M&M Entei (done)

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Ducky

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[SET]
name: Altarianite Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Altarianite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Entei is a strong Altarianite Extreme Speed user, able to threaten various offensive Pokemon such as Zygarde and Regieleki. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, heavily damaging neutral targets such as Milotic and Slowbro, while Sacred Fire threatens Steel-types that otherwise resist Extreme Speed, such as Corviknight, Solgaleo, and Magearna. Howl can also be used over Double Edge to boost Extreme Speed's power and let Entei function as an effective late-game sweeper. Stone Edge hits Flying-types such as Ho-Oh, as well as opposing Entei, who otherwise take very little damage from Entei's attacks. Double Edge is usually preferred over Howl due to it being able to 2HKO Slowbro and Milotic. Inner Focus is used as the pre-Mega ability to avoid Attack drops from Intimidate before Entei Mega Evolves. Entei works well when paired with powerful wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as it is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert to better wear down its checks. Swampert can also bring it in safely with Flip Turn. Entei also likes having entry hazard removers like Defog Landorus-T and Rapid Spin Regieleki to help mitigate its Stealth Rock weakness. Entei struggles to break Venusaurite Steel-types such as Solgaleo, so Magnezone pairs well with it to trap and remove them. Ground-types such as Landorus-T and Swampert can force Entei out with Earthquake, so strong Ice- and Grass-type Pokemon like Weavile and Kartana make good partners. Lucarionite Dragapult threatens Slowbro and helps wear down Milotic, making it a great partner for Entei. 80 EVs can be taken out of Speed and put into HP to slightly increase Entei's bulk white still outspeeding base 80 Speed Pokemon with a neutral nature.

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- Written by: [[Ducky, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [beauts, 484270]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [UT, 523866]]
 
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[SET]
name: Bulky Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Alarianite Altarianite / Pinsirite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 160 HP / 252 Atk / 96 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Entei is a strong Pixilate or Aerialate Aerilate boosted Extreme Speed user, and is able to offensivley check different threaten various offensive Pokemon, such as Zygarde and Dragonite Kyurem when holding Altarianite, and Zapdos-Galar and Buzzwole while holding Pinsirite. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets, while Sacred Fire threatens the Steel-types that resist both Fairy- and Flying-type Extreme Speed and also threatening a Burn. maybe include some examples here Howl can also be used over Double Edge in order for Entei to boost past it checks, you can include smth about howl being found mostly on HO, often difficult to setup bc its checks have ways of pressuring it and its ok bulk, up to u tho and Stone Edge is used to hit Flying-types such as Venusaurite Corviknight Ho-Oh, hooh still doesnt take a huge amount of damage from pins double edge, and is significantly more relevant than venu corv who otherwise takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Entei's Speed EVs allow it to outspeed neutral-natured base 80 Pokemon while holding Altarianite and neutral-natured base 100 Pokemon while holding Pinsirite. The remainging remaining EVs are used to take advantage of Entei's high base Attack and HP stat. i think id like to see some emphasis here on that altarianite is generally the better stone

Entei works well when paired with powerful walbreakers wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei also apreciates appreciates strong hazard support to help with its Rock-type weakness examples?. Entei struggles to break Venusauite Venusaurite Steel-types such as Corviknight Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten Steel-types pair well with Entei. Entei apreciates appreciates the use of slow pivots such as Swampert and Landorus-T, who can both help Entei enter the field safely and set up Stealth Rocks to allow Entei to wear down its checks faster.

one thing, a bit more of a GP thing ig, try to change out using the actual name entei for saying "it," especially in the 2nd paragraph, just gets a little repetitive

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[DuckeryDoodle, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

good job, lmk if youve got any questions about implementation QC 1/2
 

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[SET]
name: Bulky Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Alarianite Altarianite / Pinsirite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 160 HP / 252 Atk / 96 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Entei is a strong Pixilate or Aerialate Aerilate boosted Extreme Speed user, and is able to offensivley check different threaten various offensive Pokemon, such as Zygarde and Dragonite Kyurem when holding Altarianite, and Zapdos-Galar and Buzzwole while holding Pinsirite. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets, while Sacred Fire threatens the Steel-types that resist both Fairy- and Flying-type Extreme Speed and also threatening a Burn. maybe include some examples here Howl can also be used over Double Edge in order for Entei to boost past it checks, you can include smth about howl being found mostly on HO, often difficult to setup bc its checks have ways of pressuring it and its ok bulk, up to u tho and Stone Edge is used to hit Flying-types such as Venusaurite Corviknight Ho-Oh, hooh still doesnt take a huge amount of damage from pins double edge, and is significantly more relevant than venu corv who otherwise takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Entei's Speed EVs allow it to outspeed neutral-natured base 80 Pokemon while holding Altarianite and neutral-natured base 100 Pokemon while holding Pinsirite. The remainging remaining EVs are used to take advantage of Entei's high base Attack and HP stat. i think id like to see some emphasis here on that altarianite is generally the better stone

Entei works well when paired with powerful walbreakers wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei also apreciates appreciates strong hazard support to help with its Rock-type weakness examples?. Entei struggles to break Venusauite Venusaurite Steel-types such as Corviknight Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten Steel-types pair well with Entei. Entei apreciates appreciates the use of slow pivots such as Swampert and Landorus-T, who can both help Entei enter the field safely and set up Stealth Rocks to allow Entei to wear down its checks faster.

one thing, a bit more of a GP thing ig, try to change out using the actual name entei for saying "it," especially in the 2nd paragraph, just gets a little repetitive

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[DuckeryDoodle, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
good job, lmk if youve got any questions about implementation QC 1/2
implemented, thanks for the fast edits!
 

