Going Down to The Wire-An Ubers Warstory

#1
Hi all! I am Calm Pokemaster, and this is my first warstory. I have had many great battles, some of which I won, and some I lost. But this was, I think, the best of the lot and also because I managed to save the log ;p

Please not that skywalker, whom I battled against, is not on Smogon as of now. This battle took place on the Battle Simulator Pokemon Online.

Ok, so here it is. Let us take a look at the teams:

Calm Pokemaster:



Skywalker:




We have 2 common Pokemon: Deoxys-S and Kyogre. We share the same lead. Looks like this batle will get off to an exciting start.


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My comments will be in black.

The difference between my moves and Skywalker's moves is that he will be referred to as "the foe."

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Battle between Skywalker and Calm Pokemaster started!

Tier: Ubers
Rule: Rated
Rule: Sleep Clause
Rule: Freeze Clause
Rule: Evasion Clause
Rule: OHKO Clause
Rule: Species Clause

Calm Pokemaster sent out Deoxys-S!
Skywalker sent out Deoxys-S!
Deoxys-S is exerting its Pressure!
The foe's Deoxys-S is exerting its Pressure!

Okay, so both of us have the same lead.I am Taunting, hoping that I outspeed him. I think it is the usual set with Spikes,SR,T'Wave/Toxic and Extreme Speed.



Start of turn 1
Deoxys-S used Taunt!
The foe's Deoxys-S fell for the taunt!

The foe's Deoxys-S can't use Taunt after the taunt!

Great, so I was wrong ;p. Anyway, I manage to nail the Taunt, so I am now free to SR.

Calm Pokemaster :
100%
Skywalker:
100%


Start of turn 2
The foe's Deoxys-S used ExtremeSpeed!
Deoxys-S lost 87 HP! (35% of its health)

Deoxys-S used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around Skywalker's team!


I take the expected Extreme Speed, and lay down my rocks. Instead of ExtremeSpeeding myself, I...

Calm Pokemaster :
65%

Skywalker:
100%



Start of turn 3
The foe's Deoxys-S used ExtremeSpeed!
Deoxys-S lost 81 HP! (34% of its health)

Deoxys-S used Thunder Wave!
The foe's Deoxys-S is paralyzed! It may be unable to move!

T'Wave, expecting a switch, but he stays in. Not much of a difference, but I outspeed him outright now, so I Extreme Speed again.

Calm Pokemaster :
32%

Skywalker:
100%




Start of turn 4
Deoxys-S used ExtremeSpeed!
The foe's Deoxys-S lost 37% of its health!

The foe's Deoxys-S used ExtremeSpeed!
Deoxys-S lost 74 HP! (31% of its health)
Deoxys-S fainted!

Things go as expected. Well done Deoxys, you have done your job. Take some rest.

I decide to send in my favourite Pokemon on this team, my CM Kyogre.

6-5 Skywalker


The foe's Deoxys-S's taunt ended!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Kyogre!

Kyogre's Drizzle made it rain!

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
63%



Start of turn 5
Kyogre used Calm Mind!
Kyogre's Sp. Att. rose!
Kyogre's Sp. Def. rose!

The foe's Deoxys-S is paralyzed! It can't move!

I CM till I get 2 or 3 sometimes under my belt. Just to feel safe.
Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
63%



Rain continues to fall!

Start of turn 6
Kyogre used Calm Mind!
Kyogre's Sp. Att. rose!
Kyogre's Sp. Def. rose!

The foe's Deoxys-S used Taunt!
Kyogre fell for the taunt!

Rain continues to fall!
Get Taunted, but anyway, 2 CM's are enough I suppose.. Time to start sweeping.Smart move by Skywalker, instead of setting up SR, he decides to Taunt my CM Kyogre.


Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
63%


Start of turn 7
Kyogre used Surf!
The foe's Deoxys-S lost 63% of its health!
The foe's Deoxys-S fainted!

5-5

I draw first blood. I am confident that nothing will spoil my sweep. Until...




Rain continues to fall!
Skywalker sent out Ludicolo!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Ludicolo!

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
87%


Crap. Of all things, Ludicolo decides to pop up. If I am not careful, this thing will spoil if not ruin outright my sweep.

I decide to go for Thunder, hoping for paralysis. Here goes...


Start of turn 8
Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo lost 64% of its health!
The foe's Ludicolo is paralyzed! It may be unable to move!

