Monotype Celebi (Grass) [QC: 2/2] [GP: 1/1]

[Rei]

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Grass)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Giga Drain
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Earth Power / Weather Ball
item: Life Orb
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Celebi is a great choice for Grass teams due to its bulk, access to Nasty Plot, and Psychic typing, allowing it to threaten Poison- and Fighting-types that give its teammates trouble like Toxapex and Cobalion. Nasty Plot turns Celebi into a dangerous sweeper, that can dismantle troubling matchups such as Poison and Steel. Giga Drain allows it to have passive recovery and mitigates Life Orb's recoil damage. Psychic helps greatly in the Poison- and the Fighting-type matchup, as Celebi can take care of Toxapex and Kommo-o with it. Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison-types such as Excadrill and Skuntank. Weather Ball can be used over Earth Power on sun teams to hit Corviknight and Ferrothorn when sun is active. Celebi should try to come in on passive attacks such as Toxapex's Scald, on a predicted switch, via U-turn, or after a teammate faints. Nasty Plot should be used on Pokemon it can threaten out such as Toxapex and Keldeo. Having 252 Special Attack EVs and Life Orb allows Celebi to be as powerful as possible, and 252 Speed EVs with a Timid nature allow it to outpace Lucario and Speed tie with Jirachi.

Celebi loves Stealth Rock support from Ferrothorn, as it makes it easier for Celebi to sweep mid- to late-game and can swap into faster Poison-type Pokemon like Gengar. Celebi also appreciates Ferrothorn's Steel typing to take physical attacks or Ice-type attacks from Pokemon like Mamoswine and Alolan Ninetales. Appletun is another key member that forms a defensive core with Ferrothorn and can come in on Fire-type attacks thanks to its Dragon typing and Thick Fat. Choice Scarf Virizion provides great speed control and can OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike, use its Fighting-type STAB moves greatly in the Dark-type matchup to take care of Hydreigon and Bisharp, and handle Choice Scarf Charizard with Stone Edge. Virizion can also serve on sun teams as a secondary Sunny Day setter if Whimsicott is eliminated. Rotom-C is another good teammate to help take care of Flying-types such as Togekiss and can use Nasty Plot, Substitute, and Dark Pulse to greatly help out in the Ghost-type matchup. Whimsicott is another good member, especially if Celebi is running Weather Ball, thanks to its Prankster-boosted Sunny Day, allowing Celebi to sweep Steel teams with Weather Ball. Whimsicott is also able to switch into Dragon-type attacks for Celebi and hit back with Moonblast. Shiftry is good to pair with Celebi because it helps greatly with the Psychic- and Ghost-type matchup, using its STAB attacks to take care of troubling Pokemon like Indeedee and Chandelure. In return, Celebi takes care of threats to Shiftry such as Lucario and Toxapex. Venusaur is a nice partner because it can help greatly with Fairy-types such as Togekiss as well as threats to Celebi like Bisharp and Aegislash with Weather Ball when sun is active.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Grass analysis by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Quality checked by: [[maroon, 305839], [Harpp, 320110]]
- Grammar checked by: [[kt3, 228482]]

 

[maroon]

Celebi is a great choice for Grass-type teams due to its bulk, decent movepool, access to Nasty Plot, and its Psychic-typing allowing it to threaten Poison- and Fighting-types that gives its teammates trouble.
- decent movepool is unnecessary so i removed it. also give examples of 'poison and fighting types' that give its teammates trouble

Nasty Plot turns Celebi into a dangerous sweeper, as it can dismantle troubling matchups such as Poison and Fighting.
- you just listed those matchups and fighting is kinda trash. im fine w/ keeping poison but think of something instead of fighting

* add a line about psychic

Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison-types such as Aegislash and Drapion.
- this is wrong, stab psychic should be used vs all poisons that arent skunk/drap.

Weather Ball can be used over Earth Power on HO Grass to hit Corviknight and Ferrothorn.
- make it clear that you mean when sun is active

Having 252 Special Attack EVs allows Celebi to be as powerful as possible and 252 Speed EVs with a Timid nature allows it to outpace x Drapion and Speed tie with Jirachi.
- talk about lo alongside its evs to talk about the boost in power it gives it. also remove drapion as all of them are choice scarf, use a diff example

Celebi loves Stealth Rock support from Ferrothorn, as it makes it easier for Celebi to sweep mid- to late-game. It also appreciates Ferrothorn's Steel-typing to take on physical attacks or Ice-type attacks for Celebi.
- can also switch into faster poison types for celebi such as gengar

Choice Scarf Virizon is a great Speed control that can OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike, use its Fighting STAB out greatly in the Dark-type matchup with taking care of Hydreigon and Bisharp and able to take on Choice Scarf Charizard with Stone Edge.
- kyurem-b is def worth adding as a target of scarf viriz

