National Dex Ferrothorn [Done]

[The Quagsire King]

[SET]
name: Ferrothorn
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip
move 3: Gyro Ball / Knock Off / Thunder Wave / Body Press
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Relaxed
tera type: Ghost
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that checks Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. Power Whip pressures Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting-Lu, while Gyro Ball dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off removes Leftovers and Heavy-Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity versus vs Pokemon like Dragonite, Weavile, and Mega Swampert while also chipping the opponent's Pokemon. Tera Ghost can be used to check Pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R; however, due to its excellent defensive typing, Ferrothorn shouldn't be Terastallized outside of emergency situations. Ferrothorn's Spikes benefits wallbreakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny, and Tapu Koko, since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn are grounded. Ferrothorn's ability to check Water- and Electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses; in return, they take advantage of the Spikes Ferrothorn lays and can help check Pokemon it struggles with such as Volcarona and Skeledirge. Rocky Helmet can be used over Leftovers to punish contact moves, though it comes at the cost of Ferrothorn's longevity. Ferrothorn struggles with Fire- and Fighting-types like Heatran, Mega Lopunny, and Zamazenta, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with Pokemon like Toxapex and Gholdengo. Gholdengo also blocks Defog, allowing Ferrothorn's Spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can be setup fodder for Pokemon like Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that problem.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[The Quagsire King, 530729]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [hidin, 589564]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]]

 

[Sulo]

hi The Quagsire King, can you get this outta wip? ty!

 

[The Quagsire King]

hi The Quagsire King, can you get this outta wip? ty!

Yea sorry been busy with work, just did that

 

[The Quagsire King]

oh uh ready for qc mb if i wasn't clear

 

[Sulo]

oh uh ready for qc mb if i wasn't clear

its [QC 0/2] btw, not [QC 0/1].

ill probably get to this this week

 

[The Quagsire King]

oh mb

 

[Sulo]

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spiky

[SET]
name: Ferrothorn
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip / Gyro Ball
move 3: Knock Off / Thunder Wave
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Careful
tera type: Water
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

• Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that fits on Bulky Offense and Balance teams that helps out it's team by checking Pokemon such as Tapu Koko, Mega Swampert, and Tapu Lele. Spikes is generally preferred over Stealth Rock due to Stealth Rock's much greater distribution, however it's a viable option for some teams. i think rocks ferro personally sucks tbh, it doesnt really make notable progress when the same mon comes in to threaten it. instead it just clicks knock once or clicks leech or something, but the mon coming in can usually get around whatever its throwing at it
• Power Whip allows Ferrothorn to KO Mega Swampert while also pressuring Great Tusk, generalize to say bulky waters/grounds instead while Iron Head and Gyro Ball are able to KO Iron Valiant, Tapu Lele, and Weavile while being able to pressure Mega Mawile. mmaw is a bit mid rn + same as above, generalize to say fairies but give gyro ball its own mention in that it further damages torn Knock Off has great utility being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. period
• Tera Water can be used to check pokemon such as Heatran, Volcarona, and Urshifu-R better, i would use other examples not named tran/volc, both of them dont care about ferro either way. urshifu is fine. however due to it's excellent defensive typing Ferrothorn is generally a suboptimal choice to terastallize, only having use during emergencies.
• Ferrothorn runs maximum HP and Special Defense EVs to better handle Tapu Lele, Tornadus-Therian, offensive Rain Zapdos. max max, we dont explain those
• Ferrothorn's Spikes and ability to check Water and Electric types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits offensive teams by making Pokemon like Mega Charizard Y and Iron Valiant harder to deal with. Ferrothorn also fits amazingly on Rain teams since it can set up entry hazards for them while appreciating Rain halving its Fire Weakness. correlation here is quite vague, you mention checking waters and electrics but dont mention mons that appreciate that. add in teammates that like ferro pivoting into koko barra floatzel etc. spikes mention should also be its own line as well, since theres no need to mention it in a sentence about teammates if you dont elaborate on how the breakers benefit from spikes themselves. Ferrothorn also takes advantage of a lot of common defensive Pokemon in the tier such as Gastrodon and Rotom Wash and can use them as an opportunity to set up Spikes and drain their heath with Leech Seed. Iron Barbs as well as potential Rocky Helmet can punish U-Turn, providing massive chip damage. create a separate line on leech seed and another line on rocky helmet, keeping it here just bogs up the paragraph
• add in a line for twave
• Ferrothorn struggles with Fire and Fighting types like Heatran Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta-Hero, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with bulky water types like Toxapex, Gastrodon, and Pelipper. the waters here dont actually check lop/zama so i would go for teammates like Gholdengo also works as a good teammate due to Good As Gold blocking hazard removal and its immunity to fighting. Ferrothorn can also set up on by things such as Nasty Plot Recover Gholdengo and Dragon Dance Dragonite, dnite is honestly quite annoyed by knock + leech, would want another example imo so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge or Dondozo can help alleviate that.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

will want another look before stamping, gj so far

 