The foe's Ludicolo used Leech Seed!
Kyogre was seeded!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

Yay! I get him paralysed, and get Seeded in the process as expected. Now begins the stall cycle.

Calm Pokemaster :
93%

Skywalker:
48%



Start of turn 9
The foe's Ludicolo used Protect!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
Kyogre's taunt ended!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Thunder away, then.

Calm Pokemaster :
86%

Skywalker:
73%


Start of turn 10
Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo lost 63% of its health!

The foe's Ludicolo used Grass Knot!
It's super effective!
Kyogre lost 92 HP! (26% of its health)

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

Thunder fails to KO. Things are starting to go wrong here.

Calm Pokemaster :
53%

Skywalker:
35%



Start of turn 11
The foe's Ludicolo used Protect!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

Crap. Hope he doesnt get it second time around.

Calm Pokemaster :
46%

Skywalker:
60%


Start of turn 12
The foe's Ludicolo used Protect!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Calm Pokemaster: hax

Great. Para hax fails to strike even once. Am gonna die next turn.

Calm Pokemaster :
39%

Skywalker:
85%


Start of turn 13
Kyogre used Thunder!
The foe's Ludicolo lost 65% of its health!

The foe's Ludicolo used Grass Knot!
It's super effective!
Kyogre lost 107 HP! (32% of its health)

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Skywalker: ??
Kyogre's health is sapped by leech seed.
Kyogre fainted!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Palkia!

Palkia is exerting its Pressure!
Kyogre dies, and I am forced to send out my other sweeper, Palkia.

I have to get rid of this Ludicolo soon, as it can pose major problems for my team.

5-4 Skywalker

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
45%


Start of turn 14
The foe's Ludicolo is paralyzed! It can't move!

Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The attack of Palkia missed!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

We both get some hax. He is paralysed, while I miss. Ah well, you cant have everything in life.

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
57%


Start of turn 15
The foe's Ludicolo used Protect!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

The Protect stall cycle begins once more. Hope he doesnt get lucky once more.

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
69%



Start of turn 16
Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Ludicolo lost 46% of its health!

The foe's Ludicolo used Leech Seed!
The attack of the foe's Ludicolo missed!

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

I get some hax, as Leech Seed misses. Spacial Rend once more, Palkia!

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
35%


Start of turn 17
The foe's Ludicolo used Protect!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Ludicolo protected itself!

Protect AGAIN. I have to kill this thing soon.



Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Ludicolo's Rain Dish heals it!
The foe's Ludicolo restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
47%



Start of turn 18
The foe's Ludicolo is paralyzed! It can't move!

Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Ludicolo lost 47% of its health!
The foe's Ludicolo fainted!

Phew! After 10 turns,and quite some hax on both sides, I kill his Ludicolo. Wonder what is going to come out.


Rain continues to fall!
Skywalker sent out Darkrai!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Darkrai!

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
87%



Start of turn 19
The foe's Darkrai used Dark Void!
Palkia avoided the attack!

Palkia used Surf!
The foe's Darkrai lost 87% of its health!
The foe's Darkrai fainted!

That was quite unexpected. Darkrai comes out, fires off a Dark Void, which misses(just like my Spacial Rend earlier)and I KO him.

Rain continues to fall!
Skywalker sent out Kyogre!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Kyogre!

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
87%



Start of turn 20
Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Kyogre lost 53% of its health!

The foe's Kyogre used Thunder!
Palkia lost 232 HP! (72% of its health)

Hmm....it must be Water Spout Kyogre....atleast it is not CM Kyogre like mine. Its going down next turn, but it takes out a good chunk of Palkia's health.



Rain continues to fall!


Calm Pokemaster :
28%

Skywalker:
34%


Start of turn 21
Palkia used Spacial Rend!
A critical hit!
The foe's Kyogre lost 34% of its health!
The foe's Kyogre fainted!

Rain continues to fall!
Skywalker sent out Manaphy!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Manaphy!

That crit didnt matter, Kyogre would have died anyway. Out comes Manaphy, the usual Tail Glow set I suppose.

I am going to go with Outrage, in case he has a Blissey waiting in his ranks.


Calm Pokemaster :
28%

Skywalker:
87%


Start of turn 22
Palkia used Outrage!
The foe's Manaphy lost 56% of its health!

