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So I made a team and I wanted Luxray in it, so I mad a team that was mostly on offense. How can I make it better?

Luxray @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Fire Fang
- Ice Fang
- Crunch
- Wild Charge

Simipour @ Choice Band
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Rock Slide
- Crunch
- Acrobatics
- Waterfall

Metagross @ Life Orb
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 252 Atk / 120 Def / 136 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Zen Headbutt
- Ice Punch
- Bullet Punch

Smeargle @ Focus Sash
Ability: Own Tempo
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Spore
- Spikes
- Stealth Rock
- Sticky Web

Manaphy @ Leftovers
Ability: Hydration
EVs: 8 HP / 124 Def / 252 SAtk / 124 SDef
Modest Nature
- Tail Glow
- Ice Beam
- Rest
- Energy Ball

Chandelure
Ability: Flame Body
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Overheat
- Energy Ball
- Shadow Ball
- Psychic

(Not sure if this fits in the category)
 
Hello there. You lack descriptions for each of your chosen members. Write what made you choose that poke, why those EVs and why those moves. You get the idea. I suggest adding some before the mods lock this up. The rest of the rules can be found here.
 
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