Monotype Hatterene (fairy) QC[2/2] GP[1/1]

[Namranan]

[SET]
name: Trick Room (Fairy)
move 1: Trick Room
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Giga Drain
move 4: Mystical Fire
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Magic Bounce
nature: Quiet
evs: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 SpD
ivs: 0 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hatterene is a fantastic Trick Room sweeper for Fairy teams. With its part-Psychic typing and great Special Attack stat, it finds itself breaking down offensive teams with ease. Thanks to its ability in Magic Bounce, Hatterene can set up Trick Room in front of most walls without having to worry about getting hit by Taunt or letting entry hazards get on your side of the field. With Psychic, it is able to swiftly KO common Poison-types like Toxapex and Galarian Weezing, while Giga Drain and Mystical Fire cover Ground-, Water-, and Steel-types, respectively. Life Orb allows Hatterene to do more damage across the board, while Leftovers allows it to have more longevity after taking a hit when setting up Trick Room.

Hatterene works well with revenge killers that can pick off problematic Pokemon like Gengar. For this reason, it appreciates the support both Grimmsnarl and Mimikyu give it, as they both threaten Gengar and other Ghost-types that might threaten Hatterene. Grimmsnarl can also set Light Screen and Reflect for Hatterene to give it an easier time setting up and taking hits. Clefable is also a good supporting teammate, as it can set Stealth Rock, which chips opposing Pokemon down, allowing Hatterene to wallbreak more easily. Gardevoir and Togekiss are also both great teammates for Hatterene, as Gardevoir can provide Healing Wish support, which allows it to find more opportunities to set up and also use Trace to check threats like Sand Rush Excadrill and Swift Swim Seismitoad and Barraskewda; Togekiss, on the other hand, takes on opposing Steel-types easier with its access to Fire Blast and Choice Scarf / Babiri Berry. In return, Hatterene's sweeping potential takes the offensive pressure off of them, as well as bouncing back any status moves that might threaten them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Quality checked by: [[Havens, 391540], [Confluxx, 408641]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Deetah, 297659]]

 

[Namranan]

Ready for QC!
Edit: Removed mention of dynamax

 

[Havens]

-Let's add 0 Speed IV's onto Hatterene's set; not only are you outspeeding 0 Speed EV/IV Ferrothorn in Trick Room but its Gyro Ball significantly drops in power because of it.
-Also, let's go with Leftovers over Sitrus; alter the bullet point explaining Sitrus to Leftovers as necessary.
-You gotta remove the "in-battle alt: G-Max" in the set to finish up your removal of Dynamax stuff.
-Hatterene isn't going to "swiftly" take down must Poison-types without getting chunked/threatened by Poison moves (at least from the offensive ones) in the process; change the Psychic targets to more passive Poison-types such as Toxapex and Galarian Weezing instead.
-Gardevoir and Togekiss may appreciate Hatterene, but you should also talk about how Gardevoir and Togekiss help Hatterene (Gardevoir with Healing Wish support; Togekiss takes on Steel-types easier, etc).

QC 1/2

 

[Namranan]

Implemented check, ready for next check!

 

[Conflux]

Mention Clefable as a teammate because it can set up Stealth Rock to chip away at the opposing team to make Hatterene's wallbreaking easier.

Talk more about Gardevoir's revenge killing ability and its Trace being able to check Sand Rush Excadrill and Swift Swim abusers.

QC 2/2

 

[Namranan]

implemented, in GP queue rn.