The foe's Manaphy used Tail Glow!
The foe's Manaphy's Sp. Att. sharply rose!

Rain continues to fall!

Thankfully, Outrage does more than 50%. But now, I am locked into Outrage. Hope he doesnt have a Steel type.


Calm Pokemaster :
28% (locked into Outrage)

Skywalker:
31%


Start of turn 23
Palkia used Outrage!
The foe's Manaphy lost 31% of its health!
The foe's Manaphy fainted!


I think it over once again. Lugia, Groudon and Scizor and take on pretty much anything in the regular metagame. Plus, Palkia is stil alive. I think this match is in the bag......


Rain continues to fall!
Skywalker sent out Arceus!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Arceus!

Calm Pokemaster :
28%

Skywalker:
87%



Start of turn 24
The foe's Arceus used Swords Dance!
The foe's Arceus's Attack sharply rose!

Shit! PO doesnt ban Arceus, but this thing is really unpredictable. Let's see what set this thing has...I am guessing SD, Extreme Speed, Judgment, ?

Palkia used Outrage!
A critical hit!
The foe's Arceus lost 80% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!
Palkia calmed down!
Palkia became confused!

Calm Pokemaster :
28%

Skywalker:
7% (+2 Atk)


Start of turn 25
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia is confused!
It hurt itself in its confusion!
Palkia lost 35 HP! (10% of its health)

Rain continues to fall!

Things keep getting worse. Recover +Swords Dance! This thing can easily sweep my whole team now. What a turn of events!


Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
57%



Start of turn 26
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia is confused!
Palkia used Outrage!
The foe's Arceus lost 36% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!
As expected.....

Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
64%


Start of turn 27
The foe's Arceus used Swords Dance!
The foe's Arceus's Attack sharply rose!

Palkia snapped out its confusion!
Palkia used Outrage!
The foe's Arceus lost 37% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!

Oh no, another SD. This thing can definitely sweep me away with Extreme Speed now. I also misclick, and select Outrage. Great...


Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
37%


Start of turn 28
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia used Outrage!
The foe's Arceus lost 38% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!
Palkia calmed down!
Palkia became confused!


Things are continuing in the same way.Lets see...


Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
49%



Start of turn 29
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia is confused!
Palkia used Spacial Rend!
The foe's Arceus lost 45% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!

I should have selected Surf....bad decision :(


Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
54%


Start of turn 30
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia is confused!
Palkia used Surf!
The foe's Arceus lost 60% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!

Atleast I dont hit myself. I Surf, and do 60%. Should have done that long long back....

Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
40%



Start of turn 31
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Palkia is confused!
Palkia used Surf!
The foe's Arceus lost 63% of its health!

Rain continues to fall!

Does this guy have ES or not? Dunno why he is stalling...like a cat playing with the mouse before its kill...


Calm Pokemaster :
18%

Skywalker:
27%



Start of turn 32
The foe's Arceus used ExtremeSpeed!
Palkia lost 60 HP! (18% of its health)
Palkia fainted!

Rain continues to fall!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Scizor!

He finally kills me....and I have to send out Scizor. Lets see if I can KO it with BP +Superpower.

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
27%



Start of turn 33
Scizor used Bullet Punch!
The foe's Arceus lost 16% of its health!

The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Rain continues to fall!

Part A of my plan goes off. This is it.......


Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
61%



Start of turn 34
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Scizor used Superpower!
It's super effective!











The foe's Arceus lost 57% of its health!
Scizor's Attack fell!
Scizor's Defense fell!

Rain continues to fall!

Awww..... it doesn't KO! Lets see if I can do something with Toxic..

Calm Pokemaster :
100% (-1 Atk -1 Def)

Skywalker:
43%



Start of turn 35
Calm Pokemaster called Scizor back!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Lugia!

Lugia is exerting its Pressure!
The foe's Arceus used Recover!
The foe's Arceus regained health!

Rain continues to fall!


Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
93%



Start of turn 36
Lugia used Toxic!
The foe's Arceus was badly poisoned!

The foe's Arceus used Shadow Claw!
It's super effective!
Lugia lost 306 HP! (73% of its health)


Rain continues to fall!
Lugia restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
The foe's Arceus is hurt by poison!

SHADOW CLAW? Oh great. Have to sac Lugia now.