Rotom-C is another good teammate to help take care of Togekiss and can use Nasty Plot, Substitute and Dark Pulse to greatly help out in the Ghost-type matchup.
- so its an electric-type on grass teams but it being able to take on flying types somehow isnt mentioned? lol

Whimsicott is another good member especially if Celebi is running Weather Ball thanks to Prankster letting it set up Sunny Day before the opposing Pokemon moves. This allows Celebi to sweep Steel type matchup with using Weather Ball.
- is dragon immune and can take care of them with moonblast, thats p nice for celebi

Shirftry and Venusuar are also great to pair with Celebi because both love Celebi for being able to take care of Lucario and Toxapex while Venusaur can help greatly with Fairy-types such as Togekiss and Shiftry can help greatly with the Psychic- and the Ghost-type matchup with using it STABs to take care of troubling Pokemon such as Indeedee and Chandelure.
- rework this and make it 2 seperate sentences

This took way to much work to check, needed to check almost every line. Please be more careful in the future! QC 1/2

 

[Harpp]

[SET COMMENTS]
* 'Giga Drain allows it to have passive recovery from Life Orb damage.' Change this sentence to 'Giga Drain allows it to have passive recovery and mitigates Life Orb's recoil damage'.

* 'Psychic helps greatly in the Poison- and the Fighting-type matchup as Celebi can take care of Toxapex and Kommo-o. Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison / Dark-types such as Excadrill and Skuntank. Weather Ball can be used over Earth Power on HO Grass-type teams that utilize Sunny Day to hit Corviknight and Ferrothorn when sun is active.'

* 'Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison-type / Dark-types such as Excadrill and Skuntank.'

* ' It also appreciates Ferrothorn's Steel-typing to take on physical attacks or Ice-type attacks for Celebi.' Mention Mamoswine and Alolan Ninetales when talking about Ice-type Pokemon which Ferrothorn can cover.

QC 2/2

 

[Milak]

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Grass)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Giga Drain
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Earth Power / Weather Ball
item: Life Orb
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Celebi is a great choice for Grass-type Grass teams due to its bulk, access to Nasty Plot, and its Psychic-typing(RH) Psychic typing allowing it to threaten Poison- and Fighting-types that gives its teammates trouble like Toxapex and Cobailon. Nasty Plot turns Celebi into a dangerous sweeper, as it can dismantle troubling matchups such as Poison and Steel. Giga Drain allows it to have passive recovery and mitigates Life Orb's recoil damage. Psychic helps greatly in the Poison- and the Fighting-type matchup,(AC) as Celebi can take care of Toxapex and Kommo-o. Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison-types such as Excadrill and Skuntank. Weather Ball can be used over Earth Power on Grass-type teams that utilize Sunny Day sun teams to hit Corviknight and Ferrothorn when sun is active. Celebi should try to come in on passive attacks such as Toxapex's scald, on a predicted switch, via U-turn, or after a teammate faints. Nasty Plot should be used on Pokemon it can threaten out such as Toxapex and Keldeo. Having 252 Special Attack EVs and Life Orb allows Celebi to be as powerful as possible and ,(AC) while 252 Speed EVs with a Timid nature allows allow it to outpace Lucario and Speed tie with Jirachi.

Celebi loves Stealth Rock support from Ferrothorn, as it makes it easier for Celebi to sweep mid- to late-game, and can swap into faster Poison-type Pokemon like Gengar. Celebi also appreciates Ferrothorn's Steel-typing(RH) Steel typing to take physical attacks or and Ice-type attacks from Pokemon like Mamoswine and Alolan Ninetales for Celebi. Appletun is another key member that forms the a defensive core with Ferrothorn,(RC) and can come in on Fire-type attacks thanks to its Dragon-typing(RH) Dragon typing and Thick Fat. Choice Scarf Virizon is a provides great Speed speed control that and can OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike, use its Fighting-type(AH) STAB out greatly in the Dark-type matchup with taking care to take care of Hydreigon and Bisharp, and take care of handle (changed it to avoid repetition) Choice Scarf Charizard with Stone Edge. Virizon can also serve on sun teams to be an as a secondary Sunny Day settler setter if Whimsicott is OHKOed eliminated. Rotom-C is another good teammate to help take care of Flying-types such as Togekiss,(AC) and can use Nasty Plot, Substitute,(AC) and Dark Pulse to greatly help out in the Ghost-type matchup. Whimsicott is another good member,(AC) especially if Celebi is running Weather Ball,(AC) thanks to Prankster letting it set up Sunny Day before the opposing Pokemon moves its Prankster-boosted Sunny Day.(RP) This allows ,(AC) allowing (I don't think these two sentences should be separated) Celebi to sweep Steel type matchup teams with using Weather Ball. Whimsicott is also able to switch into Dragon-type attacks for Celebi and take takes care of them with Moonblast. Shirftry Shiftry is good to pair with Celebi because it helps greatly with the Psychic- and Ghost-type matchup with,(AC) using it STAB attacks to take care of troubling Pokemon for it like Indeedee and Chandelure.(AP) and in In return take,(AC) Celebi takes care of threats to Shiftry such as Lucario and Toxapex. Venusaur is a nice partner because it can help greatly with Fairy-types such as Togekiss and greatly help with threats to Celebi with being able to take care of like Bisharp and Aegislash with Weather Ball when sun is active.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Grass analysis by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Quality checked by: [[maroon, 305839], [Harpp, 320110]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

