Grammar-Prose Team Queue 2: Grammatic Boogaloo

Pocket

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Guys, I am writing an RU Guide to Rain Offensehttp://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?p=4464696#post4464696 with my fellow RU players, and I'd like you guys to GP check these individual entries please!

Swift Swim Sweeper
  • Kabutops (Pocket): 0/2
  • Omastar (Phazon00): 0/2
  • Poliwrath (Silvershadow234): 0/2
  • Seismitoad (/B/utterfree): 0/2

Other Rain Abusers
  • Jynx (Yonko7): 0/2
  • Moltres (Yonko7): 0/2
  • Rotom-Mow (Phazon00): 0/2

Other Rain Summoners
  • Escavalier (Yonko7): 0/2
  • Rotom-Mow (Phazon00): 0/2
  • Seismitoad (Yonko7): 0/2
  • Uxie (Phazon00): 0/2
  • Volbeat (/B/utterfree): 0/2

Other Rain Suppoerters
  • Magneton (speed ghilliesniper): 0/2

Threats to Rain
  • Offensive Druddigon (Silvershadow234): 0/2
  • Hitmonlee (Phazon00): 0/2
  • Defensive Druddigon (Silvershadow234): 0/2
  • Ferroseed (Phazon00): 0/2
  • Roserade (Silvershadow234): 0/2
 

Aldaron

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These are the current submissions for the overviews project. Jellicent told me to just put the posts here.

Countin' on you grammar peeps to take out fluff, fix flow, fix standard grammar / spelling and all that jazz ^_^

Also, while I'm perfectly aware length does not always equal fluff, I would like to emphasize keeping these overviews as short as possible, simply because they are overviews. They should say what they _have_ to say, but beyond that they shouldn't say much more.

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4454924&postcount=51 (nyttyn, blissey): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4454964&postcount=54 (aldaron, sableye): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4455052&postcount=55 (alexwolf, celebi, rotom-w): 1/2 and 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4455334&postcount=59 (nyttyn, ditto, jirachi, haxorus): 1/2 and 1/2 and 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4455336&postcount=60 (iconic, sharpedo): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4457881&postcount=63 (alexwolf, xatu): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4458099&postcount=64 (pokemon0078, gastrodon): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4459875&postcount=65 (lord of bays, hydreigon): 1/2

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=4461721&postcount=68 (capefeather, chandelure, porygon2): 1/2 and 1/2
 

Pocket

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No love for Past Gens? Their analyses have been sitting around for awhile now...

Triangle's ADV Magneton - 1/2

Crystal's RBY Slowbro - 1/2

Crystal's RBY Starmie - 0/2

Jorgen's GSC Gengar - 0/2

You should probably VM / PM Triangles once you GP check it, since he "left" Smogon, but he still checks in

PS: You may also want to add bugmaniacbob into the active GP list, since he's been chugging out some checks for OU!
 

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