Calm Pokemaster :
33%

Skywalker:
: 87%


Start of turn 37
Calm Pokemaster called Lugia back!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Scizor!

The foe's Arceus used ExtremeSpeed!
It's not very effective...
Scizor lost 225 HP! (70% of its health)

Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Arceus is hurt by poison!

Toxic stalling might just win me the match....


Calm Pokemaster :
30%

Skywalker:
76%



Start of turn 38
The foe's Arceus used ExtremeSpeed!
It's not very effective...
Scizor lost 96 HP! (30% of its health)
Scizor fainted!


Scizor goes down. Lugia is next...
Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Arceus is hurt by poison!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Lugia!

Lugia is exerting its Pressure!

Calm Pokemaster :
33%

Skywalker:
62%



Start of turn 39
The foe's Arceus used ExtremeSpeed!
Lugia lost 137 HP! (33% of its health)
Lugia fainted!

This is it.Time to see if Groudon can take a +2 Extreme Speed from that beast...


Rain continues to fall!
The foe's Arceus is hurt by poison!
Calm Pokemaster sent out Groudon!

Groudon's Drought intensified the sun's rays!
Calm Pokemaster: ...
Skywalker: i am not sure
Skywalker: maybe you won

Calm Pokemaster :
100%

Skywalker:
:46%




Start of turn 40
The foe's Arceus used ExtremeSpeed!
Groudon lost 100% of its health
Groudon fainted!
Skywalker wins!




Nooooooooo...............









NOT!
Groudon lost 346 HP(94% of its health)

Groudon used Earthquake!
The foe's Arceus lost 32% of its health!

The foe's Arceus is hurt by poison!
The foe's Arceus fainted!

Woot! I win.............













Groudon fainted !(Life Orb Recoil! :pirate:)




Tie between Calm Pokemaster and Skywalker!
Skywalker: wow
Skywalker: lol gg
Calm Pokemaster: gg

So we are even at the end of this match. It might have not been been too good, with nail biting prediction, but heh, we are not pro's. However, it was a tense, exciting game and we both played to the best of our abilities.


Now its time for the Props.....and the Flops of this match.

Props:

1) My Deoxys-S, for not letting them set up Stealth Rock throughout
the match

2) My Palkia, for ALMOST winning me the match.

3) My Groudon, for taking a +2 ExtremeSpeed from Arse-eus, I mean Arceus, and KO'ng it in return.

4) My Lugia, for managing to poison his Arceus

5) His Arseus, for almost sweeping me away.

Flops:

1) My CM Kyogre was the biggest flop in this game. On another day, he would have swept half the opp's team. Sadly he failed to make much of an effect on the game.

2)Myself, for panicking and in the end, having to settle for a draw.



In the end, I would like to say, that we both immensely enjoyed this tense match, with neither of us giving up at any time. Otherwise, this warstory wouldnt have been possible.

I think this warstory highlights what a BEAST Arceus is. It managed to turn the game on its head, and make a sure win for me. Admitted, it was also partly because of me, as I panicked in the end :nerd:.

Hope you all enjoy reading this warstory.
 
#2
1st) Shouldn't this be in the ubers subforum?
2nd) Lots of h4x
3rd) Life Orb recoil happens directly after the attack while Arceus died from poison(end of the turn) If it had been on shoddy you would have lost because Life Orb recoil would have killed Groudon before Poison damage.
 
#3
1) Agreed, will wait for a mod to move it there.

2)Yeah, though unfortunately I can do nothing about it.

3) If Poison damage+Groudon's attack kill Arceus together,then Life Orb recoil doesnt take place since it is regarded the last turn. AFAIK, LO Damage is not considered on the last turn of the match irrespective of the order in which damage is caused, will edit it after I get def. proof.
 
#5
I am curious to why you left Kyogre in on Ludicolo, especially when you had Scizor and Groudon waiting in the wings. Scizor takes pretty much nothing from Ubers Ludicolo's attacks and Groudon could have gotten rid of the rain that was important to its strategy. (Though you would risk getting hit with Grass Knot, but you could have switched it in on a predicted Protect and then switch out to something else) Instead, you let Ludicolo stall Kyogre to death.
 
#6
If you knew Ludicolo was going to stall you out with Protect, why not CM when he did?
The first time he used Protect, Pokemaster couldn't use Calm Mind thanks to Taunt. The other times, though, he should have probably done some prediction.