[The Quagsire King]

Ty, i’ll add the changes when i get off work

 

[The Quagsire King]

ok implemented changes and credits, changed some things after i woke up since i got off work pretty late and was tired

 

[Sulo]

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[SET]
name: Ferrothorn
move 1: Spikes
move 2: Power Whip / Gyro Ball
move 3: Knock Off / Thunder Wave
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Careful
tera type: Water
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that fits on Bulky Offense and Balance teams that helps out it's team by checking Pokemon such as Tapu Koko, Mega Swampert, and Tapu Lele. Power Whip allows Ferrothorn to pressure Water and Ground Types, while Iron Head and Gyro Ball are able to KO Fairy types while Gyro Ball has the added benefit of being able to pressure Tornadus Therian. Knock Off has great utility being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Tera Water can be used to check pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R, however due to it's excellent defensive typing Ferrothorn is generally a suboptimal choice to terastallize, only having use during emergencies. Ferrothorn's ability to check Water and Electric types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus Therian and Heatran by covering their weaknesses. Ferrothorn also fits amazingly on Rain teams since it can set up entry hazards for them while appreciating Rain halving its Fire Weakness. Spikes benefit breakers like Weavile and Tapu Koko by since many of their checks are grounded. add mlop as an example + mention the specific checks Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity and is generally hard for a lot of teams to switch into due to the lack of viable grass types in OU besides opposing Ferrothorn. just say it helps it stay healthy vs x, x, and x pokemon Rocky Helmet can be used over leftovers to punish U-Turn harder however running it over leftovers hurts Ferrothorn's longevity. Ferrothorn struggles with Fire and Fighting types like Heatran Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta-Hero, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with pokemon like Toxapex as well as Gholdengo, who's ghost typing and Good As Gold ability block hazard removal, allowing Ferrothorn's spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also set up on by things such as Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[The Quagsire King, 530729]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]], []]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]] made the whole thing one paragraph since we dont do bullet points

QC 1/2.

 

[hidin]

hi

add remove comment consider

fruit with a lil spike

[SET]
name: Defensive
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip
move 3: Gyro Ball / Knock Off / Thunder Wave / Body Press
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Careful -> Relaxed
tera type: Water -> Ghost
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD -> 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
ivs: 0 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that fits on Bulky Offense and Balance teams that helps out it's team by checking is also a very good check to Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. and Tapu Lele specs and scarf focus blast you and once u tera they just psychic u, i would prob mention another mon or just remove it. Power Whip allows Ferrothorn to pressure Water and Ground Types Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting-Lu. while Iron Head and Gyro Ball are able to KO Fairy types while Gyro Ball has the added benefit of being able to pressure Tornadus Therian. dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta, while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off has great utility, being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy-Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Tera Water can be used to check pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R, however due to it's excellent defensive typing Ferrothorn is generally a suboptimal choice to terastallize, only having use during emergencies. reword this into a tera ghost mention Ferrothorn's ability to check Water- and Electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus Therian Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses. In return...elaborate on what they do in return here Ferrothorn also fits amazingly on Rain teams since it can set up entry hazards for them while appreciating Rain halving its Fire Weakness. Spikes benefit breakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny and Tapu Koko by since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn. reword this on how ferrothorn makes progress with spikes and supports it teammates, move it up too are grounded. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity vs Pokemon like Dragonite, Weavile, and Mega Swampert. move this above tera mention and mention how it whittles down opponents Rocky Helmet can be used over leftovers to punish U-Turn harder however running it over leftovers hurts Ferrothorn's longevity. reword this Ferrothorn struggles with Fire- and Fighting-types like Heatran, Mega Lopunny, and Zamazenta-Hero, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with pokemon like Toxapex as well as Gholdengo, who's ghost typing and Good As Gold ability block hazard removal, allowing Ferrothorn's spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also set up on by things such as Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that. reword both of these

overall things just look all jumbled over the place and quite a few grammatical errors, implement and ill check again
decent attempt i will say

