A Battle of Imps and Titans: An Uber Warstory

[Jimbo]

I thought this was a pretty good warstory.

I especially liked this comment:

fuck

Best way to describe what was happening heh. Unlike some of the other people itt I thought the battle was pretty good but maybe that's because I don't play Ubers!

 

[reachzero]

That was a truly fantastic Ubers match. And one of the better Warstories you'll ever read.

 

[Matthew]

I agree with reachzero, also yeah my signature is awesome.

 

[Lightsabre]

nice warstory. I enjoyed it

 

[locopoke]

Oh, that was a great laugh.

Nice writing but the battle sucked
No surprises though

Flying, get over this grudge you have against Theorymon because I can guarentee that it's going to get you banned eventually. Why do you even dislike him? Are you just bored? You have no reason to say that the battle sucked =\

 

[Jibaku]

CRAP! I misclicked! Now Dialga well most certainly kick my ass now x_x. Well… Groudon’s only way of harming Giratina-O is Stone Edge, so I hope it misses. If it does, I might be able to win

Aww :(

For a first warstory, this is excellent, though I'm a bit saddened by the misclick. This is the first warstory to feature SubCM Giratina-O, which gets you points alongside with Clefairy (which will make Articanus drool :)).

But

I know Theorymon will switch in his Clefairy, so I need to sacrifice a pokemon in order to take it down with Scizor.

Gen, was it important that you keep Scizor alive over Palkia? Scizor would've destroyed Clefairy due to Toxic Spikes immunity and Palkia would've still been alive

 

[diinbong]

Your signature Gen oh my god...

Anyway, I hope I see you guys on the ladder and awesome story again Theorymon.

 

[Matthew]

Aww :(

For a first warstory, this is excellent, though I'm a bit saddened by the misclick. This is the first warstory to feature SubCM Giratina-O, which gets you points alongside with Clefairy (which will make Articanus drool :)).

But

Gen, was it important that you keep Scizor alive over Palkia? Scizor would've destroyed Clefairy due to Toxic Spikes immunity and Palkia would've still been alive

In retrospect you are probably right. Though I did at the time value my Scizor over my Palkia; I don't remember why I did, but there was some faulty logic

 

[sporeing]

A round of applause for our great battlers :D

 

[noob3]

what a sucky battle. EQ on a levitator. trying to sleep a poisoned pokemon. wobuffets doing nothing.

terrible.

 

[Misa]

I agree with reachzero, also yeah my signature is awesome.

God I laughed so hard when I saw that.

Also, I've wondered what the hell clefairy would do in ubers, but you might've as well used a cleffa since it could've surprised the readers a bit more. By the way, nice ending with the darkrai and Palkia. (how did Aura Sphere not OHKO?)

 

[Matthew]

what a sucky battle. EQ on a levitator. trying to sleep a poisoned pokemon. wobuffets doing nothing.

terrible.

Uh sleeping a poisoned pokemon? I predicted a Dark Void. There was nothing terrible about that part.

 

[urza220]

Pretty entertaining battle; I like the descrepencies in the trains of thought in some of the comments between you two. However, as I mentioned before, Gen., there is still some of the following going on:

8=====D ~~~~~~ :nerd:
Smogonites----Praise-----Gen.

As a few have posted, people tend to write better warstories when they have more experience and feedback. Don't over-praise someone by posting "zomgbbq best warstory evar!" on every warstory. Gen. is an intelligent person, he doesn't need to be placated, and, while he already writes some of the best warstories here, posting a thoughtful critique will help him write even better ones.

 

[Shelcario]

Very nice ubers warstory, another enjoyable read.

 

[Wes]

Go clefairy! Anyway, great match, and again double commentary is really nice. I enjoyed it.

 

[Garganator]

As always, good and solid warstory. It's good to see that Theorymon made his own warstory (no Jumpluff, thx alot, that bitch is annoying and kickass with Sun under belt :P).

Not that this was bad, but it doesn't merit 5 stars. Maybe 4. It was a nice warstory nevertheless. Not as good as some of your other ones though.

You know... in my own opinion after writing my previous UU warstory it's quite hard to find really good Ubers battle for warstory, which isn't really too-extremely paced. And I think that's the reason for your opinion. And those misclicks of course. It's my opinion, but I have feeling like this when I try to find really good battle worth warstory. I have one, but I'm still not sure it's worth to post it.

Oh yeah, no Parasect or Jumpluff, boo :P. And credits for funny signature, Gen ;). And yeah, huge props for Clefairy, lol.

Anyway, what's with the sudden spurt of co-narrated warstories?

:D

Agreeing with Chou on the whole "first warstories are always bad" thing. While it is true that subsequent warstories tend to be better because the writer has more experience and can build on the criticisms from earlier warstories, the first try should be as good as the writer can make it. My first warstory was archived, and then my next two weren't, which goes to show that the first is not always the worst by any means.

I think it's that some people try to post warstories just to post it. I don't think it's a good idea. But if you put some effort in it, even first one may be really solid. Anyway, good warstory Theorymon.

 

[Midnight_Glare]

I enjoyed reading it! Cool clefairy!