CaP Prevos - Rebble & Tactite Pokedex Submissions

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DHR-107

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Because I thought I had done this and I hadn't.

Our prevos now have new looks and new names! I have dug around in the treasure trove that is the CaP Archive and discovered that big brother Stratagem does have some dex entries! These are as below:

Stratagem's Dex Entries said:
Game 1: STRATAGEM'S peculiar shape is a result of the wind erosion it constantly experiences moving at high speeds. The older a STRATAGEM gets, the smaller and more streamlined its body will be.

Game 2: STRATAGEM roam in volcanic regions, thriving on the intense heat. Their spontaneous and destructive nature has prevented much exploration in these areas.

Game 3: The claws on STRATAGEM'S limbs are actually rather brittle. Instead of using those for stabbing, STRATAGEM'S uses them as a launching-pad for its various energy attacks.
Please use these as your basis for your new dex entries for Rebble and Tactite!

Can you please also submit a height and weight to give me an idea of where you guys think we should be for those stats!

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Legal Pokedex submissions must meet the following standards
  • Pokedex Entries must have flawless grammar. Smogon has a Grammar & Prose team that will help identify mistakes.
  • Pokedex Entries cannot be longer than 25 words.
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    • Numbers 0-9
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Work In Progress (WIP) Pokedex Entries can be posted at any time for comments from the community.

No more than three WIP Pokedex Entries can be posted by any individual person through the entire course of the submission thread. This limit applies to ALL posts made by a single person, even if previous posts are edited or deleted. This limit is intended to curb the tendency for some submitters to spam the thread repeatedly with multiple Pokedex Entries. This detracts from other submissions and makes it difficult for commenters to survey the submission thread.

Do not bump your WIP Pokedex Entries by posting them repeatedly, or making minor wording changes. Bumping will result in the disqualification of all Pokedex Entries by the offender. Editing or deleting bump posts will not prevent disqualification.

Only ONE Final Submission can be made per person.

Pokedex Entry Final Submissions can only be posted after a CAP Moderator posts in the thread that final submissions are open. Any final submission posted prior to the Moderator notification post, will disqualify the submitter from the poll entirely. Even if the offending post is edited later or deleted, the submitter will still be disqualified for the remainder of the thread. This ensures that all submitters have equal opportunity to post final submissions without anyone unfairly "jumping the gun".

Pokedex entries Final Submissions must posted exactly in the following format and in the following exact order:
  • The first line of the post must have the words "Final Submission" in bold on it's own line. No other text may be included before the bold heading.
  • A blank line
  • "<Pokemon Name>, the <Species Name> Pokemon", with the Pokemon name and the Species Name in bold
  • A blank line
  • The Diamond Pokedex Entry submission. Start with the word "Diamond" in bold, then a colon (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
  • A blank line
  • The Pearl Pokedex Entry submission. Start with the word "Pearl" in bold, then a colon (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
  • A blank line
  • The Platinum Pokedex Entry Submission. Start with the word "Platinum" in bold, then a colol (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
Below the Final Submission you can post other comments, explanations, etc.

Example final submission:

Final Submission

Skorupi, the Scorpion Pokémon

Diamond: It grips prey with its tail claws and injects poison. It tenaciously hangs on until the poison takes.

Pearl: It lives in arid lands. It buries utself in sand and lies in wait for unsuspecting prey.

Platinum: As soon as the tail claws close, its needle tips secrete poison. It can survive a year without food.
Any Final Submission that does not follow the proper format will be disqualified.

Have fun!

Prevos as they stand:


Rebble
Type:
Rock
Abilities: Levitate / Solid Rock / Sniper
Stats: 45 / 25 / 65 / 75 / 55 / 80 (345)



Bolderdash Tactite
Type:
Rock
Abilities: Levitate / Technician / Sniper
Stats: 70 / 40 / 65 / 100 / 65 / 95 (435)
 
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Rebble, the Comet Pokémon
Diamond: REBBLE is born from comets and asteroids flying through space. As soon as they let go of those, they fall down to earth.

Pearl: REBBLE have sharp claws. They use these to cling to rocks. If the rock moves, the REBBLE clings on it and travels along.

Platinum: Some REBBLE are said to be millions of years old, having existed before our planet. Their eye crystal is made from unknown minerals.

Tactite, the Space Gem Pokémon

Diamond: TACTITE takes distance from its opponent as it plans its attack. Its laser beams are hard to dodge.
Pearl: Because TACTITE strategically tries to overwhelm its opponents, it has a tough matchup against unpredictable foes with surprise attacks.
Platinum: TACTITE has a large eye that emits light. It uses this to send signals to fellow TACTITE and plan attacks.

I saw something about height/weight in the OP. Not sure how to implement this in the submission though. To me, Rebble looks like something about 40 cm weighing 21 kg while Tactite could be 67 cm and 56 kg. Space rocks can be quite heavy.
 
