Diggersby [QC 0/3]

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Overview
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  • Has huge ears
  • Is a bunny
  • Rocks huge power with good typing giving it 2 immunities
  • Very nice stabs
  • Better attack than it's huge (power) counter part Azumarill
  • Faster than Azumarill
  • Doesn't have a super effective priority STAB
  • Limited moveset that it can run readily
Huge Power Sweeper
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name: Huge Power Sweeper
move 1: Earthquake
move 2: Return / Quick Attack
move 3: Stone edge / Rock slide
move 4: Swords Dance / Agility
ability: Huge Power
item: Life orb
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 SpD


Set Details
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  • Huge power makes this set go around
  • With Earthquake, and return STABs, you already hit very hard
  • Swords Dance fits along with Jolly more than Agility with it
  • Life orb ( For now ) is the best item for Diggersby
  • 4 evs into Special defense help against the ever so common water specials
Usage Tips
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  • Watching how you swap into certain pokemon can easily change your game up
  • Average turn order would go T1 Swords dance, T2 Earthquake, return, or Stone edge
Team Options
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  • Probably the most common aid to any sweeper would be agreat Baton passer, such as Scolipede, or even ninjask
  • reflect and Light screen help Diggersby with it's decent 85/77/77 defensive stats
Other Options
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  • Bounce, U-turn, and Hammer Arm can be ran, but are outclassed in this set
  • Spikes could be mixed in but is severely outclassed by offensive moves on Diggersby
Choice Band
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name: Choice Band
move 1: Earthquake
move 2: Quick Attack
move 3: Stone Edge / Rock Slide
move 4: U-Turn
ability: Huge Power
item: Choice Band
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 252 Hp / 4 Spe

Set Details
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  • Choice Band makes anything you use hit like a monster truck
  • the STABs are probably the best ways to go in terms of Sweeping
Usage Tips
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  • Careful planning lead can make or kill this pokemon
  • Watch for obvious swaps such as Aegislash and Gengar if using quick attack
  • Watch for Flying swap ins like Talonflame, and skarmory
Team options
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  • A pivot can make this set work at maximum efficient
  • Setup damage can severe cripple the enemy team, so taking pokemon with Stealth rocks
  • reflect and Light screen help Diggersby with it's decent 85/77/77 defensive stats
Checks and Counters
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  • Gengar, and other Ghost types make Diggersby cry a little
  • Flying type pokemon can swap in with ease
 
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If someone can proofread, I would appreciate that, though I think this may be ready to go
I forgot about the choice band set, so I will mention that first
 
Well I am not sure of the viability of Spikes either simply pointing out it learns the move and someone might find it useful I am fine with putting it in OO unless it has a unique niche I am not aware of or spikes it's simply worthless to even mention but I find that hard to believe
 
The band and huge power sweeper sets seem too similar to be in two sets. Try something like this
Diggersby@Life orb/Choice Band
Earthquake
Quick Attack/ Return
Stone Edge/Rock Slide
Swords Dance/U-Turn
Also you should mention at least something about screens in team options since it is a frail set up sweeper
 
The band and huge power sweeper sets seem too similar to be in two sets. Try something like this
Diggersby@Life orb/Choice Band
Earthquake
Quick Attack/ Return
Stone Edge/Rock Slide
Swords Dance/U-Turn
Also you should mention at least something about screens in team options since it is a frail set up sweeper
As much as I should just slash it, I feel as though the two sets are vastly different as in, Its too many pointless slashes, and the band set is not the life orb set. so for all intents of organization it is easier to read, and understand if the sets are seperated
As for the Screens i will mention them in both sets
 
The band and huge power sweeper sets seem too similar to be in two sets. Try something like this
Diggersby@Life orb/Choice Band
Earthquake
Quick Attack/ Return
Stone Edge/Rock Slide
Swords Dance/U-Turn
Also you should mention at least something about screens in team options since it is a frail set up sweeper
Well I am by no means an expert but Choice banded and life orbed Pokemon play different Choice band is for wallbreaking putting holes in the other team with a hit and run style, while sword dance is for sweeping without switching out that often because the checks or counters are more likely weak or dead, I am aware that you can sweep with a choice band but it all depends on the skill level and team match up.
 
This analysis has so much wrong with it that I genuinely believe it will take a serious amount of work and effort to get this up to snuff, to the extent that someone is better off redoing this from scratch. I appreciate the effort, don't get me wrong, but it's evident that you don't know what you're talking about nor have a firm understanding of competitive battling.

The usage tips, team options, and the shockingly barren counters section are so bad that I'm physically incapable of providing you with input, since I will essentially be redoing the analysis myself. Thankfully, this is not my job. It's also clear that you don't have a good understanding of basic English writing skills by the sheer number of grammatical errors, so your analysis will be a nightmare to proofread.

Having said that, consider this QC REJECT 1/3.
 
As sad as it is, i can take this as a total rejection, and now i know what to improve on Thank you, i'll be trying to improve writing these up later
 
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