 

[The Quagsire King]

Ok ill do those soon

 

[The Quagsire King]

hi

add remove comment consider

fruit with a lil spike

[SET]
name: Defensive
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip
move 3: Gyro Ball / Knock Off / Thunder Wave / Body Press
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Careful -> Relaxed
tera type: Water -> Ghost
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD -> 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
ivs: 0 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that fits on Bulky Offense and Balance teams that helps out it's team by checking is also a very good check to Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. and Tapu Lele specs and scarf focus blast you and once u tera they just psychic u, i would prob mention another mon or just remove it. Power Whip allows Ferrothorn to pressure Water and Ground Types Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting-Lu. while Iron Head and Gyro Ball are able to KO Fairy types while Gyro Ball has the added benefit of being able to pressure Tornadus Therian. dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta, while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off has great utility, being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy-Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Tera Water can be used to check pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R, however due to it's excellent defensive typing Ferrothorn is generally a suboptimal choice to terastallize, only having use during emergencies. reword this into a tera ghost mention Ferrothorn's ability to check Water- and Electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus Therian Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses. In return...elaborate on what they do in return here Ferrothorn also fits amazingly on Rain teams since it can set up entry hazards for them while appreciating Rain halving its Fire Weakness. Spikes benefit breakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny and Tapu Koko by since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn. reword this on how ferrothorn makes progress with spikes and supports it teammates, move it up too are grounded. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity vs Pokemon like Dragonite, Weavile, and Mega Swampert. move this above tera mention and mention how it whittles down opponents Rocky Helmet can be used over leftovers to punish U-Turn harder however running it over leftovers hurts Ferrothorn's longevity. reword this Ferrothorn struggles with Fire- and Fighting-types like Heatran, Mega Lopunny, and Zamazenta-Hero, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with pokemon like Toxapex as well as Gholdengo, who's ghost typing and Good As Gold ability block hazard removal, allowing Ferrothorn's spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also set up on by things such as Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that. reword both of these

overall things just look all jumbled over the place and quite a few grammatical errors, implement and ill check again
decent attempt i will say

ok sorry for the wait, implemented those changes

 

[The Quagsire King]

hidin you good? I implemented the changes you suggested, my bad if I wasn't clear earlier

 

[hidin]

ok

add remove comment consider

forbidden durian

Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that is also a very good serves as a check to Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. Power Whip allows Ferrothorn to pressure Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting Lu, while Gyro Ball dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off has great utility, added the comma being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy-Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity vs Pokemon like Dragonite, comma Weavile, comma and Mega Swampert while also chipping the opponent's Pokemon. Tera Ghost can be used to check pokemon Pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R, however due to it's excellent defensive typing Ferrothorn is generally a suboptimal choice to terastallize, only having use during emergencies. reword this a lil bit Ferrothorn's Spikes benefit breakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny and Tapu Koko by since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn are grounded. Ferrothorn's ability to check Water and Electric types add the hyphens for water- and electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses, while in return they abuse the Spikes Ferrothorn lays and can cover its Fire and Fighting type weaknesses. mention the mons they can take care of for ferro Rocky Helmet can be used over leftovers Leftovers to punish contact moves, however it comes at a cost to Ferrothorn's longevity. Ferrothorn struggles with Fire and Fighting types like Heatran Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with pokemon like Toxapex and Gholdengo. Gholdengo also has the added benefit of Good As Gold blocking defog, allowing Ferrothorn's spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also be setup fodder for Pokemon like Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that problem.

you need to capitalize a lot of stuff here like pokemon and certain moves, as well as adding hyphens for things like Fire- and Fighting-types. ill let gp do that but 2/2

 

[The Quagsire King]

Ok cool, ill do that when i get home from work

 

[The Quagsire King]

Ok changes implemented

 

[The Quagsire King]

GP Team i am so sorry i completely forgot to send this earlier

 