[kt3]

gp 1/1 once done. Please carefully implement, since this is a mixed set of colors. gj :)

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Grass)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Giga Drain
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Earth Power / Weather Ball
item: Life Orb
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Celebi is a great choice for Grass-type Grass teams due to its bulk, access to Nasty Plot, and its Psychic-typing(RH) Psychic typing, (AC) allowing it to threaten Poison- and Fighting-types that gives give its teammates trouble like Toxapex and Cobailon Cobalion. Nasty Plot turns Celebi into a dangerous sweeper, as it that can dismantle troubling matchups such as Poison and Steel. Giga Drain allows it to have passive recovery and mitigates Life Orb's recoil damage. Psychic helps greatly in the Poison- and the Fighting-type matchup,(AC) as Celebi can take care of Toxapex and Kommo-o with it. Earth Power is used to hit most Steel- and Poison-types such as Excadrill and Skuntank. Weather Ball can be used over Earth Power on Grass-type teams that utilize Sunny Day sun teams to hit Corviknight and Ferrothorn when sun is active. Celebi should try to come in on passive attacks such as Toxapex's Scald, on a predicted switch, via U-turn, or after a teammate faints. Nasty Plot should be used on Pokemon it can threaten out such as Toxapex and Keldeo. Having 252 Special Attack EVs and Life Orb allows Celebi to be as powerful as possible, (AC) and 252 Speed EVs with a Timid nature allows allow it to outpace Lucario and Speed tie with Jirachi.

Celebi loves Stealth Rock support from Ferrothorn, as it makes it easier for Celebi to sweep mid- to late-game (RC) and can swap into faster Poison-type Pokemon like Gengar. Celebi also appreciates Ferrothorn's Steel-typing(RH) Steel typing to take physical attacks or Ice-type attacks from Pokemon like Mamoswine and Alolan Ninetales for Celebi. Appletun is another key member that forms the a defensive core with Ferrothorn,(RC) and can come in on Fire-type attacks thanks to its Dragon-typing(RH) Dragon typing and Thick Fat. Choice Scarf Virizon is a Virizion provides great Speed speed control that and can OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike, use its Fighting-type(AH) STAB out moves greatly in the Dark-type matchup with taking care to take care of Hydreigon and Bisharp, and take care of handle (changed it to avoid repetition) Choice Scarf Charizard with Stone Edge. Virizon Virizion can also serve on sun teams to be an as a secondary Sunny Day settler setter if Whimsicott is OHKOed eliminated. Rotom-C is another good teammate to help take care of Flying-types such as Togekiss and can use Nasty Plot, Substitute,(AC) and Dark Pulse to greatly help out in the Ghost-type matchup. Whimsicott is another good member,(AC) especially if Celebi is running Weather Ball,(AC) thanks to Prankster letting it set up Sunny Day before the opposing Pokemon moves its Prankster-boosted Sunny Day.(RP) This allows ,(AC) allowing (I don't think these two sentences should be separated) Celebi to sweep Steel type matchup teams with using Weather Ball. Whimsicott is also able to switch into Dragon-type attacks for Celebi and take care of them hit back (subj; I personally find it weird for "them" not to have an explicit antecedent) with Moonblast. Shirftry Shiftry is good to pair with Celebi because it helps greatly with the Psychic- and Ghost-type matchup with,(AC) using it its STAB attacks to take care of troubling Pokemon for it like Indeedee and Chandelure.(AP) and in In return take,(AC) Celebi takes care of threats to Shiftry such as Lucario and Toxapex. Venusaur is a nice partner because it can help greatly with Fairy-types such as Togekiss and greatly help with as well as threats to Celebi with being able to take care of like Bisharp and Aegislash with Weather Ball when sun is active.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Grass analysis by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Quality checked by: [[maroon, 305839], [Harpp, 320110]]
- Grammar checked by: [[kt3, 228482]]

 

[Grillo]

use its Fighting=type STAB moves

 

[mushamu]

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