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[SET]
name: Bulky Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Altarianite / Pinsirite not meta relevant anymore
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe



[SET COMMENTS]

Entei is a strong Pixilate or Aerilate boosted Extreme Speed user, and is able to threaten various offensive Pokemon, such as Zygarde and Kyurem Regieleki when holding Altarianite, and Zapdos-Galar and Buzzwole while holding Pinsirite. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets such as Milotic and Slowbro, while Sacred Fire threatens the Steel-types, such as Corviknight, Solgaleo, and Magearna, that resist Extreme Speed both Fairy- and Flying-type Extreme Speed and also threatening a Burn. Howl can also be used over Double Edge in order for Entei to boost past its checks Extreme Speed and function as an effective late-game sweeper idk something like this, and Stone Edge is used to hit Flying-types such as Ho-Oh, who otherwise takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Double Edge is usually preferred over Howl on most builds except Hyper Offense, as Entei's checks have means of pressuring it, making it hard to set. maybe say that dedge is usually better because it can 2hko bro/milo while howl sets function more as a sweeper Altarianite is more commonly used over Pinsirite, as is gives both a larger attack boost and a more beneficial type, as Pinsirite gives Entei a 4x weakness to Rock, and thus requires more team support. Entei's Speed EVs allow it to outspeed neutral-natured base 80 Pokemon while holding Altarianite and neutral-natured base 100 Pokemon while holding Pinsirite. just do a basic ev explanationThe remaining EVs are used to take advantage of Entei's high base Attack and HP stat. Entei works well when paired with powerful wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. It also appreciates strong hazard support to help with its Rock-type weakness, such as Swampert and Landorus-T, who can also help it enter the field safely via slow pivoting. Entei struggles to break Venusaurite Steel-types such as Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten Steel-types pair well with it. mention how inner focus allows entei to avoid intim decreasing its attack pre-mega. mention dragapult as a good partner bc it helps wear down milo and threatens slowbro.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[DuckeryDoodle, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [beauts, 484270]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

2/2 just poke me on discord before sending this into gp so i can read it over one more time, there were a lot of changes
 
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[SET]
name: Altarianite Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double-Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Altarianite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Entei is a strong Altarianite Extreme Speed user, and is able to threaten various offensive Pokemon (rc) such as Zygarde and Regieleki. (ap) , when holding Altarianite. Double-Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, heavily damaging doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets such as Milotic and Slowbro, while Sacred Fire threatens Steel-types that otherwise resist Extreme Speed, such as Corviknight, Solgaleo, and Magearna. (ap) that otherwise resist Extreme Speed. Howl can also be used over Double-Edge for Entei to boost Extreme Speed's power and let Entei function as an effective late-game sweeper. (ap) and Stone Edge hits is used to hit (i made the sentence separation because it felt weird to me that you mentioned both moves in one sentence, considering they're separate moves.) Flying-types such as Ho-Oh, (ac) as well as and opposing Entei, who otherwise take takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Double-Edge is usually preferred over Howl due to it being able to 2HKO Slowbro and Milotic, though while Howl allows Entei to better function as a late-game cleaner. Inner Focus is used as the pre-Mega ability to avoid Attack drops from Intimidate before Entei Mega Evolves. evolves. Entei works well when paired with powerful wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as it Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert to better wear down its checks. Swampert can also bring it in safely with Flip Turn. (I think this can be entry hazard support as well unless rocks are specifically more useful) It appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert, who can also pivot it in safely with Flip Turn, in order to better wear down its checks. Entei also likes having entry hazard removers like teammates such as Defog Landorus-T and Rapid Spin Regieleki to help mitigate its Stealth Rock weakness. Entei It struggles to break Venusaurite Steel-types such as Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten them Steel-types pair well with it. Ground-types such as Landorus-T and Swampert can force Entei out with Earthquake, so strong Ice- and Grass-type Pokemon like such as (want to avoid repetition with the 'such as') Weavile and Kartana make good partners. Lucarionite Dragapult threatens Slowbro and helps wear down Milotic, making it a great partner for Entei. 80 EVs can be taken out of Speed and put into HP to slightly increase Entei's bulk white still outspeeding base 80 Speed Pokemon with a neutral nature.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ducky, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [beauts, 484270]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 

