palkia comes into my Thunder and loses a large chunk of health. Thunder is the move I'm locked into and the only move that is worth using, as switching might cause the end of my Dialga.


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Kyogre used Thunder.
Palkia lost 40% of its health.
Palkia is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Palkia used Spacial Rend.
Kyogre lost 38% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Kyogre fainted.
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20% vs.
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KOed
2-1

Ouch, Lady Luck has her revenge on me, Gen’s ghostly Palkia must be smiling at mine's misfortune now.


I smile as Palkia is slowed, Dialga is the last pokemon I can switch in.


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Gen. Empoleon switched in Dialga.
Dialga is exerting its pressure!

Okay, I have a plan that might win me the match. Gen doesn’t know that my Darkrai lacks Focus Blast. Because of this, he might not want to Draco Meteor, as it would let Darkrai have a chance of killing Dialga. Darkrai is bulky enough to survive a Dragon Pulse or maybe an Aura Sphere. I decide to switch in Darkrai, as he is my only hope.


I then realize how I can't hit both Palkia and Darkrai for a KO. My only solution is to use Aura Sphere and hope that Darkrai comes in and is OHKOd by it.


Theorymon switched in Darkrai.
Dialga used Aura Sphere.
It's super effective!
Darkrai lost 94% of its health.
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6% vs.
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88%

WOW, thank god Stealth Rock wasn’t up! Darkrai is almost dead, so I pray that Dark Void doesn’t miss…

Though I predict right, it was all for nothing as my Dialga was 6% shy of making the match for me. This is the difference between Timid and Modest, though.

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Darkrai used Dark Void.
Dialga fell asleep!
Dialga is fast asleep!
Dialga lost 12% of its health.
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6% vs.
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74%

Okay, it didn’t miss. Now I have to hope that he stays asleep for 3 more turns, or I lose.

I just hope for a one turn sleep.

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Theorymon switched in Palkia (lvl 100 Palkia).
Palkia is exerting its pressure!
Dialga is fast asleep!
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20% vs.
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74%

Oh God, Please stay aseep Dialga. I hope Palkia gets a wheel chair or something, because he haves to hit Dialga, or I’m screwed. Also, I better hope Palkia has 20-20 vison, as Draco Meteor has a 10% chance of missing, despite the fact that Palkia is wearing glasses. Its all up to the Hax Gods to decide the fate of the match now…


fuck

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Dialga is fast asleep!
Palkia used Draco Meteor.
Dialga lost 75% of its health.
Gen. Empoleon's Dialga fainted.
Theorymon wins!
2-0

YES! Dialga, my nightmare is dead, and I win! Wow, that was an intense match, Gen played very well and the odds were not with me. Thank god for Darkrai’s Dark Void sealing the fate of the match. For now on, I’m not under estimating Scarf Kyogre or Dialga!

Theorymon played an extremely well played match, and I was glad that his Clefairy got some action, and crippled my Palkia. I'll let him take the Props and Slops, though.

Props: -Darkrai and Palkia saved my ass from Dialga!
- Clefairy took down the huge threat of Palkia.
-Gen Empoleon for using both anti-lead Scizor and Scarf Dialga, two underated threats

Slops:-Me being pretty predictable in the beginning.
- Both me and Gen screwing up when Giratina-O and Groudon were fighting.
 
Well it was a great match, besides both of our misclicks =]

Well played Theorymon
 
Awesome, great warstory Theorymon. I haven't seen any warstories written by you before, but this one was definetely one of the better Uber ones that I've read in a while. I also enjoyed seeing Clefairy succeed in Ubers, that thing has potential.
 
Every time I read warstories like this I'm in the mood to go on the Uber ladder. Hopefully I'll see one of you guys there! Nice warstory and thanks.
 
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this warstory. The match was very entertaining and full of suspense throughout. I thought the end was funny: "fuck".
 
No offense, Gen. Empoleon, but many people tend to see "big" or well known member's names and immediately say "supreme" and *****.

Not that this was bad, but it doesn't merit 5 stars. Maybe 4. It was a nice warstory nevertheless. Not as good as some of your other ones though.
 
No Parasect, boo :(

jk, great job. It really says something when a warstory can include earthquake against levitators and mis-clicks and STILL be pretty good. :)
 
No offense, Gen. Empoleon, but many people tend to see "big" or well known member's names and immediately say "supreme" and *****.

Not that this was bad, but it doesn't merit 5 stars. Maybe 4. It was a nice warstory nevertheless. Not as good as some of your other ones though.

I agree. The misclicks and the fact that my team isn't too reliable doesn't make this the best Warstory ever. This is my first one though, so I think I did pretty decently.
 
I agree. The misclicks and the fact that my team isn't too reliable doesn't make this the best Warstory ever. This is my first one though, so I think I did pretty decently.

Yes, it was a good effort. The first time's pretty much the worst.

Anyway, what's with the sudden spurt of co-narrated warstories?
 
Yes, it was a good effort. The first time's pretty much the worst.

Anyway, what's with the sudden spurt of co-narrated warstories?

Not necessarily . . . >_>

My first time is archived. I don't get why people encourage the "first time" to be bad. I mean sure, give the guy a bit of break if it's the first, but encourage people to make the first time great. Writing warstories after all, is really not that hard-- and if you do it right, it's a great way for even a newbie to prove he has a brain.
 
It was a nice enough warstory, one worth reading to the end. Warstories are meant to entertain, and this one did =]

Agreeing with Chou on the whole "first warstories are always bad" thing. While it is true that subsequent warstories tend to be better because the writer has more experience and can build on the criticisms from earlier warstories, the first try should be as good as the writer can make it. My first warstory was archived, and then my next two weren't, which goes to show that the first is not always the worst by any means.

I really enjoy reading ubers warstories as I'm very interested in the tier, but can never bring myself to actually try playing in it. Good job Theorymon and Gen.

EDIT: Gen, your signature is priceless haha.
 
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