 

[Dawn of Ares]

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[SET]
name: Trick Room (Fairy)
move 1: Trick Room
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Giga Drain
move 4: Mystical Fire
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Magic Bounce
nature: Quiet
evs: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 SpD
ivs: 0 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hatterene is a fantastic Trick Room sweeper for Fairy teams. With its part Psychic typing and great Special Attack stat, it finds itself breaking down offensive teams with ease. Thanks to its ability in Magic Bounce, Hatterene can set up Trick Room in front of most walls without having to worry about getting hit by Taunt or letting hazards get on your side of the field. With Psychic, it is able to swiftly KO common Poison types Poison-types like Toxapex and Galarian Weezing, Weezing while using Giga Drain and Mystical Fire to cover Ground-, Water-, and Steel-types. Steel-types respectively. Life Orb allows Hatterene to do more damage across the board, while Leftovers allows it to have more longevity after taking a hit setting up Trick Room.

Hatterene works well with revenge killers that can pick off problematic Pokemon like Gengar. For this reason, it appreciates the support both Grimmsnarl and Mimikyu give it it, as they both threaten Gengar and other Ghost-types that might threaten Hatterene. Grimmsnarl can also set Light Screen and Reflect for Hatterene to give it Hatterene an easier time setting up and taking hits. Clefable is also a good supporting teammate, as it can set Stealth Rocks Rock which chips opposing Pokemon, allowing Hatterene to wallbreak easier. Gardevoir and Togekiss are also both great teammates for Hatterene Hatterene, as Gardevoir can provide healing wish Healing Wish support support, which allows it Hatterene to find more opportunities to set up up, and also use Trace to check threats like Sand Rush Excadrill and Swift Swim Seismitoad and Barraskewda; Togekiss, on the other hand, takes on opposing Steel-types easier with its access to Fire Blast and Choice Scarf / Babiri Berry. In return, Hatterene's sweeping potential takes the offensive pressure off of them, as well as bouncing back any status moves that might come in to threaten them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Quality checked by: [[Haavens, 391540], [Confluxx, 408641]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[deetah]

Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (AH) = Add Hyphen

GP 1/1

Hatterene

[SET]
name: Trick Room (Fairy)
move 1: Trick Room
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Giga Drain
move 4: Mystical Fire
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Magic Bounce
nature: Quiet
evs: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 SpD
ivs: 0 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hatterene is a fantastic Trick Room sweeper for Fairy teams. With its part-(AH)Psychic typing and great Special Attack stat, it finds itself breaking down offensive teams with ease. Thanks to its ability in Magic Bounce, Hatterene can set up Trick Room in front of most walls without having to worry about getting hit by Taunt or letting entry hazards get on your side of the field. With Psychic, it is able to swiftly KO common Poison-(AH)types like Toxapex and Galarian Weezing, while using Giga Drain and Mystical Fire to cover Ground-, Water-, and Steel-types, (AC) respectively. Life Orb allows Hatterene to do more damage across the board, while Leftovers allows it to have more longevity after taking a hit when setting up Trick Room.

Hatterene works well with revenge killers that can pick off problematic Pokemon like Gengar. For this reason, it appreciates the support both Grimmsnarl and Mimikyu give it, (AC) as they both threaten Gengar and other Ghost-types that might threaten Hatterene. Grimmsnarl can also set Light Screen and Reflect for Hatterene to give it an easier time setting up and taking hits. Clefable is also a good supporting teammate, as it can set Stealth Rocks Rock, (AC) which chips opposing Pokemon down, allowing Hatterene to wallbreak easier more easily. Gardevoir and Togekiss are also both great teammates for Hatterene, (AC) as Gardevoir can provide Healing Wish (Capitalize) support, (AC) which allows it to find more opportunities to set up and also use Trace to check threats like Sand Rush Excadrill and Swift Swim Seismitoad and Barraskewda; Togekiss, on the other hand, takes on opposing Steel-types easier with its access to Fire Blast and Choice Scarf / Babiri Berry. In return, Hatterene's sweeping potential takes the offensive pressure off of them, as well as bouncing back any status moves that might come in to threaten them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[Namranan, 353292]]
- Quality checked by: [[Haavens, 391540], [Confluxx, 408641]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[Namranan]

This is now done, thank you deetah! Ready for upload!

 

[Moosical]

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