Anyway, I didn't like this warstory. It was basically this: Each side sets up, Kyogre vs. Ludicolo, Palkia sweep, opponent's Arceus sweep, Groudon finishes off Arceus. Overall, it wasn't a great battle. The comments weren't very good, and I noticed a good amount of either bad grammar or only hoping that something happens. Also, I think the fake endings are EXTREMELY overrated. Overall...2/10
 

DetroitLolcat

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#7
5/10, and that's generous. It was a pretty bad-average warstory, as it was just two set-up sweepers going at it with some hax in between. Formatting and aesthetics were nice though. Pick a better battle nest time, as you seem pretty good at writing these.
 
#8
Thanks for all the ratings, I agree I panicked in between.

@Flashrider57: You pretty much summed it up, though I wonder where there was bad grammar, since I actually checked this on Word.

@DetroitLolcat: Agreed, though I think it would have been a better battle if I had switched Kyogre out of Ludicolo. On the upside, I learn from my past mistakes if I write a warstory, since I get to analyse the mistakes I did.
 

Destiny Warrior

also known as Darkwing_Duck
is a Smogon Media Contributor Alumnus
#9
The constant hax on your part was rather off-putting, and if you had CM'd more during the Protect Stalling fest, you would have broke through Ludicolo much faster. I also want to know why you don't have Thunder on Palkia, or if you do, why didn't you use it against his Kyogre and Manaphy.

Without the hax, I'm pretty sure his Darkrai would have ensured his victory.
 
#11
3) If Poison damage+Groudon's attack kill Arceus together,then Life Orb recoil doesnt take place since it is regarded the last turn. AFAIK, LO Damage is not considered on the last turn of the match irrespective of the order in which damage is caused, will edit it after I get def. proof.
Nope, LO recoil happens directly after the attack on the carts and before leftovers, poison, sandstorm, aqua veil, etc. If Groudon somehow attacked first there it would have taken Life Orb recoil before Arceus attacked.

Even on the last turn of a match you can self KO with Life Orb. Take LO go to a random zone and 1 shot 10 pokes. In fact do it with only 1 poke in your party so you can get a free teleport to the pokemon center. The carts have the self-ko clause, if you do an action that results in your last poke dieing, you lose. Even if it KOs their last poke.

On the other hand, all the end of turn effects(leftovers, poison, etc.) do not happen on the last turn of a battle. Rather, they stop happening as soon as someone's last poke faints. Even if your last poke is about to faint from poison that same turn.
 
#12
What the hell was up with that Arceus? I mean, why was it so bent in being at full HP, even when your Surf took off more than 50% of its HP? Maybe that guy was hoping for the confusion hax...

Oh well. Not too great of a battle, but not exactly awful either.
 
#13
Nice warstory
I actually came in with doubts and leave with none.
That arceus was a beast though.
Imagine what he can do without any EV restrictions (gen 5 an featherssss) rofl.


@Recoil I agree, Skywalker was a bit paranoid towards the end.

@Zetotarken Thanks for the proof, will edit it.

@lordkira Arceus is quite broken, though the fact that he could kill 3 of my Pokes is mostly because I battled poorly towards the end. If it was any experienced player it would have been 1-0 at worst.
TBH, I don't see that as necessarily true (esp in BW with its +2 priority now). Sure the superduperwtfxortoogood (rofl) players could most definitely fare better against an extremekiller but the thing is...even they will have a hard time against it unless they cripple it and/or have giratina prepared for it (though this will be even ahrder without EV restrictions in BW and arceus's ability to both outrun and 2hko it now). You definitely made some mistakes but I think you played quite well to be honest overall.
 
#14
@Recoil I agree, Skywalker was a bit paranoid towards the end.

@Zetotarken Thanks for the proof, will edit it.

@lordkira Arceus is quite broken, though the fact that he could kill 3 of my Pokes is mostly because I battled poorly towards the end. If it was any experienced player it would have been 1-0 at worst.
 
#15
IMO the battle had too much hax to make a good warstory, and there were some pretty bad mistakes (Scizor not switching in on Ludi, Kyogre not CMing once the Taunt ended, not using Surf right away against Arceus, Arceus wasting Recovers when it could just KO with ES, etc) but I think if you tried again and picked a better battle, you could write a really good one, so better luck next time, and it wasn't bad for a first try still. =)
 

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