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[SET]
name: Altarianite Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Altarianite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Entei is a strong Altarianite Extreme Speed user, and is able to threaten various offensive Pokemon (rc) such as Zygarde and Regieleki. (ap) , when holding Altarianite. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, heavily damaging doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets such as Milotic and Slowbro, while Sacred Fire threatens Steel-types that otherwise resist Extreme Speed, such as Corviknight, Solgaleo, and Magearna. (ap) that otherwise resist Extreme Speed. Howl can also be used over Double Edge for Entei to boost Extreme Speed's power and let Entei function as an effective late-game sweeper. (ap) and Stone Edge hits is used to hit (i made the sentence separation because it felt weird to me that you mentioned both moves in one sentence, considering they're separate moves.) Flying-types such as Ho-Oh, (ac) as well as and opposing Entei, who otherwise take takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Double Edge is usually preferred over Howl due to it being able to 2HKO Slowbro and Milotic, while Howl allows Entei to better function as a late-game cleaner. Inner Focus is used as the pre-Mega ability to avoid Attack drops from Intimidate before Entei Mega Evolves. evolves. Entei works well when paired with powerful wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as it Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert to better wear down its checks. Swampert can also bring it in safely with Flip Turn. (I think this can be entry hazard support as well unless rocks are specifically more useful) It appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert, who can also pivot it in safely with Flip Turn, in order to better wear down its checks. Entei also likes having entry hazard removers like teammates such as Defog Landorus-T and Rapid Spin Regieleki to help mitigate its Stealth Rock weakness. Entei It struggles to break Venusaurite Steel-types such as Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten Steel-types pair well with it Magnezone pairs well with it to trap and remove them. Ground-types such as Landorus-T and Swampert can force Entei out with Earthquake, so strong Ice- and Grass-type Pokemon like such as (want to avoid repetition with the 'such as') Weavile and Kartana make good partners. Lucarionite Dragapult threatens Slowbro and helps wear down Milotic, making it a great partner for Entei. 80 EVs can be taken out of Speed and put into HP to slightly increase Entei's bulk white still outspeeding base 80 Speed Pokemon with a neutral nature.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ducky, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [beauts, 484270]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [UT, 523866]]

GP 1/1! Don't mind me, just stealing credit for Sulo's hard work again



GP Team done
 

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[SET]
name: Altarianite Extreme Speed
move 1: Sacred Fire
move 2: Extreme Speed
move 3: Double Edge / Howl
move 4: Stone Edge
item: Altarianite
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Entei is a strong Altarianite Extreme Speed user, and is able to threaten various offensive Pokemon (rc) such as Zygarde and Regieleki. (ap) , when holding Altarianite. Double Edge is Entei's main form of damage output, heavily damaging doing large amounts of damage to neutral targets such as Milotic and Slowbro, while Sacred Fire threatens Steel-types that otherwise resist Extreme Speed, such as Corviknight, Solgaleo, and Magearna. (ap) that otherwise resist Extreme Speed. Howl can also be used over Double Edge for Entei to boost Extreme Speed's power and let Entei function as an effective late-game sweeper. (ap) and Stone Edge hits is used to hit (i made the sentence separation because it felt weird to me that you mentioned both moves in one sentence, considering they're separate moves.) Flying-types such as Ho-Oh, (ac) as well as and opposing Entei, who otherwise take takes very little damage from Entei's attacks. Double Edge is usually preferred over Howl due to it being able to 2HKO Slowbro and Milotic, while Howl allows Entei to better function as a late-game cleaner. Inner Focus is used as the pre-Mega ability to avoid Attack drops from Intimidate before Entei Mega Evolves. evolves. Entei works well when paired with powerful wallbreakers such as Kartana and Xerneas, as it Entei is very good at cleaning up weakened teams. Entei appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert to better wear down its checks. Swampert can also bring it in safely with Flip Turn. (I think this can be entry hazard support as well unless rocks are specifically more useful) It appreciates Stealth Rock support from Pokemon like Swampert, who can also pivot it in safely with Flip Turn, in order to better wear down its checks. Entei also likes having entry hazard removers like teammates such as Defog Landorus-T and Rapid Spin Regieleki to help mitigate its Stealth Rock weakness. Entei It struggles to break Venusaurite Steel-types such as Solgaleo, so Pokemon like Magnezone who can trap and threaten Steel-types pair well with it Magnezone pairs well with it to trap and remove them. Ground-types such as Landorus-T and Swampert can force Entei out with Earthquake, so strong Ice- and Grass-type Pokemon like such as (want to avoid repetition with the 'such as') Weavile and Kartana make good partners. Lucarionite Dragapult threatens Slowbro and helps wear down Milotic, making it a great partner for Entei. 80 EVs can be taken out of Speed and put into HP to slightly increase Entei's bulk white still outspeeding base 80 Speed Pokemon with a neutral nature.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ducky, 525446]]
- Quality checked by: [[iapt, 539897], [beauts, 484270]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [UT, 523866]]

GP 1/1! Don't mind me, just stealing credit for Sulo's hard work again



GP Team done
implemented and ready for upload!
 
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