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Rebble, the Space Rock Pokémon

Diamond: REBBLE gathers mass by collecting rock material around its core. It protects this core at any cost.
Pearl: The crystal core is made from an unknown substance. When attacked, it fires stones from its body at high velocity.
Platinum: A mysterious Pokémon said to be from outer space. Their sparkling cores are prized everywhere by gem hunters.

Tactite, the Space Gem Pokémon

Diamond: These Pokémon are shown to have great intelligence. Each jewel on its body contains knowledge similar to advanced computers.
Pearl: TACTITE prefer to stay away fighting their opponents directly. Instead, they shoot out large blasts of energy from a distance.
Platinum: A TACTITE is always computing multiple strategies every second. An information overload can cause it to become confused.
 
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Rebble, the Rebellious Pokémon
Diamond: REBBLEs are rebellious and have been known to disobey their guardians and fly into them for distraction.
Pearl: REBBLEs often run away from their caves to live somewhere else this however, never works.
Platinum: REBBLE have been known to try floating, they are inexperienced and often crash into others.

Tactite, the Comet Pokémon
Diamond: Upon evolving, it leaves its rebellious phase and gets more strategic against its foes.
Pearl: TACTITE fly at quick speeds and shoot out their PALEO WAVEs at enemies.
Platinum: TACTITE use their tails to help their strategies work out against enemies.
 
Final Submission

Rebble, the Rubble pokemon
Diamond: This pokemon can be seen flying at high speeds in the sky. It is rumoured to have come from outer space.
Pearl: Created when a meteorite crashes onto the surface of this planet, REBBLE are held together by an unknown source of energy.
Platinum: Even though this pokemon seems rather sturdy, REBBLE can be shattered in one hit.

Tactite, the Mineral pokemon
Diamond: TACTITE utilise their speed in battles to get an edge over their opponents often. However, side effects include having an increasingly fragile body.
Pearl: After fighting countless battles, TACTITE have been observed to melt their claws and forge new ones in volcanoes.
Platinum: Even though it looks like as if it uses it head to think, the gem attached to its body is its brain, which is able to think of battle plans in mere seconds.
 
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DHR-107

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I am giving you guys about 48 hours to get your Final Submissions in! Make sure you copy the format in the OP!
 
Final Submission

Rebble, the Comet Pokémon

Height: 1'31" Weight: 46.3 lbs

Diamond: REBBLE is born from comets and asteroids flying through space. As soon as they let go of those, they fall down to earth.

Pearl: REBBLE have sharp claws. They use these to cling to rocks. If the rock moves, the REBBLE clings onto it and travels along.

Platinum: Some REBBLE are said to be millions of years old, having existed before our planet. Their eye crystal is made from unknown minerals.


Tactite, the Space Gem Pokémon

Height: 2'20" Weight: 123.5 lbs

Diamond: TACTITE takes distance from its opponent as it plans its attack. Its laser beams are hard to dodge for most opponents.

Pearl: Because TACTITE strategically tries to overwhelm its opponents, it has a tough matchup against unpredictable foes with surprise attacks.

Platinum: TACTITE has a large eye that emits light. It uses this to send signals to fellow TACTITE and plan raid attacks.
 
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Final Submission

Rebble, the Rebellious Pokémon

Height: 0'04" Weight: 1.0 lbs / 0.45 kg

Diamond: REBBLEs are rebellious and have been known to disobey their guardians and fly into them for distraction.

Pearl: REBBLEs often run away from their caves to live somewhere else this however, never works.

Platinum: REBBLE have been known to try flying, they are very inexperienced and often crash into others.


Tactite, the Comet Pokémon

Height: 1'05" Weight: 26.4 lbs / 12 kg

Diamond: Upon evolving, it leaves its rebellious phase and gets more strategic against its foes.

Pearl: TACTITE fly at quick speeds and shoot out their PALEO WAVEs at enemies.

Platinum: TACTITE use their tails to help their strategies work out against enemies.
 

DHR-107

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If youve got any final changes make them now as I will be putting up the poll when I get home (about 30-45 minutes!)
 
Not a submission (already made that) but I find it sad that we only got 2 final submissions (3 if we count the illegal one from Prototypetrainer). Is the interest for stuff like this really that low?
 
Final Submission

Rebble, the Rubble Pokemon

Diamond: REBBLE will often disobey their trainers for no apparent reason. They dislike being away from others of their own kind.

Pearl: It is thought that REBBLE came from space. They build up energy in their core and save it for when they need it.

Platinum: REBBLE are often lost among the rubble on cave floors. They let loose powerful energy blasts from their core when disturbed.


Tactite, the Tactical Pokemon

Diamond: It's body is extremely fragile. They prefer to overwhelm their opponents with speed and powerful energy shots.

Pearl: TACTITE are often seen in groups communicating with each other to defeat enemies. It is very rare to see a TACTITE alone in the wild.

Platinum: TACTITE's cores hold large amounts of energy within them. They have been known to snipe opponents from long distances with lasers.
 
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