[Sulo]

add remove comment
ac = add comma, rc = remove comma

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[SET]
name: Ferrothorn
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip
move 3: Gyro Ball / Knock Off / Thunder Wave / Body Press
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Relaxed
tera type: Ghost
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that checks serves as check to Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. Power Whip pressures allows Ferrothorn to pressure Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting-Lu, (added hyphen) while Gyro Ball dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off removes Leftovers and Heavy-Duty Boots has great utility, being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity versus vs Pokemon like Dragonite, Weavile, and Mega Swampert while also chipping the opponent's Pokemon. Tera Ghost can be used to check Pokemon pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R; (comma -> semicolon) however, (ac) due to its (removed apostrophe) excellent defensive typing, (ac) you shouldn't terastallize Ferrothorn shouldn't be Terastallized except in emergency situations. Ferrothorn's Spikes benefits benefit wallbreakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny, (ac) and Tapu Koko, (ac) by since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn are grounded. Ferrothorn's ability to check Water- and Electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses; (semicolon) in return, they take advantage of , while in return they abuse the Spikes Ferrothorn lays and can help check Pokemon Ferrothorn struggles with such as Volcarona and Skeledirge. Rocky Helmet can be used over Leftovers to punish contact moves, though however it comes at the cost of a cost to Ferrothorn's longevity. Ferrothorn struggles with Fire- and Fighting-types like Heatran, (ac) Mega Lopunny, (ac) and Zamazenta, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with Pokemon like Toxapex and Gholdengo. Gholdengo also blocks Defog, has the added benefit of Good As Gold blocking defog, allowing Ferrothorn's Spikes spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also be setup fodder for Pokemon like Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that problem.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[The Quagsire King, 530729]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [hidin, 589564]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]] i fixed all the formatting-related issues here as well

GP Team done

 

[The Quagsire King]

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ac = add comma, rc = remove comma

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[SET]
name: Ferrothorn
move 1: Spikes / Stealth Rock
move 2: Power Whip
move 3: Gyro Ball / Knock Off / Thunder Wave / Body Press
move 4: Leech Seed
item: Leftovers / Rocky Helmet
ability: Iron Barbs
nature: Relaxed
tera type: Ghost
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Ferrothorn acts as a defensive entry hazard setter that checks serves as check to Pokemon such as Tapu Koko and Mega Swampert. Power Whip pressures allows Ferrothorn to pressure Pokemon like Gastrodon and Ting-Lu, (added hyphen) while Gyro Ball dents Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Zamazenta while also pressuring Tornadus-T. Knock Off removes Leftovers and Heavy-Duty Boots has great utility, being able to remove Leftovers or Heavy Duty Boots from switch-ins like Volcarona, Heatran, Zapdos, and opposing Ferrothorn. Leech Seed helps with Ferrothorn's longevity versus vs Pokemon like Dragonite, Weavile, and Mega Swampert while also chipping the opponent's Pokemon. Tera Ghost can be used to check Pokemon pokemon such as Great Tusk and Urshifu-R; (comma -> semicolon) however, (ac) due to its (removed apostrophe) excellent defensive typing, (ac) you shouldn't terastallize Ferrothorn shouldn't be Terastallized except in emergency situations. Ferrothorn's Spikes benefits benefit wallbreakers like Weavile, Mega Lopunny, (ac) and Tapu Koko, (ac) by since many of their checks such as Toxapex, Great Tusk, and opposing Ferrothorn are grounded. Ferrothorn's ability to check Water- and Electric-types like Mega Swampert, Floatzel, and Tapu Koko benefits pokemon like Tornadus-T and Heatran by covering their weaknesses; (semicolon) in return, they take advantage of , while in return they abuse the Spikes Ferrothorn lays and can help check Pokemon Ferrothorn struggles with such as Volcarona and Skeledirge. Rocky Helmet can be used over Leftovers to punish contact moves, though however it comes at the cost of a cost to Ferrothorn's longevity. Ferrothorn struggles with Fire- and Fighting-types like Heatran, (ac) Mega Lopunny, (ac) and Zamazenta, meaning Ferrothorn pairs well with Pokemon like Toxapex and Gholdengo. Gholdengo also blocks Defog, has the added benefit of Good As Gold blocking defog, allowing Ferrothorn's Spikes spikes to stay up. Ferrothorn can also be setup fodder for Pokemon like Gholdengo and Annihilape, so teammates with Unaware like Clodsire and Skeledirge can help alleviate that problem.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[The Quagsire King, 530729]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [hidin, 589564]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]] i fixed all the formatting-related issues here as well

GP Team done

ok done , sorry for taking a while

 

[Sulo]

up!! https://www.smogon.com/dex/sv/pokemon/ferrothorn/